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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 24)

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Posted: 28 July 2008 at 12:04am | IP Logged

good part n senti too.

update soon.

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Posted: 29 July 2008 at 8:47am | IP Logged
hi anu,
          great ud..... insaan phele galtiyaan kar leta hai phir use sudharne ke koshish karta hai toh kabhi kabhi baat aur bigad jaati hai... yahi raj aur naina ke bich ho raha hai...
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Posted: 29 July 2008 at 11:56am | IP Logged

 its a brilliant update....truly....Clap

such an emotional one........yet u didnt get overboard with anything........its a gr8 update....
 
 
m feeling so sorry for raj and naina.......its the one f the most painful experience one can have......Ouch
 
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Posted: 29 July 2008 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
@readers..

thank you very much for your precious comments..Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 July 2008 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Sorry for being late.Once again a great update.Words don't seem to come out after reading this .it was very emotional yet depicted in a very subtle way.
you are too good.ClapThumbs Up
Continue soon.

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Posted: 31 July 2008 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
I am new to ur fic but thus is jst awesome. pls cont soon
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Posted: 04 August 2008 at 11:39am | IP Logged
sorry..I am being late..but due to some reason..I couldn't update..Confused

I promise..next update will be ..5th August,2008

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Posted: 05 August 2008 at 8:56am | IP Logged
April,2005...

Naina kaafi normal hai...

waapas nursery jana shuru kia usne...

Raj thoda relaxed hua...apne sadme se woh baahar toh aai...

Raj usko zyada chhedta nahi..pata nahi kab uska mood kharab ho jaaye..

Naina ne waapas..apni zindagi..un bachcho me dhoondh li...subha jaldi chali jaati thi..aur raat..ko der se aati thi...

jo bachche the..unme se kai bachcho k parents over night kaam karte the Office me..Naina ne aise 5 bachcho ki zimmedari li..k agar waqt par unke parents nahi aa paaye..unko lene k lia..toh Naina unko ghar tak pahucha degi..


sirf un 5 ki hi nahi...kisi na kisi bachche k Parents roz nahi aa paate the.... Naina unko ghar tak chhod kar hi aati thi..

is kaam me..kabhi kabhi ..der ho jaati thi...

6 se 8 tak..Naina ka yeh kaam hota tha..bachcho ko ghar tak pahuchane ka.. aur jab uska ghar lautne ka waqt ata..tab..traffic jam ho jaati..har roz..10 baj jaate the..kisi kisi din toh 11 bhi baj jaate...



sirf yehi wajah nahi thi...Naina k aisa karne ki....


Veer se yeh shikayat thi....k woh aisa kaise kar sakta hai?



Banaras me bhi..Veer ka yehi careless attitude tha..Naina k lia...Veer ne wahi rang dikhana shuru kar dia..

Veer khud chala gaya Delhi..usko Dehradun bhej kar.....

Veer ne usko taken for granted le lia tha....

par Mumbai aane k baad..kuchh dino tak...Veer kuchh alag sa tha..par..ab k Veer ne jo kia...Naina bhula nahi sakti..

Veer ko kyon nahi samajh nahi paati?

kabhi Veer us par bahut pyaar jatata hai...aur kabhi ek dum se..laparvaah ho jata hai..


Naina jaan bujh kar...ghar der se aati hai...kabhi beach par ghumne chali jaati hai...kabhi...kisi Shopping Mall me..ghanto..bina kuchh kharide ghumti rehti hai..



Raj sab kuchh ankho k saamne dekhta hai..par kuchh kehta nahi...Naina ka gussa utar jaaye..tab baat karega..


usne laparvaahi toh dikhaai hai..is baat se inkaar nahi kar sakta..

Raj abhi chaahta hai..seriously..k ab ek bachcha hona chahie...Naina shayad usko maaf kar de...

par abhi nahi ho sakta..Doctor ne mana kar dia hai..atleast 6 maheene..usse pahle Naina agar pregnant hui toh..uski jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai..


Raj yeh baat yaad kar k..Naina se door rehta hai..protection humesha kaam nahi karta..Raj risk nahi lena chaahta...isi lia..raat ko Naina k kareeb nahi jata. ...apne study me..yaa sofa par...yaa fir ..guest room me  raat guzaar deta hai..


jitna zaroori hota hai..Naina utna hi bolti hai..usko aisa lagta hai..k Veer usse door jaa raha hai...ab woh Veer ki pasand nahi rahi ..Veer ka dil usse bhar chuka hai..

Veer raat ko kamre me nahi rehta..humesha door door rehta hai....agar yehi baat hai..toh thik hai..Naina kuchh nahi kehna chaahti..jisko uski zaroorat nahi..Naina ko bhi uski zaroorat nahi...


Naina bhi chup chaap rehti hai...kai kai din tak toh dono me koi baat nahi hoti..




Raj upset hai..Naina k behaviour se..par kuchh kehta nahi..agar woh khush hai is tarha..toh rahne do..uski khushi me hi Raj ki khushi hai.


par ek din..raat k 11:30 baj chuke the ....Naina ghar nahi lauti...

Raj pareshaan ho gaya..Naina ka Mobile bhi off hai....12:30 baj gaye...

Car k horn ki awaz...

Naina laut aai hai...Raj ne darwaza khola....


Naina--tum abhi tak soye nahi?


Raj--andar aao...

Naina andar aai..

Raj--khana khaate hain...

Naina--main khana khaa kar aai hoon....


Raj--mere saath baitho..main khaa loon..

Naina--ok..

Raj ne khana khaya....


Naina--mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai...




Naina bed room me light off kar k so gai..

Raj aya..light on kia usne...


Naina--uff..kyaa hai?light bandh karo na..

Raj--baat karni hai...

Naina-- raat k 2 baje??

Raj--haa..kyon ki meri biwi se mulakat hona mushkil ho gaya hai aaj kal..

Naina--kal baat karte hain..

Raj--subha uth kar dekhta hoon..tum nikal gai ho..raat ko der se..tumhe hua kyaa hai aaj kal?


Naina--Ranveer..stop it..


Raj chillane par majboor hua...


Raj--THEN YOU STOP IT...DON'T YOU THINK THAT..YOU ARE GOING TOO FAR???



Naina--kia kyaa hai maine?

Raj--aaj kal..kyaa shuru kia hai tumne?mujhse baat karna chhod dia hai tumne?

Naina--main baat nahi karti tumse?main?tum hi chale jaate ho..mujhse door.. raat ko kamre se chale jaate ho..kisi kisi din toh kamre me aate hi nahi...

Raj--woh toh..Doctor ne mana kia hai....

Naina--kyaa??





Raj--Doctor ne kaha hai..6 maheene se pahle tum pregnant nahi ho sakti.. tumhare jaan ko khatra hai..aur Doctor ne hi kaha..humesha Protection kaam nahi karta..isi lia..main tumse door rehta hoon..

Naina--really?

Raj--tumse kyon door rahunga main?

Naina--really?

Raj--haaa..

Naina--toh tumne pahle kyon nahi kaha..?

Raj--main batana chaahta tha..par tum hi muh fer k chali jaati thi.....

Naina ne Raj ko gale laga lia...

Raj--tum ek kaam karo..tum Dehradun chali jaao..varna ghar par is tarha rehna..namumkin hai...


Naina--arre..nursery hai..chhod kar kaise jaaoon?


Raj--woh bhi hai..achha..thik hai...6 maheene ki hi toh baat hai..no problem.. we will manage...

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Naina ghar par aai..Raj usdin ghar pe nahi tha..der se aane wala tha...

achanak phone ki awaz....



Naina--hello...

"kaun hai?"

Naina--main hoon..Mrs. Malhotra...

"kaun Mrs. Malhotra?"

Naina--Ranveer Malhotra ki biwi....

"Naina?"

Naina--haa..

"main Rajveer.."

Naina--arre..haa..kaise ho?Ranveer toh nahi hai ghar pe..aur tumhari awaz ko kyaa hua hai?

"arre..Canada me bahut sardi hai...gala kharab ho gaya hai...Ranveer kaha hai?"


Naina--der se aayega woh...tum ghar kab aaoge?

"arre..main itni jaldi nahi aanewala..bahut mushkil se chhutti mili hai..."

Naina--Ranveer k Mobile par phone kar lo tum...

"haa..bhaisaab k saath kaisi nibh rahi hai aapki?"

Naina--bahut achhi...tum jaldi waapas aao..tumhare lia bhi ladki dhoondhna hai...

"haa..achha..suno..I have to rush..main baad me phone karta hoon.."

Naina--haa..bye..take care...


Naina TV chala kar baith gai..

udhar Raj ne phone cut kar dia...kuchh dino pahle Naina Rajveer k bare me puchh rahi thi...isi lia..Raj ne aaj..phone kia is tarha se...ISD line k saath connect kar k..kyaa kyaa karna padta hai..pyaar me...!!!

ab thode dino tak Naina Rajveer ki khabar nahi legi..aur waah..Naina khud hi apne pati ki shaadi ki baat chalana chaahti hai..kisi aur se....




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