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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 21)

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Posted: 09 July 2008 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
very nice
to Naina ke parents mann gaye
good
Appu,funny name hai naa Di?
Raj ne kya kaha woh Naina ki taange tod dega, goshh
awsome
superb update
hope naina jaldi mann jaye
plz continue soon Di

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Posted: 11 July 2008 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Finally Naina ke Mom aur Dad ko bhi yeh baat pata chal gayi!!!! Approve Approve Approve

Naina ke mom dad toh samajdar hai aur maan gaye ke Raj accha ladka hai aur Naina ko khush bhi rakhta hai!!!! Smile Ab woh log hi Naina ko samjha sakte hai!!!! Smile Smile Smile

Naina ki mom ne sahi kaha Naina ne Raj se hi pyaar kiya tha!!!! Smile

Raj ke bete ka naam accha hai Aditya!!! Smile Par yeh kaisa nickname hai Appu...kissi haathi ke bacche ka naam lagta hai!!!! Confused Adi hona chahiye tha!!!! Smile

Naina Dehradun jane ki taiyaari kar rahi hai!!!! Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina ka gussa hona jayez hai par woh toh ab bhi ignore kar rahi hai Raj ko!!!! Unhappy

Naina acchi tarah se janti ke Raj usse kitna pyaar karta hai phir bhi yeh keh rahi hai ke Raj usse pyaar hi nahi karta!!!! Angry

Raj ne sahi kaha!!! Approve Approve Approve Agar Ranveer se pyaar kiya hota toh Naina usse pehchan jaati!!!

Naina bacche ko bhi Raj se dur rakhna chahti hai par zyada dur rakh nahi payegi akhir woh bhi baap hai uska!!!! Tongue

Raj ne Aditya ko sula diya!!! Smile How sweet!!!! Smile

Raj ne kitna gussa kiya Naina par accha kiya usne!! Wink Pyaar se samjha raha toh maan hi nahi rahi thi!!!! Angry

Accha huya Naina ke parents maan gaye aur ab yehi rahenge!!!! Smile Ab Naina Dehradun nahi jaa payegi!!!! Wink

Ab kya hoga?? Confused Confused Confused Naina itni asani se haar toh manegi nahi!!!! Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Time lagega par I am sure woh maan zaroor jayegi!!!! Wink

Raj kahe raha tha Appu se ki tumhari mom ka pech thoda saa dhila hai!!!! LOL That was too funny!!! LOL Woh Aditya se keh raha hai ke woh dono milkar usko raaste par layenge!!!! LOL

Aur usne kaha ke ghar se bahar kadam bhi rakha toh tange tod dega!!!!! Tongue Raj Naina par impression jama raha hai!!!!! Wink

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Posted: 15 July 2008 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Finally Naina ke Mom aur Dad ko bhi yeh baat pata chal gayi!!!! Approve Approve Approve

Naina ke mom dad toh samajdar hai aur maan gaye ke Raj accha ladka hai aur Naina ko khush bhi rakhta hai!!!! Smile Ab woh log hi Naina ko samjha sakte hai!!!! Smile Smile Smile

Naina ki mom ne sahi kaha Naina ne Raj se hi pyaar kiya tha!!!! Smile

Raj ke bete ka naam accha hai Aditya!!! Smile Par yeh kaisa nickname hai Appu...kissi haathi ke bacche ka naam lagta hai!!!! Confused Adi hona chahiye tha!!!! Smile

Naina Dehradun jane ki taiyaari kar rahi hai!!!! Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina ka gussa hona jayez hai par woh toh ab bhi ignore kar rahi hai Raj ko!!!! Unhappy

Naina acchi tarah se janti ke Raj usse kitna pyaar karta hai phir bhi yeh keh rahi hai ke Raj usse pyaar hi nahi karta!!!! Angry

Raj ne sahi kaha!!! Approve Approve Approve Agar Ranveer se pyaar kiya hota toh Naina usse pehchan jaati!!!

Naina bacche ko bhi Raj se dur rakhna chahti hai par zyada dur rakh nahi payegi akhir woh bhi baap hai uska!!!! Tongue

Raj ne Aditya ko sula diya!!! Smile How sweet!!!! Smile

Raj ne kitna gussa kiya Naina par accha kiya usne!! Wink Pyaar se samjha raha toh maan hi nahi rahi thi!!!! Angry

Accha huya Naina ke parents maan gaye aur ab yehi rahenge!!!! Smile Ab Naina Dehradun nahi jaa payegi!!!! Wink

Ab kya hoga?? Confused Confused Confused Naina itni asani se haar toh manegi nahi!!!! Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Time lagega par I am sure woh maan zaroor jayegi!!!! Wink

Raj kahe raha tha Appu se ki tumhari mom ka pech thoda saa dhila hai!!!! LOL That was too funny!!! LOL Woh Aditya se keh raha hai ke woh dono milkar usko raaste par layenge!!!! LOL

Aur usne kaha ke ghar se bahar kadam bhi rakha toh tange tod dega!!!!! Tongue Raj Naina par impression jama raha hai!!!!! Wink

ooohhhh..Appu Haathi k bachche ka naam lagta hain??mujhe toh pata hi nahi thaAngry
 
hmm..Raj Naina ko mana toh lega..par time lagega
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Posted: 16 July 2008 at 10:48am | IP Logged
update soon please.............
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Posted: 17 July 2008 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
 its a gr8 update...............
so now the truth is completely out.................glad naina's parents r not holding it against raj, the guy got a lot to handle........
naina's rxn is sooooo expected, but its sooo true that she loved rajveer..........but its obviously difficult for her to accept...............
hope they sort it out real soon and now appu s also there, and raj is going to have his saas sasur to live with them............thats a brillinat plan!!!!!
 
 
superbbbbb update!!
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Posted: 17 July 2008 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Supper cool fan-fic - You got

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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 1:27am | IP Logged
update please ! update please! update please!
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Posted: 20 July 2008 at 4:45am | IP Logged

2005,6th January...

Raj Naina ko lekar Mumbai waapas aya....

Office me work bahut zyada ho gaya tha...waapas ana hi pada...

car ki petrol khatam ho gai thi..ek petrol pump me rukna  pada..lambi line thi..Raj aur Naina baahar khade hoke baat karne lage..

ek ladka mila....usne Raj k kandhe par haath rakha... "hey Raj..kaisa hai??"

Raj thoda ghabra gaya..Naina paas me khadi thi...Naina ki ankho me kuchh sawal the...

"Raj..mujhe nahi pehchana?main Gautam hoon... College  me saath the dude.."

Naina ...dekh rahi hai..hairan khadi hai...

Raj chup chaap khada raha.....kyaa kahega..samajh me nahi aa raha hai...

"oohhhh..so sorry...tum Raj nahi ho..Ranveer ho.. right?"

Raj relaxed hua...hans pada.."correct.."

"Raj kaha hai?"

Raj--India me nahi hai..aur 1 saal baad lautega..usko business se break dia hai maine...

"oohh..Ranveer..kaise ho..?yaar tum toh Banaras chale gaye..sab se door... arre..haa..koi ladki thi na..Naina .. woh kaha hai ab?"

Naina--jee..main hi hoon..Naina..inki wife..

"great..shaadi ho gai...?"

Raj--haa..actually humlog honeymoon se hi laute hai.. Goa gaye the...

"Raj bata raha tha..k Banaras me Ranveer ko koi mili hain...well..I must say.. Naina..is really beautiful..Naina..I am Gautam..main Ranveer aur Rajveer ..dono ka dost hoon.. but Raj Mumbai me raha..aur yeh janab chale gaye Banaras...shayad tumhare lia..right?"

Naina k hontho par muskurahat aai...."right...waise..Raj ne tumse contact nahi kia?"

"woh ladka ajeeb hai...bina bataye chala gaya..aisa hi hai...tum bhi nahi mili usse?"

Naina--nahi,..bas..ek baar phone pe baat ho gai thi.. well..tum kisi din ghar aao na...achha laga tumse mil kar...kisi bhi din aa jaao..kuchh baatein ho jaayengi.. main sirf Parvez ko achhe se jaanti hoon..shaadi me aya tha woh..

"Parvez?woh aya tha shaadi me?"

Raj--actually..bula lia usko..Raj ka dost hai..family me itna bada occassion..

"ok..par main bhi thode dino k lia Germany jaa raha hoon...waapas aa jaaoon..fir ekdin zaroor aaunga..ok friends..bye.."

Gautam chala gaya...

Naina--yeh tumko Raj bula raha tha?

Raj--actually main humesha Jeans aur Kurte me ghumta tha..aur Raj formal Shirt me..ab main office jata hoon.. toh dressing habit bhi waisi ho gai hai..isi lia...door se koi bhi dhokha khaa sakta hai..

Naina--woh toh paas khada tha...usne tumko Raj kyon bulaya?

Raj--arre..ho jaati hai insaan se ghalati...tum ghar chalo..

Naina chup ho gai...par ek sawal uske man me bar bar aa raha hai,k Ranveer ko Rajveer kaise koi samajh sakta hai??kya dono ki shakal ek jaisi lagti hai? ho sakta hai...shakal toh ek hi jaisi hoti hai..bhai baheno ki...par kahi na kahi ek sawaal Naina k man me baaki raha...

dono ghar pahuche...

Raj--main bahut thak gaya hoon...

Naina--ok..par mujhe jana hai..

Raj--kaha?

Naina--cresh...

Raj--arre..abhi abhi to aaye hain hum...kal chali jana... chalo..aram karo....

Naina--nahi..bahut bore ho gai hoon..

Raj--mere saath honeymoon par tum  bore ho gai ho??

Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha....Raj ko thoda bura laga hai...Naina ne socha kaise Raj ko samjhaaye..

Raj--hmm..batao..kyaa keh rahi thi tum?bore..

Naina--nahi..actually kai dino se bachcho se nahi mili hoon..isi lia..unko dekhne ka bahut man kar raha hai...

Raj--toh kal chali jana..aaj ghar par hi raho...please..

Naina--haa..main ghar pe hi hoon..uske lia please bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai... achha..chalo tum fresh ho jaao...

Raj bathroom chala gaya..

par ek darr sa baith gaya...Naina ko shak ho gaya hai... yeh explanation kaafi nahi k Gautam se ghalati ho gai thi...Ranveer ki shakal itni kaise milti hai Rajveer se..k kareebi dost bhi dhokha khaa jaaye...

bathroom me shower k niche bahut der tak khada raha Raj..Naina kyaa soch rahi hain...Raj ka darr ab asli roop me aa raha hai...aisi ghatnaye kai baar ghatengi... Mumbai me bahut saare dost hai Raj k..kisi na kisi se toh kahi bhi mulakat ho sakti hai..kyaa karega Raj??


ek pal k lia socha k Naina ko thode dino k lia Dehradun bhej dega..par Naina k bina kaise rahega?aur khud Naina se door jaa nahi sakta..uski gairhaziri me agar.. Naina ko sab kuchh malum pad gaya toh..Naina itni bewakoof nahi..k kisi baat ka pata nahi laga paayegi..


bahut si baatein Raj k dimag me aai..jab tak Naina usko nahi mili thi..tab tak ek junoon sa tha..par ab jo uske dil me hai..woh hai darr...pakde jaane ka darr...

pure jaal ko usne aise bichhaya hai..ta k kisiko shak naa ho..Office k log jaante hai k Rajveer ki patni hai Naina.. Parvez bhi yehi jaanta hai..par Naina ko malum hai..k woh Ranveer ki patni hai..

Rajveer jaanta hai k Naina Ranveer ki vidhva thi..ab uski patni hai..

sab se badi baat..sab logo ko malum hai Ranveer k death k bare me...par Naina is sach se anjaan hai..

pata nahi kyaa hoga....Naina k pyaar me itna andha ho chuka tha Raj ..k aise natijo k bare me usne socha tak nahi...par ab sochna hoga....

achanak bathroom se usne suna phone k ring ki awaz.... yeh Naina phone uthati kyon nahi?

Raj baahar aya..aur phone uthaya usne..vakil ka phone tha..

Raj jab kapde pahen kar taiyar hua..aur perfume laga raha hai..tab usne dekha Naina kamre me aai..

Naina naha chuki hai..

Raj--tum nahake aai?kaha se?

Naina--yeh ek hi bathroom toh nahi hai..aur tum itni der tak bathroom me the...main chali gai paas wale kamre me..

Raj--ohhh..achha..

Naina--abhi..12 baje hai..khana kaahoge?

Raj--nahi..raste par bahut khaa lia..bas ..tumko khana hai toh khaa lo..

Naina--nahi mujhe bhi nahi khana..

Raj--achha..mere paas aake baitho...

Naina--hmm..

Naina ne kamre ko andar se bandh kia..

aur Raj k paas aai...

Raj k seene me sar rakh k soi woh...

Raj--kitna achha lag raha tha Goa me..ab fir se wahi kaam..wahi..sab kuchh...

Naina--Rajveer ko bula lo na..woh aake samhaale sab kuchh...

Raj--woh nahi aayega..itni mushkil se usko chhutti mili hai..Naina..humesha maine apni manmaani ki..aur Rajveer ko dad ki baatein maanni padi...ab jaake usko chhutkara mila hai..

Naina--yeh bhi hai..tum bhaiyo me bahut understanding hai..nahi?

Raj--hmm..woh toh hai...

Naina--mujhe cresh jana hai...

Raj--kal chali jana..

Naina--bachche bahut achhe hain waha k...

Raj--tumko bachche bahut achhe lagte hain..nahi?

Naina--hmmm..

Raj--main soch raha hoon...mujhe itni jaldi koi teesra nahi chahie humare bich...

Naina Raj ko chhod kar uth gai...uski taraf dekhne lagi...

Naina--aisa kyon?

Raj--agar woh aayega..yaa aayegi..toh yeh baat toh tai hai..k mujhe tum take k bhaao nahi puchhogi..din raat usiko pyaar karogi...meri koi value hi nahi rahegi...

Naina--nahi..aisa nahi hai..

Raj--aisa hi hai..

Naina--mujhe Maa banna hai..

Raj--paagal ho?abhi din hi kitne hue..humari shaadi ko..abhi tumko bachcha chahie?

Naina--nahi..mujhe chahie...mere lia toh aasaani hogi.. usko lekar hi cresh jaaungi..usko khelne k lia kitne saare dost mil jaayenge...

Raj--tumko uski bahut fikar hai jo ..abhi aaya nahi..yaa ane ki khabar tak nahi hai jiski...

Naina--mera humesha se sapna tha...mere atleast 6 ya 7 bachche honge...din bhar unke saath masti karungi...

Raj thoda ghabra gaya...pahle bhi is bare me baat kar chuki hai Naina..par aaj bahut zyada serious hai..

Raj--7 bachche?mar gaye...

Naina--itni badi company ka maalik..7 bachche paal nahi sakte?

Raj--haa..paal sakta hoon..kyon nahi paal sakta..7 hi kyon..cricket team ya football team banaye?kyaa kehti ho?dono hi banaye..tum umpire..match hoga..koi jeete yaa haare trophy ghar me hi rahegi..hai na?

Naina--ok..fine..aainda se mujhe is baare me koi baat nahi karni...tumko nahi chahie..toh nahi hoga...bas ainda aisi ghatia baatein nahi karna..

Naina uth kar jaakar sofe par baith gai...

Raj ne dekha ..mamla bigad raha hai....

Raj Naina k paas aya...Naina k haath ko apne haath me lia...

Raj--meri taraf dekho....Naina...

Naina muh fer k baithi hai...

Raj ne apne haath se Naina ka muh apni taraf kia...

Raj--bura laga?I am sorry...

Naina--mujhe baat nahi karni..

Raj--aisa nahi hai ..k mujhe bachche pasand nahi.. but.. Naina..dekhna ..baad me tum khud tang aa jaaogi.. itni jaldbaazi thik nahi..bachcha hoga..par abhi thoda waqt do mujhe..itni jaldi nahi..atleast ek saal..please..please, ek saal tak rook jaao...aur ..abhi itna zyada pressure hai..main tumhara khayal tak rakh nahi paunga..please..

Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha..

Raj--bas..yeh work load hat jaaye..fir jo tum kaho..ok?

Naina--ok...

Raj--ab muskurao..zara sa..

Naina muskurai...

Raj--good..humesha aisi hi raha karo..


shaam ko vakil aya....

uske haath me ek paper tha...kuchh legal papers..

Raj--Nainaaaaaaaaaa..zara niche aao..

Naina--haa..aaai..

Naina jab niche gai...tab vakil uth khada hua.."hello Mrs. Malhotra.."

Naina--hello...

"in papers par sign kijiye.."

Naina--kaise paper hain?

"property k..Mr. Malhotra apni saari property aapke naam kar rahe hain.."

Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha..."Veer..Maa k gahne tak thik tha..ab yeh jaidad.. kyaa hai yeh sab?"

Raj hans raha tha.."chalo sign karo..kaha tha na.. maine..sab kuchh tumhara hi hai..chalo sign karo.."

Vakil Paper leke chala gaya..court me submit karne hai..

Naina--yeh kyaa hai?

Raj--kuchh nahi..jo mera hai woh tumhara hai..main bhi tumhara hoon..kasam se..

Naina--samjhi..

Raj--Give me a kiss..

Naina ne mana nahi kia...



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