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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 10)

Mahak Sinha IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Too good.

Kuch mayno me Raj bhi accha hai agar vo chahta to bina shaadi k bhi Naina ko haasil kar leta.Par fir bhi vo intezaar karna chahta hai. Clap Clap

Naina to us ko apna Veer he amajhti hai to vo bhi kya kare. Embarrassed Embarrassed

Update soon.

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 3:16am | IP Logged
maine aapka abhi tak ka updt padh liya.........

bahut maza aaya........aur aap ne jo dialouges likhe hain ekdum badiya hain......last updt bhi lajwaab tha..........
Clap Clap
sania_58 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 11:53am | IP Logged
too good
mujhe Raj ka character bohut accha laga
usne apni limit cross nahin ki
control kiya Wink Wink Wink
so sweet & beautiful update
awsome
u rocked
great going
plz continue soon
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 12:42pm | IP Logged

2nd December...

Naina gai Jimmy's Garden me..

yeha par 1 saal ki umar se lekar 5 saal ki bachcho rakha jata hai..Cresh cum nursery hai..

Naina ko humesha se bachche bahut pasand hai..infact Ranveer pahla insaan tha..jiske saath Naina ka koi jhagda nahi hua tha..

varna apne umar k yaa usse bade umar k logo k sath Naina ki banti nahi thi kabhi..

Naina bachcho k saath bahut zada comfortable rehti hai..bachcho k sath banti hai uski..

Naina bachcho k saath busy ho gai...

bachche Naina k kandhe par chadh kar naachne lage..

shaam k 5 baje bachche sab k ghar jane ka waqt hai....

Naina sab ko taiyar kar rahi thi..

bahar sab k ghar se log aye the...

Naina ek 1 saal k bachchi ko goad me utha kar bahar aa rahi thi..

aur 2 ladkian..aur 3 ladke ..Naina k aas paas the..Naina k sath hi bahar aa rahe the..

Raj bahar car leke khada tha..Naina k lia...

Raj ne woh nazara dekha..

Naina muskura rahi hai..dil khol k hans rahi hai..aur goad me ek bachchi ..Naina k naak ko khane ki koshish kar rahi hai..

Raj ne kalpana ki..Naina k saath uski zindagi..isi tarha..

Naina k goad me ek bachchi..right me 2..left me 2..aur Naina k pet me ek...

pure ghar me hungama hoga..din raat..koi bistar ganda karega..koi kaanch todega..koi kitchen me oil ki shishi ki cap kholegi..koi Raj ki tie pakad k khichega..koi raat ko royega..

Naina..Raj..aur unke half dozen bachche..waah kyaa zindagi hogi..


Raj kho gaya tha..apne khayalon me..achanak..Raj ki naak pakad k kisine khicha...

ek bachchi hai..jo Naina ki goad me hai..saath me..Bachchi ki Maa bhi hai..

Naina--Mrs. Nagpal..he is my husband..

Mrs. Nagpal--oo..hello..well main pura din office me rehti hoon..par maine apni beti ko itna khush kabhi nahi dekha..thanks to your wife..itne kum waqt par..bachcho ki itni favourite ban gai..ok Naina..bye..

Naina--bye..

Mrs. Nagpal apni beti ko lekar chali gai...

Raj--bahut khush lag rahi ho?

Naina-hmm..bahut zada khush..

Raj--bachche bahut pasand hai tumko?

Naina--dusro k bachche..

Raj--apna nahi chahie?

Naina--uske lia waqt hai..

Raj--ghar jana chahogi?

Naina--nahi..chalo kahi ghumne chale..

Raj--thodi shopping nahi karni?20 din baad shadi hai..

Naina--are..ek baar Mandir me..utna sab kuchh pahen lia kaafi hai..fir se nahi..

Raj--to kyaa zindagi bhar faded jeans me hippie look k saath rahena hai?funky look me?

Naina--burai kyaa hai isme?

Raj--burai nahi..par log sochenge k Malhotra family kangaal ho chuki hai..ghar ki bahu aise ghumti hai..

Naina--please..yeh Malhotras ki history shuru mat karo..chalo..

Raj Naina ko jwellery shop le gaya..

dunia bhar k gahne...Naina k samne rakh dia..

Naina--ab main kyaa karoon?

Raj--pasand karo..

Naina--I can't decide..yaar..tum hi pasnd kar lo na...

Raj--god..pura din office me sar khapane k baad kya ab yeh karna hoga?

Naina--bilkul..tum laaye ho mujhe..ab bhugto...

Raj--uffffffff...

Raj ne sales girl ki madad li..

aur mud kar dekha k Naina gayab..

Raj--woh Madam kaha gai?

Sales Girl--us taraf...

Raj ne dekha..Naina breslet dekh rahi hai..

Raj--bata k nahi aa sakti thi?

Naina--dekho..yeh tumhare lia pasand kia...

Raj--pahle jawab do..bina puchhe kyon aai..main pareshaan ho gaya tha..

Naina--chill yaar..koi Police ya Millitary le nahi gai thi mujhe..relax dude..

Raj--ok..achha dikhao..kya pasand kia mere lia..?

breslet bahut achha tha..Raj k haath me pahena dia...

Naina--isko tabhi utaar na haath se..jab yeh samjho..k mujhse tumhara man bhar gaya hai..

Raj--shut up...aisa kabhi hoga nahi...

Naina--mujhe..chaat khana hai..

Raj--are par shopping?

Naina--ghar ka pata de do..delivery de denge..abhi chalo..

Raj Naina ko chaat khilane k baad..ja raha tha Taj...dinner k lia..

Naina--itna faltu ka paisa kaise aa gaya tumhare paas?5 star me nahi jana mujhe..

Raj--to kaha jana hai?

Naina--Bhindi Bazar chalo..badhia khana milta hai waha..

Raj--Bhindi Bazar?my god..

Naina--Veer..zada natak mat kar..abhi sharafat se chal...

Raj--nahi gaya to?

Naina--to jaao..apne Taj me..main Taxi lekar Bhindi Bazar jaaungi...

Raj--ok..chalo...par waha se khana pack kar k ghar chalna hai..wahi khade hoke nahi khana..

Naina ne Bhindi Bazar se..Kabab kharida..laziz paratha...aur rezala kharida..

ghar aai...

Raj muh latka k baitha raha..aaj Taj me badhia Buffet tha..

Naina Bhindi bazar gai..how disgusting!!!

Naina Raj ko dekh rahi hai..aur muskura rahi hai...

Raj--main change karne ja raha hoon...

15 minute baad jab dinning table par aya..tab tak Naina ne serve kar dia tha...

khana dekh kar Raj muh latka k chair pe baitha...

Naina--are khana shuru karo...

Raj--aisi wahiat jagah se khana kharida tumne..

Naina--tell me just one thing..hotel me jin samano se banta hai..yeha par to usi saman se banta hai khana..so itna nakhra kyon dikha rahe ho?

Raj--fir bhi.. its not healthy..

Naina--to mat khao..main to khaungi..

Raj--tum Bramhin ho...tumko shobha deta hai non-veg khana?ek bar mujhe kisine bataya tha..k tum non veg ko haath nahi lagati..

Naina--sahi kaha..main haath nahi lagati...sidha muh k andar daalti hoon..

Raj--apna dharam bharsht kar rahi ho..

Naina--veg khake mera dharam bharsht hoga..infact main non veg k ilava main kuchh nahi chaahti..

Raj--mujhe nahi khana..

Naina--ok..maine pasta banaya tha..woh laa doon?

Raj--haa..

Naina ne Raj ko pasta laa kar dia..

Raj ne khana shuru kia...

Naina--haa..bhai kabab..tere kismat me main hoon..Veer ko to tujhse sakht nafrat hai..are waah..paratha bhi ana  chaahti hai mere paas..wow..rezala.. bahut dino se nahi khaya...

Raj--muh bandh kar k khao..bak bak mat karo..

Naina--tum ignore karo..haa bhaiya rezala..suna hai jo veg khate hai..bahut din zada jeete hai..pata nahi non veg chhod k kis ummeed se woh itna jeete hai..

Raj ka man kar raha hai k woh kabab khaye..par ab maang bhi nahi sakta..

Naina khaye ja rahi hai..

15 minute baad...

Raj--Naina..

Naina--kyaa baat hai Veer?

Raj--thoda dona..

Naina--hawa?haa..main laati hoon pankha..

Raj--nahi..mujhe thoda sa rezala dona..please...

Naina--muh se laal tapak raha hai..aur itna nakhra tab se dikha rahe the..

Raj--aur hai?

Naina--maine kaha khaya hai?main to khane ka natak kar rahi thi..dekho sab waisa hi pada hai..achha mere paas kar baitho..

Raj bina kisi protest k jake Naina k side wale chair par baith gaya..

aur fir..Bhindi bazar k kabab ki kismat khul gai...usko khane wala insaan.. Malhotra Groups ka Chairman tha..Rajveer..

Rajveer apni ungli tak chaat raha tha..

Naina--yeh ungli hai tumhari..kabab nahi..isko mat chabao..

Raj sharma gaya..aur hansne laga..

Naina--wow...Ranveer ko sharmana bhi ata hai?mujhe to pata hi nahi tha..anyways sharmate hue Veer bahut achha lagta hai..

Naina ne Raj k gaal par halke se mara..

Raj pura laal ho gaya..

Naina chali gai apne kamre me..

 

 

 

 

 


 



Edited by yakkudimag - 17 October 2008 at 4:41am

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Shaina_b IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Yeh Raj bhi naa kitne aage ki planning kar raha hai!!!! Embarrassed Kya sapna tha!!!How sweet!!!! Embarrassed

Aur Naina ko shopping karane le gaya!!!How sweet!!!Warna ladke toh shopping ke naam se hi dur bhaagte hai!!!! Tongue

Naina bhi naa .......... Taj ki jagah Bhindi Bazar Shocked !!!!

Par haan non-veg ke bina kya jeena!!!Even I just love non-veg!!!! Tongue Tongue

Aur Naina ne Raj ke saamne kaise khaya...bechara Raj...usse raha nahi aya aur woh bhi khana shruru kar diya!!!! LOL How cute!!!! Embarrassed LOL LOL

Aur Raj ka sharmana .................... haiiiiiiii!!!!! Embarrassed

yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posts: 4176

Posted: 30 May 2008 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Yeh Raj bhi naa kitne aage ki planning kar raha hai!!!! Embarrassed Kya sapna tha!!!How sweet!!!! Embarrassed

Aur Naina ko shopping karane le gaya!!!How sweet!!!Warna ladke toh shopping ke naam se hi dur bhaagte hai!!!! Tongue

Naina bhi naa .......... Taj ki jagah Bhindi Bazar Shocked !!!!

Par haan non-veg ke bina kya jeena!!!Even I just love non-veg!!!! Tongue Tongue

Aur Naina ne Raj ke saamne kaise khaya...bechara Raj...usse raha nahi aya aur woh bhi khana shruru kar diya!!!! LOL How cute!!!! Embarrassed LOL LOL

Aur Raj ka sharmana .................... haiiiiiiii!!!!! Embarrassed

abhi to Mohabbat ka aaghaaz hai..abhi to Mohabbat ka anjaam hoga..
sania_58 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 31 May 2008 at 12:29am | IP Logged
so sweet update
Raj er family planing darun laglo Wink
marketing
& Raj ka sharmana Embarrassed
haiiiiiii
awsome
superb
very nice Clap
plz continue soon
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
yakkudimag
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Posts: 4176

Posted: 31 May 2008 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sania_58

so sweet update
Raj er family planing darun laglo Wink
marketing
& Raj ka sharmana Embarrassed
haiiiiiii
awsome
superb
very nice Clap
plz continue soon
thanks

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