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FF - Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya [UPDATE part 55 pg 78] (Page 4)

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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anki4life

wow payal that was an awsome update lol dev and kanya do make an adorable couple buh u noe who makes a more adorable couple????????
sagar and vidya!!!! Clap Clap lol
anyways that was soo good..now i cant wait till the next update which will be soon ryte? lol Tongue


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Yes It will def. Be soon! Big smile

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PART 6


Woah! What was that?! Vidya thought.
She heard another scream and then another. Vidya ran in the direction of the screams. She ran until she reached an ally behind the collage. A girl [the same girl that was with Sagar a few minutes ago] was on the floor screaming. A guy trying to force himself on her! Vidya was shocked.
What Do I do?! OMG! What do I do?! She thought.
Vidya silently went up behind the guy and wacked him on top of his head with her book bag. [she was carrying 2 dictionarys. haha] The guy fell unconcious.
The girl on the floor scrammbled up and clung onto Vidya, she was sobbing like crazy.
VIDYA- sshhh.. don't worry. Let's get out of here before he wakes up.
Vidya supported the girl back to the collage. Vidya's math teacher, Mrs. Chadda, came up to her shocked.
MRS.CHADDA- Vidya!! What happened to her???!
VIDYA- I'll explain to you later, she's very shaken up, she needs rest.
MRS.CHADDA- Alright, come with me Manya, and you too Vidya. [Mrs. Chadda took Manya from Vidya who was supporting her and kept Manya up so she wouldn't fall.]
Mrs.Chadda led the crying Manya and Vidya to the nurses office. The nurse told Manya to lie down and as soon as Manya did she fell asleep.
MRS.CHADDA- Now, Vidya, Tell me exacally what happened. [she said in a soft but serious voice]
VIDYA- I was in the garden and I heard a scream. I followed the voice to the alley behind the collage. I saw that a guy, I don't remember how he looked like, was forcing himself on Manya. [Vidya remembered the name Mrs.Chadda had said when she took Manya] I took my book bag and hit him on his head and then I took Manya and we got away as quickly as we could. [Vidya was surprised how much her voice was shaking]
MRS.CHADDA- Alright then Vidya, thats all, you can go back to your class, I will call you if we need anything.
VIDYA- Yes m'am.


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Vidya made it to her next class in a daze. When she got there Kanya and Dev where already seated and Wow did they look Cozey. Dev Spotted her and waved her over.
DEV- Heyy Sis! Where were you?
KANYA- Hey Vidz! [Lookie there, she got herself a new nickname]
VIDYA- Hey Guys.. Its a long story... [she explained the whole story to them]
Kanya and Dev's mouths were dropped in shock.
DEV- Are you Serious?!
VIDYA- ..yes.
DEV- WOAH! Are you okay! [he looked very concerned]
VIDYA- Im okay, Im not sure about Manya though
KANYA- I think we should go see her. I know we dont really know her, but still... just to make sure she's alright.
DEV- I agree.
VIDYA- Okay, We'll go next period, we have a spare anyways.
And So they decided to go see her.

Edited by Payal25 - 20 May 2008 at 4:53pm
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
awesome job! Big smile
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
that was awsome payal Clap
con't soon Tongue
im working on my next part ryte now Tongue
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
thank guys! Embarrassed Big smile
Will update soon! Big smile


Edited by Payal25 - 19 May 2008 at 1:20pm
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PART 7


After Class Vidya, Dev and Kanya made thier way down to the nurces office.
VIDYA- I hope she's feeling better. [she was worried]
KANYA- I hope so too.
DEV- mhm.
They got to the nurses office to see that Manya was hugging a guy crying. She guy was none other then Sagar.
VIDYA- Oh, Sorry. [she was emberassed but was surprised at the jab of jealousy she felt.]
Sagar looked up and smiled.
SAGAR- No that's okay. I wanted to thank you for saving my sister.
VIDYA/DEV/KANYA- SISTER? [they were shocked, they thought she was Sagar's girlfriend or something]
Sagar looked Confused.
SAGAR- Yeah, my sister. Why?
VIDYA/DEV/KANYA- nothing.. [the were mumbling]
SAGAR- Erm.. Well anyways, thank you.
VIDYA- No problem.
She went over to Manya.
VIDYA- Are you okay Manya?
MANYA- Im better, thank you for saving me [her voice was quiet]
VIDYA- I did what anyone else would do.
SAGAR- The nurse said she can leave after School ends. But she must rest for a week or so.
MANYA- You'll come and visit me right?
VIDYA- ...[she hesitated and looked at Sagar][Sagar Nodded]... Sure. Ill come and Visit.
KANYA- and we'll come too!
Manya smiled a little.
VIDYA- Manya this is my brother Dev and my friend Kanya.
MANYA- Hello.
NURSE- Kids, you must be getting to class now. Manya needs to rest.
VIDYA/SAGAR/DEV/KANYA- yes ma'am


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SAGAR- So what class do you guys have now?
KANYA-I have Hindi next
DEV- Me too!
KANYA- Cool! Lets go! Bye Guys!
VIDYA/SAGAR- Bye
SAGAR- So what do you have now Vidya?
VIDYA- I have History.
SAGAR- Same here. Wanna go to class together?
VIDYA- Sure. [She smiled]
They made their way to their last class.
SAGAR- I like your friend and brother, they seem to like each other.
VIDYA- I know its obvious, they do make a cute couple.
SAGAR- yup.. [he wandered into his thoughts and blushed a little][Vidya was confused]
I wonder why he's blushing..Vidya thought.
I group of girls came running to sagar.
GIRL#1- Hi Sagar! [She had a flirtatious smile on]
GIRL#2- Heyy Sagar!! [She was wearing a mini skirt]
Oh my... Vidya thought
SAGAR- Hey [he flashed them a grin]
There it is agian, the pang of jealousy.. but why? I dont even like him..that way... Vidya thought
GIRL#1- Do you want to hang out after school with us?!
SAGAR- I can't, Im busy. Sorry.
GIRL#2- But why?!! [she was whinning]
GIRL#1- Maybe He has company [she was glaring at Vidya]
SAGAR- Actually I do have plans with someone. gotta go girls. Bye.
Vidya's cheeks suddenly got hot as she followed Sagar away. She could feel the stares burning into her back.
VIDYA- So.. do you really have plans with someone?
SAGAR- Yup. With you.


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Hope you liked the update. Embarrassed


Edited by Payal25 - 19 May 2008 at 2:31pm
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
again Clap awsome update payal Smile Smile
plez plez plez do u think u could update again plez Smile
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anki4life

again Clap awsome update payal Smile Smile
plez plez plez do u think u could update again plez Smile


Thank you EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I'll see what I can do. I was on the net all day now and my parents are gonna smack me if they found out. Ouch lol LOL

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