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Posted: 15 years ago
OMGGGG...i love your storylinee..its relly nice and different..i like how you update fast..
AND plsss do another update..i know u update alot today.
--Nelly
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nelly34

OMGGGG...i love your storylinee..its relly nice and different..i like how you update fast..
AND plsss do another update..i know u update alot today.
--Nelly



Thank you! 😃
Im gonna try and Update tomorrow because Its kinda late and I have school tomorrow. But I'll definatly add at least 2-3 new parts 😃
But you'll just have to keep guessing till then! lol! 😛😉😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 10


SAGAR's MOM- Manya Beta! What happened??!! [her eyes got wide and she saw sagar supporting manya into the house][she ran over to them]
SAGAR- We'll tell you later, let's just get Manya to her room.
SAGAR's MOM- But...
SAGAR's DAD- Tulsi.. let her rest [Sagar's dad had just got into the room, he sounded calm but you could see the concern in his eyes] Let Manya rest.
SAGAR's MOM- Okay. [she guided Manya from Sagar and took her up the stairs to her room]
SAGAR's DAD- Sagar, what happened?
SAGAR- Papa, Someone was trying to force himself on Manya. Vidya saved her. [he felt akward telling his father this but you could clearly see the anger in his eyes]
SAGAR's DAD- But how... who's Vidya? [he was shocked and confused]
SAGAR- Dad this is Vidya.. erm, my friend. [he gentally pulled Vidya beside him. (she was behind him at first)]
VIDYA- Um.. Hi. [she felt akward but was blushing beause Sagar was still holding her arm]
Sagar realized he was still holding her arm and let go, blushing.
Sagar's dad didn't notice, he was still in shock.
SAGAR's DAD- Oh, thank you so much beta! How can I even repay you? [his eyes were fatherly and warm and his voice was full of respect and gratitude]
VIDYA- Oh no uncle. It was the humain thing to do. [she smiled]
SAGAR's DAD- Well, thank you anyway, we are in your debt. Oh and who's this? [he had just noticed Dev and Kanya who were still behind Sagar]
SAGAR- Oh this is Dev, Vidya's brother and Kanya, Vidya's friend. They were very sweet to Manya in the nurses office, they came with Vidya to check up on her.
SAGAR'S DAD- Well, thank you. You must join us for dinner as a thank you and you are welcome in my home whenever you wish. [he smiled].
VIDYA- Thank you, We would love to join you for dinner.
KANYA- Yes we would, Thank you.
DEV- Thank you.
SAGAR's DAD- The pleasure is mine. It's the least I can Do. Sagar please show our guests around.

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Sagar had showed Vidya, Dev and Kanya around and they were now seated at the dinning room. Sagar's father (Mr.Singh) was sitting in the "head of house" Seat. Beside him was his wife (mrs. Singh) Then Manya. Sagar was sitting infront of his father and Vidya beside him. Beside Vidya was Kanya and then Dev.

MR.SINGH- Please enjoy your meal.
DEV- Thank you Mr. Singh.
Mr. Singh Smiled.
MR.SINGH- Im glad your feeling better then before Manya beti.
MANYA- Thank you papa. I just need some rest. The nurse told me that I must stay home for a week. [her voice was frail]
MRS.SINGH- Don't worry Manya sweety, Im sure you won't be bored at all. I mean you have a TV in your room, you can watch Sopes all day! [she laughed softly]
MANYA- I guess, but It won't be the same.
SAGAR- I bet Vidya will give you company after her classes. [he smiled at Vidya]
VIDYA- Afcourse. [she smiled at Sagar and then at Manya]
MANYA- Really? Thank you! Please bring Dev and Kanya along too. I wouldn't mind extra company.
KANYA- We would love to.
DEV- You Bet. When would you like us over?
SAGAR- What about tomorrow after classes?
DEV- Oh, Kanya is accompanying me to my guitar lessons. [he smiled apologeticaly]
SAGAR- That's okay. Vidya can come right? [his eyes were hopeful as he looked at Vidya]
VIDYA- Sure. But I don't have a ride...
SAGAR- Ill Give you a ride! Im comming here anyways! [he grinned]
VIDYA- Alright. [She grinned back]
Mr and Mrs Singh exchanged a quick glace and a smile.

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After they had finished Mr & Mrs Singh along with Sagar (Manya had gone to bed because she was tired) followed Vidya, kanya and Dev to the door.
VIDYA- Thank you for the wonderful dinner Aunty.
MRS. SINGH- Any Time.
Vidya, Kanya and Dev got into the car. They waved a goodbye.
SAGAR- Don't forget Vidya your comming over tomorrow! [he called as they drove off]
Vidya smiled. How could she possibaly Forget?

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Another Update 😊 Hope you guys like it!Edited by Payal25 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome job Payal! keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank you Sonali! [can i call you that?] 😳 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
GREAT update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yaar, i loved it, u write better than me[if u have read my writing] hehe
😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cutey55

GREAT update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yaar, i loved it, u write better than me[if u have read my writing] hehe
😉



Awwww 😳😳
No I dont believe Im better then you. Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat is awsome!
But thank you Tamz! it means a lot 😳😳


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Posted: 15 years ago
wow itr wonderful yaar continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you! 😳
Will continue soon 😃
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PART 11


NEXT DAY
VIDYA- Bhai! Let's go! We're gonna be late!
DEV- We still have an hour till we have to be at Collage.
VIDYA- But we still have to pick up Kanya!
DEV- Kanya lives 2 streets away!
VIDYA- But still....
DEV- Chill Sis. What's the rush?
Vidya blushed. She had been thinking about Sagar all night and she was in a hurry to see him again.
VIDYA- Nothing...
DEV- Sure. [he gave her a knowing look]
Vidya blushed.
DEV- Anyway, if you want to go now Im ready.
VIDYA- Alright, let me just call Kan..
DEV- I'll call her! [he said it a little too quickly and blushed][he blushed]
VIDYA- Okay there Bhai, calm down, you can call her... [she giggled and walked away]


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They reached Collage a half an hour earlier then they usually did. So they had an hour to kill until then.
KANYA- Why are we here so early?
DEV- Ask Vidya [he smirked]
KANYA- Huh? [she looked confused]
VIDYA- maybe because you were in such a hurry to see Kanya. [she smirked back.] HAH TAKE THAT! She thought.
Dev and Kanya both blushed bright red.
DEV- .....
KANYA- ....
VIDYA- I was joking, now come on, lets go sit in the garden.
DEV- Im just gonna go get some water first. Wanna come Kanya?
KANYA- Okay. [she was blushing again]
VIDYA- Alright. I'll meet you there. [she thought it was best to give them some privacy]
Vidya walked to the garden alone. She was about half way there until she felt someone grab her from behind.
She Screamed.

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Another Update, Kinda Short though.
Also, ive Changed "University" to "Collage" its easier that way. 😛

Edited by Payal25 - 15 years ago