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FF- Sirf Dosti? Epilogue..Pg128 Thanks Sonali Di<3

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:58pm | IP Logged

Hey Guys this is Ankita. I am starting a ff cuz ive always wanted to buh i really didn't noe wha to write'buh now that i finally have an idea im gonna start it and see how far it goes'

And umm I'm not really good at  writing in hindi (even though I can speak it Tongue),  so I'll write it in English.

 

This story is about two best friends (Sagar and Vidya). Throughout the story though I'll add in new characters.

 

Vidya: Even though she is modern she still has the good qualities of our old Vidya but in this ff..she's a bit naughtyTongue and modern.

Sagar: He is our same old Sagar Smile who everyone loves.

Part 1

It's the first day of college. Vidya arrives early as usual and was waiting for Sagar to come. Vidya's aunt who she lived with did not approve of Vidya and Sagar's friendship because she thought that Sagar is like any other guy that wouldn't hesitate to hurt Vidya but Vidya knew that was wrong so she continued her ffriendship.

[Vidya's back is facing toward the audience, she's shown looking at her watch. By the way she wears modern dresses in this ff, so she wearing jeans with a pink babydoll top.]

V: Omg! Where is Sagar? Gosh, hes always late!

[Sagar is shown entering the college gates on a bike. His face is not shown. All these girls are looking at him. He is getting off the bike as soon as a girl comes up to him.]

AnkitaTongue: Hey Sagar!

[Sagar turns around and you see his face. His hair is flying all over the place and you see him take off his sunglasses.]Embarrassed

S: Oh hey Ankita, how were your summer?

Ankita: They were awesome! By the way, Vidya is looking for you and is very mad. You might wanna hurry up.

S: Oh shit! Not again, alright thanks for warning me Ankita. I'll see you around later.

[Sagar spot's Vidya. He goes up to her.]

S: Sorry yaar. I didn't realize that today was college so I forgot to wake up. Oops.

[Vidya turns around. Her hair is also flying all over the place.]

V: Ok but you better not be late tomorrow! [Even though Vidya knew he was going to be late.]

S: Alright i won't be i promise. Now shall we go to class?

V: Alright let's go.

[All of a sudden Vidya stop walking. Sagar notices that and asks Vidya what happened?]

S: Vidya, What happened yaar?

[Vidya is totally lost in her thoughts.]

V: Hmm? Ooo look there' Robby.(lol i couldn't think of a nameTongue)

[Sagar looks at Robby and sees all the girls looking at him.]

S: Whats so good about Robby yaar?

[Sagar and Robby had been best friends in High School until Robby turned out to be a jerk.]

S: Vidya, I've told you so many times, he's not a good guy.

V: I noe but just look at him.

[Sagar now gets jealous, and annoyed].

S: Fine! Then why don't you go to your Robby? I'm leaving!

 Pre-Cap: Vidya is trying to manao Sagar


Sorry guys'I hope I didn't bore you Tongue this is my first FF so bare with me.

Guys plez comment..so i can noe whether to continue or not.Smile




Edited by anki4life - 30 November 2008 at 3:51pm

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Noo Ankita It was awesome and brilliant..What did I say you're talented keep up with this talent you have. Don't ever think it's impossible everything is possible..If you try you'll come to your point!!!Am I right?

Love you Ankita
Love Rina
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LoveBMTD

Noo Ankita It was awesome and brilliant..What did I say you're talented keep up with this talent you have. Don't ever think it's impossible everything is possible..If you try you'll come to your point!!!Am I right?

Love you Ankita
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Lol thanx Rina Heart
i really didnt think it was good...i was like ok no one commented so far...i guess it's not good...buh u commented thanx hunBig smile
luv u too Big smile Heart


Edited by anki4life - 18 May 2008 at 1:22pm
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Aww don't think that ever promise me..
Your very talented KEEP UP AND KEEP SMILING Big smile

Love Rina
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Part 2
Recap – Sagar got annoyed at Vidya.

[Sagar started to walk away from Vidya when Vidya held his hand.]
V: Sagar yaar come on. I'm really srry. I won't talk about Robby ever again. [She holds on to her ears]
[Sagar turns around]
S: Ok fine it's alright for now.[Smiles] I don't care if you like a guy. It's just Robby that is the problem.
V: Ok. Now cheer up plez. [smiles] And lets go to class before we get in trouble.
S: [smiles] Gud idea. But Vidya I really don't want to go to class. [Sagar makes a sad face.]
V: If you think I'm going to fall for it then forget it. Let's go [She drags him to class.]
[Sagar couldn't concentrate in class cuz he kept on thinking about why he got so sad when Vidya said Robby looks so good.]
S: I think it's just because I care about her too much. [Sagar says to himself]
[The class finishes. They now walk to the cafeteria.]
V: Hey who's that new girl? [Points towards Shalu.] I don't think I've seen her here before. Let's go say hi.
S: Do we have to? I mean come on Vidya I'm so hungry!
V: If you don't want to then I will.
[Vidya walks towards Shalu.]
V: Hi Im Vidya whats ur name?
Sh: Hi Im Shalu. I just moved here.
V: Oh that's cool. You wanna join me and my friends for lunch.
Sh: Sure I'd like that.
[Vidya walks over to Sagar and a couple of her other friends.]
V: Hey Sagar this is Shalu. She just moved over here.
S: Cool hey Shalu. [Leans on Vidya's Arm]
Sh: Hey.
S: Ok Vidya can we plez go eat somewhere now? I'm soooo hungry.
V: Alright fine let's go.
[They're having lunch. Sagar said he'd be right back. So Shalu and Vidya were eating their food.]
Sh: Vidya, if u don't mind can i ask u smthing?
V: Sure shalu, what is it?
Sh: are u and sagar in a relationship?
V: [Thinks to herself and Starts laughing] Hahaha no..we're just really good friends. We tell each other everything and we have this policy of meeting each other at least once everyday even on weekends. Why?
Sh: O nutting it just looked like it. You noe when Sagar was leaning on you i could see smthing in his eyes. But forget it maybe it was just me.
V: [Thinking to herself] When Shalu asked me if me and Sagar were in a relationship why did I feel smthing?
S: So what are you guys talking about?
Sh: O nutting..
S: HelloVidya? Where are u lost man?
V: Huh? O nutting…shall we go? Aunty told me to come home early today.
S: Alright Ill drop you home.
[Shalu says bye and leaves.]

Pre-Cap: Vidya's aunty tells Vidya that she found a boy for her. Sagar overhears the conversation while he was on the phone with vidya.

Here's another update guys.
Plez tell me what you think. Even if it's something bad. I'd really appreciate it. Thanx Smile

Edited by anki4life - 18 May 2008 at 2:03pm
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can someone tell me how to update the name....nvm i found out thanx


Edited by anki4life - 18 May 2008 at 2:10pm
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Part 3

Recap- Vidya Manaos Sagar and Shalu (Their new friend) thinks sagar and vidya are in a relationship.

Vidya was sitting in the passenger seat and Sagar was driving.
S: So wat were you and shalu talking about when I left.
V: [Laughs] Hahaha you wont believe it she thought we were in a relationship. Hahaha
S: O. Really? [gets into a deep thought]
V: Sagar??? Haha I couldn't believe she thought that i was just like o no we're just best friends. Ryte?
S:Ya.
[Vidya's House comes]
V: Alright thanx Sagar, she gives him a hug and leaves.
S: Bye. [Sagar saw her go inside and drives home]
SD: Oh finally you're here.
S: Hi papa. Takes his blessings.
SD: You mom and I am going to someone's house we'll be late so we'll see you later ok?
S: ok dad have fun [smiles.]

Sagar goes to take a shower. He's drying his hair when he hears his cell phone ring.
S: Hello?
V: Hey Sagar. Omg you won't believe it…
S: What happened?
V: Mom is coming home from Banaras.
S: That's great.
[Vidya hears a knock on the door.]
V: Sagar hang on I think aunty's coming.
[Vidya quickly hides her phone and says come in.
VA: Vidya I got a proposal for you.
[Sagar hears this on the phone and is shocked.]
V: But aunty you noe I don't want to get married then why are you forcing me?
VA: You have to get married soon Vidya. They're coming tomorrow.
V: But…. Arrgg.
[Sagar turns of the phone]
V:Hello Sagar? Hello?
[Sagar was lost in his thoughts. He thought of everything that happened today.]
S: Why did I get so shocked when Vidya's aunty told me that she's going to get married? Why didn't I find it funny when Vidya told me that Shalu thought that me and her were in a relationship? Whats wrong with me. I should be happy that Vidya will find a nice boy to marry but why am I not happy?
[Vidya on the other hand is very confused.]
V: Why did Sagar turn his phone of all of a sudden?
[She tried a couple of times but she couldn't reach.]
V: Maybe I'm just over reacting.

Guys, Plez comment Smile
I am only going to continue if I get some comments. SO plez tell me if you like it or not. This is my first ff and i was inspired by alot of your ffs. Smile
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wow!! thats really good Anikita! :D Keep Writing! Clap Clap

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