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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cute_unknown_fr

shilpa nice part Clap
tum mujhe phir se pm karna bhool gayi Cry
i am very sorry yar kal bohot busy the aaj nahe bhulunge mai sorryBroken Heart

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Amazing 2 see ur ff bak on track!
Awesum part n interestng promo!

Cont. soon n do pm me!

Marisha Embarrassed

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continued...........

recap-armaan and ridz stay back for night duty armaan asks ridz whether she luves him she tells i will answer this question in the evening they go to the canteen to have coffee

ar-to coffe kaise hai ridhima

ri- ha accha hai kyu

ar-bas aise he puch raha hu kyu nahe puch caheye tha kya

ri-armaan

ar-ha ridhima

then rahul and muskaan enter the cafeteria fighting

mu-abbe ye sahe nahe hai

ra-are yahe sahe hai maine check kiya hai

mu-abbe mai keh rahe hu na ye sahe nahe hai

ra-yahe sahe hai muskaan

ar-kya hua tum dono phir se kyu lad rahe ho

mu-are hero dekh na ye kankhajura phir se mere baat nahe man raha hai

ra-are maine kya keya tu mere baat nahe man rahe

ar-are chod na muskaan ye to hamesha he aisa he karta hai tughe pata hai na

and gives a high fye to muskaan

mu-ha ha tune sahe kaha

then rahul and muskaan take a seat

ra-to tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho

both AR- hum to yahan kuch nahe

ra-KYA kuch nahe

ar-abbe rahoool tughe kya sab kuch caheye apne kam kam se kam rakh na kyu rihdima

ri-kya mera matlab hai ha matlab
armaan inturupts in the middle

ar-dekha ridhima bhi yahe sonchte hai

then armaan slid his hand under the table and tried to catch ridhimas hand

then there is a announcement
'DR.ARMAAN AUR DR.RIDHIMA DR.KEERTHI TO NURSE STATION PE REPORT KARE '
armaan to himself ye gabbar bhi sahe time par iska bulava aata hai

ar- chalo guys jana padega and says bye to rahul and muskaan

then armaan and ridhima leave the canteen

ar-to ridhima kya soncha hai aaj sham ke bare me bohot important hai hum dono ke leye aaj ka shaam

ri-ha pata hai mughe tumhe jaldhe pata chal gayega mera gavab kya hai

at nurse station

keerthi-dr.armaan aur dr.ridhima aap dono apne duties bohot acche tarah se keya hai ab aap dono ghar gakar aaram kegeye aur 5:00 ko mughe report karna
[it was about 11:00 in the morning then>

AR- je dr.keerthi

keerthi-aap dono ja sakte hai

then armaan and ridhima leave
they r walking in the corridor
ridhima thinking about armaans question
armaan looking towards ridhima lovingly who was lost in her own thoughts

ridz to herself aaj mere gulame ka aakhre din tha armaan maine tumhe wapas pa leya

then they get out of sanjeevni

ar-to ridhima kaise jane wale ho

ri-mai shayad auto me ya taxi me chale gavunge

ar-chalo mai chod deta hu tumhe

ri-par..
armaan interrupts

ar-par var kuch nahe tum chal rahe ho

ri- accha theek hai chalo

ar-tum yaha wait karo mai car lekar aata hu

ri-theek hai

armaan leaves to get the car

ridhima thinking maine armaan par doubt bhi kaise keya maine usse itna bura bhala kaha phir vo mere sath itna accha tha aaj ke bad humare becch koi nahe aayega hum..

she was distubed by a cars horn

ar-kya soch rahe chalo

he opens the door for ridhima
she takes the seat

arman closes the door of the car

clod breez coming through the window and blowing ridhimas hair
armaan looking at her luvingly

asmani rang ho saong playing in the background

both r luving the ride and go into flashback thinking about the scenes whaen they where together

they reach ridhimas house

ar-ridhima tumhara ghar aagaya

ri-ha ha
she opens the car door

ri-thanks armaan

ar-thanks kis baat ka and smiles at her luvingly

ri-bye armaan
ar-bye aur ha aaj shaam yaad hai na

ri- ha ha mai kaise bhul sakte hu

ri-bye

ar-bye

she starts to walk towards the house

armaan palat[turn> palt[turn>

just than ridhima turns back and waves at smilingly

ar-hayeeeee ye to ek din mar dalege

then leaves

to b continued soon……………

hope u guys liked it
sorry for the mistakes



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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 8:32am | IP Logged
promo
ridz is going to confess her feelings soon
she also plans something special for armaan
armaan and ridhima go on a date

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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 8:33am | IP Logged

Awww...super cute part!
I luv da way u write di!
Jaldi continue karna n thanx 4 da pm!!

Luv u...!
Marisha

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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 8:34am | IP Logged

OMG....I luv da promo too!

Cant wait...! Embarrassed

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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Tongue Tongue Tongue Nice one...ab toh mujhe ff's original seh zyada ache lagte hain..

Gud One Shilpa...

eagerly waiting for the continuation...

Cheers!

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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by perfectpiscean


Awww...super cute part!
I luv da way u write di!
Jaldi continue karna n thanx 4 da pm!!

Luv u...!
Marisha
oh thanks god u liked it maine to ye part urgent urgent me likha thaLOL and wow u like the way i writeEmbarrassed  mai jalde continue karunge luv u too dearTongue

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