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pehli barish ff part6 page7 rahul muskaan (Page 8)

Aisha00 Senior Member
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Clap waitin for d next part

usharafuddin IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 2:22am | IP Logged
cute scene, buh yaar it's 22222222222222222 short!   Ouch can u make longer frm next part?   Embarrassed
zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 2:33am | IP Logged
ok guys
heres a promo
to make u all feel better as it was a really short part!

Oh her eyes, she's trying so hard to keep the tears away…her beautiful eyes fogged with sadness. He had never felt this much pain as he was now, seeing the pain in her eyes. He wanted nothing more in the world to just make her smile…to see her eyes crinkle, and her cheeks rise
He wanted to take away her ache…. And replace it with happiness
Karan.T IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Fantastic update
I really really like it.
You written it well
Good job Clap
Keep continue.
zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 4:41am | IP Logged
thanx ram!

im glad u liked it!
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Hey Sommi,

Just caught up with the last 3 parts
Didn't take me very long though
Anyways

Great story
and keep writing more
this ff is growing on me
Again I love the story,the nostalgia rememba
Please cont soon
Love
Hina
Thanx for the pm
AshiYuvi4life IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 June 2008 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Sommi my jaan I'm soooo happy you continued! Lekin it was soooo short. You said you were putting up a second part, but instead you put up a promo??? Anyway, whatever yaar. As for that bio help thing, well, I was in AP BIO at school so if you want any help at all just PM me. I'll check out your Youtube link too. Love you! Aur haan, your hindi's getting better yaar! Minimal mistakes this time! Very good! Clap


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