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pehli barish ff part6 page7 rahul muskaan (Page 2)

mimi0295 IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Hii! OMG That was SO cute! Haha its really different from the other FF's that I've read! Please continue soon! (If it isnt a both, d'ya mind PMing me?

zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
thank you soooo much for all your lovely comments

btw
my names somaiya, but u all can call me sommi!
i shall be updating.........um
maybe today
so watch out for another part!

luvs
sommi
zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 12:39am | IP Logged
hey everyone

heres part 2
with both point of views

okies
here it is

part 2

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Her eyes are the first thing I noticed….

God she had gorgeous eyes! hazel.....

I realise I'm still staring at her
She must think me a creep!
Not the greatest first impression now is it?
But I can't help it….
She is so…
So beautiful

I smile a small tentative smile

She smiles back.

She's soaking wet, but as I'm about to offer my umbrella….
The rain stops
Opportunity's gone….blasted timing

I offer a final smile,
And walk up to my gate….
Her face, dripping wet, etched into brain

I just can't stop smiling

What is happening to me????

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I can't seem to stop staring………

Omg, did he just smile?
I think he did!
Oh he definitely did!

Oh what do I do now?
Right
Smile back

Am I imagining it or did his eyes just light up when I smile


The rain's stopped…

He just smiled again!
Not a little smile like before
But a real smile,

I think my heart just skipped a beat

Omg what's happening to me?


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so there it was

hope u all enjoyed it!
pls comment if you want me to continue!

luvs sommi


Edited by zen girl - 24 May 2008 at 6:35pm
mimi0295 IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 12:52am | IP Logged
Sommi!! That was too short yaar! Please make longer parts- unless you update a few times a day! haha!
OMG I lovee it! Update sooner then soon!

---Mimi*
zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 12:59am | IP Logged

Originally posted by mimi0295

Sommi!! That was too short yaar! Please make longer parts- unless you update a few times a day! haha!
OMG I lovee it! Update sooner then soon!

---Mimi*

thanz soooooo much mimi!

i kno itz short

i just wanna keep the momentum going and not make it drag u kno?

ill probably post the next part tomorro k

ill make sure itz long, i always get that complaint, even on my other ff always smile

i shud probably update that one soon aswell lol

 

kk

luvz

sommi

rihanaa Senior Member
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 2:20am | IP Logged
LOL LOL cute part plssssss make abitt longer if u dntmind Big smile

love
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 2:35am | IP Logged
haha....the rain stopped...poor rahul!!!!....lol...loved it...keep updating...n nice u r showing stuff frm both oint if views, its gud we cum 2 kno vat d oder is thinking!!!...brilliant!!!..wud b witing for d nex part

-rubina
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Posted: 19 May 2008 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
SOMMI!!! You've got style babes! Big smile Continue soon!!!

KOmz

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