pehli barish ff part6 page7 rahul muskaan - Page 2

hey everyone

heres part 2
with both point of views

okies
here it is

part 2

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Her eyes are the first thing I noticed….

God she had gorgeous eyes! hazel.....

I realise I'm still staring at her
She must think me a creep!
Not the greatest first impression now is it?
But I can't help it….
She is so…
So beautiful

I smile a small tentative smile

She smiles back.

She's soaking wet, but as I'm about to offer my umbrella….
The rain stops
Opportunity's gone….blasted timing

I offer a final smile,
And walk up to my gate….
Her face, dripping wet, etched into brain

I just can't stop smiling

What is happening to me????

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I can't seem to stop staring………

Omg, did he just smile?
I think he did!
Oh he definitely did!

Oh what do I do now?
Right
Smile back

Am I imagining it or did his eyes just light up when I smile


The rain's stopped…

He just smiled again!
Not a little smile like before
But a real smile,

I think my heart just skipped a beat

Omg what's happening to me?


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so there it was

hope u all enjoyed it!
pls comment if you want me to continue!

luvs sommi
Edited by zen girl - 15 years ago

Sommi!! That was too short yaar! Please make longer parts- unless you update a few times a day! haha!
OMG I lovee it! Update sooner then soon!

---Mimi*

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Sommi!! That was too short yaar! Please make longer parts- unless you update a few times a day! haha!
OMG I lovee it! Update sooner then soon!

---Mimi*

thanz soooooo much mimi!

i kno itz short

i just wanna keep the momentum going and not make it drag u kno?

ill probably post the next part tomorro k

ill make sure itz long, i always get that complaint, even on my other ff always smile

i shud probably update that one soon aswell lol

 

kk

luvz

sommi

😆 😆 cute part plssssss make abitt longer if u dntmind 😃

love
rihanaa 😳

haha....the rain stopped...poor rahul!!!!....lol...loved it...keep updating...n nice u r showing stuff frm both oint if views, its gud we cum 2 kno vat d oder is thinking!!!...brilliant!!!..wud b witing for d nex part

-rubina

SOMMI!!! You've got style babes! 😃 Continue soon!!!

KOmz

hey guys
heres part 3!

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muskis pov:

this is terrible!

oh nooooooooooo he is a stalker

why does such a cute guy have to be a stalker?

i telling you

this is not right!

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i walked into my house, went upstairs, and saw the boy i had just seen on the road, was in my house

thats right, the boy with the green eyes that i had an eye lock on the road, in the pouring rain, was now in my house, what is going on here?

maybe im hallucinating?

yea that could be it....
maybe im imagining him here?




nope
he is definitly here

"what are you doing in my house?!?!?!?!"
it was a simple enough question right?

but he seemed just as shocked to find me here i was to see HIM

"wait....this is your house?"


"ahhh YEAH. why else would i be here?"


"so you must be muskaan?"


"ye--- wait how do you know my name"
(by this point i am really starting to freak out)



"im Rahul, rahul garewal...nam to suna hoga? ...im the exchange student"

(hey, sommi here, lol couldnt help it, had to put in that line!)



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rahuls pov

m:"wait, so ur the F.O.B thats gonna be staying with us?
that was today? sorry, mein to bhul gaye"


r:"thats ok, i have a feeling you wont be forgetting me anytime soon..."

accompanied with a cheeky grin, rahul stood there, already comfortable talking to a stranger

...

who he had a sneeky feeling that this maybe the girl of his dreams

m:"what did you just say!? over-confidence mat kar samjhe!"

yup

definately the girl of his dreams....


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there it is

hope you all liked it!
pls comment if you want me to continue!

luvs
sommi

Edited by zen girl - 15 years ago

HEY BHAGGU!!! Loved it yaar!!!! I love Rahul's line! On the show and here!!!! Amazing man!!!! HAHAHA!!! She called him a F.O.B! LOL... Continue really soon!!! 😉



komz

thanks komz!
lol i just had to put in that line 😆 😆

yeh she called him a fob, cuz hes an xchange student, and hes desi, so she thought he'd be from india
...

but hes not!
ull find out in the next part where hes from!


luvz
sommi

coolio! i had a feeling he wouldn't be from India! lol.