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pehli barish ff part6 page7 rahul muskaan

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:45am | IP Logged

ok another ff my me sommiSmile

itz about rahul  and muskaan, set in new zealand!(im from there, it wud be way too hard to set in india cuz im not from there!)

itz there last yr in highskool

okiez

here we go

 

PART 1

 

lust at first sight.

you were probably expecting that whole ishq vishq pyar vyaar, but sorry to dissapoint, but even im not that fickle!

so anyway...

i was walking home from school

it was raining OFCOURSE

i would like to say that i looked gorgeous, with droplets of rain glistening on my hair and all that but the truth is

well i very much looked like, well a very wet girl whos had to walk 2 km in the pouring rain without a blasted umbrella!

ok whinge over

 

so i was about to cross the street to get to my house, when i noticed a boy do the same thing a couple of metres away

the boy omg looked so cute, this my be due to fact he had an umbrella in hand,

he had a sweater on, omg he was cute! but you do not wear a sweater in one of the wettest cities in new zealand, and i could unfortunatly smell the wet sheep stink.

that smell was how you judged a newbe, someone whos not from Invers, and seeing- no wait, better make that smelling, i figured he was a newbe, maybe an exchange student?

 

anyway, we were about to cross, and thats when he looked my way!

oh those eyes, those beautiful green eyesEmbarrassed

he was probably doing that whole 'look left then right before you cross' mantra we all learnt in KG...

but he caught me staring at him

 

i was trying to figure out who he was, i mean he was wearing our school uniform, but i had never seen him before, i mean i think i would remember those eyesEmbarrassed

 

oh no

im still staring

 

 

wait....

so is HE!

 

 

 

 

okiez

theres the first part

hope u all liked it

leave comments if u want me to continue!

luvz

 

sommiSmile



Edited by zen girl - 01 June 2008 at 7:42pm

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:51am | IP Logged
greatttttttt do update soon n  plss pm me .ur story soundss reallly cute  n naughty love the way u have played with the language LOL LOL LOL

Edited by rihanaa - 18 May 2008 at 1:56am
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Would like 2 how u go ahead...cant make up my mind rite nw...I wud c how it shapes up n denmaybe I can give u d rite inputs...till now 2 me it luked gud.

-rubina
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:52am | IP Logged
oh n ya hunnny its pheli barish n not phela barishhh LOL LOL LOL
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 2:00am | IP Logged
thanx sooooo much
im bangali
iv never actually spoken hindi
just what i kno from serials lol

ill change the title now LOL

thanx for commenting Rihanaa and sournsweet!

luvz
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 6:49am | IP Logged
nice one please continue it

Zindgi kisi ki amanat nahi hoti,amanat mein kabhi qayamat nahi hoti,humse dosti zara sambhal kar karna,hamari dosti ki kaid mein zamanat nahi hoti.


Edited by kvn1983 - 18 May 2008 at 6:50am
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
Check that sommi! You have comments!!! Clap Clap Clap See! People appreciate your work! It's very different, and extremely intersting! Thanx for the PM! Continue soon!!!!


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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
so ur name's sommi???..its d short form for???...nah, u dnt need 2 thank me for d comments...wow!!...onlyfew ppl replied???...bt as u start writing more...u will get more comments so gr8 beginnin, I found it extremely intersting d way u hav taken it off...wud just want u 2 keep ur stand der!!!

-rubina

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