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FF:Love, Lust Or Both- Part 3 Pge 8 (Page 3)

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Hey awesum prt...loved it....G8888888 start...

Interesting plot....n the name of the FF is vry cathy....I mean-"Love, lust or both.." n it suits the story line......
Hope tis FF rockz.......
do Pm me when u cont nxt sweeety...

Love ya.....t.ccccccc



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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Ok fnx every1 Part 1 will be up soon lemme just finish writin it up ok


x...Aneesa...x
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Ok you guys I'm gonna write Ridz thoughts in purple & Armaan's thoughts in blue

Part 1

He came closer to her and said

A:Yo Sup

Sup? its our suhaag raat and all he says is Sup. Oh god whats wrong with him.

R:Sup?

A:Yeh sup oh sorry you don't know what it means innit well it means what up well not like whats up meaning the ceiling but how are you.

R:I know what sup means. Answer is nuffin much

Well that was part of your answer but i would of said nuffin much just so called enjoying sitting on your bed having all this jewellery and clothes weighing down on me and it feels like I'm gonna sink into the ground any minute.


A:Kwl now can you get off the bed i need ma sleep. i had to wake up sooo early for this now move.

WAT IS HE SAYING IS HE OUT OF HIS MIND.

R:Ummm i should be sleeping here as well its our.......

Armaan cut in

A:Our suhaag raat but i don't care bout it you can either go to another room or sleep on the floor its your choice.

What is he talking bout i fought he actually liked me i mean he was soo nice to me but now. I just cant believe it.

Ridz gets up, gets her nighty out and goes to the bathroom to get changed. After 5 minutes she comes back out wearing a black satin nighty. Armaan was sitting on his bed reading a magazine but when he heard a door open he put the magazine down and couldnt stop looking at Ridhimma.

There was another room attached to armaan's room and there is a door in his room to lead to the other room.Ridz started to walk towards that door when Armaan said something

A:You can stay here if you want because if anyone comes in then they would want to know why your not here.

Ridz didn't say anything but just nodded

She walked towards the bed and layed down. She moved as far away as possible from armaan and turned off the lamp


Armaan what did you just do. Why did you let her stay here? He then started to remember Ridz in her wedding clothes and then in the satin nighty. He shook his head to get that out of his head. Armaan why are you only thinking bout her there's other girls but your only focusing on her. I better get some sleep so that i can stop thinking bout her.

Armaan looked at Ridz one last time and went to sleep. But he didn't stop thinking bout her even in his dreams


Please comment on how the 1st part was.


                                       Heartx...Aneesa...xHeart


Edited by Prachi&Neev - 18 May 2008 at 7:49am
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Great intro and great part Aneesa
Bacharee Ridz....plz cont. sooon Tongue
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 10:10am | IP Logged
awesome update. really liked the first part. Clap armu is already falling for ridz. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon Big smile
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
Hey Aneesa!!! OMG that was a gr8888 part!!! I loved it alot!!! Can't wait for more.... LOL Do continue soon n please pm me if possible...Thanks
Love,
Ananya
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
really nice intro Clap
n luvd ur 1st part
it was awesome Clap
plz continue soon

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