Ok you guys I'm gonna write Ridz thoughts in purple & Armaan's thoughts in blue
Part 1
He came closer to her and said
A:Yo Sup
Sup? its our suhaag raat and all he says is Sup. Oh god whats wrong with him.
R:Sup?
A:Yeh sup oh sorry you don't know what it means innit well it means what up well not like whats up meaning the ceiling but how are you.
R:I know what sup means. Answer is nuffin much
Well that was part of your answer but i would of said nuffin much just so called enjoying sitting on your bed having all this jewellery and clothes weighing down on me and it feels like I'm gonna sink into the ground any minute.
A:Kwl now can you get off the bed i need ma sleep. i had to wake up sooo early for this now move.
WAT IS HE SAYING IS HE OUT OF HIS MIND.
R:Ummm i should be sleeping here as well its our.......
Armaan cut in
A:Our suhaag raat but i don't care bout it you can either go to another room or sleep on the floor its your choice.
What is he talking bout i fought he actually liked me i mean he was soo nice to me but now. I just cant believe it.
Ridz gets up, gets her nighty out and goes to the bathroom to get changed. After 5 minutes she comes back out wearing a black satin nighty. Armaan was sitting on his bed reading a magazine but when he heard a door open he put the magazine down and couldnt stop looking at Ridhimma.
There was another room attached to armaan's room and there is a door in his room to lead to the other room.Ridz started to walk towards that door when Armaan said something
A:You can stay here if you want because if anyone comes in then they would want to know why your not here.
Ridz didn't say anything but just nodded
She walked towards the bed and layed down. She moved as far away as possible from armaan and turned off the lamp
Armaan what did you just do. Why did you let her stay here? He then started to remember Ridz in her wedding clothes and then in the satin nighty. He shook his head to get that out of his head. Armaan why are you only thinking bout her there's other girls but your only focusing on her. I better get some sleep so that i can stop thinking bout her.
Armaan looked at Ridz one last time and went to sleep. But he didn't stop thinking bout her even in his dreams
Please comment on how the 1st part was.
❤️x...Aneesa...x❤️
Edited by Prachi&Neev - 15 years ago
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