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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 48)

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Posted: 12 February 2009 at 4:59am | IP Logged
kashish u r fabulous mindblowing part per yaar ab plzzzzz sujal ko jaldi le aao.............wese mujhe ye ganna bohot acha lagta hai chori chori chupke se or tum ne is ka use bhi bohot ache se kiya awesome ...............plzzzzzzzz cont soon.........

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kashish very nice part yaar....the way she is makin the family happy  though she is completely broken inside and jis tarah se woh apni sari responsibilites niba rahi hai wow awesome...but without sujal everythin is colorless....cont soon.....
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i was almost in tears plz get sujal bac n it was very nice n centi epi
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Lovely part.. liked the way Kashish is taking all the responsibilities... plzz bring Sujal back.... itz llifeless without him... Plzz continue asap......
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so sad part...........................kashish kitna kuch bear kar rahi hai...........................sujal kaha ho tum
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Part-43

aaj phir se Garewal Mension me shaadi ki shehnai gunj rahi hai.....phir se wahi ghar pholon se sajja hai...........aur aaj to dugni khushi hai kyunki barat bhi to do hai..........lekin phir bhi is dhamal me ek apni si chupki hai.........pata nahi lekin kyun sabki aankhoin me ek ajeeb sa dard hai................sab log apni apni taraf se puri koshish kar rahe hai...........Kashish apne kamre me taiyaar ho rahi hoti hai.........

Kashish: main janti hoon ki aap aaj mujse bahot gussa hai........kyunki maine aapki baat nahi mani.......lekin aap to muje samaj rahe hai........aur main yeh bhi janti hoon ki aapko meri yeh saree bhi pasand nahi aayi hogi kyunki inka rang hamare pyaar ke aage bahot hi fika hai..........lekin shayad ab yahi meri kismat hai hai jo upperwale ne likhi hai..........aaj to aap bahot khush honge.......aapke dono ladle ki shaadi jo hai.......bahot khush hai na sab........lekin abhi aap mujse yeh kahenge ki main..........main bhi to khush hoon..........dekhiye na aaj subaah se ek bar bhi meri aankhoin me aanshu nahi aaye.......aur aaj shaadi hone tak main nahi roungi.......main itna to kar sakti hoon.......chaliye ab muje dair ho rahi hai..........woh Rudra aur Prem se bhi kuch baat karni hai..............main bas bahot jald wapas aa jaungi........

Kashish apne kamre ki darwaze ki aur aage badhti hai lekin phir mud ke apni almari ke pass aati hai aur phir Sujal ki us shervani ko nikalti hai jo usne is din ke liye li thi..........Kashish us sherwani ko Sujal ki writing table wali pic ke pass rakhti hai..........

Kashish: Shaadi bahot bahot mubarak ho.......

yeh kehte hi woh us picture ko dekh ke waha se chali gayi kyunki agar woh ek bhi pal waha aur rehti to shayad kamzor pad jati.........

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Kashish Rudra aur Prem ke kamre me aati hai jaha pe Nihaal unhe taiyaar kar raha hota hai..........

Kashish: bahot hi achche lag rahe ho tum..............bhagwan kare tum dono ko kisi ki nazar na lage........

Prem: aapke hote hume kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta.............

Kashish: main aur tumhare Bhai hamesha tumhare saath hai...........ab aaj jo baat main tumdono se kehne aayi hoon woh baat waise to ek bada bhai karta hai lekin aaj woh nahi hai is liye yeh jimedari bhi main nibha rahi hoon..............aaj se tum dono ki pehli jimedari ek pati ki hai jise apni patni ka sukh dukh me saath nibhana hai...........jo pyaar aur vishwas tumhare Bhai ne muje diya tha wahi main chahti hoon ki tum dono apni patni ko do..............ek ladki apna sabkuch chodke tumhara haath tham ke tumhari zindagi me aati hai...........woh tumhare liye apni khushi ki bhi parwaah nahi karti kyunki woh apne pati ko khush dekhna chahti hai..........jo ladki tumhare sukh dukh ko apna manti hai uska saath kabhi bhi beech rah me mat chodna kyunki uska dard sirf main.....

she almost got tears in her eyes but than she lookd at them and smiles..........

Kashish: main bhi na dekho kaisi baatein leke beth gayi..........aur Nihaal yeh kya aaj bhi.........

Kashish jake Rudra aur Prem ko thik se dupatta karti hai.........

Nihaal: Bhabhi.....ab bhi keh raha hoon........aap pakka apni behen ki shaadi is dono gadhe se karana chahti hai............

Kashish: agar main apni gudiya ki shaadi tuj jaise gadhe se kara sakti hoon to mere Rudra aur Prem tujse bahot achche hai............

Prem: Nihaal........yeh meri Bhabhi hai.....yeh sabse jyada mujse pyaar karti hai...........right bhabhi........

Kashish: woh to hai lekin yahi baat tu muje kal Heer ke samne to bolna.........

Rudra: yeh kya bolega.........darta hai Heer se........

Prem: aap to aise keh rahe hai jaise aap Mehekbhabhi se darte nahi........

Nihaal: Prem .......sirf Rudra hi nahi.........duniya ke sare mard apni biwi se darte hai.........kyunki biwi hoti hi hai aafat............

Kashish: kya bola tu.....biwi aafat hoti hai......Khushi ko batau..........

Nihaal: are kyun aise khushi ke moke pe aap is Khushi ka naam le rahe hai...........main aapke alawa sari biwi ki baat kar raha tha.........kyunki aapki to baat hi kuch alag hai........

Kashish: janti hoon......tumhare Bhai bhi yahi kehte the...........pata hai woh kya kehte the.........ek pati patni ko kabhi pati patni ki tarah nahi rehna chahiye kyunki waqt ke saath pyaar kam hota jata hai .........lekin pati patni ko do premi ki tarah rehna chahiye jo waqt ke saath saath pyaar bhi badhta jaye.........ab dekhona main to aaj bhi Sujal se itna hi pyaar karti hoon............

Rudra: aur shayad aap hamesha karti rahegi........

Kashish: ab mere bare me bahot baatein ho gayi .........neeche sab intzaar kar rahe hai.....chale.........

Nihal: chaliye Bhabhi.....

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ab sab log neeche aate hai............barat nikalne hi wali hoti hai sirf sehra sajake aarti karne ki dair hoti hai.........

Prerna: Kashish........Prem aur Rudra ko sehra bandh do.......

Kashish: Mama.........main.......ple aap hi kar dijiye.........

Prerna: main apni beti se nahi baat kar rahi......main ek saas banke apni bahu se kuch karne ko keh rahi hoon.......chalo mere saath.......

Prerna Kashish ka haath pakad ke use lati hai.........

Kashish sabse pehle Prem aur Rudra ki aarti karti hai aur phir sehra lagati hai..........sab log ghar se bahar nikalte hai barat me......

Kashish: Nihaal....tu koi kaam thik se nahi karta......maine tuje woh fatake lane ko kaha tha woh tu laya ki nahi...........

Nihaal: are laya hoon aur aise laya hoon ki sab dekhte reh jayenge........

Kashish: sabse pehle wala main jalaungi.....la de muje............

Kashish sabse pehle jake fatake jalati hai aur phir upper aasmaan ki aur dekhti hai..............

Kashish (to herself): aapko fatake bahot pasand hai na main janti thi...........aaj maine ek aur khawaish bhi puri kar di...........

Maya: Kashish.........kaha kho gayi.......ab chal......woh dono tera intzaar kar rahe hai..........

Kashish: jee chaliye...........

Kashish aake Khushi ke saath Rudra aur prem ki car me bethti hai aur sab log Hotel Garewal pahonchte hai jaha pe Nandini, Harsh aur Sampada hote hai.........

Kashish: Mrs.Sinha.....jaldi kijiye....barat darwaze pe khadi hai.........kahi aapki dair me barat wapas na chali jaye..........

Nandini: are aa rahi hoon.......thoda to intzaar kar..........

Kashish: are ladkewale hai intzaar thode hi karenge...........

Nandini aake Prem aur Rudra ki aarti karti hai aur jab woh Rudra aur Prem ka naam khichne jati hai tab Kashish un dono ko piche se khichti hai.............

Kashish: are itni aasani se to main nahi kichne dungi apne dever ki nak.....pehle shagun phir aapki rasam............

Prerna: beta kya kar rahi ho...dair ho rahi hai.........

Kashish: to ho jane dijiy......ladkewale hai to khatirdari to inhe nibhani hogi.........ab nikaliye shagun...........

Nandini: yeh le tera shagun.........

Nandini kashish ko ganesh ki murti deti hai.............

Nandini: ise apne ghar me rakh dena ..........sari pareshani ko ghar ke bahar nikal degi...........

Kashish: ab aap apni rasam ada kar sakti hai..........

Nandini dheere se Rudra aur prem ki nak khichti hai aur phir sab log andar aate hai........

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ab Rudra aur Prem mandap me beth chuke hote hai jab Kashish aur Khushi jake Mehek aur Heer ko leke aate hai.........Shaadi ki rasam shuru hoti hai........Kashish aake Rudra aur Mehek ka ganthbandhan karti hai aur phir Mehek ka haath Rudra ke haath me de deti hai........phir woh Prem aur Heer ka ganthbandhan karti hai aur Heer ka haath Prem ke haath me rakhti hai.........ab kuch rasam ke bad waqt phere ka hota hai..............Kashish side me khade hoke phero ko dekh rahi hoti hai........jab ek ke bad ek use apni aur Sujal ki shaadi ki sari tasvire dikhne lagti hai..........

Kashish: Mama main bas thodi dair me aati hoon.......

Prerna: lekin is waqt kaha ja rahi ho..........Kashish phere chal rahe hai......

Kashish tries her best to control her tears........

Kashish: maine kaha na main bas kuch hi waqt me aati hoon.........

yeh kehke Kashish jaldbazi me waha se chali jati hai...........Kashish apne aapko sambhalti huyi Sujal ki office me jake uski chair pe beth ke Sujal ki tasvir ko haath me leke rone lagti hai........jab koi uske khandhe pe haath rakhta hai........kashish mudke dekhti hai to Prerna hoti hai...........Kashish Prerna ko pakad ke rone lagti hai.........

Prerna: kya hua........tum itna ro kyun rahi ho..........

Kashish: kyunki main bahot khush hoon........aaj Sujal ki sari jimedari maine nibha di..............jaisa woh chahte the bilkul waise hi maine unke bhaiyon ki shaadi ki........maine koi bhi kasar nahi chodi.......yaha tak ki aaj jab tak shaadi puri nahi ho jati tab tak maine ek bhi aanshu nahi girne diya lekin ........

Prerna: lekin kya Kashish........agar tum Khush ho to phir yeh aanshu kyun.............

Kashish: kyunki sach to yeh hai ki main khush nahi...........main sirf Sujal ke liye khush hone ka dikhava karti hoon lekin muje andar se koi khushi nahi hoti................Meri khushi meri muskaan ka saath Sujal se tha.........jab woh hi chale gaye to saath me sabkuch apne saath le gaye........aaj main khush hoon lekin main kiske saath apni khushi baatu............Mama main apni khushi aaj Sujal se batna chahti hoon...........lekin woh mere saath nahi..........mama ab mujse aur nahi hoga...........main ab tut chuki hoon........yeh akelapan muje andar hi andar khaye ja raha hai.........main nahi bhul sakti Sujal ko..........her jagah muje uske ehsaas se bahar nahi nikalne deti.........kya main itni buri hoon ki woh muje chod ke chale gaye........kya mujse koi galti ho gayi........agar woh muje meri galti batate to main apni puri koshish karti use sudharne ki lekin woh kyun muje akele chod ke chale gaye...........

Prerna: Sujal ka tujse bichadna woh sab kismat tha........aur tu kabhi bhi uski jimedar nahi ho sakti..........are Sujal to khush hoga ki uski patni tum ho.......Kashish ab yeh rona bandh karo aur chalo mere saath........bidaai ka waqt bita ja raha hai aur meri badi bahu itni kamzor nahi...........

Prerna Kashish ke aanshu pochti hai aur dono bahar aati hai...............thodi dair me Heer aur Mehek ki bidaai bhi ho jati hai............

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Garewal Mension me do nayi Bahu ka bahot hi dhoom dham se swagat hota hai............Kashish un charo ke pass aati hai..............

Kashish: Heer.........Mehek....main janti hoon ki tum dono meri hi parchai ho aur meri hi tarah bahot hi samajdar ho lekin ab tum meri behen ke saath saath meri devrani bhi ho .........is ghar me aaj tum dono apni ek nayi zindahi shuru karne wali ho......is liye aaj main tumhe is ghar ke in ghar ke logo ke bare me kuch batana chahti hoon........yaha pe sab apni khushi se jyada dusro ki khushi dekhte hai......yaha pe kuch bhi mera nahi balke hamara hota hai..........is ghar me koi bandhan nahi hai lekin ek bahu ki nate ek hadd hoti hai jo hum kabhi par nahi kar sakte.............saas sasur me muje mere Mama papa mile hai.........Buaji bhi is ghar ka bahot hi khass hissa hai......yaha pe koi chota ya bada nahi sab hamare apne hai..........jitni khushi tum is ghar ko is ghar ke logo ko dongi usse dugni khushi wapas paogi.........

Mehek: Dii.........hum aapse vaada karte hai ki hum kabhi aapko sikayat ka moka nahi denge.........jis tarah se yeh ghar chalta tha aaj bhi waise hi chalega.........aaj bhi is ghar pe sabse jyada hakk Mama aur aapka hi rahega..........hum sirf aapki madad karenge is ghar ko sambhalne me..........

Heer: Dii.......hum apni puri koshish karenge aapki tarah banne ki lekin aapko bhi badle me hume kuch dena hoga ki aap hamesha hamare saath rahegi.....

Kashish: main thodi hi kahi ja rahi hoon........main to hamesha aap sabke dil me rehne wali hoon........abhi dekho main to bhul hi gayi thi..........ab tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho.......Khushi in dono ko inke kamre me leke jao...........aur tum dono khade kya ho yaha aao muje tum dono se koi kaam hai.......

Prem: bataiyena kya kaam hai main abhi kar deta hoon.........

Kashish: yeh tum dono ke honeymoon ki tickets hai.........New Zealand ki.........

Rudra: iski kya zaroorat thi........

Kashish: Sujal chahte the ki jin jagah hum apne honeymoon pe gaye the waha pe tum dono bhi jao.........yeh mera nahi tumhare bhai ka tum dono se tohfa hai...........

Rudra: thik hai jaisa aap dono chahe........hum jayenge..........

Kashish: ab tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho........chalo apne kamre me jao........jaldi.........

Rudra aur prem apne kamre me chale jate hai..........jab Kashish ki aankh me aanshu aa jate hai.......

Nihaal: hey GF......kyun......Sujalbhai ki yaad aa rahi hai..........aap mere saath chaliye.........

Nihaal Kashish ko leke Kitchen me jata hai......aur phir ek bowl me Sujal ke pasand ka gajjar ka halwa leke Kashish ke pass aata hai.......

Nihaal: muje pata tha..........aap aaj Shaadi ki bhag daud me Bhai ke hisse ka halwa khana bhul gayi na..........ab chaliye muh kholiye..............

Nihaal Kashish ke muh ke pass chamach rakhta hai lekin Kashish use haath marke waha zameen pe beth ke tut jati hai.............

Nihaal: Bhabhi......aap thik to hai na......ple roiye mat......main to sirf aapko........Bhabhi I am so sorry......ple Bhabhi........

Kashish: Nihaal .......muje Sujal ke pass jaana hai............main ab yeh judaai nahi seh sakti........pal pal marne se achcha hai ki main ek hi pal me........kyunki mera yeh dard koi nahi samaj sakta....mera dard Sujal hi nahi samaj sake to koi aur kya samjega..........main roz ke dikhave kar kar ke thak gayi hoon...........

Nihaal: aapko kya lagta hai ki hum aapka dard nahi samaj sakte......hum yeh sab kiske liye kar rahe hai........sirf aapke liye......hum aapko is tarah tut ke nahi dekh sakte kyunki hum sab aapse jude hai.........aap tut gayi to yeh ghar tut jayega...........ab chaliye uthiye....isse pehle koi aaye.......chaliye......yeh lijiye paani.......

Kashish paani piti hai aur phir Nihaal ki aur dekhti hai.........

Kashish: mera koi bhai nahi.......lekin agar aaj mera koi bhai hota to woh teri tarah hi hota.............

Nihaal: ab aapne muje bhai kaha hai na to apne Bhai ki baat nahi manenge........chaliye aanshu pochiye aur apne kamre me jake aap aaram kijiye.........

Kashish Nihaal ke haath me se woh halwe wala bowl leke apne kamre me jati hai...............

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Kashish apne kamre me aake Sujal ki writing table ki chair pe bethti hai aur Sujal ke pic ke samne us halwe ko rakhti hai............

Kashish: aapko bahot pasand hai naa.........isi liye maine aaj khushi ke moke pe subaah sabke liye banaya tha.......lekin aapko to pata hai naa aaj ghar pe kitna kaam tha to kaam me bhul gayi............ab ple naraz mat hona kyunki ab to main layi hoon na.........pata hai aaj Shaadi bahot hi achche se huyi..........sab log bahot khush the .......aaj maine aapse kaha tha na ki main aaj shaadi tak kisi ki aankhioin me aanshu nahi aane dungi..........aaj hum maine se koi nahi roya........aaj aapke her sapne ko maine pura kar diya...........lekin aapto mere ek bhi sapne ko pura nahi kar paye...........bahot bade bade vaade kiye the muje dubara wapas honeymoon pe leke jayenge.............ab muje kya pata tha ki aap shaadi se pehle hi akele honeymoon pe chale jayenge.........jate jate bhi ek bar apni Kashish ke bare me nahi socha......woh Kashish jo sirf aaj bhi aapke liye jiti hai........khair isme bhi aapki galti nahi .......galti to aapki Kashish ki hai jo aapko sambhal nahi saki.......bahot khud se bandhne ki koshish ki lekin phir bhi kachche dhage ki tarah rishta tut gaya.........main ek achchi beti, behen aur bahu to ban gayi shayad ek achchi patni nahi ban saki tabhi aap mujse is tarah se ruth ke bethe hai lekin koi baat nahi aapki Kashish aapko manana janti hai......ab yeh halwe ko chak ke dekhe kaisa bana hai main bhi aaj thak gayi hoon........waise meri neend to aap churake apne saath le gaye hai lekin phir bhi koshish to karni hogi kya pata her koshish me se ek koshish me aapse sapne me mulaqat ho jaye.............Sujal.....kitne din ho maine aapse kuch kaha nahi........I love you Sujal.........

Kashish ek pal ke liye chup ho jati hai aur aankh se aanshu behne lagte hai.........

Kashish: Sujal.......main aaj bhi apne jawab ka intzaar kar rahi hoon........aap nahi kahenge ki aap mujse pyaar karte hai........kahiye na ki aap mujese pyaar karte hai..........main taras rahi hoon aapke labz me yeh teen shabd sunne ke liye............khair aapto mujse ruthe hai to kuch nahi kahenge........main hi keh deti hoon........I love you......goodnight Sujal.......

yeh kehke woh apne aanshu ko pochke light off karke bed ki aur chali jati hai..............

 

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it was such a senti part plz get sujal
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kashish really nice part...............

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