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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 41)

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Posted: 25 January 2009 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
very cute!

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Posted: 25 January 2009 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
great part
i really liked the way u showed how nihaal got the old khushi to return and the way u described how happy everyone was really nice. i really enjoyed the scene were shanta tai calls nihaal her hero.Finally khushi and nihaal got married hope this time khushi gets all the happieness she deserves.
Cant wait till sujal and kashish have their first child,Sk's romantic scenes were really good.
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Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 25 January 2009 at 4:01pm
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Posted: 25 January 2009 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
That was a cute part!
Nihaal is too cute....which actor have u envisioned as Nihaal?I think Naman Shaw wud fit the bill....But who is playing Khushi?
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Posted: 26 January 2009 at 3:45am | IP Logged
wowwww..... very sweet part or SK ki lines really cute.............
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it was really gud plz contd soon
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Cool update.. WOW Khushi n Nihaal got married.. thts nice... the massage scene was really cute.. enjoyed the update... will b waiting for the next one.. plzz continue asap.......
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wwwwwwooooooowwwww what a lovely part..................................i m happy 4 khushi.....................finally uss ki dusri shaadi hogi nihaal se.........................prena ne kya baat ki warish ki i really love it..........................con't soon........................sorry 4 small comment i hve no time but next time i will comment big.......................
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Part-38

aaj Khushi ki shaadi ko ek mahina aise hi haste khelte gujar jata hai...........aaj sabhi breakfast ke liye bahar garden me hote hai.......yaha tak ke aaj to Sinha bhi yaha aaye huye hai............

Prerna: Nandini..........maff karna lekin tumne business karna bilkul nahi aata..........

Nandini: aji kya baat kar rahe hai aap..............maine kaun sa business kiya........

Prerna: apni teeno beti ko muje deke mere beto ko apna banane ka.........dekho meri betiyaan kitna khayal rakhti hai sabka...........

Nandini: baat to sahi kahi aapne........ek bhi beti nahi bachi ab to........

Nihaal: are aisa kya........aap khushi ko apne saath le jaiye....hume bhi thodi shaanti mil jayegi..........

Khushi: nahi aauntie muje nahi is Nihaal ko le jaiye.........sab ko pareshan karta hai.........

Nandini: agar muje kisi ko lejana hota to main apne bete Sujal ko le jati...........kyun Sujal...........

Sujal:of course.........aap kahe to abhi chalte hai..........

Prem: aap aise kahi nahi ja rahe..........bhul gaye kal aapki shaadi hai.........

Sujal: meri shaadi kya baat hai.......kal meri dusri shaadi hai aur muje kisi ne bataya bhi nahi.........

Kashish: dusri bar zaroor hai lekin is bar bhi mujse hi ho rahi hai............

Rudra: achcha hai kyunki bhabhi ke alawa aapko koi aur mil bhi nahi sakta...........

Sujal: tu apni baat kar raha hai..........pata nahi Mehek ne tujme kya dekha............

Rudra: kya keh rahe hai.......itna handsome to hoon........kyun Bhabhi...........

Kashish: haa achche hi dikh rahe ho lekin.......

Mehek: lekin kya di.........

Kashish: tuje main kyun batau.......

Mehek: Dii woh........woh to main............

Kashish: yahi ki tum aur Mehek saath me achche lagte ho.........

Khushi: nahi Bhabhi..........saath me to Prembhai aur Heerbhabhi achche lagte hai.........kitna satate hai yeh...........

Prem: tu apni aur Nihaal ki baat kar.........

Heer: nahi Prem.........Nihaal aur Heer kitne cute hai.........bachpan ke dost ab saathi............

Nihaal: are nahi sabse jyada to meri aur heroine ki jodi best hai kyun Shanta tai..........

Shanta tai: oye kya hai.....subaah subaah chipad chipad...........main batati hoon kya karna hai........hum na sab apni apni pasand likh ke is bowl me dalte hai.......jisko jyada vote mila woh aaj sabko raat ko dinner pe bahar leke jayega..............

Prem: kya mast idea hai..........

Shanta tai:teri tarah khali bhusa nahi bhara..........ab ja andar pen aur paper leke aa.............

Prem andar jake paper aur pen leke sabko deta hai..................sabhi apne apne vote likh ke usme dal dete hai for favorite couple of the family..............

Nihaal: Good Morning Ladies and gentalman............welcome to the kaun banega favorite couple contest..............aaj sabko pata chal jayega ki hum me se sabse chahiye kaun hai..........main janta hoon ki yeh inam muje hi milega............

Khushi: sorry for the interuption.........inam mila nahi abhi aur yeh janab hawa me udne lage...........to ab bina kisi intzaar ke main khud hi sab ke vote dekhti hoon............

Khushi sabhi vote dekhti hai aur phir sare vote Nihaal ko pass karti hai............

Nihaal: meri wife yani Mrs.Khushi Kapoor zara result ko dekh ke kuch bolne ki halat me nahi............waise muje behat afsoos ke saath batana pad raha hai ki yeh contest main nahi jeeta........

Rudra: natak bandh kar aur batata hai ki ........

Nihaal: are bhai bata raha hoon........is contest ke winner aur kaun ho sakte hai.............Sujalbhai aur Kashishbhabhi jisko 100% vote mile hai...............

Prem: oye pehle apni ginti thik kar............98% vote honge...........

Nihaal: meri math tere se to behtar hi hai.........100% hi hai tabhi teri behen ka dimaag bhi nahi chala............

Prem: iska matlab Sujalbhai aur Bhabhi ne khud ko vote diya...............

Kashish: haa.......main Sujal ke alawa aur kise vote dungi...........

Sujal: agar Kashish ne muje vote diya to main bhi Kashish ko hi dunga na.........

Shanta tai: yeh dekho kal shaadi ka ek saal ho gaya lekin aisa lagta hai ki kal hi inki shaadi honewali hai.............

Rudra: to sach me honewali to hai.............

Anurag: are kya baatein leke beth gaye aap sab..............aise koi 100 vote mere bete aur bahu ke liye to bahot kam hai kyunki jo bhi inko dekhega inse milega inke sidhe dil me bas ke rahenge...........

Harsh: sach me Anuragjee...........hum khushnaseeb hai ki hamare ghar aise Ram aur Seeta ne janam liya hai............

Prerna: haa bhisaab.........aur aapko pata hai ab se is ghar ki sari jimedari me Kashish ko sop ke main bas aaram karnewali hoon...........waise tum dono abhi tak yahi ho.............

Sujal: kyun hume kaha jana hai..........

Kashish: woh main aapko batana bhul gayi........hume shopping pe jana hai............to chale...............

Sujal; shopping phir se..........abhi pichle hafte to gaye the..............

Kashish: Sujal.....chaliye yeh hamari shaadi ki hai...............

Rudra: bhai sab ke samne so joote khane se achcha hai aap Bhabhi ke saath shopping pe chale jaye................

Sujal: pehli bar kuch kaam ki baat ki hai............

Shanta Tai: ab jao bhi.............

Sujal aur Kashish dono waha se ek dusre ka haath pakad ke chale jate hai....................aur sabhi bas unhe muskaan ke saath dekhte rehte hai.............

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ab Sujal aur Kashish dono mall pahonchte hai..........sab se pehle dono Kashish ki shopping karne jate hai..................

Sujal; hmmmmm........aaj tumhare shaadi ka joda main pasand karunga............

Kashish: aapki pasand ke bina main kabhi kuch kharid sakti hoon..........aur yeh to mere liye sabse khushi ki baat hogi ki aap mere liye shaadi ka joda pasand kare...........

Sujal: Kashish tum apne pasand ka kabhi kuch nahi logi........mera matlab agar kal main nahi raha to.........

Kashish Sujal ke hoth pe apna haath rakh deti hai..........

Kashish: bhagwan kare aapko meri bhi umar lag jaye.......aapke bina aapki Kashish ka koi mayne hi nahi rehte............kyunki aapki Kashish aap ke andar aapke dil me jiti hai..........ple mujse aap vaada kijiye ki aap muje akele chod ke kahi nahi jayenge..........main nahi jee paungi Sujal aapke bina..............aap vaada kijiye ki aap jaha bhi jayenge muje apne saath leke jayenge..........kijiye vaada..........main aapko shaadi ke is saal girah pe yeh tohfa mangti hoon............de sakte hai aap muje yeh tohfa................

Sujal wipes of her tears and kiss her forehead.............

Sujal: main vaada karta hoon ki kabhi bhi khud ko tumse alag nahi karunga.........hamesha tumhare saath hi saans lunga................aur main kahi pe bhi hoon main hamesha tumhe saath le jaunga ya to tumhare aane tak ka intzaar karunga................ab khush..........ab chalo shopping karte hai..........

they both entered the saree shop...........Sujal is looking for here and there.........when he saw a beautiful red saree for her............

Sujal: yeh kaisi hai...........

Kashish: aapne pasand ki hai to sabse best hi hogi.........

Sujal: ek baat kahoon........tumpe lal rang sabse jyada achcha lagta hai.........

Kashish: lal rang hota hai aisa hai..........apne saath kitni sari khushi leke aata hai............

Sujal: hmm.........ab ise try to kar lo.........

Kashish: jee nahi.........main kal pehnungi.............aur aap muje ab sidhe is saree me mandap me dekhenge..............

Sujal: itna lamba intzaar..........

Kashish: kal ki hi to baat hai........ab chaliye aap ke liye kuch dekhte hai.............

Sujal: tum bhi na bahot ziddi ho.......nahi manogi aise..........chalo........

They pay for the saree and went to the shopping for him..............they are looking for it when Kashish really liked that one.........

Kashish: yeh kaisa hai aapke liye.........

Sujal: tumse thoda kam khubsurat..........

Kashish: ab meri tarif karna bandh kijiye aur bataiye kaisi hai............

Sujal: bahot achchi hai...........

Kashish: ise try nahi karenge aap...........

Sujal: tumhari tarah kal hi dekh lenge...........

Kashish just smiles at him...........kashish starts to go to the counter but Sujal was still staring at something.............

Kashish: kya hua Sujal..........aap aise kya dekh rahe ho.........

Sujal: kuch nahi woh sherwani kitni achchi hai na........

Kashish: aapko woh pasand hai to aap woh bhi pehen sakte hai........muje woh bhi pasand hai.............

Sujal: nahi kal main wahi pehnunga jo tumne pasand ki hai..........lekin yeh Rudra aur Prem ki shaadi ke liye kaisi rahegi..........

Kashish: bahot hi achcha khayal hai.........kamse kam aapki ek shopping bach jayegi.........

Sujal: tum bhi na..............

Kashish and Sujal buy both sherwani n than left for the home..............

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ab shaam ko dono apne kamre me dinner ke liye taiyaar ho rahe hote hai.............Kashish jab washroom se apni saree thik karke bahar aa rahi hoti hai.......

Kashish: Sujal dekhiya na .......ple ise thik kariye.......

Sujal: yaha aao.......

Kashish Sujal ke pass aati hai aur woh zuk ke uski saree thik karne lagta hai..........lekin woh jaan bujke Kashish ki saree khichta hai.........

Kashish; Sujal......yeh aapne kya kiya......meri saree sari upper se nikal gayi.............

Sujal: achcha hai na main tumhe thik se pehnata hoon.........

Kashish: mazak kar rahe hai...........

Sujal: isme maine kaun sa mazak kiya waise bhi tumhe saree pehnna thodi hi aata hai.............

Kashish: jooth...........

Sujal: sach .........chalo aaj main tumhe dikhata hoon Saree kaise pehente hai.........

Kashish: really...........

Sujal: really reallyyyy............ab chalo........

Sujal takes her to the mirror and stands behind her and rest his head on her shoulder and start to fold her saree ...........he turned his face and looked at her and than goes close to her ear and whispers.......

Sujal: aaj tum bahot jyada hi khubsurat lag rahi ho.............

he kissed her ear which makes her to close her eyes..........he started kiss her shoulder..........finally he was done with her saree's folding and he tucks back to its place around her waist............and held her close to him..........

Sujal: Kashish....

Kashish: hmm.........

Sujal: saree aise pehente hai.........ab muje roz tumhe sikhana hoga ki main khud hi.........

Kashish turns around and hugges him so tight..........

Sujal: waise ek baat aur tai karni hai........

Kashish: kya......

Sujal: Kashish pehenne me madad ki hai to kya wapas aake bhi main madad kar doon.......

Kashish: hmmm.....

Sujal: iska matlab haa......

Kashish: maine aisa to nahi kaha.........

Sujal: thik hai to nahi karta tumhari madad.............

Kashish: maine aisa to bilkul nahi kaha............

Sujal winks at her........

Sujal: jaan tum kaho to ghar pe hi ruk jate hai.........

Kashish: hume already dair ho gayi hai........sab log nikal chuke hai.......chaliye na warna kham kha sabko mazak udane ka moka mil jayega............

Sujal: waise tumhe nahi lagta ki log hume kuch jyada hi pyaar karte hai..........

Kashish: apno ka pyaar kabhi jyada thode hi hota hai........ab chaliye............

Sujal: to tum nahi manogi........

Kashish: kya.........

Sujal: kuch nahi........chalo..........

they both leave for the dinner.................

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after the dinner everyone was sitting and talking............

Mehek: kya baat hai........aaj sab baatoin ke mud me hai........

Rudra; kyun aapka mann kya kar raha hai........

Mehek: kal dii ki shaadi hai aur aaj koi naach gaana nahi hoga kya.............

Khushi: baat sahi kahi aapne...........dance to hona chahiye aur woh bhi special kyun Sujalbhai..........

Sujal: mujse kyun puch rahe ho ........

Khushi: kyunki Kashishbhabhi to best dancer hai hi........is liye aapse puchna jyada zaroori hai........

Heer: waise abhi tak ka sabse best dance aap dono ka shayad woh dance compitition wala hoga........

Prem: nahi Heer....hamari sagaai ke din..........

Mehek: nahi dii ki mehndi ke din..........

Rudra: nahi Sujalbhai ke reception pe.......

Khushi: nahi woh karwa chuth ke din wala.........

Nihaal: yeh kya kab se ek ke bad ek bole ja rahe ho........maine kuch dekha nahi is liye main bol nahi raha.........lekin aaj ke bad main bhi kahunga............Bhai bhabhi aap ko mere liye hi sahi lekin dance to karna padega...............

Kashish: nahi Nihaal aaj nahi phir kabhi..............

Nihaal: are muje bhi dekhna hai ki yeh jo tarife kar rahe hai woh wake me sahi hai ki waise hi.............

Sujal: Kashish ...........ab tum mana nahi kar sakti.........

Kashish: maine kabhi aapko mana kiya hai..........

Rudra: oye hoye........kya pyaar hai aap dono............

Kashish: chup kar tu ......tere aur Mehek ke bare me sab janti hoon............

Mehek: dii aaj hamara nahi aapka din hai............

Nihaal: ab koi beech me kuch nahi bolega.............Bhai aap bataiye kaun sa gaana kahoon DJ ko........

Sujal: jo gaana Kashish ka favorite hai........

Heer: muje pata hai ki Dii ko sabse jyada kaun sa gaana pasand hai..........aap log jaiye main DJ ko batati hoon............

Sujal aur Kashish dance floor pe jate hai jaha unke alawa aur koi nahi hota aur Heer Dj ko gaana batati hai.............

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Sujal bends down on his knee infront of Kashish...........

Sujal: may i have plesure with to dance with the most beautiful girl of my life ......my wife..........

Kashish puts her hand on his.........

Kashish: today.....tommorrow .......n forever..........

everyone cheers them..........and the music starts............

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain (he puts his left hand on her waist and pulls her)

Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan (she just went into his arms looking into his eyes)

Dhadkan Bani Zubaan (she just lowered her eyes n he kissed her forehead)

Khulte Badn Hote Labhon Ki Ye Ankahi (she looked up and he was coming closer to her lips)

Mujhse Keh Rahi Hai Ki Badhne De Bekhudi (she just put her hand on his mouth)

Mil Yoon Ki Daud Jaayein Nas Nas Mein Bijliyaan (She shys and huggs him)

Aasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai Pasand (He picks her in his arms n she holds her face)

Uljhi Uljhi Saanson Ki Aawaaz Hai Pasand (She puts her down n she was shy, she turned to run)

Moti Luta Rahi Hai Saawan Ki Badliyaan (he holds her from behind n hugges her)

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain (she turns around and she looked at him n has some tears)

Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan (he wipes her tears n smiles at her)

Dhadkan Bani Zubaan (they both r lost in each other's eyes)

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jab dono sabke taliyon ki aawaz sunte hai aur bahar aate hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,dono sharmake ek dusre ki aur dekhte hai aur phir wapas apne table ki aur aate hai............

Nihaal: maan gaye ab aap sab ko............wake me aapse achche aur romanticccccc dance partner to maine aaj tak nahi dekha..........u know what bhabhi..........aap logo woh dance show ......khushi woh jo tum stupid sa dekhti ho kya naam hai.,,,,,,,,,,

Khushi: nach baliye.....

Nihaal: yaa.....u know what ........i am 116% sure ki woh compititon aap hi jitenge woh bhi 100 % voting ke saath.......

Kashish: ab chup kar .........waise baat kya hai aak kal main dekh rahi hoon tu hum dono ko bahot butter laga raha hai................

Nihaal: nahi to aisi koi baat nahi.............aap nahi jante mere liye Sujalbhai kya hai...........jab main sabse akela hota tha bachpan me to Sujalbhai hamesha mere saath hote.........aur aapko pata hai sabse pehli dosti bhi hamari hi huyi thi.......yaad hai woh din aapko hamari school me..........

Sujal: use main kaise bhul sakta hoon..........aur iske liye aaj bhi maine in teeno ko maaf nahi kiya...........tum ko pehle us ped pe chadh ne ko kaha aur phir tum gire to tumpe has rahe the.......kitni chot lagi thi tumhe..........

Nihaal: lekin aap to the aur muje pura yakeen hai ki aap muje hamesha sahara donge jab muje zaroorat hogi..........aur bhabhi..........thank you so much mere Bhai ko itna khush rakhne ke liye..............

Prem: haa Bhabhi.........thank u so much.......aapne hume hamara purana bhai jo lauta diya hai............

Rudra: hey Prem Bhabhi ne yeh sab tere liye nahi kiya.......yeh sab to apne liye kiya.......kyun bhabhi.......

Kashish: of course.............tumhare Bhai ke liye hi to kiya hai.........tumhare bhai ke liye to kuch bhi kar sakti hoon...........kuch bhi........agar tumhare bhai ko mere dard se dard hota hai to isi dard ko mitane ke liye ek aisi insaan jo khud hi us dard ke saath mit jayegi............

Sujal: aur main ek aisa insaan jo tumhare mitne pe tumhare saath usi rakh me mit jaunga..............kyunki sujal kashish ke bina rahe woh mumkin nahi.........

Kashish: aur kashish ka to Sujal ke dil se uski saans ki dor judi hai........yeh dor itni kamzor nahi hai.........

Sujal: hmm.........

Khushi: Bhai yeh sab baatein aap akele me kar lijiyega...........aap yeh bataiye ki aap apne dusre honeymoon pe kaha ja rahe hai........

Kashish: dusra honeymoon..........

Heer: ab aapki dusri bar shaadi hai to honeymoon bhi hoga na...........

Sujal: kya kehti ho Kashish wapas New Zealand chale........

Kashish: mazak hai yeh...........

Rudra: aapko kisne kaha yeh mazak hai........waise mere pass is ka solution hai..............

Sujal: kya.......

Rudra: aapke honeymoon ke tickets...........yeh lijiye............

Sujal: tu na bilkul nahi badla..............

Kashish: aur main nahi chahti ki aap me se koi bhi badle...........kyunki woh tai kehti hai na...........sweet family happy family............

Nihaal: sweet family se yaad aaya maine to abhi tak yeh bhi nahi dekha ki aapne Bhabhi ko prapose kaise kiya..........muje yeh pata hai chlti train ko rukwake .............lekin kal aapki shaadi hai aur aapko mere liye ab prapose bhi karna hoga.............

Heer: come on jiju.........

Rudra: ya bro one more time.............

Mehek: ple dii..........

Sujal: okkkk..............lagta hai aaj tum sab milke meri kamar todne ke irade me hai...............

Sujal bends down one more time infront of her and puts his hand infront of her..........

Sujal: Kashish..........aaj main jo kehne ja raha hoon woh shayad maine kabhi nahi kaha...........main tumse bahot pyaar karta hoon aur hamesha itna hi karta rahunga balke isse bhi jyada karunga.........aur main vaada karta hoon ki main tumhe ab jyada tang bhi nahi karunga..........main subaah ki tie bhi khud bandh lunga.............aur raat ko bhi jaldi aane ki koshish karunga.........aur agar tumne muje karele ki sabzi di to woh bhi kha lunga...........aur main vaada karta hoon ki main apne bacho ko bhi nahi bigadunga.........kya ab bhi tum mujse shaadi karogi...........mana mat karna warna mera dil tut jayega.............ple Kashish....................

Kashish smiles at him and puts her hand on him............

Kashish: main aapse bahot pyar karti hoon aapke bina reh nahi sakti yeh kashish............aur aapka hakk banta hai muje tang karne ka.........aur yeh mera hakk hai yeh aap bhi nahi mujse le sakte ki aapki tie main hi karoon...............aap raat ko jaldi aake apni file ki baje muje kuch waqt de sakte hai............aur aap karele ki sabzi nahi kayenge kyunki main aap ke liye her roz gajjar ka halwa bana dungi aapko pasand hai na...............aur jab bhi hamare bache ho to woh bilkul aapse ho aur aap jitna chahe use bigad sakte hai kyunki phir unke sine me bhi aap hi ka dil hoga............aur main sapne me bhi aapka dil nahi tod sakti.......sujal aaj tak sabhi ne saat janam tak saath nibhane ki baat ki hai.........lekin main saat janam ke bad bhi her janam me sirf aapko apne pati ke roop me dekhna chahti hoon..........main aanewale her janam ke liye aapse shaadi karungi.............main aapki thi aapki hoon aur hamesha aapki rahungi............kyunki sujal se kashish hai aur kashish se sujal...............

Sujal: I love you Kashish.........

Kashish: I love you too.......

kashish makes him to stand and they both hug.......everyone has tears in their eyes..........after some time everyone went to home.......................

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Sujal and Kashish both come to their room.........Sujal closes the door and locks it........Kashish went to the dresser to take of her earrings when she felt two hands around her waist.............

Kashish: Sujal.........

Sujal: shhh........3........2..........1..............happy anniversary Kashish...........

Kashish: happy aniversary Sujal..........

Sujal helps her to take of her necklace..........

Sujal: yeh ek saal kaise bit gaya pata bhi nahi chala..............

Kashish: haa sach me.........lekin ek saal me kitna kuch ho gaya..........

Sujal: haa .........kuch meethi kuch kadvi yaadein bani............

Kashish: meethi yaadoin ko zindagi bhar yaad rakhte hai aur kadvi yaadoin ko bura sapna samaj ke bhul jate hai.............

Sujal: tumse kuch kehna chahta tha.............Kashish main janta hoon ki tum muje bolne nahi dongi lekin........aaj main dil se tumhara sukhriya karna chahta hoon.......jo tumne mere aur mere parivar ke liye kiya uske liye........

Kashish: agar aap meri jagah hote to kya aap mere liye yeh sab nahi karte...........

Sujal: zaroor karta........

Kashish: to aap pe is parivar pe bhi mera pura hakk banta hai..........jo kuch bhi kiya maine apne liye kiya............ab aap muje chodiye main change karke aati hoon.............

she was about to go when he holds her hand........she just stopped and smiles..........he comes closer to her and held her from behind putting her hair on side.........kiss her from her sholder to her ear and whispers..........

Sujal: yeh mera kaam hai............

He took put the foldings of saree from her waist.........she just closed her eyes........and he moved from her shoulder to her neck untieing the strings ...........he kissed her back and she couldnt take it any more.......she turned back and hugges him so tight................when the light went out which made sujal so happy..........he seperates her from him and took her face in his hands.........he first kissed her forehead and than to her eyes........and too her cheeks........when he moved back to see her reaction..........she had her eyes closed wih a smile..........he slowly gets closer to her and puts his lips on her and it became and passionate night on their first anniversary............after a long kiss they both moved back and he looked at her and than picked up in his arms and took her with him in the bed..............it was the end of the their beautiful evening but it was starting of the beautiful night.............

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