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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 40)

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Posted: 16 January 2009 at 9:09am | IP Logged

Hey !!

Lovely part....Mazaa aya padhke.....Yippee....kashish won the case...!
And ye new entry Nihaal is to be opposite khushi...!
 
Luv,
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Posted: 16 January 2009 at 9:47am | IP Logged
wow kashish kya dum wala part tha really nice or ha phichle part bhi really gud abhi tak complete to nahi howe mager jitna perdha wo bohot acha tha ur gud writter ................. Embarrassed

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Posted: 16 January 2009 at 11:40am | IP Logged
WOW lovely update... yipee Kashish won the case.. the court bit was really nice... Nihaal seems interesting.. i'm sure hez the one for Khushi... Sujal tying kashish's tie was really cute.... enjoyed it.. PLzz continue...
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Posted: 16 January 2009 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
very nice win for Kashish in the case and   awesome entry of Nihaal!
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Posted: 17 January 2009 at 7:48am | IP Logged
nice part..........................khair kashish case jeet gai........................i m sooo happy........................con't soon
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Posted: 17 January 2009 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
amazing part
the scene were sujal ties kashish's tie was really a cute scene normally its the other way around.when kavya came as rishi's lawyer i was really surprised however even though he lost the case his and kashish friendship is still strong.The way kashish got rishi to own up to his crime was amazing, kashish really used an intresting idea to get the truth to come out.Hope Nihaal brings happieness into khushi's life.
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Part-37

ab agli subaah sab log nasta karne bethe hote hai jab upper se Nihaal aata hai.........

NIhaal; SURPRISEEEEEEE..........

Prerna, Anurag aur Khushi Nihaal ko dekhte hi reh jate hai........Nihaal jake Prerna aur Anurag ke pair chuta hai.........

Nihaal: ab aap sab muje aise kya dekh rahe ho jaise main koi bhoot khada hoon................comeone guys.....main Nihaal hoon..........

Prerna pulls his ear........

Prerna: kyun ab tuje is ghar ki yaad aayi...........

Nihaal: ple auntie chodiye mera kaan......ple ple.........

Prerna leaves it.........

Nihaal: woh sab baad me pata chal jayega........lekin maine suna hai is ghar me bahot kuch badal gaya hai......pehle to Sujalbhai ne mere bigar shaadi kar li lekin koi baad nahi.......itni Khubsurat bhabhi jo mili muje.........lekin kuch aur bhi badal gaya.........kam se kam is ghar se kisi pagal ki chikhe ab sunai nahi deti.........

Khushi: Nihaal muje pagal mat bol..........

Nihaal: ab pagal ko pagal nahi kahunga to kya jungli billi kahunga .....kyun Prem.........

Prem: jungli billi aur woh bhi katnewali..........

Khushi: aaj main aap dono ko nahi chodungi...........

Khushi begins to run after both.......both Prem and Nihaal holds Kashish infront of them........

Prem: bhabhi bachaiye muje isse..........

Nihaal: bhabhi ise kaho ke kate nahi pata nahi kitne injection lene padenge.............

Khushi: bhabhi aap inki baatoin me mat aaiye.......in dono ko to na Shanta tai ka jadu hi thik kar sakta hai.....Shanta Taiiiiiiii........

Shanta Tai comes from the kitchen......

Shanta Tai: are bhai kya subaah subaah yeh shor macha rakha hai..........are waah mera hero Nihaal wapas aa gaya.....kyun re ab tuje teri heroine ki yaad aayi.........

Nihaal: aapko kaise bhul sakta hoon........aapke liye to special mast chata leke aaya hoon woh aap bahar jati hai dhup me to........

Shanta Tai; kitna khayal rakh raha hai tu mera.......

Sujal: Nihaal bahot maska laga liya sabko..........ab chal ke nasta karte hai phir office bhi jana hai............

Nihaal: office aap sab ja rahe hai.......main to aaj pura din ladies logo ke saath hoon.......woh kya hai na is ghar me rehne hai to inko thoda bahot jaan loon to.........

Rudra: yeh kabhi nahi sudhernewala.........

Nihaal: apni baat kar rahe ho kya..............

Kashish: ab bahot ho gaya chalo betho sab............

Nihaal: ab bhabhi ka order hai to bethna hi hoga............

sab log beth ke nasta enjoy karte hai........aisa lag raha hai ki phir se khushi is ghar me aa gayi hai....................

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ab aise hi haste khelte ek hafta gujar jata hai..............ab raat ko Sujal aur Kashish apne kamre me sote sote baat kar rahe hote hai.......

Kashish: Sujal muje aapse kuch baat karni hai.............

Sujal: haa kaho kya baat hai...........

Kashish: muje Khushi ke bare me baat karni hai.........kya kabhi aapne uski dusri shaadi ke bare me socha hai.........

Sujal: dusri shaadi...........

Kashish: haa.............aaj nahi to kal Khushi ko ek jeevansathi ki zaroorat to hogi na to.........

Sujal: lekin Kashish main Khushi ko apni nazro se durr nahi kar sakta............

Kashish: main samaj sakti hoon ki jo hua uske bad tumhare mann me ek darr sa beth gaya hai...........lekin agar main kahoon ki Shaadi ke bad bhi Khushi hamare saath hi rahegi to.......

Sujal: main kuch samja nahi...........

Kashish: main Nihaal ki baat kar rahi hoon.............

Sujal: Nihaal aur Khushi....lekin Kashish woh to..........

Kashish: sach to yahi hai ki Nihaal hi woh purani wali Khushi ko wapas laya hai......aur mera dil yeh kehta hai ki Nihaal ko khushi pasand hai.........

Sujal: agar aisa hai to main kal hi Nihaal se baat karunga............

Kashish: lekin muje ek darr aur bhi hai...........

Sujal: kis baat ka darr..........

Kashish: yahi ki Khushi kya haa karegi is shaadi ke liye.........

Sujal: uski fikar tum mat karo woh main dekh lunga...........

Kashish: agar Khushi bhi man jaye to phir uski zindagi kitni haseen hogi na.........

Sujal: jab tab tum ho in sab ki khushi ko kuch nahi ho sakta...........

Kashish: jab tak hum saath hai tab tak yeh ghar kabhi tut nahi sakta kyunki jis pyaar se humne ise jod ke rakha hai isse kuch ho hi nahi sakta.............

Sujal: pyaar karna maine Mama se shikha hai aur use nibhana maine tumse............jitna pyaar main tumse karta hoon utna hi main Mama se karta hoon.............

Kashish: janti hoon...........Mama tumhare liye kya mayne rakhti hai............

Sujal: Kashish..........meri sirf ek aakhri khawaish bachi hai jise sirf tum pura kar sakti ho.............main tumhe Mama ki jagah dekhna chahta hoon hamare bache ke saath........

Kashish: phir se is bare me.........

Sujal: woh tumne kaha tha na ki shaadi ke ek saal ke bad hum to...........ab dekho na tumhare saath ek saal kaha chala gaya pata hi nahi chala...........agle mahine hamari shaadi ko ek saal ho jayega........to kya kehti ho puri karogi na meri khawaish ko..........

Kashish: main apni aur se puri koshish karungi lekin yeh tum bhi jante ho aur main bhi ki yeh sab mere haath me nahi............

Sujal: janta hoon lekin ek bar koshish karne me kya harz hai,.........koshish karenge to ek din zaroor kamyab hogi to aaj se kare apni koshish.............

Kashish: besharam,,,,,,,,,,koi na koi bahana dhundhte rehte ho apni baat karvane ka.......

Sujal: ab tum muje nahi samjogi to kaun samjega...........to kya kehti ho..........

Kashish: yahi ki raat ke barah baj gaye hai aap so jaiye.........

Sujal: are dair ho gayi to kaun si badi baat hai waise bhi kal sunday hai to chuti hai..........bolo na.........

Kashish: chuti sirf office me hoti hai ghar pe nahi.........aapko kaam nahi karna lekin muje bahot hai..........ab chup chap so jaiye aap............

Sujal: lekin meri goodnight kiss...........

Kashish: ek ke baad ek aapki farmaish khatam hi nahi hoti...................

Kashish lifts herself little bit and looks at him......she makes him to close her eyes...........she slowly puts her lips on his and it turned out to be a sensual kiss.......

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ab agli subaah Nihaal apne kamre me Laptop pe kaam kar raha hota hai jab Sujal aur Kashish aate hai.........

Nihaal: kya baat hai aaj subaah subaah Bhai bhabhi mere kamre me..............main sach bol raha hoon maine kuch nahi kiya.........

Kashish: jooth mat bolo kyunki main jooth ko pehchan sakti hoon..........

Nihaal: main janta hoon ki aap bahot hi achchi lawyer hai lekin maine kuch nahi kiya..............

Sujal:Shut up Nihaal...........hum yaha tumse Khushi ke bare me baat karne aaye hai........

Nihaal: Khushi ke bare me..........

Kashish: haa kyunki jo hum nahi kar sake woh tumne ek hafte me kar diya..........hume hamari Khushi ko wapas lautake............

Nihaal: woh sirf aapki Khushi nahi balki meri best Friend bhi hai.......maine jo kiya woh apna samaj ke kiya hai...........

Sujal: tumhe kya lagta hai ki Khushi ko apni zindagi me aage badhna chahiye ki nahi............

Nihaal: aap mujse yeh kyun puch rahe hai........aur bhi aap janna chahte hai to jo bhi hua usme Khushi ki kya galti hai..........mere khayal se use koi bhi achcha ladka mil sakta hai.......Khushi ki shaadi ke liye abhi bhi ladko ki line lag sakti hai............

Sujal: Nihaal meri gudiya ke liye tumse achcha ladka muje aur kaha milega.........

Nihaal: main kuch samja nahi...........

Kashish: kya tum Khushi ko pasand karte ho............

Nihaal: haa main hamesha se use pasand karta tha..........aapse ek baat kahoon main India bhi sirf uske liye hi aaya tha kyunki main nahi janta tha ki uski shaadi ho gayi hai.......lekin jab maine divorse ke bare me suna to muje laga ki meri Khushi abhi bhi meri ho sakti hai...........

Sujal: to kya tum meri Gudiya ka haath thamoge.........

Nihaal: haa Bhai.......main Khushi se shaadi karne ko taiyaar hoon lekin ek shart pe..........

Sujal: kaisi shart...........

Nihaal: is bare me Khushi pe kisi bhi tarah ka dabav nahi hona chahiye.........main chahta hoon ki woh jo bhi faisla legi woh muje manzur hoga...........

Kashish: Khushi ki fikar tum mat karo usse main baat karungi.............ab tumne haa keh di hai to woh bhi man jayegi...............

Sujal: Kashish tum Khushi se baat karke aao main aur Nihaal neeche jake sabko batate hai.........

Kashish: jaisa aap thik samje.............

sab log apni apni jagah chale jate hai................

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Khushi apne kamre me taiyaar ho rahi hoti hai jab Kashish aati hai............

Khushi: are Bhabhi aap.....kuch kaam tha to muje bula liya hota............

Kashish: nahi tujse kuch baat karni thi jo asal me tumhare Bhai kehna chahte the lekin unhe samaj me nahi aa raha tha is liye main aayi hoon.............

Khushi: kaisi baatein Bhabhi main samji nahi..........

Kashish: dekho Khushi kehte hai jo bit gaya woh bit gaya.......hum ise badal to nahi sakte lekin use hamesha ke liye bhool to sakte hai na..........

Khushi: aap sach keh rahi hai..........aapko pata hai main woh hadsa bhul chuki hoon kyunki ab main sirf Khushi Garewal hoon.........

Kashish: Khushi Garewal ke saath saath tum ek aurat bhi ho...........aur her aurat ko zingadi bitane ke liye ek sahara chahiye................hum aaj mane ya kal lekin sach yeh hi yeh zindagi akele bitane ke liye bahot hi muskil hai lekin agar koi saathi mil jaye to yeh zindagi bahot achche se bit jati hai..............

Khushi; main aapki baat samaj rahi hoon Bhabhi.......lekin ab muje ajnabee pe bharosha karne se darr lagta hai........khud ko jab rishtey me dekhne ki koshish karti hoon to ek darr lagta hai ki kahi phir se mere saath dhoka na ho.......

Kashish: tera darr jayaz hai Khushi...........lekin main yeh kahoon ki koi tera apna tera dost tumhe apna jeevansathi banana chahta hai to.........

Khushi: aap kiski baat kar rahe hai..........

Kashish: Nihaal ki...........woh tumse shaadi karna chahta hai............

Khushi: Shaadi aur Nihaal se...........Bhabhi aapne socha bhi kaise..........

Kashish: Nihaal tumhara sabse achcha dost hai.........tum use janti ho.......pehchanti ho........uspe tumhe pura yakeen hai.......woh tumhe pasand karta hai.........to phir shaadi kyun nahi..........

Khushi: kyunki main uske layak nahi hoon.........

Kashish: aisa tum soch rahi ho..............lekin hum nahi kyunki jo kuch bhi hua uske janne ke bad Nihaal ne shaadi ke liye haa ki hai .........aisa nahi ki kabhi koi kisi se kuch chupa raha hai.............aur Shaadi ke baad bhi tum isi ghar me hum sabke saath rahogi............

Khushi: lekin Bhabhi.......

Kashish: agar main yeh kahoon ki yeh tumhare Sujalbhai ka faisla hai to.........Khushi Sujal tumhe khush dekhna chahte hai......kya unki Khushi ke liye tum.........

Khushi: apne Sujalbhai ke liye to main kuch bhi kar sakti hoon.............unke liye main woh nark seh sakti hoon to main Nihaal se shaadi bhi kar sakti hoon.........

Kashish: muje pura yakeen hai ki Nihaal tuje bahot khush rakhega............ab chalke neeche sabse keh dete hai.........sab hamara intzaar kar rahe hai......chale..........

Kashish Khushi ko leke neeche aati hai............

Anurag: Kashish.........kya faisla liya hai Khushi ne.......

Kashish: Papa.....Khushi ko yeh rishta manzoor hai............woh Nihaal se shaadi karne ko taiyaar hai............

Prerna: sach me..........ab to main jald se jald Panditjee ko bulake shaadi ka muhurat nikalti hoon.........yeh shaadi to dhoom dham se hogi..........

Khushi: ek minute main aap sab se kuch kehna chahti hoon........

Sujal: kya baat hai koi pareshani hai........

Khushi: yeh shaadi bahot hi simple se hogi.......main nahi chahti koi shor koi damaka..............agar aap sabko manzur ho tabhi main shaadi karungi........

Nihaal: thik hai......muje manzur hai.........hum kal hi mandir me jake gharwalo ke saamne shaadi karenge...........tab to koi aitraaz nahi hoga na tumhe........

Khushi: thik hai...........

Khushi yeh kehke upper chali jati hai.................

Kashish: Nihaal use thoda waqt do thik ho jayegi...........

Prerna: are aap sab log aise kya khade ho.........shaadi simple hai lekin taiyari to karni hogi na..........chalo ab sab kaam pe lago..........

Prem: are Mama kaisi taiyari...........ab dulha bhi ghar ka aur Dulhan bhi ghar ki to.......

Rudra: are prem........ab to yeh Nihaal hamara rishtey me jija ban gaya hai..........are yaar ab to tuje bhi izzat se bulana hoga............

Nihaal: kya kare........tujpe taras khake maine shaadi ke liye haa kar di.........tere sir se ek kaam kam hoga.........

Prerna: Nihaal .......jimedari aur Rudra ho hi nahi sakta...........is ghar ki jimedari to Sujal aur Kashish nibhate hai...........

Nihaal; haa........Sujalbhai aur Bhabhi ke jaisa pyaar to koi kar hi nahi sakta .........mere khayal se koi soch bhi nahi sakta............

Shanta tai: ab baatein bahot ho gayi........kaam choro kuch kaam bhi karo.......mere hero ki shaadi hai kal..............

sab log hasne ke bad kaam pe lag jate hai.............

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ab dusre din Sujal aur Kashish apne kamre me taiuaar ho rahe hote hai.............

Kashish: Sujal.....kya kar rahe hai aap jaldi kijiye.............

Sujal: ab behen ki shaadi hai to taiyaar hone me thoda waqt to lagega...........

Kashish: shayad Khushi se jyaada aap taiyar hone me waqt lagate hai...........

Sujal; jooth mat bolo.........taiyaar hone me tumhe waqt lagta hai......kamse kam do ghante lag jate hai.........

Kashish: ab shaadi ke liye taiyaar hona hai to waqt to lagega ............

Sujal: waise shaadi se khayal aaya..........hum bhi dubara shaadi karenge........

Kashish: dubara shaadi........matlab hume kisi aur ko dhudhna hoga..........

Sujal: mere alawa kisi ke bare me socha na to ek dunga.........

Kashish: aap mujpe pe haath utayenge..........

Sujal: haa agar mere hisse ka pyaar kisi aur ko diya to.......

Kashish: aur aapne socha bhi kaise ki main aisa kar sakti hoon...........

Sujal: chodo na yeh fijul ki baatein.............main yeh keh raha tha ki kyun na hum bhi apni pehli saal girah pe phir se shaadi kare........socho na kitna maza aayega.............

Kashish: baat to sochnewali hai...........main sochke jawaab lungi...........

Sujal; ab tumhe sochne ki kya zaroorat hai.....maine soch liya hai na..............hum bas phir se shaadi karenge..........

Kashish: aur agar aapki yeh dulhan na mani to........

Sujal: use to main utake leke mandap pe bitha dunga aur mujse ruth gayi to raat ko mana bhi lunga...........

Kashish: hey Bhagwan..........yeh sab sunne ke liye aapne muje neeche bheja tha............isse achcha aap muje bula lijiye............

Sujal: unhone bhi tumse tang aake tumhe neeche bhej diya mere pass............sochta hoon ki main tumhe wapas to nahi bhej sakta lekin khud chala jata hoon.......

Kashish: Sujallllllllll............

Sujal: kya hai itne zor se kyun bula rahi ho...........

Kashish: kitni bar kaha hai ki aise nahi bolte.......

Sujal: agar tum bol sakti ho to main kyun nahi............

Kashish: kyunki main aisa keh rahi hoon...........aaj ke bad aap kabhi aisa sochenge bhi nahi ........samje aap..........

Sujal: thik hai nahi kahunga.......kyunki tumse jeetna namumkin hai...........ab neeche chale...........

Kashish: haa...........

they just leave the room..............

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ab sab log Khushi aur Nihaal ko leke Shiv Mandir jate hai.......jaha pe pehle se hi Heer aur Mehek Nandini, Harsh aur Sampada ke saath pahonch gaye hote hai............Kashish Khushi ko shaadi ke liye bithati hai..........Nihaal aur Khushi ke gandhbandhan ka waqt ho raha tha................

Prerna: Kashish.........yeh hakk tumhara banta hai............kyunki Khushi pe hum sabse jyada tumhara aur Sujal ka hakk banta hai........woh meri beti bad me hai pehle tumhari hai.......

Kashish: thik hai mama...............chale Sujal..........

Sujal aur Kashish jake sari shaadi ki rasme nibhate hai..........aakhir kar Nihaal aur Khushi ki shaadi ho jati hai...........dono bado ka aashirwad lete hai.............aur phir Khushi Sujal ke pass aati hai..........

Sujal: hey gudiya kya hua..........aaj ke din bhi.......aise khushi ke din rote nahi..........

Rudra: aur tu hume chod ke kaha ja rahi hai.......ghar hi to ja rahe hai sab...............

Prem: are nahi Bhai ise to rone ki aadat ho gayi hai..........agar yeh roti nahi to iska din achcha nahi jata aur jab tak yeh hume rula nahi deti tab tak hamara din achcha nahi jata.................

Kashish: tum dono ko kya milta hai jab bhi dekho tang karte rehte hai meri Khushi ko................

Prem: waise Nihaal.........for future tip.......agar kabhi tumhari yeh biwi tumse naraz ho jaye to ise Chocolate de dena..........gussa pal bhar me gayab.........

Rudra: aur yeh mat bhul ki Khushi ke teen bhai uske saath hi hai...........

Sujal: kya tum dono bhi........jitna muje Khushi pe vishwas hai utna hi Nihaal pe.........Nihaal maine aaj tak kabhi tujse kuch nahi manga aaj tumse kuch mang raha hoon.........meri Khushi ko hamesha aise hi haste rakhna.......kar sakta hai apne Bhai se yeh vaada...........

Nihaal: aap ne ek bar keh diya mere liye to woh sabse upper hai.......main aapse vaada karta hoon ki Khushi ko hamesha khush rakhne ki koshish karunga............

Kashish: Sujal..........aaj aapki sari jimedari puri ho gayi.........Khushi bhi Nihaal ke saath khush hai........aur ab to teen mahine baad Rudra aur Prem ki bhi shaadi ho jayegi............

Sujal: waise sach kaha tumne............mere saath saath tum bhi apni jimedari se aazad ho rahi ho........Heer aur Mehek ki...........

Prerna: are abhi tum dono itni jaldi aazad nahi ho sakte......are abhi to sabse badi jimedari tum dono ko nibhani hai...........

Sujal: ab kaun si jimedari bachi hai...........

Prerna: Garewal Khandan ke warish ki.........ab tum batai kab hume yeh khush khabri mil rahi hai ..........dada dadi banne ki..........aur Nandini kya tumhe jaldi nahi Nani banne ki..........

Nandini: Prernajee main to kab se Kashish ko keh rahi hoon......lekin meri baat yeh mane to na............

Kashish: main woh abhi aayi................main shayad kuch neeche gaari me chod aayi..............

Kashish waha se jane lagti hai lekin Sujal uska haath pakad ke rokta hai.........

Sujal: are tum kaha ja rahi ho...........

Kashish: Sujal main woh..........

Sujal: are nahi Kashish.............ab to mama ka order hai ab to tum janti ho ki muje pura karna hi hoga........

Kashish: woh Sujal ple haath chodo woh main............

Sujal Kashish ka haath chod deta hai..........Kashish waha pe padi puja ki thali leke daudti huyi neeche chali jati hai aur yaha pe sab log has rahe hote hai................

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ab raat ko Sujal aur Kashish apne kamre me hote hai.........Kashish washroom me hoti hai...........

Sujal: kashish kya kar rahi ho.........

Kashish: kuch nahi sirf baalon me oil laga rahi thi..........

Sujal: oil kyun.......

Kashish: woh bas aise hi...........mama kehti hai ki bal ko dhone se pehle to......aur aapne bahar ka pollution to dekha hi hoga............

Sujal: haa sahi kaha........dekho na mere bal ko bhi........

Kashish: aapke bal ko dekh ke kya karungi....

Sujal: aisa mat kaho......muje bhi apne balo se pyaar hai......haa tumhare se chote hai lekin bal to bal hote hai..........

Kashish: ha woh bhi hai.......sirf thode bejan hai lekin phir bhi..........

Sujal: haa to tum muje bhi laga dona.............

Kashish: uff.........aapko samajna .............chaliye bethiye yahan..........

he sits down on the floor and she sits on the bed and starts to massage oil on his hair...........

Sujal: Kashish.......tum janti ho........agar tum lawyer nahi hoti na to tum bahot achchi massager hoti.........

Kashish: aur kuch bhi kehna hai aapko.............ab pichle din Prem keh raha tha ki main bahot badi cook ban sakti hoon..............aur Nihaal keh raha tha ki main uske saath uski heroine ban sakti hoon.......ab aap keh rahe hai ki main masaager ban sakti hoon .......aisa kijiye aap sab tai kar lijiye muje kya banna hai.....haa Rudra se bhi puch lijiye ga.........

Sujal takes her hand and kiss it........

Sujal: tum kuch bano ya na bano.......lekin sabse pehle tum Sujal Garewal ka pyaar ho.........Sujal Garewal ki jaan ho.........

Kashish: itna gurur Sujal Garewal ko apne pyaar pe.............

Sujal: kyun na ho ab mera pyaar duniya main sabse jyada khubsurat hai to...............

Kashish: lo aapka oil massage bhi ho gaya,..........ab uthiye muje haath dhone hai........

Sujal; itni jaldi ho gaya.............

Kashish: janaab pichle 15 mins se ho raha hai.............

Sujal: ple thodi dair aur.......tumhare haath me kitna sukun milta hai.............

Kashish: thik hai sirf 5 min aur........

Sujal: ok baba...........ab shuru to karo...........

Kashish: I love u.....

Sujal: i love u too.......

Kashish does the massage and he lets her go to wash room.........after some time she comes out and they both fall in sleepn in each other's arms..................

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