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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 34)

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 2:16am | IP Logged
hey a really cute part ab mujhe lagta hai ki sk ko 2 se 3 hojani chaiye wat say cont soon

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 5:34am | IP Logged

lmao.....hehehe!! it was a cute part..........!

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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 11:23am | IP Logged
awesome job!Big smile very cute!
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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
awesome part kashish
i really loved the way u potrayed the love between kashish and sujal it was amazing.
the way u showed how important karvachaut is and why it is kept was really good.
i really enjoyed the song u added in the part it really went with the whole part and it was really intresting.
the way u showed how sujal also kept the vrat 4 kashish showed how much he loves her and cant live without her.
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Posted: 01 November 2008 at 9:26am | IP Logged

awwww that was very sweet part...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................gr88888888888888888888jobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb kashish

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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Cute part Kashish.. the whole Karvachauth epi was gud............ Sujal is so smart in keeping the vrath... Plzz continue soon.... looking forward for the marriage......Smile
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kashish me here with my comments on Aks... i hope tumko mera comment achcha lage... sorry main thoda late hogayi.. hope you understand..Smile  kashish dear the whole part which you have written was very good.. the part from the first sentence , first word, to the last sentence, last word all was so very good... the karwachauth whole thing was very nice.... and what i really liked in the part is the way you put forth the customs.. the way you talked about , explained about karwachauth... tumne bilkul sahii kaha is din ka intezaar har patni karthi hai, woh din jis din ek patni apne pati ke lambe umar ke liye prartna karthi hai... jis patni kii dua se uske pati kii zindagi khushiyon se bhar jaathi hai.. ek aurat ke liye karwachauth ka vrat rakhna is a punya ka kaam... ek lady bhooka rehkar apne pati ke liye lambi umar kii prartna karthi hai.. this shows kii ek lady apne pati ke liye tho kuch bhi karr sakthi hai... chahe woh apne pati ke liye duniyaan se lad jaane kii baat ho ya phir apne pati ko maut se mooh se wapas laane kii baat ho, lekin ek patni kabhi apne farz se, apne kartavya se peeche nahii hategi...  i liked reading the bit where you explained   the rituals & customs.. you know dear   tum hamesha riti-riwazon ko bohat achche se present karthi ho.... it is really very nice to read.& to know about the different customs & cultures... heer aur mehek kii vrat rakh rahe hai.. good to know.... jis tarah heer aur mehek , kashish ko chidathe hai.. mazaa aagaya....  aap subaah ke aath baje sujal mahashay kii subaah ho hii jaathi hai.. aur ab sujal ko subaah subaah bhi romance hii soojing.. yeh sujal ko na har waqt romance soojtha rehtha hai, subaah, shaam aur raat ko... hmm.. tho iska matlab kashish was expecting kii sujal bhii kashish ke liye vrat rakhe, lekin yeh sujal na bas kashish ko pareshaan karne ke liye mana kar detha hai.. and kashish being the sweet wife sujal kii yeh baat maan jaathi hai, even without getting angry, or without sulking once.. i'am sure sujal soch raha hoga kii ab kashish usse naraaz hogi, uspar cheekegi, lekin kashish tho kabhi sujal par cheekegi nahii , chillayegi nahii... she is a calm person... jiska sujal par ghussa hona no chance, it is almost next to impossible.... sujal ka  romancing ith kashish, unki hasi, unki khushi, unka saath, kabhi na chute.. jab thak  sujal, kashish ka saath ho, woh dono koi bhi mushkhil parr karr sakthe hai... har toofan ka saamna karr sakthe hai.... the dinning table family scene was very well written... jaise rudra aur prem sujal ko chidathe hai... sab ke beech kii bonding itni achchi hai... they all indeed share a very strong bond.. unka parivaar, aur unke parivaar ka saath kii un sab logon kii sabse badi taakat hai.. aur shayad yeh bhi kaha jaa saktha hai kii unka parivaar hii unki sabse badi taakat aur sabse badi kamzori bhi hai...... sab khush hai.. & me very khush.....  lekin yeh kya sujal nhastha kiye bina chala gaya.. aur office jaatha hai tho patahj chaltha hai kii usne apni PA , se jhoota call karwaya  taaki woh kashish ke liye vrat rakh sake & kashish will not force him to eat... how sweett... i knew it, kii sujal aise hii kuch na kuch karega...  the evening scene of sujal, kashish was very well written.. it touched my heart.. the pyaar between sujal, kashish seriously bought tears to my eyes... the chaand scene where sujal tells kashish kii kashish is his chand.. awwww shoo cute.... then woh bachon ke baare mein discuss karna.. sujal ko barah bachche chahiye.. hehe.. is baat par mujhe sujal se kehna hai sujal soch lo agar barah bachche honge tho tum tho kashish ke saath romance tho kya, usse theek se dekh bhi nahii paaoge, kyunke woh bachon ko sambhal ne mein  busy hogi.. so bas soch lo.. hehehehehehehe....  the whole vrat thodne ka bit was nice..  i liked kashish's song for sujal... then prem ka kashish se poochna kii why did kashish feed sujal first, kashish ka giving explanation kii sujal bhi uske liye bhooka raha hai, i'am sure kashish ke liye yeh bohat hii garv kii baat hogi joh usse sujal, jaisa chah ne waala mila... aur mehek ka kehna kii how rudra is troubling her... aur phir sujal giving such a chottu, sweet explanation kii kyun usne vrat rakha....  this shows sujal, kashish ek dusare se kitna pyaar karthe hai.. kitna mayine rakhthe hai woh dono ek dusare ke liye.. kashish hai tho sujal hai.. kashish nahii tho sujal nahii...  then joh baat sujal ne kii wohii woh aadat se majboor hokar durr jaane kii, marrne kii ,  ab kashish ka usse naraaz hona, sujal ka usse manana in his own sweet little way... this was raapchik... loved it.. it was very cute... waise jab prem ne kashish se uska khana maanga, aur phir kashish ka jawaab kii woh heer se pooch le... i found this very funny... lekin i think i know kashish aisa kyun keh rahii thi, mere hisaab se woh aisa isliye keh rahii thi kyunke woh chahthi hai kii rudra-mehek, prem-heer ek doosre ko behtar jaan le before they get married... in short a very well written part.. absolutely rocking.... keep up the good work going... i'am seriously liking the way the story is progressing..Clap ab dear coming to my guess on the next coming up parts.  uske liye mera guess yeh hoga kii there will be many masti moments, happy moments in the family.. shayad some moments of romance between sujal, kashish...  lekin i also think kii in khushiyo ke baad some toofan is going to hit the  family... koi undekha toofaan,  problem will crop up.. i think there will be some misunderstandings ,  some darrar which will be created... well yeh misunderstandings , yeh darrar shayad sujal, kashish ke beech ho sakthi hai.. lekin on the other side i think kii  yeh darrar sujal , kashish aur unke pariwaar ke beech aayegi, by pariwaar i think it will be with prerna, shayad aise koi circumstances create ho jaye kii prerna ko  sujal apna soutela beta lagne lage & she starts showing disparity... well i'am not sure kii kya yeh darrar sujal, kashish ke beech hogi, ya phir prerna aur sujal-kashish ke beech, jiski wajah se pariwaar toot jayega... so dear is my guess right.. mujhe zaroor batana....Winkkashish dear next part jaldi se post karna.. i'am waiting for it eagerly... and dear agge kii kahani ke liye mere pass ek idea hai, i'll give you that idea when we chat on ym.. continue soon....Smile


Edited by sun_423 - 17 November 2008 at 4:58am
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hey cont soon

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