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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 32)

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Part-28

Aaj pura Garewal Mension khushiyon ke diye se jagmaga utha hai.........subaah se ghar me uthal pathal machi huyi hai..........ab shaadi me kuch hi ghante bache the jab Kashish, Mehek aur Heer Khushi ko taiyaar kar rahe hote hai................

Khushi: Bhabhi muje bahot darr lag raha hai......aaj sab kuch thik to hoga na.......

Kashish: janti hoon mann me thoda darr to hota hai..........main to Sujal ko jan ne ke bad bhi darr rahi thi aur tum to......lekin koi baat nahi hum sab hai na saath me........

Khushi: Bhabhi......aap muje mandap me akele chod ke mat jana.......

Kashish: kahi nahi jaungi.......main tumhare pass hi bethungi..........

Mehek: Khushi.......aaj to chaand bhi tumhare aage fika lagega........kya chamak rahi ho tum.........

Heer: chamkegi kyun nahi........aakhir kar sajaya kisne hai...........

Kashish: hamari Khushi to her din khubsurat lagti hai......kyun na lage sabse pyari hai yeh........

Khushi: aaj jate jate is ghar ki koi fikar hi nahi hoti........kyunki mere teeno bhai ko sambhalne wali jo mil gayi hai..........aur muje vishwas hai ki mera yeh yakeen meri teeno bhabhi bahot barkhubi se nibhayenge......Kashishbhabhi aaj se is ghar ki mere mama papa.....mere bhaiyon ki khushi me aap ke haath me deke ja rahi hoon........is bharoshe ke sath ja rahi hoon ki jab bhi main is ghar me wapas sabse milne aau tab sabhi ke chehre pe ek muskurahat ho.........kabhi bhi mera yeh bharosha tutne mat dena..............

Kashish: are pagli........abhi shaadi nahi huyi ki itni badi badi baatein karne lagi.........main vaada karti hoon ki jab bhi tu yaha aaye tab sirf aur sirf khushiyaan hogi is ghar me...........

jab teeno bhai aate hai........

Rudra: kis khushi ki baat ho rahi hai......

Khushi: yahi ki mere jane ke bad meri teeno bhabhi ko aap teeno shararti bhai ko sambhalna hoga...........

Prem: agar itni fikar hai hum sab ki to ruk kyun nahi jati........

Khushi: ruk kaise jau......jana hi hoga muje...............

Kashish: Prem.......maine tujse kaha tha na ki ladki ka asli ghar uska sasural hota hai.........is liye Khushi ko aanshu ke saath nahi balke muskurahat ke saath bidai denge hum........

Khushi: Sujalbhai aap kuch nahi kahenge muje........

Sujal:nahi bas dekh raha hoon.........meri gudiya kitni badi ho gayi.........tuje yaad hai bachpan me her waqt tu aise hi dulhan ki tarah sajti rehti..........tab aisa lag raha tha ki meri gudiya bahot choti hai in sab rasmo ko samajne ke liye........aur muje laga ki abhi meri gudiya ki shaadi me bahot sa waqt baki hai........muje nahi pata tha ki meri gudiya ki shaadi ka din itni jaldi aa jayega.............

Kashish: waqt to samundar ki reth ki tarah hota hai jo kab chut jaye pata hi nahi chalta..........

Khushi: waise me thik to lag rahi hoon na...........

Rudra: tune apne aap ko aaine me dekha......phir batana ki kaisi lag rahi hoon........

Khushi: main aapse nahi Sujalbhai se baat kar rahi hoon.........

Sujal: bahot hi pyari lag rahi ho......ek dum us rajkumari ki tarah..........bhagwan kare tumhe kisi ki nazar na lage......

Kashish: achcha hua aapne muje yaad dila diya............Khushi tu yaha beth..........Heer zara woh Puja ki thali dena........

Heer Kashish ko woh thali deti hai aur Kashish khushi ki nazar utarti hai.......

Kashish: bhagwan tumhe aur tumhare parivar ko her buri nazar se bachaye.......upperwala tumhare daman me dher sari khushiyaan bhar de..........itni khushiyaan Rishi tumhe de ki dard ka koi dur dur tak koi vasta na ho............lekin aaj main jo abhi tumse keh rahi hoon use dhyan se sunna aur use tumhe amal karna hai........waise yeh baat ek maa apni beti se karti hai lekin Sujal ne tumhe apni beti ki tarah pala hai to yeh mera bhi farz banta hai ki jo rishta tumhara mere pati se hai wahi mera tumse...................shaadi ke bad sabse pehla sabse pavitra sabse uncha rishta ek pati aur patni ka hota hai...........pati aur pati ke gharwalo ki khushi me tumhe apni khushi dhundhni hai.........aaj se tum sirf apne liye nahi balke apne pati ke liye jiogi......uske her ek faisle ko tumhe manna hoga....apne pati ki maan maryada ka tumhe khayal rakhna hoga.....aaj tum is ghar se bahot kuch apne saath le ja rahi ho........papa ka aashirwad........mama ke sanskar........bhaiyon ka pyaar........aur meri shikh........hamesha yaad rahe tum Garewal Khandan ki izzat ho aur hamesha rahogi........aur kabhi bhi koi aisa kaam mat karna jise hum sab tumhare sasural walo se nazare milake baat na kar sake.......tumhe ek aisi bahu banna hai ki hum sab fakr se keh sake ki Khushi Garewal Khandan ki beti hai......ab isse jyada kuch nahi kahungi kyunki tum khud bahot samajdar ho aur agar kuch bhi uljan ho to itna yaad rakhna ki tumhara yeh parivar her waqt tumhare saath khada hoga........

Sujal: Kashish thik keh rahi hai.........kabhi bhi kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho to bejijak apne Bhai ko yaad karna woh tumhari her khawaish ko pura karne ki koshish karega.........

Khushi: Sujalbhai aapne to hamesha bina mange muje bahot kuch de diya hai..........ab aur kuch nahi chahiye........haa de sakte hai to ek vaada ki aap is parivar ko kabhi alag nahi hone denge.......

Sujal: vaada raha .......ab khush........

Anurag: chalo chalo neeche.........baarat aanewali hai........

Khushi: papa.......

Anurag: bahot pyaari lag rahi hai meri beti.......bhagwan tuje aise hi khush rakhe............chalo aap sab........

Anurag apne aanshu chupate huye waha se chala jata hai aur uske piche Sujal, Prem, Kashish aur Rudra bhi............

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Ab barat darwaze pe khadi hoti hai...........Prerna Rishi ka swagat karne aati hai..........

Sujal: Rishi zara sambhal ke rehna......

Rishi: kyun bhai..........

Sujal: kuch nahi ....aaj ek aur gaya kaam se.........abhi pata chalega.........

Prerna Rishi ki zor se nak khichti hai.........

Rudra: ab pata chala na ki Sujalbhai kya keh rahe the..........

Rishi: lekin pehle se thik nahi keh sakte..........

Anurag: beta.......inhe andar leke bhi chalo......

Sujal: jee papa........

Sab log Rishi ko mandap me bithate hai............Heer aur Mehek Khushi ko leke aate hai.................

Sabse pehle Khushi Rishi ko varmala dal deti hai.........ab Rishi ki bari hoti hai lekin jaise hi Rishi aage badhta hai Rudra aur Prem Khushi ko upper karte hai taki rishi Khushi tak na pahunch sake......

Archie: are aap dono aise hi Bhabhi ko upper karenge to mere bhai kaise varmala dalenge...........

Prem: woh kya hai na aaj tak hum teeno bhai ne Khushi ko kabhi kisi ke aage jukne nahi diya...........ab varmala dalni hai to aap hi soch lijiye ki kya karna hai kyunki khushi to jukegi nahi.........

Archie: Bhai inhe hi bata do hum bhi harnewalo me se nahi.........

Rishi waha pe padi chair pe chad ke Khushi ko varmala dal deta hai..........

ab shaadi shuru hoti hai.............

Panditjee: Kanyadaan ke liye Ladki ke mata pita aage aaye.......

Anurag aur Prerna aake puja me bethte hai.....

Khushi: ek minute panditjee........Kanyadan se pehle main kuch kehna chahti hoon......

Prerna: kya baat hai beta........koi pareshani hai.....

Khushi: nahi mama..........mera kanyadan aap dono ke saath koi aur bhi karega...........main chahti hoon ki aap dono ke saath is kanyadan me Sujalbhai aur Kashishbhabhi bhi bethe..........

Sujal: khushi lekin.........

Khushi: aap se aakhri bar kuch mang rahi hoon........aap apni gudiya ke liye itna bhi nahi karenge..........

Sujal: Panditjee .........puja shuru kijiye...........

Kanyadan karne ke liye ek taraf Anurag aur Prerna bethte hai aur dusri aur Sujal aur Kashish............ab sari rasmo ke bad khushi ki shaadi bhi khatam ho jati hai...........

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ab bari aati hai sabse muskil ghadi ki..........jo hai beti ki bidaai............beti ki bidaai ke saath beti parayi ho jati hai......shayad isi liye sabne kaha hai ki beti paraya dhan hoti hai..............ab Heer chawal ki thali leke aati hai.....aur Khushi apni bidaai deti hai jo Kashish aur Prerna apni joli me samet lete hai...............

Khushi: Papa.......ja rahi hoon....agar anjane me mujse koi galti ho gayi ho to muje maff kar dena.........

Anurag: tujse kabhi koi galti ho hi nahi sakti........tu to meri sabse pyari beti hai...........

Prerna: aur ab kya mafi mang ke aur rulayegi..........ek lagaungi gaal pe......

Yeh kehte hi Prerna Khushi ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai........

Prerna: beta ab aise nahi rote..........jao ek bar apne bhai se mil aao.......

Khushi sabse pehle Prem ke pass jati hai........jo Khushi ko uski chocolate deta hai.........

Khushi: aaj ke din bhi.....

Prem: aaj ke din hi nahi.......mere pass hamesha se tumhara yeh hakk banta hai.......aur aage bhi rahega..........yeh le.......

Khushi prem ke gale lagti hai aur phir Rudra ke pass jati hai...........Rudra Khushi ki naak khichta hai.........

Khushi: yeh kya Bhai.....aaj ke din to......

Rudra: aaj ke din kya haa........haa bol........main to ab aisa hi hoon.....lekin tu badal gayi........pehle akeli roti thi aj sabko rula rahi ho.......

Khushi Rudra ke gale lagke shanta tai ke pass jati hai.........

Shanta Tai: ab tu bhi ja rahi hai main ab kise tang karungi........

Khushi: Kashishbhabhi hai na.....aap use tang karna........lekin aapki bahot yaad aayegi Tai.........kyunki aap meri tai nahi meri saheli hai..jise maine kabhi kuch nahi chupaya...........

Shanta Tai: yaad to muje bhi apni beti ki aayegi.............

Yeh kehke Khushi tai ke gale lag ke Kashish ke pass jati hai......

Khushi: achcha Bhabhi ab main chalti hoon........agar anjane me maine kuch aisa kaha ho to muje maff kar dena..........

Kashish: are pagli tujse kaisi khafa........tujse muje koi sikayat nahi.......lekin ek sikayat hai.........tu itni pyari hai ki teri bahot yaad aayegi..........

Khushi: yaad to aap sabki is pure ghar ki muje bahot aayegi...............

Kashish: jane se pehle ek bar apne Bhai se nahi milogi.......

Khushi: woh kahi dikhai nahi dete.........kaha hai woh.........

Kashish: wahi jaha tu use chod ke aayi......abhi bhi mandap me hai woh........shayad tuje jate huye nahi dekh payenge is liye.........

Khushi: main bhai se milke aati hoon.........

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Khushi Sujal ke pass aati hai.........

Khushi: Sujalbhai.......

Sujal: are tu.......abhi tak gayi nahi........

Khushi: kaise jati aapse mile bina.......aaj tak kabhi aisa hua hai ki main kahi bhi jau aur aapko mile bigar.........

Sujal: lekin ab tumhari shaadi ho gayi hai to.....

Khushi: to kya.......main sabse pehle aapki khushi hoon ...........aur aapko aise dukhi karke main kaise ja sakti hoon...............

Sujal: mujse milne aaogi.......

Khushi: jab bhi muje yaad karenge main aapke pass hogi........lekin rakhi ke din aapko muje lene aana hoga.........bolo manzur hai yeh shart........

Sujal: manzur.......

Khushi: achcha ab chale.......

Sujal: ek minute tere liye mere pass kuch hai.......

Khushi: kya........

Sujal apni jeb main se kuch nikal ke Khushi ko deta hai........

Khushi: lekin Sujalbhai yeh to aapki car ki chabiyaan hai......

Sujal: tumhari khawaish thi na meri jaisi car ki........to aaj puri kar di maine........aaj woh teri.........

Khushi: lekin main kaise.......

Sujal: ab apne bhai se tohfe lene me tu inkar karegi.........

KhushI; Bhai aapke bina main kaise rahungi..........aapne meri choti se choti khushiyon ki parwaah ki hai................yaha tak ki main aapse jo manga woh to diya lekin mangne se pehle hi aap sab kuch de dete hai...........aapke jaisa Bhai bahot kam logo ko milta hai............i am so lucky..........i love u bhai..............

Sujal: i love my gudiya too..............

Khushi Sujal ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai.........yeh dekh ke sab ki aankhoin me bhi aanshu aa jate hai...........

Kashish: Sujal.........bidaai ka muhurat bita ja raha hai.............

Sujal: thik hai......

Sujal khushi ke aanshu pochta hai aur Kashish aur Prerna Khushi ko doli ke pass leke jate hai lekin Khushi phir se mud ke daud ke Sujal ke pass aati hai.......sab log hairani se Khushi ko dekhte hai.....

Khushi: muje bhul nahi jayenge aap......

Sujal: jo dil me ho use kaise bhul sakte hai.....

yeh kehne ke bad Khushi phir se Sujal ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai...............

Sujal: ab itna ro mat ki bandh aa jaye..chalo.....

Khushi: aap meri doli ko khandha denge na........

Sujal: haa dunga......chahe kyun na meri kamar hi tut jaye.........

yeh Kehke Sujal aur Khushi hasne lagte hai.............

Sujal khushi ko doli me bithta hai aur teeno bhai ke haath se Khushi ki doli ruksat hoti hai.............

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ab agli Subaah sab log dining table pe gum sum bethe huye hote hai...............jab Kashish aur Shanta Tai nasta leke bahar aate hai........

Shanta Tai: are kya baat hai aaj naste ke table pe itna sannata ...........kahi main koi sapna to nahi dekh rahi........

Kashish: are aap sab ko ho kya gaya hai..chaliye nasta kijiye.........

Sujal: muje bhukh nahi.........

Rudra: mera bhi mann nahi kar raha.........

Prem: sorry Bhabhi...main office ke liye late ho raha hoon...........

Kashish: ek minute koi aaj office nahi jayega.........aap teeno nasta karke sidhe Khushi ke ghar use pagphere ki rasam ke liye lene ja rahe ho.........

Sujal: sach.........sach me hum Khushi se mil sakte hai.......

Prem: chaliye na Bhai abhi chalte hai......

Kashish: nahi pehle aap sab apna nasta karenge..........

Prerna: kashish thik keh rahi hai.......ab kab tak tum teeno aise hi bethoge..........

Kashish: aaj jab yeh teeno Khushi ke ghar jake nahi dekh lete ki woh kitni khush hai tab tak yeh teeno ke dil ko tasli nahi hogi.........

Shanta tai: Anuragjee........beti ki bidaai to ho gayi ab in dono ki sehnai kab suna rahe hai.......

Anurag: bahot hi jald...........main to soch raha hoon ki kyun na kal hi unke yaha shagun leke chalte hai.........

Prerna: aapne to mere mann ki baat padh li........main bhi subaah se yahi soch rahi thi........Kashish tu ek kaam kar naste ke bad Nandini ko bata dena ki hum log kal shagun leke aa rahe hai...........

Kashish: jee main phone karke bata dungi.........waise muje aaj school bhi jana hoga........pichle hafte shaadi ki waje se main bacho se nahi mil payi......soch rahi hoon ki aaj waqt mila to waha ho aau...........

Prerna: thik hai hum aisa karte hai kal tumhare ghar se sidhe waha chale jayenge ...........muje bhi kafi arsa hua waha gaye........

Kashish: thik hai.........

Prem: Bhabhi aaj aap nasta denewali hai ki sirf baatoin se pet bharva degi........

Rudra: kitna khata hai tu..........tera jee nahi bharta.......

Prem: main aapki tarah nahi.......khane ko main enjoy karta hoon..........aur woh bhi kya khana hota hai jo mama aur Bhabhi banati hai.......

Sujal: ab maska lagana chod aur jaldi se nasta kar....hume dair ho rahi hai...............

Kashish: Sujal jane se pehle muje bata dena......woh aap log pehli bar Khushi ke ghar ja rahe hai to khali haath achcha nahi lagega...........is liye maine kuch saman taiyaar kiya hai.........ek minute me abhi aayi........

Kashish apne kamre me se kuch leke aati hai.................

Kashish: yeh lo kangan..........Khushi ko dekhte hi muh dikhai me de dijiyega..........

Sujal: thik hai........

Kashish: mama aur kuch to nahi reh jata na.........

Prerna: sab jimedari ko kitne achche se nibha rahi ho.........jo maine nahi socha woh ab tum sochne lagi............tumhe her kaam ka pata hai ki kab kya karna hai.......aur aaj bhi sab kuch sahi ho raha hai.......khali hath behen ko lene nahi jate.......

Anurag: jis din meri teeno bahu is ghar me aajayegi.......is din se soch raha hoon main retire ho jau....taki pura waqt ghar pe bahu ke saath bita saku.........

Sujal: bahu ke saath ki Mama ke saath........

Anurag: kyun marva raha hai is umar me.........chup chap nasta kar........yeh mat bhul main tera baap hoon............

sab log nasta kar lete hai.........

 

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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 12:37am | IP Logged
hey nice part
luved the way u've described each & evry small thg
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specially khushi's doli ka time was superb
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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 2:05am | IP Logged
hey lovely part cont soon
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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 5:22am | IP Logged
hey is this story gng 2 go the 'hum saath saath hain' way.looks like it
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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Hey Kashish very nice n cute part.... I liked the portrayal of every single emotion.... I'm really excited abt the other 2 marriages... looking forward for the next part... PLzz continue asapSmile

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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
mindblowing part
 i really loved the way u described each charachters emotion in detail and the way u showed how much the charachters care for each other was superb.
the scene were khushi and sujal have a heart to heart was fabulous.
cant wait 4 the other 2 weddings know.
the scene were the guys picked khushi up and made rishi put the varmala on was really good
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Posted: 08 October 2008 at 2:12am | IP Logged
it is a beautiful part. loved sujal and khushi
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nice partClap.........................sujal aur dono bhai kis tarah roty hai behan ki vaadi ka waqtCry...........................meri eyes mein bhi ansso a gaye thy........................kashish kitna khal rak thi sab ghar walo kaWink....................best bahu ka award milna chaiye ussy Embarrassed..........................con't soon

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