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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 31)

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Part-27

Aaj woh din Khushi ki zindagi me aaya hai jiske liye ladki barso se us din ka intzaar karti hai jab uske haath me apne saajan ke naam ki mehndi hoti hai.............aur jab ladki ka dil hi itna khush ho to khushi saaf saaf uske chehre se nazar aati hai..........kahi na kahi aaj bhi woh chamak Khushi ke chehre pe dikhai deti hai.........lekin woh chamak sirf wahi dekh sakte hai jo sachhe dil se use pyaar aur apna mante ho........aur yeh chamkata chehra to pura garewal parivar dekh chuka hai pichle ek hafte se...........aaj ek aakhri raat bachi hai Khushi ki is ghar me kyunki kal to woh doli me beth ke parai ho jayegi sab bhai ko chod ke..........jin bhaiyon ne apne haatoin se apni choti behen ko khane ke nivare khilaye hai wahi haath se kal woh apni gudiya ki doli ko ruksat karenge..........kehte hai kabhi koi bhai ki aankh me aanshu nahi hote lekin behen ki bidaai ek avsar hota hai jaha bhai khule dil se rota hai doli ko khanda dete.............hala yeh baat hum Sujal< Rudra ya Prem ke chehre se nahi dekh sakte lekin kya hum unke hale dil ko nahi samajte..............

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Sujal, Rudra aur Prem Study room me aise gumsum bethe hote hai jab Kashish aur Shanta tai aate hai........

Shanta tai: hello......kya hua tum teeno ko...........koi kya mar gaya hai jo aisi sakal lagake bethe hai........

Kashish: Taiiiiii.........

Shanta Tai: to kya Kashish........aise khushi ke din aise muh banake bethe hai..........ab koi kuch bolega..........

Kashish: tai main baat karke dekhu...........

Kashish Prem ke pass jati hai..........

Kashish: Prem.........kya baat hai.........apni bhabhi se bhi chupayega...........bata muje.........

Prem: kuch nahi Bhabhi.......Khushi ke bare me soch rahe the.............aise kaise woh hume chod ke ja sakti hai...........

Kashish ke chehre pe ek muskan aa jati hai.........

Rudra: Bhabhi......aap has rahi hai.........yaha hum bhai ki halat kharab ho rahi hai aur aap hai ki...........

Kashish: Rudra..........her ladki ko shaadi karke paraye ghar jana hi padta hai.........kya muje dukh nahi hua hoga mera ghar chodte huye lekin kya kare..........hamare sasural me bhi aise bahot se rishtey hote hai jo hamare aane ka intzaar karte hai.........ab muje dekh lo...........yaha pe aake muje saas sasur me apne mama papa...........tum dono jaise Bhai..........aur Sujal jaise Pati ........aur ek ladki ke liye uski khushi apne parivar se hoti hai............

Rudra: lekin phir bhi woh itne saaloin ke ristey ko chod ke kaise rahegi...........

Kashish: waha pe Chetanuncle aur Vasuaauntie hai..........uski saheli ke tarah archie hogi.........aur muje Rishi pe yakeen hai ki woh hamari Khushi ka khayal rakhega............

Sujal: lekin woh waha khush to rahegi na.............

Kashish jake Sujal ke pass khadi rehti hai........

Kashish: kya main yaha aake khush nahi...........to phir Khushi bhi apne sasural bahot khush rahegi.........

Sujal: agar use kisi baat ki taklif huyi to........

Kashish: to tum teen bhai ho uski madad karne ke liye..........khushi yaha se ja rahi iska yeh matlab nahi ki uska is ghar se nata tut gaya......woh is ghar ki beti thi aur hamesha rahegi........Khushi ki jagah koi nahi le sakta...............

Rudra: kitni ajeeb baat hai na Sujalbhai......kal tak woh hamare liye sirf bachi thi.........woh aaj itni badi ho gayi ki uski shaadi honewali hai............

Sujal: haa woh kitni bhi badi ho jaye mere liye woh abhi meri gudiya hi rahegi.............jise main beti ki tarah pyaar karta hoon...........

Shanta Tai: dekha Kashish......muje to kabhi pata hi nahi chala ki in teen me itni akal hai...........Prernajee dhany hai jinhe itne achche bete mile..............ab chalo main rona shuru karoon usse pehle tum teeno neeche chalo sab log aate hi honge...........aur Kashish tu jake Khushi ko leke neeche aa..............

Kashish: jee tai............

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ab sare mehman aa gaye hai..........Heer, Mehek aur Kashish khushi ko leke neeche aate hai............sab log Khushi ki tarif kar rahe hote hai..........Sab log Khushi ko jake bithate hai.........

vasu: meri bahu kitni pyari lag rahi hai aaj.........bhagwan kare kisi ki nazar na lage..............

Heer: aauntijee..............kya baat kar rahi hai.........nazar to pehle se lag gayi hai hamare Rishijiju ki..........

Nandini: chup kar...........

Archie; are nahi yeh bilkul sahi keh rahi hai.......dekhiyena Bhabhi kitna sharmane lagi bhaiyaa ke naam se............

Prerna: ab bahot hasi mazak ho gaya chalo mehndi shuru karo............

Shanta Tai: sab se pehla hakk pati ki maa ka......yani Vasujee ka banta hai........

Vasu Khushi ke haath me Rishi ka naam likh deti hai...........

Vasu: Kashish.......ab aake meri bahu ki mehndi puri kar do..........

Kashish: jee..........

sab log milke mehndi lagane lagte hai...........

Heer: Khushi.......tum nervouse to nahi na..........

Khushi: thoda sa.........

Mehek: to koi baat nahi...........aisa hota hai.........lekin kuch nahi hoga sab thik hi hoga..............

Khushi: Bhabhi aap mere saath rahegi na...........

Kashish: haa.......main hamesha tumhare saath hoon......tu kal ke baad chali jayegi iska matlab yeh nahi ki main tere saath nahi...........kabhi bhi tumhe meri zaroorat pade to muje aadhi raat bhi phone kar dena........main aur tumhare Bhai hamesha teri aur khade rahenge............

Khushi: thank you Bhabhi..........

Kashish: ab tu muje bhi thanks karegi..........

Khushi: achcha baba nahi karungi............

Nandini: Kashishbeta........zara jake kitchen me se shagun ke ladoo le aana............

Kashish: abhi layi.............

Kashish kitchen me jane lagti hai jab Sujal use dekhta hai.................aur Kashish ke piche chala jata hai.........

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Kashish ladoo ki thali bana rahi hoti hai jab Sujal aake Darwaza pe khade rehta hai.........Kashish jab bahar jane lagti hai tab woh Sujal ko dekhti hai..........

Kashish: Sujal aap..........kuch chahiye..........

Sujal: haa........

Kashish: kya.........

Sujal; tum.........

Kashish: dekhiye........Sujal....in sab bakwas ke liye mere pass waqt nahi..........chaliye mera rasta chodiye...........

Sujal: Kashish muje tumse do minute baat karni hai.........

Kashish: lekin muje bahot kaam hai,...........sab mera bahar intzaar kar rahe hai.........

Sujal: to karne do.........

Sujal Kashish ki aur badhta hai aur Kashish piche jane lagti hai..............

Kashish: ghar pe bahot se mehman hai..........koi aa jayega..........

Sujal: to aane do.........

Sujal Kashish ki bahot nazdig hota hai...........jab Kashish piche diwar se takra jati hai...........dono ek dusre ke itne pass khade the ki ek dusre ki dil ki raftar bhi sun sakte hai.............

Kashish: aapke irade muje nek nahi lagte...........aapko jo bhi baat karni hai woh hum raat ko karenge........

Sujal: raat ko baat karne ki fursad kise...........

Kashish ki palke sharam se zuk jati hai.........

Kashish: jane dijiye na ple.........

Sujal: kaha na tumse do minute baat karni hai...........

Kashish: kahiye..........

Sujal: kya aaj maine tumhe kaha hai ki tum kuch jyada hi khubsurat lag rahi ho.............kya maine aaj kaha ki tum aaj mere dil ko sata rahi ho..............kya maine aaj kaha tumhari yeh aankhoin me muje dub jane ko mann kar raha hai..........tumhare yeh hoth jise main dekhta hoon to main deewana ho jata hoon..........

Sujal Kashish ko aur nazdig badh raha hota hai.........

Heer+Mehek:ahmmmmm...........ahmmmmmmm...............

Sujal aur Kashish dono sapno ki duniya se bahar aate hai..........

Sujal: Heer.........Mehek tum dono............

Heer: kyun hume yaha aana mana hai...........

Sujal: nahi to..........

Mehek: waise yaha ho kya raha tha..........

Sujal: woh tumhari dii ki aankh me kachra chala gaya tha..........

Heer: dii........aankh ke kachre ka dii ke hoth se kya taluk...............

Sujal aur Kashish sharam se pani pani ho rahe the.......

Mehek: dii agar aap itna sharmayenge to Jiju apna kaam kaise karenge.........

kashish: besharmo kuch to sharam karo.......main tumse badi hoon...........

Heer: dii sharam to aapko aani chahiye Kitchen me sabke samne.......

Sujal: isme tumhari dii ki koi galti nahi........

Mehek: yeh dekho.........yaha pe Jiju hume dii ko kuch nahi kehne denge........ab aap apna baki ka kaam raat ko apne bedroom me kariye ga..........filhaal Anuraguncle aapko bula rahe hai.......

Heer: aur saath me yeh ladoo bhi...............

Sujal waha se kuch kahe bina woh thali leke chala jata hai..............

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Mehek: dii maine suna tha ki shaadi ke kuch dino baad pati patni me pyar kam hota jata hai lekin aap to........

Heer: waise aap chahe to hum aapko bhi Khushi ke saath dusre honeymoon pe bhej sakte hai.........

Kashish: tum dono mere dusre honeymoon ki chinta karna chodo............apne pehle Honeymoon ke bare me socho............

Mehek: kya dii aap bhi..........

Kashish: pichle kuch dino me jo kuch bhi ho raha hai uska matlab yeh nahi ki muje kuch pata nahi..........sab janti hoon me.............lekin main tum dono ke muh se sunna chahti hoon...........waise main tum dono se naraz bhi hoon ki tum dono ne muje yeh baat nahi batayi..........jab ki maine tumse kuch nahi chupaya..........

Heer: aap baat kiski kar rahe hai........

Mehek: dii humne aapse kuch nahi chupaya...........

Kashish: pakka..........tum dono ne kuch nahi chupaya..........to phir jo maine aur Sujal ne dekha woh kya.....................

Heer: kya dekha aapne.......

Kashish: yahi ki Heer tu Prem ko pasand karti hai aur Mehek Rudra ko........

Mehek: dii woh baat..........baat yeh hai..........

Kashish: sach sach batao muje........kya tum dono ko agar yeh rishta ho to manzur hai..........

Heer: lekin mama papa.........

Kashish: unse Sujal baat karenge lekin mera tum charo se puchna bahot zaroori hai.........to haa ya naa..........Mehek tu bata......kya tuje Rudra pasand hai..............muje sirf haa ya naa me jawab dena..........

Mehek: haa..............

Kashish: aur Heer.........kya tuje Prem pasand hai..........

Heer: haa dii.............

Kashish: aaj main kitni khush hoon tum charo ke liye...........woh dono tum dono ko bahot khush rakhenge............aaj main bahot khush hoon......main kal jake sabse pehle Rudra aur prem se baat karke Sujal ko bataugi ki woh Mama Papa se baat kare.............lekin tab tak tum yeh baat kisi se mat kehna thik hai..........ab chalo bahar.............

Mehek aur Heer jane lagte hai........

Kashish: apni dii se gale nahi lagoge...........

Heer aur Mehek aake Kashish ke gale lagte hai jab Kashish ki aankh khushi se bhar aati hai................

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ab sab log bahar Sangeet ke function me kuch naach gaane ka intzaar kar rahe hote hai...........

Nach nach nachke dikha soniye (Rudra aur Prem dhol leke aate hai)

Ankh zara ankh se mila soniye (dono Mehek aur Heer ke pass jake bajate hai)

Meri behna ki shaadi hai (Rudra aur Prem dono behen ka haath pakad ke use beech me le jate hai)

Mere naal bhangra paa soniye (Heer aur Mehek sharam se jane lagte hai)

Mere kareeb na aa soniya (Rudra aur Prem un dono ka haath pakadte hai)

Mujhse na yun takraa soniya (Mehek aur Heer apne haath chudane ki koshish karte hai)

Chhod bhi de deewanapan (Mehek aur Heer dono haath chodne ke liye kehte hai)

Aise na baat badha soniya (woh dono sharam se sabko dekh rahe hote hai jab woh dono unka haath chod dete hai)

rahegi kab tak bhala kunwaari (Heer aur Mehek jake Kashish ke piche chup jati hai)

Tu ladki shehzaadi (Rudra aur Prem jake un dono ke piche khade hote hai)

Mauka achha hai chal kar le (Dono unke haath pakad ke use Prerna ke pass le jate hai)

Chat mangni, pat shaadi (Heer aur Mehek sharam se Prerna ke gale lag jate hai)

Dulhan mujhko bana soniya (Heer aur mehek Rudra aur Prem ka rasta rokte hai)

Phere saat laga soniya (woh apna haath un dono ke samne rakhti hai)

Gar tujhe shaadi karni hai (woh dono un dono ka haath tham lete hai)

Sehra baandhke aa mundiya (woh charo apne sapno ki duniya me kahi khoye huye the)

Nach nach nachke dikha soniye (Jab Sujal aake un dono ko sapno ki duniya se bahar nikalta hai)

Ankh zara ankh se mila soniye (dono Bhai Sujal ke gale lagte hai jab Prerna aake dono ke kan khichti hai)

Meri behna ki shaadi hai (Heer aur Mehek jake Nandini ke aashirwad lete hai)

Mere naal bhangra paa soniye (jab Harsh aur Anurag dono is ristey ko swikarte hai)

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ab function ke bad Sujal, Kashish, Rudra, Mehek, Prem, Heer aur Khushi sab log bahar garden me bethe huye hote hai................

Kashish: Prem muje tujse yeh umeed nahi thi..........yeh Rudra to apni manmani karta hai lekin tu to kabhi mujse puche bina koi kaam nahi karta to aaj.........

Prem: woh Bhabhi...........aap hi us din keh rahi thi na.........aur aap subaah subaah sab kaam akeli karte hai to maine socha...............

Heer: kya........tum muje sirf Kashishdii ki madad karne ke liye shaadi kar rahe ho........

Prem: nahi mera matlab woh nahi tha........

Kashish: Prem khabardar aaj ke bad meri devrani ko kuch bhi kaha to........

Rudra: kya Bhabhi .......abhi rishta bana nahi ki aap in dono ki side lene lage.........

Kashish: kyun na loon........bhagwan ne muje itni achchi devrani jo di hai........

Sujal: aur tum dono kan khol ke sun lo.......muje Heer aur Mehek dono me se kisi ke aankh me aanshu nahi chahiye........aaj se tum dono un dono ka pura khayal rakhoge......agar muje pata chala ki tumne un dono ka dil dukhaya to mujse bura koi nahi hoga............

Rudra: dekha Prem........abhi shaadi nahi huyi tab hamara yeh haal hai to shaadi ke baad kya hoga........

Kashish: koi baat nahi Shaadi ke baad main tumhari aur rahungi...........jab bhi tumhare yeh khadus bhai tumhe kuch kahe to muje bata dena.............ise kaise thik karna hai muje bahot achche se aata hai..........

Sujal: tumne muje khadus kaha...........

Kashish: haa kaha.......kyunki aap hai...............

Sujal: main dubara puch raha hoon tumne muje khadus kaha.......

Kashish: haa kabhi aapne apni sakal dekhi hai.........raat ko bache dekhenge to darr jayenge..........

Sujal: Kashish main tumhe aakhri bar keh raha hoon ki aage kuch boli to tumhare liye achcha nahi hoga...........

Kashish:aapko kya lagta hai main aapse darti hoon.........waise aap hai hi darane ki cheez.........kyun Mr. Sujal Garewal.....

Sujal: ruk .........tuje to main abhi dekhta hoon..........

Kashish daud ke ghar ke andar chali jati hai aur unke piche Sujal bhi..........

Khushi: itna waqt hone ke bad bhi aaj bhi aisa lagta hai jaise kal ki baat ho jab yeh dono ne hum sab ke samne apne pyaar ka izhar kiya.........kitne khush hai yeh apni zindagi me...........

Mehek: haa sach kaha..........maine pyaar karnewale bahot dekhe lekin inke jaise koi nahi........pata hai dii jiju ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai lekin jiju pe ek karoch bhi nahi aane degi.......

Rudra: shayad Bhabhi ki waje se muje kabhi Bhai ki fikar nahi hoti...........main kabhi nahi chahunga ki bhai aur bhabhi ke khubsurat rishtey me koi darar aaye.........

Prem: haa bhai.........Sujalbhai aur Bhabhi ke liye main apna sab kuch chod sakta hoon............sab kuch yaha tak ki main yeh shaadi ka rishta bhi.........muje maff kar dena heer lekin.......

Heer: tum kyun mafi mang rahe ho......tumhari jagah me bhi yahi karti..........muje to khushi hai ki main ek aise ghar me ja rahi hoon jaha pe mera honewala pati apne bhai bhabhi se kitna pyaar karta hai.........hum log aap dono ke her ek faisle me aap logo ke saath hai............

Mehek: heer sahi keh rahi hai...........Khushi ab raat kafi ho gayi hai tum bhi jake aaram kar lo..........kal tumhare liye bahot bada din hai............aur hum bhi chalte hai.........

Prem: aaiye main aap dono ko chod deta hoon..........

Mehek: thik hai...............bye........

sab log ek dusre ko bye kehke chale jate hai......................

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Ab chalo dekhte hai Sujal aur Kashish kya kar rahe hai...........Kashish kal subaah shaadi ke liye kapde nikal rahi hoti hai..........jab achanak se apne haath me apni shaadi ka joda leke kuch soch me dub jati hai jab Sujal wash room se bahar aake dekhta hai.........

Sujal: Kashish...........

lekin Kashsih koi jawab nahi deti............

Sujal: kashish.........

kashish: jee kuch kaha aapne.........

Sujal: kab se baat kar raha hoon kaha kho gayi............

Kashish: kuch nahi................bas ise dekh rahi thi...............aaj pata nahi lekin muje apni shaadi ke din yaad aa rahe hai..........

Sujal: tum kaho to kal Khushi ke saath hum bhi phir se shaadi kar lete hai.............

Kashish: nahi main kuch aur soch rahi thi..........

Sujal: ab muje nahi bataogi ki kya soch rahi thi..........

Kashish: aapko nahi kahungi to kise kahungi..............ajeeb lagta hai jab main yeh sochti hoon ki hamara rishta kis dauran bandha...............ab aisa lagta hai ki kahi na kahi koi hai jo har waqt hamari kismat likh raha hai..........maine aapko pane ki umeed hi chod di thi kyunki aap kisi aur ke ho chuke the..........lekin sahi waqt pe sab kuch badal gaya................yeh sab ka hona kuch ajeeb nahi lagta aapko........

Sujal: ajeeb to hoga...........waise maine bhi kabhi nahi socha ........hala ki tumhe pehli nazar me dekhte hi muje tum pasand aa gayi thi ............lekin jo koi bhi hamari kismat likh raha hai woh bhi yahi chahta hai ki hum saath rahe............

kashish: main to kabhi aapse alag hone ka soch bhi nahi sakti..........

Sujal: tumse ek baat puchu.........

Kashish: haa puchiye..........

Sujal: tum muje her waqt aap kehke kyun bulati ho..........

Kashish: to main aapko kya kehke bulau........

Sujal: tum...........tum muje tum kehke bulaogi to muje achcha lagega...........

Kashish: nahi keh sakti.........jante hai kyun........aapko aap kehke bulane ka mann karta hai..........aapko bahot si izzat dene ko mann karta hai........aapko aap kehkar main aapki barbari bhagwan se karti hoon..........ab aap hi bataiye main bhagwan ko kaise tum keh sakti ho..........

Sujal: itni izzat.......itna vishwas........itna pyaar kyun..........

Kashish: kyunki yeh sab aapke dil ke aage bahot chote hai.............yeh jo aapka dil hai na usme itna pyaar bhara hai ki kisi ki nafrat ko bhi aap pyaar me badal sakte hai..........aap se log pyaar karna sikhenge........ab ise aage mujse mat puchiye kyun ki mere pass koi jawaab nahi........ab aap jake aaram kijiye muje kal subaah ki taiyariyan karni hai........

Sujal: kal kaun sa rang pehen ne wali ho..........

Kashish: abhi tai nahi kiya........aap hi bata dijiye...........

Sujal: kal tum green color pehnogi..........

Kashish: lekin mere pass shaadi layak koi green color nahi.......

Sujal: kisne kaha nahi hai......hai to sahi.........

kashish: kaha........

Sujal: ek minute.........

Sujal Kashish ko ek packet deta hai............jinme ek bahot hi khubsurat saari aur ek bahot hi khubsurat diamond set hota hai...........

Kashish: yeh......

Sujal: ghar pe itna khushi ka moka ho aur main apni jaan ke liye kuch na lau............waise pasand aaya.........

Kashish: quite impressive..........lekin mere pass to......maine to aapke liye kuch nahi liya..........

Sujal: kisne kaha kuch nahi.............aur abhi tumne muje thanks bhi nahi kaha...........

Kashish: ab muje aapko bhi thanks karna padega..........

Sujal: haa aur muje kis tarika ka thanks chahiye woh bhi muje pata hai........dekha tumhe sochne ki bhi zaroorat nahi..........

Kashish: kya keh rahe hai aap.........

Sujal: abhi tumhe samjata hoon........

Sujal pehle woh sab kashish ke haath se leke side pe rakh ke Kashish ko uthake Bed pe leke jake light off kar deta hai.................

 



Edited by goodkashish - 29 September 2008 at 9:57pm

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Posted: 29 September 2008 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Hey nice part...........Ab itni saari shaadiyan dekhne ko milengi....Hehehe !!
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Posted: 29 September 2008 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Amazing...............Prem --Heer & Rudra--Mehek r also getting married..... nice to c tht............. GR8 job Kashish.......PLzz continue soon.....Smile
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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 12:21am | IP Logged
hey nice update....

nice to see all the light moments btw skEmbarrassed....

i specially liked this one...


Kashish: aapko nahi kahungi to kise kahungi..............ajeeb lagta hai jab main yeh sochti hoon ki hamara rishta kis dauran bandha...............ab aisa lagta hai ki kahi na kahi koi hai jo har waqt hamari kismat likh raha hai..........maine aapko pane ki umeed hi chod di thi kyunki aap kisi aur ke ho chuke the..........lekin sahi waqt pe sab kuch badal gaya................yeh sab ka hona kuch ajeeb nahi lagta aapko........


looks like u r talking about urself....WinkLOL as the writer has the power to modify the story and to decide what happens next...

take care and continue soonBig smile


Edited by mystified - 30 September 2008 at 8:51am
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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 2:25am | IP Logged
amazing part
i really liked the way u described all the three brothers emotions regarding khushi leaving them.
finally heer and mehak told  kashish that they like the boys cant wait 4 them to get married.
the romantic scenes between SK were really good also the scene were sujal asks kashish why she calls him aap was amazing the answer she gave was really good.
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Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 30 September 2008 at 2:26am
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kashish dear i'am here with my comments on aks.. i hope kii tumko mere comments pasand aaye..sorry dear main woh thoda late hogayi..actually i was caught up with my college work..college waale humari jaan le rahein hai... lekin ab i'am free maine apne saare projects submit kar diye hai.. really very sorry... hope you understand..SmileTongueBig smile
well to start  with jaise theeno bhaiyon ne apna mooh chotta karke rakha tha... i can understand prem,rudra aur sujal bechare are feeling kii unki behen shaddi karke parayi ho jayegi.. lazmi hai kii koi bhii bhai , apni ladli-behen ke liye tho aise hii kuch feel karega... prem aur rudra ke liye khushi woh insaan hai jisse woh dono chidathe hai.. woh insaan hai jiske raksha karne kii kasam woh log har rakhi par lethe hai.. aur sujal ke liye khushi uski beti jaisi hai.. kehne ko tho bhai,behen ka naatha hai sujal aur khushi ke beech ka.. lekin sujal ne khushi ko ek bachchi kii tarah khayal rakha hai.. usne khushi kii dekhbaal ek bade bhai aur ek father figure bankar kiya hai.. i know how difficult it is for sujal,rudra and prem kii woh log khushi se durr rahe.. agar un theeno kii jagah aur koi bhii shaks hotha hai tho i'am sure us insaan ko bhii aise hii lagtha... haan prem ka kehna sahii bhi tho hai why should khushi leave the place jis jagah , jis pariwaar mein woh janmi... jab ek beti ek ghar mein paida hothi hai, tho us beti ka rishtha sabse azeez apne pita aur apne bhai se hotha hai.. uske bhai aur pita us ladki ke suraksha kawach hotha hai.. uske bhai aur pita usse palkon par bitaye rakhthe hai.. us ladki par ek bhii aanch nahii aane dethe, na hii usse ek bhii kharoch lagne dethe..ab jab ussi ladki kii shaddi hothi hai tho woh ladki apne us ghar ko chod kissi aur ka ghar sajane chali jaathi hai..this is the most difficult phase joh ek ladki kii zindagi mein aatha hai.. i know shaddi is a very beautiful, a very sunhera phase in the life of a ladki..lekin this phase along with the happiness brings in so much of sorrow for the girl.. she has leave her family, her home.. everything that belongs to her and leave on a new journey, us insaan ke saath jiska haath us ladki ne thama hotha hai.. it is painful for the girl herself along with the people who are her family.. lekin jaise kashish ne kaha har ladki ke zindagi mein aisa phase tho aana hii hai.. and that girl leaves her world jis mein woh pali-badi hai, to a new home and she will fill in the new home with all the happiness in the world.... woh ladki apne maayke mein khushiyon ke rang bhar kar, agge bad chali apne sasural kii taraf jisse woh apne khushiyon se mehekayegi..i seriously liked the way jaise  kashish ne sujal,prem aur rudra ko yeh baat samjhayi.. haan yeh duniyaan ka dastoor hotha hai..lekin yeh baat un theeno bhaiyon ko kaun samjhayega joh kii apne behen ko usne durr jaane ke baat se hii itne udaas, itne mayoos baite hue hai... aur jaise kashish ne un theeno bhaiyon ke har ek sawaal ka jawaab itne patiently diya.. she explained to them kii woh bhi tho apna ghar chod kar aayi thi.. aur usse anurag , prerna jaise maa aur papa mile.. rudra aur prem jaise do bhai mile.. aur sujal jaisa pyaar karne waala pati mila... haan kashish kii yeh baat bhi sahii hai kii ek ladki ko apne sasural mein woh rishthe milthe hai,joh usse apne mayke mein nahii milthe...maayke se sasural ka safar kitna bhii painful kyun na ho, lekin it is worth it as it gets innumerable happiness.. aur waise bhii kisne keh diya kii ek ladki kii shaddi ke baad uska maayka, uska apna nahii rehtha.. uska maayka uske liye utna hii apna hotha hai jis tarah uske shaddi ke pehle tha... bas farq sirf itna hii hai kii ek ladki kii shaddi ke baad uska maayka aur uska sasural dono hii uske ghar hothe hai..dono hii ghar uske apne hothe hai.. aur uska maayka aur sasural uske bina adhura hotha hai.. mujhe kashish kii baatein bohat achchi lagi.. usne joh kaha woh bilkul sahii kaha..aur jaise sujal,rudra aur prem ne kaha kii agar khushi ko wahaan koi takleef hui tho... is baat par mujhe kashish ka jawaab bada hii achcha laga... usne kaha kii to protect khushi from any type of takleef uske theen bhai hai na..and even this baat is so correct.. just because khushi kii shaddi ho rahii hai, iska matlab yeh tho nahii na kii uske bhai paraye ho gaye hai.. ya iska matlab yeh bhii nahii kii uski shaddi ke baad uske bhai uske nahii rahenge.. tab bhi khushi kii raksha karne ka zimma inhi theen bhaiyon par hii tho hai...waise dekha jaye na tho in theeno bhaiyon ka darr, unke dil kii hesitation is fine.. hart bhai ke dil mein kuch aisi hii baatein hothi hai.. jab uski pyaari si behen shaddi karke pyaari hone jaa rahii hothi hai.. but then kashish ne is situation ko bohat hii achche tareeke se sambhal liya.. woh yeh baat bohat achchi tarah se jaanthi hai kii sujal,rudra aur prem are at a very vulnerable stage at that moment.. aur kashish ne un logon ko bohat hii achche se tackle kiya hai.. shabash kashish.. aur ab mujhe un theeno se kehna hai chalo tum theeno kaam par lag jao aakhir tumhare ek loute behen kii shaddi hai...hehehe.. then the scene of sujal,kashish in their room..kashish ka apne shaddi ke jode ko dekhna.. aur phir uske nazar ke saamne all those moments ka aana... and then sujal ka kashish ko tease karna kii kya woh dubara shaddi karna chahthi hai.. yeh sujal bhi na bohat hii shararthi hogaya hai.. dekho na dubara shaddi agar hogi uski aur kashish kii tho according to him woh dono apne doosre honeymoon par jaa sakthe hai..yeh sujal bhi na usko romance ke alawa kuch bhii nahii soojtha... waise tho sujal kii shararaton par main fulltoo fida.. main qurbaan....then the next day jab the preparations for the shaddi are in full swing...aur kashish ne aakhirkaar mehek aur heer se unke dil kii baat jaan hii li.. chalo achcha hai mehek ne confess kiya kii usse rudra pasand hai aur heer ne bhi ikraar kiya kii usse prem pasand hai.. achcha hai theeno behenein milkar theeno bhaiyon ko sambhal legi.. waise mujhe yeh bhii patah hai kii agar mehek-rudra, prem-heer kii shaddi bhi ho jaye tab bhi prem aur rudra apne bhabhi ko nahii chodenge..they both will need kashish in every small thing..and even mehek aur heer kii bhi yahii haalat hogi.. unka bhi koi kaam nahii hoga without their kashish dii..i'am sure of it... then jab during the function jaise heer aur mehek khushi ko tease karthe hai.. and then rudra aur prem ne apne pyaar ka izhaar kar hii diya mehek aur heer se.. woh bhii gaane ke zariye... coollll..this is just awesome.. sabke saamne rudra-mehek, prem-heer ke liking each other kii baat after all aa hii gayi.. aur jaise sujal rudra aur prem ke kaan pakadtha hai na.. tooo cutee... aur yahan heer aur mehek kii sharam..all this was too good..bohat hii achcha likha hai dear tumne.. mazaa aagaya.. mujhe is baat kii khushi hai kii rudra-mehek, prem-heer ke rishthe ko badon ka aashirwaad mil gaya hai...then the scene outside in the garden jahaan sujal-kashish, prem-heer, rudra-mehek aur khushi hothe hai.. aur jaise sujal mehek aur heer se kehtha hai kii agar rudra aur prem unko sataye tho woh usse kahe he will look after them.. aur is baat par prem aur rudra ka drama aur unke dramatic expression kii abhi unki shaddi hui bhii nahi aur sujal unse aise keh raha hai.. yeh prem aur rudra bhii na dono ke dono nautanki hai.. lekin dono hii bohat hii pyaare hai... ab phir kashish ka kehna rudra aur prem se kii agar sujal un logon se kuch kahe tho woh dono yeh baat usse kahe then kashish ka referring to sujal as khadoos... and then sujal ka poochna kii kashish soch le, warna woh usse chodega nahii... then kashish ka sujal ko chidana... and then sujal ka kashish ko chase karna aur kashish ka bhaagna..yeh sujal,kashish bhi na bachche ke bachche hii rahenge.. shaddi hokar itna waqt hogaya hai lekin ab bhi  na tho in dono ka bachpana kum hua hai aur na hii un dono ka ek doosre ke liye pyaar... kissi kii nazar na lag jaye in dono ko.. waise dekha jaye tho mujhe lagtha hai kii meri hii nazar lag jayegi in dono ko.. dear tum ek kaam karna prerna se kehkar sujal,kashish kii nazar utarwa dena... and then the scene between rudra-mehek , prem-heer & khushi.. unke beech kii baatein.. shows kii woh log sujal,kashish kii kitni zyada izzat karthe hai.. and it also shows kii these people idolize sujal,kashish and their relationship... aur joh baat prem ne kahii kii sujal, kashish ke liye woh apne shaddi thak daav par laga saktha hai.. aur jaise heer aur mehek ne is baat par sehmathi dii all this clearly shows kii sujal,kashish ka saath unke liye kitna zyada zaroori hai..kyunke yeh baat tho wahaan har koi jaantha hai ki sujal kii khushi kashish se hai aur kashish kii khushi sujal se.. sujal , kashish ke bina adhura hau... aur kashish , sujal ke bina aadhuri hai... sujal hai tho kashish haii..sujal nahii tho kashish nahii... and the same vice-versa case with kashish.. sujal,kashish ka rishtha in logon ke liye ek misaal hai... aur phir joh akhri scene tha na sujal,kashish ke beech that was really too sweeettttt... bohat hiii cute.... sujal,kashish ke romance par tho main marr jawaa.. their world begins together & ends together... very well written dear.. the story is progressing very damn well.. mujhe story ka har ek part padkar bohat hiii zyada mazaa aa raha hai..keep up the good work going...
Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming now dear coming to my guess on the next part..well next coming up parts ke liye i think yeh hoga hii khushi kii shaddi kii taiyaariyaan dhoom-dhaam se hone lagegi.. bade hii zoron-shoron se khushi kii shaddi kii arrangements kiya jayega.. and then woh din bhii jald hii aayega jab khushi apna ghar chod kar apne sasural chali jayegi.. khushi kii shaddi ho jayegi... khushi kii shaddi jitni khushiyaan laayegi sab logon kii zindagi mein, utna hii dukh aur akelapan sab mehsoos karenge kyunke khushi un sab ko chod kar spne naye jeevan kii taraf badh chuki hogi.. i think in sab ke beech sujal, kashish ke beech bohat hii saare pyaar ke pal aayenge...there will be many of there lovey-dovey moments.. aur dear i don't know why lekin khushi ke shaddi se mujhe kuch achchi feeling nahii aa rahii hai.. i really don't know why..lekin my gut feel says kii kahiin kuch tho gadbad hone waali hai.. kahiin kuch tho aisa hone waala hai joh nahii hona chahiye.. kahii kuch aisa joh kii ghalat hai... and i think it will be related with khushi.. i think kii shayad rishi ek achcha insaan hoga..lekin his ghar waale will not be good , as they have portayed themselves.. i have this feeling kii kahiin tho kuch ghalat hone waala hai.. tho dear this is my guess for the forth coming parts..tho ab tum mujhe yeh batao kii kya mera yeh guess sahii hai ya ghalat.. mujhe zaroor batana i really want to know.. and dear mujhko yeh bhii batana kii agar mera guess sahii hai tho woh kitne hadh thak sahii hai.. i'll be waiting for your reply....Winkkashish dear please next part jaldi se post karo..i'am waiting very damn eagerly for the next part.. and dear once again i'am really sorry for the late comments..hope you understand... SmileTongueBig smile


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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 5:48am | IP Logged

Kashish, u r too creative MASHALLAH, keep it up!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed

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Posted: 05 October 2008 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
mindblowing part.........................kashishClap...............kitne possessive hai tenno bhai apni behan key liyeCry...........................meri eyes mein ansoo a gayeCry...............................aur shaadi ky itne dinoo bad bhi sujal aur kashish kitna pyaar kar tey hai eik dosrey seEmbarrassed..........................con't soon

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