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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 30)

cute_samrah Goldie

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Posted: 21 September 2008 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
awsome part..................................dono ki lari mein buhat maza aa tha khushi ki shaadi ho rahi hai.........................con't soon

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Posted: 21 September 2008 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 September 2008 at 2:16am | IP Logged
kashish dear tumne apni fanfic continue kar di..and i'am here with my comments..i hope tumko mere comments pasand aaye..Smile well joh bhii tumne starting mein likha hai that is so true.. kehthe hai kii shaddi ke baad betiyaan parayi ho jaathi hai.. lekin yeh tho bas kehne kii baatein hothi hai... kyunke betiyaan tho hamesha hii apne babul kii raniyaan hothi hai.. apne ghar kii rounak hothi hai..jab apne ghar hothi hai us ghar ko khushiyon se bhar dethi hai aur jab uski shaddi hothi hai tab bhi us dusare ghar ko apna bana lethi hai aur usse khushiyon se saja dethi hai.. ek ladki ka hakh jitna apne sasural mein hotha hai utna hii shaddi ke baad bhii apne pita ke ghar mein hotha hai.. i really liked what you have written in the starting... it is so true..they are the realities of the life..which no one can change....and you have expressed them in words very beautifully....Clapwaise the romance between sujal,kashish.. jis tarah kashish , sujal ko chidathi hai, kii he is unromantic, woh budha hogaya hai.. i was laughing at this bit.. un dono kii is tarah ek dusare ko chidane mein hii tho un dono kii jaan basthi hai.... there life is based on these kind of has-mazaak and their  love for each other... i seriously love the relationship which sujal,kashish share... aur jis tarah sujal runs behind kashish & starts tickling her.. awww..kya kahoon iske baare mein ek dum raapchik.. kashish kii sharam, sujal kii shararat... hye...hyeee...kya baat hai... aur jab rudra aur prem aake un dono ko chidathe hai, then the dance challenge.. all this was absolutely fabulous.... yeh kashish, rudra aur prem na khoob jaanthe hai kii sujal ko kis tarah se chidana hai..... aur jaise sujal ne apni challenge poori kii... humare sujal sahab tho poori tarah se chah gaye.. kya baat hai dujal..lage raho...then coming to the talk between sujal & kashish... jahaan sujal ne kashish se durr hone kii baat kii aur uska reply kashish ne jis tarah diya, all this showed kii sujal,kashish ka jeevan ek dusare ke begair adhura hai... sujal hai tho kashish hai, kashish hai tho sujal hai..sujal nahii tho kashish nahii.. aur kashish nahii tho sujal nahii.. this scene showed kii ek dusare ke lite woh dono kya mayine rakhthe hai.... achcha hai they both are thinking about rudra-mehek, prem-heer.... nice....Thumbs Up waise the last scene was very well scripted.... jaise pehle rudra aur prem khushi ko chidane ke liye uske khane mein mirch daal dethe hai... aur kaise sach jaan ne par khuishi un dono ko maaf bhi kar dethi hai.... aur phir joh baatein khushi ne sujal se kahii..those things which she told him really touched my heart... khushi ne joh kaha dil se kaha aur usne sahii kaha hai sujal ne uska apni beti ke jaise khayal rakha hai... sujal hamesha apne se pehle apne pariwaar ke baare mein sochtha hai... he is very close to his family... all this shows the bond each one of them in the house share with one another... seriously i like the bond all of them share... there bond is so strong... it also shows kii un sabki taaqat is in staying together sharing all their happiness as well as sadness.... i just wish and pray kii kabhi bhii in sabke beech koi durriyaan na aaye.. aur un sabke beech ka bond hamesha aise hii bana rahe....Star well next coming up parts ke liye mera guess yeh hoga kii shayadf kashish rudra , mehek, prem, heer se baat karegi and she will try to know kii unke dil mein ek dusare ke liye kya hai..i think before kashish unse pooche she will try to tatol their dil kii baat by indirectly getting the topic of their shaddi and their life partners... aur doosari taraf sujal,kashish ke beech romance hoga.. meeti-meeti nokh-jhonk hogi aur uske alawa rishi aur khushi ke shadii kii taiyaariyaan bade hii zoro-shoron se chal rahii hogi.... and mera dil keh raha hai, my gut feel says kii kahiin kuch tho gadbad hone waala hai..kuch tho ghalat hone jaa raha hai..kuch aisa joh hona nahii chahiye... i don't know kii kya but shayad kuch tho aise hoga which will leave all of them in distress & give them pain & tears.. tho kashish dear this is my guess for the forth coming parts... ab tum mujhe batao kii kya mera yeh guess sahii hai ya phir ghalat... i really want to know...Wink kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna, i'am waiting for the next part very eagerly..SmileTongueBig smile

Edited by sun_423 - 22 September 2008 at 2:17am
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Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 22 September 2008 at 5:58am | IP Logged
amazing parts
i really like the relationship between the brothers and khushi it was really sweet the way they tease each other and then also love each other even more.
hope the family stays together always and also sujals wish of gettin prem and heer,rudra and mehak together comes true.
the way kashish challenged sujal was really good the song was amazing it really went with the scene.

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 22 September 2008 at 5:58am
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Posted: 22 September 2008 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update...........Finally we'll get to c something between Rudra- Mehek n Prem- Heer............. Kashish Sujal dori scene was really very very cute............PLzz continue soon........Smile
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Posted: 23 September 2008 at 8:02am | IP Logged
kashish it was a simply cute n awesome part..................full of emotions love,....................romance of our sk which is evergreenEmbarrassed....................i luv d way u av shown relations .its so ab khushi ki shaadi ke baad orem aur rudr ka no haiWink.........aur kashish ne sujal ko kya dance karwaya just wowLOL...........plz continue soon..n thanx fo this lovely part
mystified Goldie

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Posted: 25 September 2008 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
hi kashish...

this is what i call a 'choooooo chweeet part'EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

this part had maximum sk and i loved it...too good...Clap

nice masti!!!!LOLLOLLOL

the real spice in this story is shanta tai, rudra and prem...sabko tang karte rehte hai...LOL

good going and do continue soonBig smile...
ajnabi_sahil Groupbie

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Posted: 26 September 2008 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Hi Kashish,
Very nice part brilliant writing ...Kashish You are truly a wonderful writer....ClapClap ..masti..emotion and romance sab kuch tha es part mein the scenes were really good  aur yeh Rudra aur Prem bhi naa hamesha Kahsish aur Sujal ko cherte rahte hain...its amazing yaar es family mein sab ek doosre se kitna payar karte hain, I m eagerly awating the nex partt ...plz continue soon
take care

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