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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 30)

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Posted: 20 October 2008 at 12:48am | IP Logged
wooooooowwwwww kashish really nice part......................buhat acha laga jab teeno bhai khushi kay ghar jate hai..........................i love the chemistry between sujal kashish....................ab to heer aur mehak ki bhi shaadi ho rahi hai............................really nice........................con't soon

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Posted: 20 October 2008 at 8:54am | IP Logged
wow lovely part ab toh inki vrat ka time hai cont soon
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kashish dear i'am here with my comment on aks... sorry itne din se comment nahii karr paayi thi.. woh main thoda sa busy hogayi thi... ab chalo comment likhna shuru karthi hoon..Smile to ab woh din bhii aagaya jis din khushi kii shaddi hone waali hai... well is din se hii tho khushi ke woh theeno bhai durr bhaag rahe the... sujal, prem aur rudra apni behen se kabhi alag nahii hona chahthe hai.. chahe log kitna hii kyun na samjhaye un theeno ko kii yeh tho dastoor hotha hai jahaan ek ladki ko apna ghar chod kar doosre ghar jaana hotha hai...  lekin yeh baat un bhaiyyon ke dil ko samjhayega.. they know it is the fact of life, they know kii khushi ek na ek din unko chod kar apne ghar chali jayegi.. lekin phir bhi bhi i'am sure they are still not able to come to terms with the fact kii khushi unko chod kar chali jaayegi.. zaahir si baat hai, bachpan se yeh theen bhai apni behen kii raksha karr rahe hai.. aur aaj jaakar yeh haath kissi aur ke haathon mein dena, un theeno ke liye hii thoda sa mushkhil hoga na.. but still i can see kii sujal, rudra and prem are putting up a brave front.. aur apne kaamon mein apne dard ko chupa rahe hai... the scene where khushi taiyaar ho rahii hothi hai, aur kashish, heer aur mehek uski madat karr rahe hothe hai.. aur joh baatein hothi hai un chaaron ke beech.. khushi joh waada chahthi hai kashish se... all these talks seriously touched by heart... mujhe tho yeh scene padkar ek dum se rona bhi aagaya... aur kashish bhi khushi se kehthi hai kii woh apna vadaa nibhayegi... chalo achcha hai.. atleast khushi us ghar se bina chinta ke jaa sakthi hai.. kyunke woh yeh baat tho jaanthi hai kii uske jaane ke baad us ghar ko sambhal ne waale,uske bhaiyon ko sambhal ne waale, uske parents ko apne maa, baba samaj waale uski bhabhiyaan hai, aur khushi ko yeh yakeen bhi hai kii woh log yeh kaam bohat hii achche tarike se karenge.... tho khushi apni shaddi ko lekar thodi si nervous hai.. khushi ka nervous hona tho lazmi hai na, aakhirkaar har ladki nervous hothi hai.. us ladki ko apna ghar, apne rishthe sab peeche chod kar ek nayi duniyaan mein kadam rakhna hotha hai tho nervous hona tho bohat hii common si baat hai.. i'am glad kii kashish, heer aur mehek are giving khushi the support that she needs at that time... aur phir jab wahaan sujal, rudra aur prem aathe hai.. woh theenon  apne dukh ko chupa kar chehre par ek fake smile rakhte hai..  aur ab bhi rudra aur prem  khushi ko tang karthe hai.. this is just so that they can hide their pain, i'am sure of it.. aur phir sujal, khushi kii woh emotional baatein... yeh sab mere dil ko choo gaye.. very well portrayed emotions.... then even anurag is trying to hide his emotions.. sachchi jab ek beti, shaddi karke doosre ghar jaathi hai, tab sabko kitna dukh hotha hai... and then finally the baraat has arrived.. i'am sure jaise, jaise waqt guzar raha hai khushi ka dil tho baita hii jaa raha hotha hai.. and then shaddi ke time kanyadaan ke waqt khushi ka kehna kii woh chahthi hai kii anurag, prerna ke saath, saath sujal,kashish bhi uska kanyadaan kare.. haan sahii bhi hai yeh baat sujal ke liye khushi uski chotti gudiya, uski beti se kumm thode na hai... aur phir shaddi ho jaathi hai.. aur khushi ka bidaai ka waqt bhi aa jaatha hai... aur yahaan sujal mahashay bidaai ke waqt gayab ho jaathe hai..ab khushi ka going to meet sujal... aur phir sujal aur khushi ke beech kii baatein.. yeh sab padkar tho bina ehsaas ke mere aankhon se aasoo behne lag gaye.. i  never realized kii main ro rahii hoon.. the bond which khushi and sujal share is very damn good... finally even sujal apne dil kii baat bayaan karr raa hai.. his dukh has come out.... and then after all the rona, khushi kii bidaai bhii ho jaathi hai.. the three brothers would have parted ways from their sister bohat hii mushkhil se, i'am sure of it...  then the agli subaah ka scene, jahaan breakfast table par sujal, prem aur rudra mein se kissi ka bhi khaane ka mann hii nahii hotha.. woh log khushi ko joh miss karr rahe hothe hai... aur phir jab kashish unhe batathi hai kii un theeno ko khushi ko laane jaana hai rasam ke liye, jis tarah kii chamak aathi hai un theeno ke chehre par..kya baatun is baare mein... too sweettt... aur ab tho prem aur rudra kii shaddi kii baat bhi agge badh rahii hai.. me tho bohat hii zyada khush...aur kashish us ghar kii badi bahu hone ka farz kie achche se nibha rahii hai.. woh sabki chotti, badi zaroorat ka khayal rakh rahii hai.. bohat achche...  and then sujal, prem, rudra going to khushi's house..aur wahaan yeh theen bhai aur unki behen kii aankhon ka bhar aana.. they are so attached to each other.. inke bhai-behen ke rishthe ko kabhi kissi kii nazar na lage.. waise jaise woh kangan dekhkar vasu react karthi hai na, mujhe lagtha hai kii  kuch tho gadbad hai khushi ke sasural mein.. woh log jaise dikhthe hai, waise hai nahi.. unka asli rang kuch aur hii hai aisa mujhe lagtha hai... then khushi ka  apne ghar aana.. wahaan tho sab log bade khush hothe hai... this shows kii un logon kii khushiyaan ek dusare par dependent hai.. aur ek shaks bhi na ho tho yeh khushi kum ho jaathi hai... aur  phir khushi apne ghar wapas chali bhi jaathi hai in the evening... aur ab agle din kashish aur sab log , kashish ke maayke ke liye nikal jaathe hai prem aur rudra ka rishta tay karne ke liye.. aur jis tarah se kashish bell bajathi hai na, aur joh jawaab woh sujal ko dethi hai, yeh kashish na abhi thak bachchi hii hai.. shaddi ko itna waqt ho gaya hai, lekin ab bhi sharat karne nahii bhooli hai... and then  finally rudra aur prem ka rishtha tay ho jaatha hai... unki sagayi kii date bhii final ho jaathi hai.. chalo yeh tho bohat hii achchi baat hui... aur joh un sabke beech baatein hothi hai woh bhi bohat hii achcha tha... kashish kitni zimedaar ho gayi  hai... woh apna har farz itne achche se nibhathi hai... uske koi bhi rishthe mein kami nahii rehthi.. aur yeh sab mumkin hotha hai sirf aur sirf sujal ke saath, uske pyaar kii wajah se... very good yaar.. absolutely rocking parts.. waise beech mein joh sujal, kashish ka romance tha.. where sujal tells kashish kii he thinks it is time kii woh dono, do se theen ho jaye... pehle kashish ka mana karna.. sujal ka thoda naraaz hona.. and then kashish ka telling him something like if sujal wants something tho how will she deny him.. indirectly hinting that she is ready for the baby... awwwww... mazaa aagaya.. lovely, superb, fantastic, excellent, par excellence, brilliant, marvelous, amazing, awesome, bindaas, jhakkas, raapchik, dhassu... hyee.. hyee.. sujal, kashish ke romance par main fulltoo dida... main qurbaan...absolutely mind blowing parts.. i really liked reading them..... the emotions were perfect to the "T"... Star dear now coming to my guess on the forth coming parts... for the coming up parts first of all next part mein bohat saari khushiyaan hongi... karwachauth hoga... aur kashish tho anyway fast rakhegi, lekin sujal bhii kashish ko bina bataye fast rakhega... har taraf khushiyaan hii khushiyaan hongi... sujal, kashish ke beech mein thoda emotional talk bhii hoga.. aur mere hisaab se tho the next part has loads of romantic  moments between our sweet couple sujal, kashish.. ched- chaad, masti-dhamaal sab kuch chaltha hii rahega... aur mere khayal se ab next part se we will get to see the true colors of rishi's family.. meri intution yeh kehthi hai kii rishi ek achcha insaan hai, lekin uske ghar waale are wicked... especially his mother and sister.. i may be wrong i don't know..  tho dear this is my guess for the coming up parts tho tumhe kya lagtha hai mera yeh guess sahii hai ya nahii.. mujhe zaroor batana.. i really want to know....Wink kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna.. me waiting for the next part very eagerly..... 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Edited by sun_423 - 22 October 2008 at 6:03am
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Part-30

Aaj ki raat woh raat thi jiska her shaadi shuda aurat ko her saal uska besabri se intzaar rehta hai............kehte hai ki Karva Chuth ke vrat se patni aur pati ka bandhan aur bhi majbut ho jata hai...........aaj wahi aash leke Kashish bhi apne pati apne pyaar ke liye karva chauth ka vrat rakhnewali hai...........Raat ko hi Prerna ne Khushi, Mehek aur Heer ko Garewal House bula liya hota hai kyunki subaah me suraj nikalne se pehle unhe sargi deni hoti hai............ab subaah ke panch baje hote hai..........jab Khushi Kashish ke kamre pe knock karti hai............

Sujal: itni raat ko kaun hai...

Kashish: koi nahi aap so jaiye........woh mere liye aayi hai.......woh mama ne bulaya hai...........

Kashish jake darwaza kholti hai........

Khushi: Mama ne aapko neeche bulaya hai aadhe ghante me ..........

Kashish: main abhi taiyaar hoke aati hoon.........

Khushi: jaldi aana.........

Kashish taiyaar hone bathroom me chali jati hai.........aur phir neeche chali jati hai jaha pe sabhi hote hai..........

Mehek: dii......aap lagta hai raat bhar thik se soyi nahi........

Heer: jiju ne sone diya hoga tab na.........

Kashish: ek bar tum dono ki shaadi ho jane do phir pata lagega........aur ab aage kuch nahi ......woh mama aur Tai aa rahe hai............

Prerna: are tum log khade kyun ......betho aur jaldi apni sargi khao......

Khushi: mama.........lekin aap bataiye to sahi yeh Sargi kya hoti hai...........

Prerna: sargi woh hoti hai jisme chupa hota hai ek saans ka apni bahu ki prati pyaar......woh saans jo apni bahu ki maa se vaada karke layi hoti hai ki uski beti ka pura khayal rakhegi use bahu nahi beti banake rakhegi........woh saans apni beti jaisi bahu ko kaise bhukhi rakh sakti hai.........isi liye aaj ke din ek saans apni bahu ko sargi deti hai.............

Khushi; lekin meri sargi.......

Shanta Tai: kal raat ko tere ghar se aa gayi thi...........ab tum sab waqt barbad mat karo aur khao......pata nahi phir kab khane ko mile.................

sab log khane lagte hai..........

Heer: Mama...kuch aur bataiyena Karva Chuth ke bare me.........

Kashish: mama aap bhi apni sargi kha lijiye.........Heer main batati hoon ki hum Karwa Chuth kyun rakhte hai...........Karva chuth woh hai jisse ek patni ka bhagwan ke vishwas ke saath apni pati se aur bhi ghehra bandhan ban jata hai...........aaj ke din Pati ka sthan hum bhagwan ke saath mante hai is liye aaj ke din hum apne pati ki puja karte hai............aaj ke din hum bhagwan se jo bhi mangege woh hume dete hai aur isi liye aaj ke din her patni apne pati ki lambi umar ki dua mangti hai...............sahi kaha na maine mama..........

Prerna: tu to kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti............

Kashish: mama aap bhi na......

Shanta Tai: ab jaldi se khatam karo abhi sab ko mandir bhi jana hai puja ke liye...........

sab log sargi khake mandir ke liye nikal jate hai...............

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ab kareeban do ghante bad sab wapas aate hai...........Kashish Sujal ko uthane apne kamre me aati hai..............

Kashish; Sujal..........chaliye jaldi se uthiye...........aath bajnewale hai............

Sujal: bas do minute.....

Kashish: nahi......phir aap ko dairi hogi to aap mujpe chilayenge.......

Sujal: main tumpe chilata hoon.........

Kashish: haa..........jab aap dair se uthte hai to...........kashish meri tie nahi mil rahi..........kashish mere joote kaha hai..........kashish meri red wali file nahi hai........kashish mera wallet nahi mil raha............kashish tumne meri ghadi dekhi..........kashish meri car ki chabiyaan..........uff.......ek saans me kitne sawaal karte hai aap........aap ke saath aap muje bhi pagal karte hai..........

Sujal hasne lagta hai........

Kashish: ab aap has kyun rahe hai.........

Sujal: kuch nahi tum nahi samjogi.............waise aaj itni sawarke subaah subaah kaha gayi thi.........

Kashish: aap ko kuch bhi yaad nahi rehta..........aaj karva chuth hai aur main sargi khane ke bad sab ke saath mandir hoke aa rahi hoon..............ab aap jaldi se uthiye muje aur bhi bahot se kaam hai.........

Sujal: haa tumhare bechare is pati ke liye tumhare pass waqt hi kaha bacha hai...........sara waqt to tum ghar ke kaamo me nikal deti hoon........Mama ke saath kitchen me.......papa ke saath kabhi chess ke khel me......kabhi Rudra to kabhi Prem...........ab muje hi lagta hai mere liye koi dusri lana padega........

Kashish: hey..........aaj keh diya to keh diya.........meri saut laoge ti main aapke saath uska bhi khoon kar dungi aur bad me apna............

Sujal: itni jalan..........

Kashish: isse bhi jyada...........aap pe sirf mera hakk hai sirf mera............Sujal sirf Kashish ka hai.......baat samaj me aa gayi ho to aap bathroom me jane ka kasht karenge..........

Sujal: waise tumne sahi kaha............main tumhara hoon to tum bhi meri huyi .........

yeh kehte hi Sujal Kashish ka haath pakad ke use apni aur bed pe khichta hai.......

Kashish: Sujal...chodiye kya kar rahe hai........ghar pe itne sare log hai..........

Sujal: woh to ghar pe hai na.......yeh hamara bedroom hai........

Kashish: to iska matlab aap jo chahe woh kar sakte hai......

Sujal: haa main jo chahe apni jaan ke saath kar sakta hoon.............

Kashish: ab abhot mazak ho gaya...........chodiye muje waise bhi dair ho jayegi........muje abhi papa ka breakfast banana hai...........

Sujal: mera..........

Kashish: aap bhi khayenge aaj..........muje laga ki aap bhi mere liye karva chauth rakhenge........

Sujal: main kyun.........aur waise bhi yeh to patni apne pati ke liye karti hai to main kyun karoon aur tum to janti ho muje khaye bina nahi raha jata..............

kashish: yeh bhi sahi hai...........ab aap jaiye na..........

Sujal: pehle meri morning kiss.........

kashish: aaj raat ko de dungi..........

Sujal: iska matlab double......

Kashish: haa double........promise me nahi bhulungi...........

Sujal: main bhulne bhi nahi dunga............thik hai main chalta hoon..........mere kapde nikal dena aur kuch special woh aaj ek bahot hi important meeting hai meri............

Kashish: jee............

Ab Sujal nahane chala jata hai............aur Kashish sab kuch taiyaar karke neeche aati hai.............

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Ab Sujal, Anurag, Prem, Rudra, Prerna aur Maya sabhi dining table pe beth ke intzaar kar rahe hote hai.................

Anurag: prerna..........nasta kab milega.....dairi ho rahi hai......

Prerna: abhi milega...........aaj aapko bahot hi achcha nasta milnewala hai............aapki char betiyaan jo bana rahi hai............

Prem: tab to main chala........main office me kar lunga..........

Anurag: oye beth.........aisa nahi kehte.........unme se do teri bhabhiyaan hai.............

Prem: main to Heer aur Khushi ki baat kar raha tha..............

Rudra: waise muje shak Mehek pe bhi hai............

Sujal: shut up.......jab dekho bechari ki burai hi karte rehte ho.................

Rudra: bhaiyaa Ram hum aapki Sita ke bare me nahi apne bare me baat kar rahe hai.......

Sujal: mama.........aap inki jaldi se shaadi kara do isse pehle yeh dono pagal ho jaye...........

Prem: Pagal hum nahi aap ho gaye hai Shaadi ke bad.........jabse Kashishbhabhi yaha aaye hai aap to kisi aur pe dhyan hi nahi dete........

Sujal: aisa kuch nahi......

Rudra: to aapne parso ki match kyun miss ki..........kyunki aap Bhabhi ke saath bahar gaye the...............

Sujal: ek bar teri shaadi hone de phir pata chalega.........kyun Papa.......

Anurag: haa.........shaadi koi mazak nahi...........patni ko khush rakhna bhi ek jimedari ka kaam hai aur yeh main aur Sujal hi jan sakte hai................

jab charo ladkiyaan nasta leke bahar aati hai...............

Anurag: kya baat hai khusboo to bahot achchi aa rahi hai..........Prerna main na kehta tha ki hum naseebdar hai jinhe itni pyari char char betiyaan mili..........

Prerna; haa woh to hai...........sach me hum to kismat wale hai ki hume teen bahu beti ke roop me mili..........

Sujal: mama........yeh sab baatein karke inhe apne sir mat chadao.........

Shanta Tai: tum teen kamchor beto se meri betiyaan so guna achchi hai...........

jab Sujal ke cell pe phone aata hai...........

Sujal: thik hai main abhi nikalta hoon..............bye.......

Rudra: kya hua Bhai sab thik to hai.......

Sujal: haa sab thik hai woh mere PA ka phone tha ki meeting se pehle kuch discuss karna hai is liye muje nikalna hoga................bye......

Kashish: lekin aapka nasta to karte jaiye.........

Sujal: nahi muje dair ho rahi hai..........main office me kar lunga........

Kashish: achcha suniye........yaad karke kar lijiye aur sham ko aapko jaldi aana hai ..........

Sujal:ok bye............

Sujal waha se chala jata hai............

Rudra: kuch sikho Kashishbhabhi se.......kitna khayal rakhti hai Bhabhi Sujalbhai ka.........aur tum teeno.......

Prem: sahi kaha aapne..........kuch kaam hi nahi karti.........aaj bhi sara nasta bhabhi ne hi banaya hoga.........

Kashish: khabrdar aaj ke bad meri behen aur meri dono devrani ko kuch kaha to...........

Shanta Tai: ab ladna bandh karo aur jaldi se nasta karke tum dono office niklo........

sab log nasta karke office chale jate hai.....

Sujal jab office pahunchta hai to apne PA se milta hai........

Sujal: Thank you muje call karne ke liye..........

PA; lekin sir aapne aisa kyun kaha..........

Sujal: woh bas maine subaah subaah mazak me keh diya ki main koi karva chuth nahi karnewala lekin actually maine bhi kuch nahi khane ka faisla liya hai is liye mera bhi vrat hai............aur agar main use bata deta to woh muje apni kasam deke bhi khilati is liye............

PA; kitna pyaar karte hai aap Kashishmam se..............

Sujal: pata nahi.......lekin ab hum kaam kare..................

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ab aise hi dekhte shaam ho jati hai.........Kashish apne kamre me taiyaar ho rahi hoti hai jab Sujal office se wapas aata hai.............

Kashish: aaj ka din kaisa tha...........

Sujal: bahot busy........

Kashish: lunch thik se kiya........

Sujal: haa.........

Kashish: waise aaj maine tumhari favorite dish banayi thi............aapko pasand aayi........

Sujal: bahot pasand aayi..........

Kashish: jooth........aapne aaj lunch kiya hi nahi kyunki maine koi lunch nahi bheja.........

Sujal; woh Kashish........

Kashish: aapne vrat rakha hai........mere liye aur aapne muje hi batana sahi nahi samja.............lekin muje batana to chahiye tha.....

Sujal; agar bata deta to vrat rakhne ka koi matlab hi nahi banta........

Kashish: isi liye aap naste kiye bina hi chale gaye aur office ka bahana nikala taki muje kuch pata na lage............aapne subaah se kuch nahi khaya na........aapko bahot pyaas lagi hogi office ke baad.......

Sujal; nahi Kashish ab to vrat tutega chand ko dekhne ke bad hi........

Kashish ki aankh se aanshu behne lagte hai........

Sujal: hey,,,,,,,,,,main apne chand pe aanshu nahi dekh sakta........ab ple ro mat.......tum janti ho na........

Kashish: I love you Sujal.......

yeh kehte hi Kashish Sujal ke gale lag jati hai......

Sujal: i love my chand too.........(whispers) ..........Kashish........chand nikal aaya..........

Kashish: kaha......

Sujal Kashish ko aaine ke pass le jata hai.........

Sujal; woh raha mera chand............waise tumhe nahi lag raha ki aaj mera chand kuch jyada hi khubsurat lag raha hai..........

Kashish: kya baat hai Mr. Sujal Garewal bahot romantic ho rahe hai.........

Sujal: pata nahi aaj kuch jyada hi pyaar aa raha hai tumpe........mann kar raha hai tumhe dekhta hi jau aur dil se tarif karta jau........agar zindagi me muje kabhi bhi kuch ho jaye to tum dukhi mat hona aur aise hi sajte rehna warna meri aatma ko bahot taklif hogi..........

Kashish: chodiye muje.........

Sujal; kya hua.....

Kashish: muje aapki yeh baat bilkul achchi nahi lagti..........aaj ke din bhi..........

Kashish gusse me uthke khidki ke pass chali jati hai...........aur sujal uske piche jata hai..........

Sujal (whispers in her ear): main to sirf mazak kar raha tha......sorry.....abhi to hum so saal saath me jine wale hai.......aise kaise tumhara picha chod doon.......abhi to hume saath me bahot kaam karne hai..........12 bacho ki team banani hai......bada karna hai sabhi ko padhna hai.....unki shaadiyaan karani hai.........business ko sambhalne ke liye kabil banana hai aur uske bad jab main retire hoga tab ........hum budhe ho jayenge tab tum aur main durr seher se durr pahadi pe ek chota sa gharr banake rahenge.........aur phir hum dono ke alawa koi tisra nahi hoga.......sirf main aur tum pure waqt akele ghar me........aur hum woh pehle budhe honge jo apne dusre honeymoon pe jayenge.............

Kashish hasne lagti hai..........

Kashish: aap bhi na.........kuch bhi.......

Sujal:are hum to prem ke deewane hai aapke deewane hai..........hum aapko chod ke gaye to yeh aapki chudiyaan thode hi hume jane degi..........tumhari chudiyon ki khanak se mere dil ki aawaz judi hai........aise to yeh rishta tut nahi sakta..............

Kashish: ho gaya Mr. Sujal Garewal........ab main taiyaar ho jati hoon muje dair ho rahi hai............

Sujal: mam.......aaj aapko Mr. Sujal Garewal taiyaar karenge.........

Sujal Kashish ko uske zumke pehnata hai,,,,,,,,,,phir use necklace pehnata hai............phir Sujal Kashish ko uska mangalsutra pehnata hai aur bad main uski mang sindoor se bahr deta hai.........

Sujal: janti ho......jab tum neeche jaogi na to sab ki nazar tum pe hogi.........kyunki aaj tumhari khubsurati ko tumhare pyaar ne sajaya hai...........

Kashish sharmake Sujal ke gale lag jati hai........

Sujal: waise kashish muje pata hai.....ki tumhe mere gale lagne ka shukh hai lekin abhi muje taiyaar hona hai..........

Kashish: woh main bhul gayi..........aap taiyaar ho jaye main aapke kapde nikal deti hoon..................

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ab thodi dair bad sab log hall me bethe chand ka intzaar kar rahe hote hai..............ab to pure sinha family aur Raheja family bhi aa gayi hoti hai ..........aur seher ke sabhi dost aur rishtedar bhi............

Anurag: abhi chand ko nikalne me to thoda waqt hai..........aur yaha aurato ke bhukhe pet chand ka intzaar karna muskil ho raha hai to......kuch gaane ho jaye......

Rudra; haa papa....aaj to kuch aisa ho jaye ki sara seher dekhta reh jaye.........

Prem: aur uske liye mere pass ek mindblowing idea hai...........aaj hamari pyari Kashishbhabhi Sujalbhai ke liye kuch gayegi............

Kashish; Prem pagal ho gaye ho........itne logo ke beech............

Rudra: galat kya keh raha hai.........kuch kahiye na Sujalbhai aap.......

Sujal;ab sab itna keh rahe hai to kuch ga dona..............

Kashish: ab aapko kaise na keh sakti hoon............

Rudra: oye hoye kya baat hai Bhabhi............

Sujal: woh hum dono ki kuch setting hai.......tu abhi bahot chota hai.........

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Mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam (Kashish Sujal ki aur apna haath badhati hai)
Tere naam se shuroo tere naam pe khatam (Sujal apna haath Kashish ke haath me deta hai)
Tere khushi se hai khushi tere gham se hai gham (Sujal Kashish ke aankh se behte huye aanshu ko pochta hai)
Tere naam se shoroo Tere naam pe khatam (Kashish apna sir sujal ke kandhe pe rakh deti hai)
Mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam (Sujal Kashish ke sir ko sehlata hai)

Tum dekhogi jigar jigar nazar aaoonga (Jab bahar chand nikal aata hai)
Tere dil se nikalke Na dhoor jaoonga (sab log bahar jate hai kashish sabse pehle chand ki puja karti hai)
Yeh pyaare pyaare lamhe sa donge har kadam (Phir Kashish Sujal ki puja karti hai)
Tere naam se shuroo tere naam pe khatam (Kashish chhali me se Sujal ko dekhti hai)
Mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam (Kashish sujal ke pair chune jati hai lekin Sujal use mana karta hai)

Tere peeche chalegi meri parchayiyaan (Sujal Kashish ko pani pilata hai lekin Kashish pehle Sujal ko pilati hai)
Meri yaadein cheen lengi Teri tanhaayiyaan (Sujal Kashish ko khana khilata hai lekin phir bhi Kashish pehle Sujal ko deti hai)
Mera chehraa rahega palkon mein sanam (Sujal Kashish ke chehre ki khushi dekhta hai jo kuch aur hi rang bata rahi thi)
Tere naam se shuroo tere naam pe khatam (sujal aur kashish ek dusre ke gale lagte hai)

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Rudra; hmm,........hmmm........

Sujal: tujse meri khushi dekhi nahi jati kya........ab to teri bhi mangetar hai jana tu uske pass.........

Rudra: lekin yeh aap sabke samne kya ho raha tha.......

Kashish: kuch bhi nahi...........

Khushi: waise bhabhi aap vrat todne se pehle sab kuch Bhai ko kyun khila rahi thi........................

Prem: Bhabhi check kar rahi hogi ki khana khane layak to hai.........

Kashish: aisi koi baat nahi............aaj tumhare bhai ne bhi mere liye vrat rakha hai....unhone bhi subaah se kuch nahi khaya............aur agar aaj main Sujal se pehle pani pi leti to mera karwa chuth kabhi pura nahi hota......patni kaise kha sakti hai jab uska pati bhukha ho..........mujse yeh paap nahi ho sakta.......isi liye maine jo kiya woh muje sahi laga aur sabhi aurat ko aise hi karna chahiye........

Mehek: lekin Dii......sabhi aap ki tarah lucky nahi hote......yeh mahasay jab se office se aaye hai muje pareshan karne ke liye kuch na kuch mere samne khaye ja rahe hai.............

Sujal: dusro ka pata nahi lekin maine is liye vrat rakha hai ki main akela 100 saal jike kya karunga...........mere saath denewali bhi to chahiye.............isi liye main chahta hoon ki main jab tak jiu kashish mera saath de...........aur mere jane ke bad bhi..........

Kashish: kitni bar muje aapko batana hoga ki aisi baatein mat kijiye............lekin aap to sunte hi nahi..........muje is bare me mama se aapki sekayat karni hogi........

Sujal: ab aage nahi hoga..........ab aajke din aise naraz nahi rehte..........aur waise bhi muje bahot bhukh lagi hai............aur mera manna hai ki bhukhe pet dard hota hai.........to kashish mera dard shuru ho raha hai.........abhi pet se leke upper aa raha hai..........

Kashish: aapna bache ke bache hi rahenge..................chaliye main aapka khana laga deti hoon...........

Prem: aur Bhabhi mera......

Kashish: tuje denewali hai....use keh ab..........ab mera picha chod..............

yeh kehke sabhi andar dinner ke liye chale jate hai.............


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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 2:16am | IP Logged
hey a really cute part ab mujhe lagta hai ki sk ko 2 se 3 hojani chaiye wat say cont soon
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lmao.....hehehe!! it was a cute part..........!

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awesome job!Big smile very cute!
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Posted: 28 October 2008 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
awesome part kashish
i really loved the way u potrayed the love between kashish and sujal it was amazing.
the way u showed how important karvachaut is and why it is kept was really good.
i really enjoyed the song u added in the part it really went with the whole part and it was really intresting.
the way u showed how sujal also kept the vrat 4 kashish showed how much he loves her and cant live without her.

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