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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 2)

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Part-1

Subaah ki pehli kiran ek chote se ghar pe girti hai.......jaha Subaah Subaah ek ladki apne ghar ke aangan me Tulsi ko pani pila rahi hoti hai.........Jab hum ghar me andar jake dekhte hai to ek aurat chai ka cup leke ek aadmi ko deti hai.......

Aurat: Harsh.........yeh aap subaah subaah me kya leke beth gaye........

Harsh: Nandini.........yaha betho........apne bacho ka bachpana tumhe dikhata hoon........

Nandini: bache kitne jaldi bade ho jate hai aur hume pata bhi nahi chalta na......

Harsh: abhi aisa lag raha hai ki kuch saalo pehle hamarai shaadi huyi thi.......aur aaj betiyaan shaadi ke layak ho gayi hai........

Nandini: in tasvir me kitni khubsurat lag rahi hai na teeno........

Harsh: yeh dekho sabse choti meri beti Heer.........jo din me bhi sapne dekhti rehti hai...........lekin nandini janti ho yeh ladki kabhi apne aap ko dukhi nahi hone degi........her waqt bas apni hi choti si duniya me khush rahegi......

Nandini: aur yeh hamari mehek........jo bilkul us gulab ki mehek ki tarah hai........jo her waqt sharm ki haya me hi rehti hai......pata nahi kab yeh ladki apni palke uthake duniya ka samna karna shikhegi......

Harsh: Lekin hamari ek aur beti hai ........jo duniya me sir uthake jiti hai.........Hamari beti Kashish.......

Nandini: hai to woh hamari beti lekin bete ki tarah her jimedari ko nibhati aa rahi hai........

Harsh: yaad hai woh aayi thi hamare ghar me suraj ki pehli roshni ki tarah aur aaj bhi Suraj ki roshni se woh apne din ki shuruaat karti hai............

Jab ek ladki apna dupatta thik karti huyi market ja rahi hoti hai........

Nandini: Hamari Kashish woh hai jo apne liye kuch nahi mangti..........sab kuch woh apne parivar ke liye hi karti hai.......

Jab ek ladki ke paayal ki chan chan aur haath me khankti choodiyaan hum dekhte hai.......

Harsh: aaj bhi pata nahi Subaah Subaah kaun sa kaam karne chali gayi...........

Nandini: Market gayi hai keh rahi thi koi kaam hai............

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Ladki: Bhaiyaa.........yeh bengan kitne ke hai.......

Bhaiyaa: aji aaj aap aloo nahi lenge kya......

Ladki: jee nahi.........aaj Papa ka promotion honewala hai aur isi khushi pe main sab papa ki pasand ka khana bananewali hoon........lekin aap bataiye kaise diye........

Bhaiyaa: 20 rupee kilo.......

Ladki: 20 rupee........aap ke bhav kuch badh nahi gaya..............main aage jake kisi aur se le lungi.......

Bhaiyaa: aap se kya subaah subaah ladna......aap to hamare badi behen ki tarah hai.....achcha ab 15 rupee ke deta hoon.....

Ladki: yeh huyi na baat..........laiye jaldi se abhi muje bahot se kaam hai............

Ladki sabzi leke ja rahi thi jab woh mithai ke dukan ke pass ruk jati hai..........

Ladki: chacha........ek kilo rasgulla dena......

Chacha: kya baat hai bitiya.....aaj bahot khush lag rahi ho.....

Ladki; haa ........aaj papa ko promotion milnewala hai.....isi khushi me aaj ghar me sab papa ki pasandi ka khana bannewala hai........ab aap jaldi se dijiye...........Papa ka office jane ka waqt ho gaya hai.......

Chacha: abhi leta hoon.........

Thodi dair bad woh ladki sab saman leke ghar pahonchti hai..........

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Jab woh apni beheno ke kamre me jati hai to dekhti hai ki abhi bhi woh dono so rahi hoti hai........woh jake zor se chadar khichti hai......

Dono: Kashish Dii...............

Jab woh ladki mudti hai aur hum dekhte hai ki woh Kashish hoti hai........

Kashish: subaah ke nauv baj gaye hai aur tum log abhi bhi so rahi ho......jaldi karo Papa ko good luck nahi kehna ...........

Heer: good morning........zasi ki rani...........

Kashish: Heer......tu subaah subaah hi shuru ho gayi......chal ab jaldi se uth........

Heer: jati hoon na.......

Mehek: Good Morning Dii......

Kashish: good morning.....main janti hoon ki kal raat tu dairi tak kaam kar rahi thi lekin abhi uth........papa bas nikalne hi wale hai.....

Mehek: main bas panch minutes me aati hoon...........

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bahar Hall me Harsh aur Nandini apni betiyon ka intzaar kar rahe hote hai...........

Harsh: aaj main dair se nahi jana chahta.......aaj muje kitne saalo baad promotion milnewala hai.......aaj yeh sab Garewal Sir ki badolat hai.........muje dair ho rahi hai ......yeh ladkiyaan bhi......

Nandini: aap bhi na hamesha apni ladkiyon ke chehre ko dekhe bina kahi nahi jate......ek din woh sab paraye ghar chali jayegi........

Teeno ladki sidiyaan utar ke aati hai......

Kashish: main apne Papa ko chod ke kahi nahi jaungi.........

Sampada: agar beta hota to kahi nahi jati........yaad rakhna betiyaan parayi hoti hai......

Heer: Chachi kyun khushiyon ke moke pe aisi baatein kar rahi hai.......

Sampada: apni had me reh.....

Mehek: Heer......aaj ke din mat shuru ho jana............

Heer: thik hai.......lekin papa.......aaj ke aapke promotion ke baad to aap muje Computer kharid ke denge na......muje bahot kaam rehta hai.......

Mehek: papa muje bhi apni school ke liye thode paise chahiye......

Nandini: sab ho jayega..........hamari Heer ek din bahot badi marketing Company me kaam karegi.......aur Hamari Mehek ek bahot hi badi Photographer banegi........

Harsh: mera beti Kashish ek din is desh ki bahot badi lawyer hogi.........beti tumhe kuch nahi chahiye.......

Kashish: muje sirf itna chahiye ki meri behno ki her khwaish puri ho.........kyunki unke chehre ki khushi dekh ke muje tasli ho jati hai........

Harsh; jo log apne liye kuch nahi mangte use upperwal bina mange hi bahot kuch de deta hai.........hamari Kashish ki joli me bhi dher sari khushiyaan hogi.......ab main chalta hoon muje dair ho rahi hai.......

Kashish: papa.......aaj sham ko aapke office ke baad me aapko lene aaungi.......aaj aapki office me ek choti si party hai na.......

Harsh: woh to hai......thik hai beta tum thik aath baje aa jana........

Kashish: Papa aap to jante hai ki main waqt ki kitni paband hoon.......aap ab sambhal ke jaiye........aur Good Luck........

Mehek & Heer: Good Luck Papa.......

Harsh: thank you beta...........bye.........

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Phir hum dekhte hai ek aalishan bangla jaha pe likha hota hai Garewal Mension........jaha pe charo aur taiyariyaan chal rahi hoti hai..........hum dekhte hai ki ek aurat jaldi me sidiyon se neeche uthar rahi hoti hai.......

Shanta tai: Prernajee.......aap kyun itni taklif utha rahi hai......main hoon na main kar lungi.........

Prerna: Shanta aaj mera beta kitne saalo ke baad America se wapas aa raha hai......ab use aane me sirf do ghante reh gaye hai.........

Shnata tai: sab kuch ho jayega..........aap fikar na kare.....waise woh Mayajee ne woh kaun si ladki dekhi hai hamare Sujal ke liye.........

Prerna: woh Ritu........woh maya ki saheli Arpita ki beti Ritu ko........

Shanta tai: tab to ho gaya satyanash......unki pasand .....

Prerna: aisa nahi hai......main Ritu se mili hoon bahot hi achchi ladki hai..........bahot khubsurat bhi hai...........aur woh Hotel business ke bare me bhi bahot kuch janti hai.......ab ek bar mera beta haa kar de........

Shanta Tai: aap kahe aur woh haa na kare........

Prerna: nahi ek bar main koi zabardasti nahi karna chahti.....ab woh bada ho gaya hai........aur itna bada faisla main kaise kar sakti hoon.....lekin agar woh Ritu ko apni dulhan banata hai to muje bahot hi khushi hogi.....waise aaj raat ki party me aa rahi hai woh......wahi pe Sujal use dekh bhi lega........

Khushi: Mama..........Ritu ko dekh ke hi Sujalbhai ko woh pasand aa jayegi.........

Prerna: Ritu nahi ab woh teri honewali Bhabhi hai........

Khushi: lekin huyi to nahi.........kyun Shanta tai..........

Shanta tai: yeh ladki kabhi kabhi sachi baat kar deti hai.....

Maya: aisa ho hi nahi sakta...........Sujal ko ritu pasand na aaye..........Sujal aur Ritu ki shaadi to hoke hi rahegi......after all they are made for each other..........

Shanta tai: kya kaha isne.........

Khashi: aap mere saath chaliye......main samjati hoon...

Prerna; aur ab yeh Anurag aur prem kaha reh gaye.....

Maya: bahar chess ki bazi lagi huyi hai pichle do ghante se.....

Prerna: kya.........abhi dono ko dekhti hoon......

Prerna bahar aati hai........

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Prerna: yeh sab kya ho raha hai.........

Anurag: tumhe jo dikhai deta hai wahi..........

Prerna; party me do ghante bhi nahi rahe aur aap log yaha chess khel rahe ho.......chalo jaldi se taiyaar hoke Airport nahi jana Sujal ko lene.......

Prem: Mama........Sujalbhai ka sakht order hai ki Airport use lene koi na aaye.....woh sidhe hi apni Hotel party ke liye aajayenge.......

Prerna: jab se aaapne use Hotel ke business ka kya rasta dikhya woh to ghar ka rasta hi bhool gaya.........

Prem: Mama aap aisa kijiye........Bhai ko Bhabhi se bandh dijiye......tab to dekhna Bhai sham ko office se do ghante pehle aa jayenge.......

Prerna: hai Bhagwan.......ek mera beta woh hai aur ek yeh hai jo zindagi me kabhi serious hi nahi hota........

Prem: jis din Kayamat hogi na tab main bilkul Bhai jaisa ban jaunga......

Prerna: abhi tum dono utho.......utho......aur jake taiyaar ho jao.............

Anurag: chal beta.....teri Maa ko aur gussa aaye ise pehle nikal jate hai......

Prem: yeh dad........

Prem waha se chala jata hai...........

Prerna; ab aap kya bethe bethe soch rahe hai.......

Anurag: kehte hai jab baap ke joothe me bete ka pair aane lage to baap ke sir ki jimedariyaan chali jati hai........aur hamare to teen teen bete hai........

Prerna: lekin layak beta ek hi hai mera Sujal..........

Anurag: aise layak bete to bahot naseebwalo ko milte hai.................woh beta hi nahi balki bahot hi achcha bhai aur insaan hai.......aur muje yakeen hai ki woh bahot hi achcha pati bhi hoga......meri tarah.........

Prerna: waise maine ek bahot hi achchi ladki dekhi hai............Arpita ki beti Ritu......

Anurag: prerna......tumhe jo karna hai karo...lekin Sujal pe apni marzi mat thopna.........woh tumhe kabhi naa nahi keh payega.......woh tumhare kahe huye her ek labz ko hukum manta hai......woh dil hi dil me dukhi hota rahega......lekin tumhe mana nahi kahega........

Prena: aap muje keh rahe hai mere Bete ke bare me......aapko kya lagta hai main aisa kabhi apne Sujal ke saath karungi........

Anurag: main janta hoon ........tumhara dil bahot bada hai is liye to maine tumse shaadi ki...........

Prerna; ab aap phir se shuru ho gaye....main ja rahi hoon taiyaar hone aap bhi chaliye........

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Jab Kashish Garewal Hotel pahunchti hai.......

Kashish (apne aap se): itne bade hotel me ..........main kaise Papa ko dhundugi...........lekin koi na koi to rasta mil hi jayega........

Kashish andar jati hai to puri lobby me Newswale hote hai.......

News reporter: Garewals is seher ke high society me sabse upper hai.........aaj Garewal hotel me ek bahot hi badi shandar party hone janewali hai Anurag Garewal ke bade bete Sujal Garewal ki lautne ki khushi me.....jo bas kuch hi dair me aate hi honge........

Jab ek ladka Piche ke darwaze se aata hai lekin woh abhi bhi apne phone pe hota hai........Kashish lift ke aane ka intzaar kar rahi thi jab woh aake unke pass khada rehta hai.....Kashish uski aur dekhne hi wali hoti hai jab Lift aa jati hai........Kashish lift me andar jati hai aur woh ladka abhi bhi phone pe hi baat karta rehta hai......jab lift rukti hai aur Kashish bahar aa jati hai aur woh ladka bhi phone kat ke ek hall me jata hai .......

Prem: SujalBhai............

Sujal daud ke Prem ke gale lag jata hai...........

Prem: kaise hai aap Bhai.......

Sujal: bilkul thik..........tu kaisa hai.....Mama Dad ka khayal rakha ki nahi........

Prem: jaisa aapne kaha waise hi..........woh log bas aate hi honge shayad traffic me fas gaye honge...........

Sujal: woh dekho Shanta Tai main unse milke aata hoon......

Sujal jake unke pair chuta hai........

Shanta tai: yeh kya kar rahe ho.........

Sujal: aap hi hamesha muje beta kehti hai to kya ek beta apni maa ka ashirwad bhi nahi le sakta...........

Shanta tai: jita reh......tu itna kamzor kyun ho gaya hai......koi baat nahi ab aa gaya hai ab se main teri dekhbhal karungi...........

Sujal: Prem.........abhi abhi meri Bua se baat huyi Ritu ke bare me..........kaun hai ......

Prem: Bua aur Mama ne aapki shaadi ke liye unhe pasand kiya hai........

Sujal: tune dekha hai........

Prem: nahi to.......lekin khushi se jab maine pucha to keh rahi thi ki aaj thik aath baje aanewali hai......

Sujal aur Prem ghadi me dekhte hai aur thik aath baje huye hote hai jab Kashish hall ke darwaze pe khadi hoti hai............Sujal, Prem aur Shanta tai use dekhte hi reh jate hai...........

Prem: lo jiska intzaar ho raha hai woh aa gayi.....

Sujal: tumhe paka yakeen hai ki woh wahi hai......

Prem: haa........Khushi ne jaisa bataya tha waisi hi to hai........

Sujal: to ab main kya karoon.....

Shanta tai: main kya karoon matlab ja jake use baat kar......

Sujal: main kya baat karunga......

Prem: kuch bhi...........jaisa aap uski khubsurati ki tarif kar sakte hai......ab aap jaiye to sahi..........

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Sujal dheere dheere Kashish ki aur aage badhta hai......kashish use dekhti hi reh jati hai.......Kashish ke dil ki raftar tez ho jati hai........kashish apni palke zuka deti hai........

Sujal: Hi.........

Kashish: Hi.....

Sujal: Main Sujal Garewal............aapko yaha aane me koi taklif to nahi huyi.......

Kashish: taklif.....nahi to.........

Sujal: main janta hoon ki is waqt mere Parents ko yaha hona chahiye tha....kyunki wahi ne hume ek dusre se milwane ka socha hai......

Kashish; aap se milne ka matlab........

Sujal: achcha hi hai is tarah hum Shaadi se pehle mil lete hai kuch baatein bhi ho jati hai ......aur aise hi hum ek dusre ko jan bhi lenge.......lekin main aapko pehle hi bata deta hoon mere liye mera yeh hotel ka business sabse pehle..kyunki yeh dad ka sapna hai......

Kashish: yeh aap kya kahe ja rahe hai.......

Sujal: aap bura mat maniye .......main bhi aapke dil ka haal samaj sakta hoon ........sach kaha na maine Ritu.....

Kashish: Ritu...........kaun Ritu.........mera naam ritu nahi...........

Sujal; Premmmmmmm...........

Prem daudta hua waha aata hai......

Prem: jee bhai........

Sujal: yeh ladki kaun hai.........aur bina izzat ke andar kaise aayi.........hamare ghar ki party me.......

Prem: Bhai lagta hai hume koi galatfemi ho gayi......jaisa khushi ne kaha waisa hi maine aapko bataya.........

Sujal: Prem Chup ho ja........safai dene ki koi zaroorat nahi........Prem ne to galti ki lekin aap itni dair se meri baatein kyun sun rahi thi.........

Kashish: aapne muje bolne ka moka hi kab diya............main aapko yahi baat batana chahti thi ki main Ritu nahi Kashish hoon........mera naam Kashish hai......aur main yaha sirf apne papa ko lene aayi thi jiski aaj promotion ki party hai.........

Sujal; yeh koi business party nahi balke family party hai.......waise aap jaiye.........aap ki koi galti nahi.......kisi aur ki galti ka shikar aap ban gayi.......

Prem: i am really sorry for misunderstanding...........ple muje maff kar dijiye.....

Kashish; aapne galti jan bujke nahi ki..........aap bhi is baat ko bhool jaye.........aur aap bhi Mr. Garewal.........

Kashish waha se chali jati hai aur Sujal aur Prem use dekhte hi reh jate hai..........



Edited by goodkashish - 20 July 2008 at 5:11pm

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awesome part kashish.........really great.....the intro of the family was great!....i really like the way you introduce the three sisters, really nice! ....the scene where prem n anurag r playing chess n prena shouting them to get ready is funny LOL....she's the most excited person to knw that her son is comming back Wink!.......sujal entry was really nice n the brother scene too......... ek to yeah buaji ko bohot jaldi parie hue hai sujal kie shaadi karne kie .........funny scene sujal n prem confuse kashish to be ritu n sujal not letting her talk LOL..........but the confusing is soon clear by kashish n than she goes looking for her dad, while sujal n prem keep wachting her Wink......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................awesom part yaaarrrrrrr...........great.............wonderful........... .by the way who plays ritu character?????.........continue soon plzzzzzzzzz..................can't wait ............. 
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ritu is played by shweta salve and arpita played by sudha chandran


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nice story.......................
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Clap Awesome part.......loved it! Smile
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Part-2

Kashish apne Papa ko dhund hi leti hai.........

Kashish: Papa aap bahar kyun khade hai.........aapki kya party cancal ho gayi......

Harsh: nahi to bahot badiya party thi...........

Kashish: aap meri aur dekh ke kahiye........Papa aap mujse jooth bol rahe hai........bataiye kya baat hai......aapko meri kasam........

Harsh: yeh party meri promotion ki khushi me nahi thi..........

Kashish: kya........to phir kya hua.......kuch to bataiye......

Harsh: meri retirement ki khushi me thi.......

Kashish: Papa........yeh aap kya keh rahe hai...........woh log aisa kaise kar sakte hai..........

Harsh: meri umar ki waje se mera waqt pura ho gaya........lekin ab main ghar pe sab ko kya kahunga........kaise chalega yeh parivar.......

Kashish: Papa......aap hi to hamesha kehte ho ki main aapka beta hoon......to aaj se yeh ab meri jimedari hai........aap ghabraiye mat kal mere do jagah interview hai kahi na kahi to job mil hi jayegi.........abhi hum ghar chalte hai.......

Harsh: chalo beta.......

Kashish: Papa aap yaha rukiye....main taxi ko bulake lati hoon.....

Harsh: taxi ki ab aadat chodni hogi.......ab to ek ek paise jama karne hoge........tab jake sab ki dekhbhal me kar paunga.........

Kashish: aap fikar mat kariye.......agar yeh dard aapko upperwale ne diya hai to rasta bhi wahi dega.......

Harsh: chal beti......ghar pe sab intzaar kar rahe honge.....

Kashish: chaliye.....

Kashish aur Harsh taxi leke ghar chale jate hai............

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Anurag, Prerna, Khushi aur Maya Party me aate hai.......Sujal jake sabse pehle Anurag aur prerna ke pair chuta hai.........Prerna Sujal ko gale se laga leti hai......

Sujal: Kaisi hai aap..........

Prerna: teri bagir ho bhi kaise sakti hoon.........pata hai tuje dekhne ke liye meri aankhein taras gayi thi..........

Sujal: main bhi......aap ke bina bahot akela ho gaya tha.......

Anurag: ab tu aa gaya hai na ........ab to ghar me ronak lagi rahegi....khas karke teri maa ke chehre pe........

Sujal: Papa aap kaise hai.....

Anurag: jab beta baap ki tarah bolne lage to baap ko sab chod ke retire ho jana chahiye.......

Sujal: beta chahe kitna bhi bada ho apne maa-baap ke liye woh hamesha chota hi rahega........hum sab ko aapki hamesha zaroorat rahegi.........

Prem: Papa achcha hai agar aap retire hote hai to.......ghar pe koi to hoga is Khushi ko datnewala........

Khushi: dekha.......Bhai......jab se aap gaye hai yeh muje aise hi tang karte hai.......

Sujal: ab tera yeh bhai aa gaya hai na ab tera koi bal bhi bigad nahi sakta............

Jab Prem Khushi ke baal khichta hai......

Khushi: dekha Bhai aap ke samne bhi........

Sujal: Prem........ek bar mana kiya na.........Khushi ab koi choti bachi nahi.......yeh baat yaad rakhna.....

Prem: Ji Bhai.........I am Sorry Khushi............

Khushi:that's ok......

Prerna: dekha Sujal....tere aate hi dono sidhe ho gaye............

Sujal: abhi ek kaam baki hai.......Prem ko mere saath papa ke business me haath batana shikhna hoga.......

Prerna: koi business ki baatein nahi hogi.........sabse pehle tumhari Ritu se shaadi hogi..........waise tu use mila to sahi.........

Sujal: nahi woh abhi tak aayi nahi....

Maya: i am sorry........main to aapko batana hi bhool gayi.........woh achanak se Arpita ke sir me dard hone ki waje se woh nahi aa paye......maine bahot kaha Ritu se lekin keh rahi thi ki Mama ko chod ke woh kaise aa sakti hai.......

Prerna: bahot hi achchi ladki hai.......ab main chahti hoon tu jaldi se use dekh le baatein kar le pasand kar le aur phir shaadi kar le........taki main chain ki saans beth saku.......

Anurag: Sujal.......jo bhi tera faisla hoga woh hume manzoor hoga.........

Sujal: mama ka faisla sar aankhoin per.........agar mama ne pasand kiya hai to woh sahi samaj ke hi kiya hoga...........

Prerna: nahi Beta........agar tuje koi pasand ho to....

Sujal: aapko Ritu pasand hai na.....to meri shaadi ritu se hi hogi.........ab aap yeh sab baatein chodiye....muje to bahot bhukh lagi hai......chaliye sab kuch khate hai......

They all enjoy the party..........

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Dusri aur Kashish aur Harsh ghar pahunchte hai...........Heer aake darwaza kholti hai.......

Nandini: kya baat hai.......aap dono ka chehra aisa udhas kyun hai.......

Harsh: koi baat nahi.....

Nandini: kashish beta tu kuch bata..........kya hua.......tere Papa itne pareshan kyun lag rahe hai......

Kashish: woh papa ko promotion milne ki wajaye retirement mila hai........

Nandini: suniye.....ab kya hoga......

Sampada: hoga kya........raste pe aa jayenge.......

Kashish: aisa kuch nahi hoga.........mera kal hi do jagah interview hai........main ab se is ghar ko chalaungi..........

Sampada: ab to kya zamana aa gaya hai....ghar ki betiyaan bahar kaam karne jayegi..........

Nandini: muje meri betiyon pe pura bharosha hai........

Mehek: Papa aap kyun chinta kar rahe hai.....main part time kahi pe bhi photography ki job dhundh lungi.........

Heer: aur Papa aaj hi mere college me ek nayi librarian ki job ke liye koi chahiye........main waha thodi dair kaam kar lungi..........

Kashish: kisi ko koi kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi.......tum dono is waqt padhai me dhyan dogi........main kahi na kahi job dhundh hi lungi.......ab aap sab itne dukhi kyun ho.......achchi baat hai ki ab se Papa her waqt hamare saath rahenge..........kya mama aaj aapne Papa ki pasndi ka khana nahi banaya..........

Nandini: sab taiyaar hai........chaliye sab log kuch na kuch kha lete hai........

Sab log Dinner karne beth jate hai............

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Dusri aur Sujal apne ghar apne kamre ki khidki ke pass khada hota hai jab Prem aata hai........

Prem: SujalBhai ......aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai..........aapne bina ladki dekhe shaadi ke liye haa kyun ki.......mera matlab aap ek aisi ladki ke saath shaadi karke apni zindagi bitana chahte hai jise aap jante tak nahi..........jana hi nahi ho to pyaar to bahot dur ki baat hai...........muje laga ki aap aayenge aur Mama ko naa karenge...lekin aap to.....

Sujal; main kyun Mama ko naa bolta.......

Prem: kyunki aaphi se maine kya hum sab bhai behen ne shikha hai ki pyaar kya hota hai.........aap hi hamesha kehte the na ki koi hamare liye intzaar kar raha hai......jo sirf hamare liye bana ho........to kya aap apne soul-mates ko dhundhna nahi chahte.............aaj sirf aap Mama ko khush karne ke liye haa ki hai na.........

Sujal; Prem........tu apni jagah sahi hai.......maine hamesha ek aisi ladki ka sapna dekha hai jispe sirf mera naam likha ho.......ek aisi ladki jiske saath main apni puri zindagi bina saku..........ek aisi ladki jise milke main pura ho jau...............aur muje aaj tak yakeen tha ki kabhi na kabhi woh ladki meri zindagi me aayegi aur hamesha meri hoke reh jayegi.............jab hum milenge to naye rishtey me bandhne ke liye.......

Prem: to aapne kyun haa keh di.........yeh shaadi hai.......yeh koi degree pane ke jaisa nahi ki aap america gaye kyunki woh Papa ka sapna hai...........aap ki zindagi ka sawaal hai......kahi aap ko aisa to nahi laga ki Pyaar jaisi koi cheez hi nahi aur aapke liye koi bana hi nahi Rudrabhai ki tarah.....

Sujal: aisa nahi hai..........upperwale ne zaroor use mere liye banaya hoga.........kahi na kahi shayad woh bhi mera intzaar kar rahi hogi..............yeh jo Chaand me her roz dekhta hoon.....kyunki main aaj bhi uska intzaar kar raha hoon.........kahi na kahi woh bhi isi chaand ko dekhkar mera intzaar kar rahi hogi............

Prem: aur aap apne sapne ko itni aasani se tod denge........

Sujal; Mama ki khushi ke liye mere is chote se sapne ka tutna jyada zaroori hai...........Mama aur Papa ke saath koi rishta na hote bhi unhone muje itne saalo se pala hai......main un rishto ke liye woh rishta nahi tod sakta jo abhi tak bana hi nahi...........unki khushiyon ke liye muje apni khushiyon ko kurban karni hogi to manzoor hai muje yeh Rishta.......

Prem: per Bhai ek bar mama se.......

Sujal: iske bare me tu kisi se kuch nahi kahega........tu apne Bhai ki baat tal nahi sakta.........

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Beep..........Beep..........Beep........

Sujal: Hello........

Rudra: Hi!..........Bhai kaise ho.........thik se ghar pahonch to gaye.......

Sujal: Rudra........main bilkul thik hoon .......tu bata kaisa hai........teri padhai kaisi chal rahi hai........

Rudra; kuch hi dino bad exams hai....uske baad main wapas aa raha hoon..........

Sujal; kuch bhi ho tumhe meri shaadi se pehle aajana hai........

Rudra: Shaadi.........aap shaadi kar rahe hai.......aur kisi ne muje bataya bhi nahi.....waise kaise hi Bhabhi........

Sujal; abhi tak main use mila nahi...........

Rudra: kya.......aap use mile nahi.......matlab yeh woh ladki nahi jo aapne apne sapno me dekha..........matlab Mama ne phir se shuru kar diya.......aap jante ho main isi liye wapas nahi aana chahta kyunki Mama phone pe bhi shuru ho jati hai..........

Sujal: kyunki use hamari khushiyon ki chinta lagi rehti hai........

Rudra: Bhai aapki khushi.......main aisa kuch nahi hone dunga.......main abhi wapas aata hoon......

Sujal; tu koi tamasha nahi karega...........tu apni exams deke hi wapas aayega.........samaj gaya..........aur tu meri fikar mat kar kyunki main bahot khush hoon Mama ke is faisle se..........

Rudra: thik hai......aapko jaisa thik lage waisa kijiye.............Bye.........

Sujal: bye.......

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Prem: aap kitni aasani se apne gum ko apne dil me chupa lete ho.......

Sujal; maine abhi abhi kya kaha tune suna nahi........main khush hoon........

Prem: Bhai aap Rudrabhai se jooth bol sakte hai lekin aapke is chote Bhai ko nahi...........shayad aap jante nahi.......kehte hai Mata-Pita Bhagwan hote hai.......lekin maine jab se hosh sambhala hai tab se mere liye aap mere Bhagwan ho......

Sujal: itna bada darza bhi muje mat de........main iske layak nahi......

Prem: sab samajta hoon main........lekin aap ek baat nahi jante..............aapki taqdeer upperwale ne pehle se hi likh di hai.......agar aapki taqdeer me yeh shaadi hai to use koi nahi rok sakta lekin agar aapke liye wake me koi aur hai to yeh shaadi kabhi nahi hogi............chahe aap kitni bhi koshish kare...............aap ka jo bhi faisla hoga usme me hamesha aapke saath hoga........aur aap jante hai ki mere liye aapka hukum sar aankhoin pe........

Sujal: bahot bada ho gaya hai ab tu.......badi badi baatein karne laga hai.......

Prem: jab bade rasta bhool jate hai to chote ko use sahi rasta batana unka farz hai.......main bhi sirf apne farz nibha raha hoon.......

Sujal: raat kafi ho gayi hai........tu jake so ja.......kal Office bhi jana hai.......

Prem: thik hai kal main bhi chalunga........

Sujal: good night.......

Prem: Good night............

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Kashish khadi khadi chaand ko dekh rahi thi jab Mehek aati hai........

Mehek: kya baat hai Dii aap kuch pareshan lag rahi hai.......

Kashish; aaj maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki is tarah mujpe itni badi jimedari aa jayegi...........Mehek tu to janti hai ki in dino nayi Job milna kitna muskil hai.....main Mama aur papa se yeh to keh diya ki muje job mil jayega lekin agar nahi mili to..........

Mehek: aap kyun aisa darr rahe hai.....agar upperwala ek rasta bandh karta hai to dusra woh kholta hai......muje pura yakeen hai ki woh aap ko zaroor koi na koi rasta dikhayega..........

kashish: pata nahi lekin mere sare sapne tutte nazar aa rahe hai..........

Mehek: Dii.......agar aapke sare sapne tut bhi gaye to muje yakeen hai aapka pyaar aapke sare sapno ko sakar karega........

Kashish; ab jimedariyaan itni badh gayi hai ki ab mere pass mere pyaar ke liye shayad waqt hi na ho........

Mehek; waqt hota nahi........woh apne aap apna waqt le leta hai.......dii muje yakeen hai ki aapke her sapne pure honge..........

Kashish: pata nahi lekin pichle kuch dino se aisa lag raha hai ki kuch honewala hai.........pata nahi kya.....lekin mera dil bahot bechen rehta hai........

Mehek: matlab ki kuch achcha honewala hai.........Dii muje to lagta hai aap jisko is chaand me dhundh rahi thi woh shayad aapko milnewala hai..........

Kashish: kya tu bhi Heer ki tarah sochne lagi.......

Mehek; sach kaha to aapko bura lag gaya...........waise kabhi kabhi Heer ki baat man leni chahiye.............dekho kaisi aaram se so rahi hai......

Kashish: kitni masoom lag rahi hai na........

Mehek: aur jaise jagte hi kitni shaitaan ho jati hai......

Kashish: tu bhi na.......bahot ho gaya......raat kafi ho chuki hai aur kal muje do interview ke liye bhi jana hai.............chal so ja..........good night.........

Mehek: good night..........



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