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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely part....πŸ‘ kashish as in "JHANSI KI RANI" was hilarious........... Plzz continue soon...........

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi Kashish
 
Nice part yara πŸ‘..wowwww bahut khub likha hai aapne....yuhi likte rahiye acha lagta aapke ff padna .........hope bacchon ko ko Kashish ka sapna bahut pasand aayega..wow Kashish to Jhansi ki rani nikli kisi din kahi Sujal ki bhi pitaye naa ho jaye.khair ab to woh alert he rehega ....just kidding....
 
bahut khooooooob part tha .πŸ‘πŸ‘......hope next part bahut he intresting hoga....keep up the good work and plz plz do continue soon.
 
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
kashish dear i'am here with my comments..woh my exams are going on , is liye pehle comment karne ka mouka nahii mila.. hope you understand..😊now coming to this fanfic of yours... well is fanfic ke baare mein main kya kahoon.. is fanfic mein each and every rishtha is so achcha..and so sachcha.. sab log ek dusare se itna pyaar karthe.. sab log are so attached to each other.... yeh bohat achchi baat hai... this story teaches all of us the meaning, the value of relationships & the importance of our dear ones... i completely love this fanfic of yours.. the chaid-chaad , the romance, the joy... everything is just damn good.... waise sujal,kashish are the sweetest couple i have ever seen.. aur rudra aur prem ke baare mein main kahoon tho kya kahoon.. itne pyaare nat-kat devar mile hai kashish ko.. i seriously love the bond joh un sab ke beech hai.. itna saara apnapan jhalak tha hai.. i just hope kii is hathe-khelthe pariwaar ko kissi ki bhi buri nazar na lage... mujhe is fanfic mein yeh bhi bohat achcha lagtha hai, kii kaise sab log ek-juth hokar ek dusare kii madat karthe hai.... aur sujal is so understanding..he is such a sweet husband.. kitna achcha hai woh....he is always there to stand by her.. waise tho sujal ko apni beti chahiye.. aur sujal ,ne  hamesha kii tarah kashish se apni baat manwa bhi lii...veryy gooddd...... mujhe bohat hii cute laga yeh bit...the story is progressing very well.. bohat hii zyada interesting....absolutely coolll...πŸ‘ kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna.. me waiting for the next part palkein bichake..😊   Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice part kashishπŸ‘.aur ek baat bato ye baby girl or baby ke topic me itna larte kuon hai.tum ek kam karna inke twins dekhana one boy one girl.............πŸ˜†.theek hai na😳.aur haan sabka to mujhe pata nahi par sach me sujal jahan se bhi chale akar ek hi jagah aatak jata haiπŸ˜†...........plz continue soon😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
kashish dear please continue soon..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
kashish plz continue soon..............
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Part-25

Aaj ka din Kashish ki zindagi ka sabse khaas din tha aur ho bhi kyun nahi aaj uska sapna pura hone ja raha hai..........chaliye dekhte hai ki kya ho raha hai................Garewal Mension me se sab log School ki opening ceremony ke liye nikal gaye hote hai.............sirf jane ke liye Sujal, Kashish,Rudra aur Prem baki hote hai...........Sujal aur Kashish apne kamre me taiyaar ho raha the...........neeche Rudra aur prem un dono ka intzaar kar rahe hote hai...........

Prem: yeh Sujalbhai aur Bhabhi itna waqt kyun le rahe hai...........kahi unhe kuch chahiye to nahi.........

Rudra: pehli bar baat kuch kaam ki hai.........pichle 15 mins se hum unka intzaar kar rahe hai..............chal unhe hi jake puchte hai ki ab kitna waqt lagega..................

Prem: i am sure Bhabhi hi waqt laga rahe honge........yeh ladkiyaan bhi kabhi waqt pe taiyaar nahi hoti.............

Rudra: bilkul sach kaha....jabse Sujalbhai ki shaadi huyi hai woh badal se gaye hai...........chal dekhte hai............

Rudra aur Pram aake Sujal ke kamre pe knock karte hai...........Kashish aake darwaza kholti hai............

Prem: bhabhi woh........

Kashish: prem.......panch minute...........

Kashish wapas darwaza bandh kar deti hai.................

Prem: bhabhi ko kya ho gaya.............

Rudra: panch minute ke baad hi pata chalega..............

Kashish: Sujal kya kar rahe hai.........thik se khade rahiye............

Sujal: main to thik se hi khada hoon......tum jaldi nahi karti.........kitna waqt lagagi ho.........her roz to tum itna waqt nahi leti............

Kashish: sujal aaj main nervous hoon aur aap hai ki...........

Sujal: achcha baba bhul ho gayi.........do main hi kar leta hoon...........

Kashish: nahi rehne do main kar deti hoon............aur yeh mera kaam hai...........

Sujal: jab bhi tum muje aise tie bandhti ho na to mera dil karta hai ki main tumhe........

knock..........knock.........

Sujal: ab kya hai............abhi dekhta hoon dono ko..........

Sujal jake darwaza kholta hai...........

Sujal: kya hai...

Rudra: kitni dair aur lagegi..........

Sujal: panch minute

Sujal wapas darwaza undono ke muh pe bandh kar deta hai............

Rudra: kamal hai pehle Bhabhi aur ab Bhai bhi..............yeh ho kya raha hai is kamre me...........

Prem: yeh dekhne ke liye hum pehle shaadi karni hogi................

Rudra: to kya hua..........shaadi kar lete hai..........

Prem: lekin yeh zaroori nahi ki kamre ke us taraf pyaar bhari baatein hi ho rahi ho.............kya pata bechare Bhai ko joote bhi pad rahe ho..........

Rudra: nahi yaar........apni bhabhi itni bhi buri nahi...............chal ab aur panch minute..........

ab Kashish ne puri tarah se Sujal ki tie bandh di hoti hai.................Kashish aaine ke samne apni jewellery pehen rahi hoti hai.........jab wobh necklace bandh nahi kar pa rahi hoti hai.............

Kashish: sujal dekho na.........bandh nahi ho raha.........

Sujal: lao do...........

Sujal kashish ko pehnane lagta hai jab Sujal ke ehsaas se Kashish apni aankhein bandh kar leti hai..............Sujal kashish ko apni aur karke pehle uske Forehead ko kiss karta hai phir uske cheek pe..........aur phir uske hoth ko chune hi wala hota hai ki........

Knock.............Knock...................

Sujal: yeh dono phir se........lagta hai aaj mera ek bhi romantic moment dono nahi banne denge............

Sujal jake gusse me darwaza kholta hai.............

Sujal: kya hai tum dono ko..........maine tum dono ka kya bigada hai............tum dono ki na muje shaadi kara deni chahiye........tum dono bhi apni biwi ke saath khush aur main bhi..........thik se jine bhi nahi dete tum dono............

Rudra: are hume koi aitraz nahi........aap log apna private moment continue rakhe..............main Papa se bol dunga..........

Jab Kashish bahar aati hai............

Kashish; iski koi zaroorat nahi............... chalo tum teeno...........

ab sab log bhi opening ceremony ke liye nikal jate hai...............

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Ab function me bahot se VIP log bhi aaye huye hote hai.............sare TV reporters, journalist sab aa chuke hai............bahot se log hote hai......sare teachers, students bhi hote hai............aur hamare dono parivar to pehle se hi maujud hote hai...........Kashish stage pe aati hai.........

Kashish: Good Evening ladies and gentalman...........main aaj bahot khush hoon ki aaj aap sab log yaha pe hamari khushi me sharif hone aaye...........aaj hum un sabka sukhriya karna chahte hai jiski waje se aaj hamara sapna pura hua hai............aaj hum chahte hai ki aap dil se hamare in chote se nanhe bacho ko apna aashirwad de..............kyunki aaj se hum sab hi in bacho ka parivar hai.............is liye aaj ki raat hum in bacho ke naam...............

sab log taliyaan bajane lagte hai.........

Reporter: mam.......aapka yeh sapna pura hone pe aapko kaisa lag raha hai.........

Kashish: yeh bache mere liye mere apne hai aur jab koi apna khush hota hai to hum bhi khush hote hai..........aaj main bhi bahot khush hoon in bacho ke aanewale kal ko dekhne ke liye.............

Reporter; humne aaj tak suna hai ki ek kamyab mard ke piche ek aurat ka haath hota hai lekin aap to khud ek aurat hai..........aap ke piche kiska haath hai.............

Kashish: agar ek pati ki kamyabi ke piche ek patni ka haath ho sakta hai to ek patni ke piche ek pati ka haath kyun nahi ho sakta..........main aapki baat samaj rahi hoon..........hamara yeh samaj kabhi kisi aurat ko kamyabi ki sidhi chadte nahi dekh sakta..........lekin meri kamyabi ke piche mera parivar aur sabse jyada mere pati ka haath hai............unke bina main kuch nahi kar pati.............

Reporter: aapke pati aapke liye kya mayne rakhte hai.............

Kashish: mere pati mere liye mere bhagwan hai...........main use pujti hoon...........aaj main jo kuch bhi hoon woh sab mere pati ki waje se ..........main is duniya me sabse jyada pyaar aur vishwas apne pati se karti hoon.......aur yeh bhi janti hoon ki woh bhi mujse utna hi pyaar aur vishwas karte hai...........main apne pati ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon...........apne gale main maut ko bhi laga sakti hoon...........yeh jagah hai mere liye mere pati ki mere dil me................ple Excuse me..............

Kashish neeche aake Sujal ke pass aati hai.............

Sujal: tum itni achchi kyun ho...........

Kashish: kyunki aap mujse bhi achche hai...........

Sujal: abhi abhi.........tumne kaha ki.........lekin Kashish sach yeh hai ki aaj tum jo bhi ho woh sab tumne kiya hai.............

Kashish: nahi Sujal..........agar aap mere saath nahi hote to main kabhi yaha tak nahi pahonch pati...........pata hai aaj main yaha hoon kyunki muje aap pe khud se jyada vishwas hai..........main janti hoon ki agar main kuch galat karungi to aap hai muje sambhalne wale............mere liye aap mera sab kuch ho.............isi liye aapse beimtihaan pyaar jo karti hoon................I love U............

Sujal: i love u too.............

Shanta tai: hmmmm.............hmmmmmm.........

Kashish: tai aap.........

Shanta tai; agar tum dono kabutar ki gutar gu katam ho gayi ho to tum dono ko tumhare papa bula rahe hai...............

Kashish aur Sujal sharmake waha se chale jate hai..................

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Sujal: papa aapne hume bulaya.....

Anurag: haa beta...........inse milo yeh hai Chetan Shergil.........mera bahot hi achcha dost..............kuch hi mahino pehle yeh log Singapore se Mumbai rehne aa gaye........ab inka beta sara business sambhalta hai........

Sujal: namaste uncle..........

Chetan: namaste beta........

Anurag: aur yeh hai unki patni Vasu......aur unki beti Archie........aur yeh hai Rishi ............jo aaj kal Shergil indstries chala raha hai............

Kashish: namaste aap logo se milke bahot achcha laga.............

Jab Rudra, prem aur Khushi ladte ladte aate hai........

Prem: Sujalbhai...........Khushi se kaho ki hume tang karna bandh kare..........

KhushI: Bhai maine kuch nahii kiya..........yeh Prembhai jooth bol rahe hai..............

Rudra: Sujalbhai main aapko batata hoon ki kya hua..........

Kashish: Rudra..........hum yeh sab ghar jake dekhneg........pehle mehman se to mil lo........

Rudra: sorry Bhabhi.............

Anurag: chetan........yeh hai mera bada Beta Sujal aur meri bahu Kashish...............aur sujal ke bad yeh Rudra..........Phir Prem............aur sabse choti meri pyari si beti Khushi..............

Khushi: Namaste ............

Kashish: khushi...........Archie ko apne saath lejake Heer aur Mehek se milvao...........

Khushi: jee bhabhi..............

Sujal: Rudra...........Rishi ko bhi kuch apne dosto se milvao................

ab sirf Sujal, Kashish, Anurag, Chetan aur vasu khade hote hai............

Kashish: aap log ab yaha hai to ghar pe zaroor aaiyega............

Anurag: haa kashish bilkul thik keh rahi hai............kyun na kal raat ko aap sab log hamare ghar dinner pe aao........isi bahane hamare bache ek dusre ko jan lenge .................

Chetan: baat to tune bilkul sahi kahi.............thik hai to phir kal shaam ka dinner tumahre yaha.................

Kashish: aaiye aauntie main aapse Mama se milvati hoon..........

Vasu: haa chalo...............

ab aise hi party chalti rehti hai...............

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Ab dusre din sab log besabri se Shergil parivar ka intzar kar raha hota hai.............

Prerna: Kashish..........sari taiyariyaan to ho gayi na...........

Kashish: jee mama........sab kuch taiyaar hai.............

Shanta Tai: yeh baatein me pichle aadhe ghante se sun ke thak gayi hoon lekin tum dono bolte huye nahi thakte.........................

Kashish: tai aap bhi na kuch bhi...............

jab woh log andar aate hai.........

Prem: mama.............woh log aa gaye ..........

Prerna aur kashish kitchen me se bahar aate hai.............sab log bahot si baatein karte hai...........

Prerna: Vasu........khana laga diya hai..........chale.......

Chetan: chaliye Bhabhijee.......kitne dino baad Anurag ke saath khana khane ko mila hai.......aur yeh bhi pata chal jayega ki aap kaisa khana banate hai.........

Prerna: aaj ka khana maine nahi.......Kashish aur Khushi ne banaya hai.........

Vasu: tab to zaroor khana hoga......chalo.......

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sab log khana khake hall me bethe hote hai.....

Vasu: itna achcha khana maine zindagi me nahi khaya..........

Anurag: waise meri bahu aur beti dono hai kabile tarif..........waise Mumbai is bar India aane ke koi khas wajah.......

Chetan: is bar socha bahot ho gaya Singapore.......apne desh ki aur dosto ki bahot yaad aa rahi thi......is liye yahi Mumbai me hi settle hone ka socha hai....

Vasu: aur bhi ek khaas waja hai.........is baar hum Rishi ki shaadi jaldi se jaldi karana chahte hai.........

Chetan: aur hum Rishi ke liye aapki beti Khushi ko apne ghar ki bahu banana chahte hai......agar aap sabko aur Khushi ko is ristey ke liye koi aitraaz na ho to......

Anurag: hume kya aitraaz ho sakta hai.......aur yeh rista to hamare liye......lekin Khushi tum is ristey se khush ho......

Khushi: Papa woh,............

Sujal: kya baat hai Khushi.......

Khushi: muje abhi shaadi ke bare me socha nahi.........muje sochne ke liye kuch waqt chahiye..............aao log samaj sakte hai.......

Anurag: haa beta...........main janta hoon abhi abhi padhai puri huyi hai isi liye...............koi baat nahi..........Chetan.,.........hum kuch waqt chahiye is bare me sochne ke liye...........

Chetan: Anurag..........hamari aur se to haa hai............hume aapke jawab ka intzaar rahega...............aur beta Khushi tumpe bhi koi dabav nahi.........tum bejijak apna faisla le sakti ho................achcha Anurag ab hum chalte hai.............

Chetan, vasu, archie aur Rishi chale jate hai aur Khushi apne kamre me chali jati hai.........

Prerna: shayad is tarah achanak Shaadi ka naam sunkar darr gayi lagti hai...................

Prem: mama...........Khushi khud darane ki cheez hai woh kya kisise daregi...............

Kashish: Prem.........baat ko samjo..........yeh koi mazak ka waqt nahi.........aaj baat Khushi ki puri zindagi ke bare me ho rahi hai..........

Prem: sorry bhabhi.......

Anurag: Prerna............Khushi se baat karke dekho...........

Sujal: nahi Papa.........Khushi se hum log baat kar lenge.............kyunki woh humse jooth nahi bol sakti............

Kashish: aur Papa mujse jyada Khushi ko aur kaun samaj sakta hai..........aap befikar rahiye..............khushi apni marzi se is shaadi ke liye haa karegi........hum sab hai na...................hum khushi ko samjayneg...........

Anurag: agar woh khush nahi to main uspe zabardasti nahi karna chahta..............

Rudra: hum aapki baat samaj rahe hai.............aur hume bhi khushi ki khushiyaan ke alwa aur kuch nahi chahiye...........chale Sujalbhai...........

Sujal; haa...................

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Sujal, Kashish, Rudra aur Prem Khushi ke kamre me aate hai........................jab woh log dekhte hai ki khushi khidki ke pass khadi hoke ro rahi hoti hai...........kashish jake Khushi ke pass jati hai.............Khushi Kashish ke gale lag kar rone lagti hai............

Kashish: khushi..........kya hau.......tu ro kyun rahi hai............bata sach sach kya hua.........

Khushi: kuch nahi..........

Sujal: apne Bhai se bhi kuch nahi kahegi...............yaha aa...........beth...........

Kashish Khushi ko leke apne pass Bed pe bithati hai aur Rudra, Sujal aur prem aise hi Khushi ke kareeb Zameen pe beth jate hai....................

Rudra: Khushi kya baat hai.............tu ro kyun rahi hai.............

Sujal: kya hua tumhe yeh rishta manjur nahi.............kya tumhe Rishi pasand nahi..........

Khushi: bhai woh baat nahi............

Sujal: tumhari zindagi me ko aur to nahi..........agar koi hai to hume koi aitraaz nahi............

Khushi: nahi bhai meri zindagi me koi nahi..............

Rudra: to aise sabke samne tum..........

Khushi: main janti hoon ki aap logo ko bura laga mere bartav se............lekin aise achanak shaadi ka naam sunke main darr gayi thi...........aur main Rishi ko janti bhi nahi aise kaise...............

Kashish: samaj sakti hoon tumhare dil ki becheni ko.............lekin ek baat bata kya tuje Rishi pasand to hai.........aur shaadi ke baad to tum use janne lagogi............

Khushi: bhabhi...........muje is rishtey se koi aitraaz nahi baki sab aap sabko faisla karna hai............

Prem: iska matlab ladki ne haa kar di............mubarak ho bhai..........mubarak ho bhabhi...........aakhie kar ek bala hamare ghar se ja rahi hai............

Khushi: Sujalbhai ..........

Sujal: prem..........

Rudra: waise sujalbhai...........khushi ke jane ke bad hume is bandariya ki bahot yaad aayegi..................

Sujal: haa bhai...........ab ek hi behen hai hamari aur woh bhi hume chod ke ja rahi hai..................

Khushi Sujal ke gale lag kar rone lagti hai.............

Khushi: main aap sab ke bina kaise rahungi............muje aap sab ki bahot yaad aayegi............

Sujal: hume bhi bahot yaad aayegi teri.............

Khushi: Prembhai ab muje waha chocolate kaun lake dega...............aur Rudrabhai meri choti ab kaun khichega........Bhabhi jab main akeli pad jaungi to mera saath kaun dega......aur Sujalbhai jab main roungi to mere aanshu kaun pochega........................

Sujal: are pagli..........jane se pehle hi tu hum sabko rulane lagi...........aur main to her roz dua karta hoon ki kabhi bhi teri aankhoin me aanshu na aaye................meri behen ko duniya ki sari khushi mile.....................

Kashish: main neeche sab ko batake aati hoon....................

aise hi sari shaam hasi khushi me beet jati hai.....................

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part..............................kashish aur sujal dono kitne pyaar se lar ty hai............................so cute.........................so khushi ki shaadi ho rahi hai.................con't soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing part
cant wait 4 khushis wedding with rishi.
the scene wen sujal and kashish were keep on asking 4 5 minutes was really good poor sujal couldnt even spend some quality time with his wife.
the scene between the brothers and khushi was really good and really touching it showed how much they love each other.