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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 18)

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Posted: 09 July 2008 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
hey kashish tht was awesome part...u explained well about the customs of marriage in ur dialogues.......... Clap kashish dialogues with her parents and her sisters were really emotional..girl has to leave her parents and family and start a new life thts a great step in her life........u expressed those feelings very nicely Clap Clap i am looking forward for sujal and kashish life after marriage.......will be looking for next update

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awesome part..........................finally wedding hogi [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> [:D/> ............... sujal ki sherwani aur kashish ka dress were superb............prem,rudra aur khusi ne kia gana gaya bechara sujal sharmane laga Embarrassed ............... sujal ki naaak khichi ROFL .............. teeno sis kis tarah rote hai mujhe bhi rona aagaya Cry con't soon
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hey kashish i was spell bound by the way you wrote the intro to this part amazing job just loved it cont soon Clap
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wow...amazing!!! I love all your stories...I get so happy when I see that you have updated them...keep it up!!!
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Fantastic part Clap Marriage was lovely man Embarrassed Kashish's convo with her parents n sis's was really emotional....
Enjoyed it..gr8 job Clap Plzz continue Smile
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hey really nice part. the descriptions were done very well. looking 4wrd 4 the next part, do post asap Clap
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Part-16

Aaj kehte hai ki jab bahu ghar me kadam rakhti hai to woh apne saath maan. maryada aur izzat leke aati hai..........kayi logo ka yeh bhi kehna hai ki bahu ghar me lakhmi badhane aati hai......ek bahu ke kadam padne se ya to ghar tut sakta hai ya to tuta hua ghar jud sakta hai.............jab ek ladki apne sasural aati hai to apne saas sasur me woh apne maa-baap ko dhundhti hai...........dever bhai saman aur nanad behen saman hoti hai............dil me kayi sare armaan hote hai....ek nayi umag hoti hai........lekin dil me ek darr bhi chupa hua hota hai ki kya woh is naye mahol me apne aap ko sambhal payegi.........her ek kadam rakhne se pehle woh dus bar sochti hai............ghar ke bahar kadam rakhne se pehle ek bar use apne khandan apne pati ki izzat saath me leke jati hai........Kashish bhi aaj ek nayi zindagi me kadam rakhne jaa rahi hai lekin uske dil me koi darr nahi hai to sirf sujal ke liye beimtihaan mahobbat..........jab aap kisi ko jaan se bhi jyada pyaar karne lago to aapko uske sare rishtey apne lagne lagte hai............aaj Garewal khandan bahe felake dil me dher sara pyaar aankhoin me nayi umeed leke apni badi bahu ka swagat karne ko taiyaar hai................

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Kashish aur Sujal gharr aate hai...........ghar ke sabhi log unka besabri se swagat karne ko taiyaar hote hai........

Prem: mama jaldi karo.......Bhai aur Bhabhi aa gaye........

Prenna: aa gayi.........

Prerna aarti ki thali leke aati hai aur uske piche shanta tai Kumkum wala thal aur Khushi chawalwala Kalash lati hai.............Prerna Sujal aur Kashish ki aarti karti hai..

Prerna: Bhagwan............tum dono ko duniya ki sari khushiyaan de........jo sapne tum dono ne saath me dekhe hai woh sabhi pure ho........tum dono me aise hi pyaar badhta jaye...........aao Kashish.........Garewal khandan me tumhara swagat hai...........pehle is chaval ko girake us kumkum wale pair karke apne shubh kadam is ghar pe rakho............

Kashish kalash girake apne pair kumkum wale karke Ghar me apne pehla kadam rakhti hai Garewal Khandan ki bahu ke hasiyat se........

Prerna: Kashish........yeh is ghar ki chabiyaan hai jispe ab tumhara hakk banta hai...........maine to bahot sari jimedariyaan nibha di ab yeh tumhari bari hai........maine is ghar ko is ghar me rehnewalo ko bahot pyaar se pala hai........main chahti hoon ki jo apnapan pyaar maine in sab ko diya hai wahi tum use do..........ek khandan ke liye bahu unki kul ki mann maryada hoti hai..........tum apne saath her waqt Garewal Khandan ki izzat leke ghumogi...........main janti hoon ki tum muje kabhi sikayat ka mauka nahi dogi...........muje pura yakeen hai ki tum yeh jimedari bahot barkhubi se nibhaogi..........

Kashish: main aap se vaada karti hoon ki mere jite jee is ghar ko ya is ghar ke logo pe koi aanch nahi aane dungi.........main ghar ke har ek khone me apne tareke se pyaar bharne ki koshish karungi...........main aisa koi kaam nahi karungi jise aapko sharminda hona pade........lekin is ghar ko chalane ke liye muje aapka saath chahiye.........aur ghar ki chabiyaan ghar ke bado ke pass achchi lagti hai......is liye main yeh chabiyaan nahi le sakti lekin muje aapka aashirwad chahiye............

Kashish zuk ke prerna ka aashirwad leti hai........

Prerna: Sujal........agar muje pehle pata hota kki tum mere liye itni achchi bahu lanewala hai to yeh sab kabhi nahi hota.....khair muje tumhari pasand pe naz hai........jaisi bahu sochi thi use kayi jyada paya hai.........

Kashish sharma jati hai aur Sujal use dekhta rehta hai.......

Anurag: ab yeh sab drama chodo aur sab bache aake Bhabhi se aashirwad lenge.............sab se pehle Khushi...........

Khushi jake Kashish ke pair chuti hai lekin kashish use rokti hai...........

Khushi: Bhabhi .......aap bahot lucky hai ki aapko Sujalbhai jaise humsafar mile hai.......waise yeh chota sa tohfa meri aur se........kuch din pehle main Mata ke mandir gayi thi waha se yeh aashirwad ke roop me aapke liye yeh Sindoor layi hoon..........

Kashish: yeh chota nahi mere liye bahot keemati tohfa hai..........sukhriya...........

Shanta tai: ab mere Prem ki bari..........chal Prem.......

Prem bhi jake Kashish ke pair chuta hai........

Prem: welcome Bhabhi to the family...........yeh meri aur se ek chota sa tohfa.......is me do ghadiyaan hai aap dono ke liye jo aapke dil ki dhakan se chalti hai..........yeh her waqt aap dono ko ek dusre ka ehsaas karati rahengi..........

Kashish: bahot hi pyara tohfa hai......sukhriya..........

Anurag: ab aayi mere Sher ki........aaja Rudra........

Prem: ek minute.........Rudrabhai to Bhabhi se bade hai........

Shanta tai; lekin rishtey me bhabhi badi hai.........ab chal Rudra........

Rudra jake kashish ke pair chuta hai..........

Rudra: waise Bhabhi main aapke liye tohfa to laya hoon lekin badle me aapko mujse ek vaada karna hoga ki aap Bhai ko woh sari khushiyaan aur pyaar denge jinpe unk hakk banta hai......aap Bhai ka saath kabhi nahi chongge.......

Kashish: main vaada karti hoon ki main Sujal ko sari khushiyaan dungi..........sukh me dukh me bhi unka haath thame rakhungi.........

Prem: vaada sirf Bhabhi se..........kyun Bhai aapko bhi vaada karna hoga ki aap hamari bhabhi ko khush rakhenge...........

Sujal: main vaada karta hoon ki kabhi Kashish ki aankhoin me aanshu nahi aane dunga............

Rudra: yeh rahi aapki New Zealand ki ticket aapke honeymoon ke liye............

Sujal: thanks Rudra...........

Prerna: ab tum log bhi in dono ko akela chod do.......kashish bhi thak gayi hogi........Sujal Kashish ko apne Kamre me leke jao..........

Sujal aur Kashish jane lagte hai.........

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Khushi: ek minute bhai.........pehle mera nek..........

Sujal: kaisa nek.....ab yeh to mera hi ghar hai.....mera kamra......aur meri biwi........

Khushi: bhai aap bhi na..........aaj to mera hakk banta hai......muje nek chahiye.....warna main aapko aapke kamre me nahi jane dungi.........

Shanta tai: Sujal de dena nek......warna sari raat bahar sona padega........

Sujal: thik hai thik hai....kitna chahiye.........

Khushi; sirf 10,000.......

Prem: kya 10,000..........yeh aaj kal kya naya rate chal raha hai.......waha pe Heer bhai ke joote ke liye 10,000..........

Khushi: dena hai to thik hai warna tum bhi bahi ke saath bahar raho..........

Rudra: tu apni bak bak bandh kar.....waise bhi sab thak gaye hai......yeh pakad apne dus hazar aur kamre me ja.........taki hum bhi chen ki neend so sake....................

Khushi: thik hai abhi ja rahi hoon lekin ek aur baat............

Sujal: ab kya hai..........

Khushi: aapko Bhabhi ko apni baahoin me utake le jana hoga....kamre tak....

Sujal: kya........

Shanta tai; rasam hai........

Sujal; aisi kaisi rasam......

Shanta Tai: hai rasam.......tu sawal bahot karta hai.......tu jata hai ki teri Mama ko bulau......

Sujal: ja raha hoon.......

Sujal kashish ki aur badhne lagta hai........Sujal Kashish ke samne khada rehta hai............

Kashish: Sujal...........

Lekin usse pehle Sujal ne Kashish ko apni baahoin me utha liya hota hai.........Sujal dheere se kashish ko leke sidiyaan chadne lagta hai.......

Rudra: pyaar karo to Sujalbhai aur Kashishbhabhi ki tarah..........

Kashish sharmake Sujal ke gale aise hi lag jati hai....................

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Sujal Kashish ko leke kamre me aata hai aur woh Kashish ko neeche utarta hai aur Kamra lock kar deta hai..............Sujal jab mudta hai to Kashish sharmake dusri aur dekh rahi hoti hai.......kyunki aaj Kashish janti hai ki aaj ki raat kya honewala hai.............Sujal Kashish ke pass aake use apni aur dekhne ko kehta hai..........

Sujal: Kashish meri aur dekho..........

Kashish apni palke uthake Sujal ko dekhti hai..........

Sujal: kisne kaha ki chand zameen pe nahi aa sakta.........chaand ko pane ka khawab to sabhi ne dekhe honge lekin unme se koi ek hi mere jaisa khush naseeb hoga jinhone aaj apne naseeb me chaand ko pa liya.........waise to tum her waqt khubsurat lagti ho lekin is dulhan ke jode ki baat hi kuch aur thi........muje nahi pata tha ki muj jaise insaan ko bhi tum jaisi dulhan mil sakti hai.............

Kashish: maine sirf aapki dulhan banne ke sapne dekhe the.......aur aaj upperwale ki marzi se hum dono ek ho gaye............

Kashish sharmake Sujal ke gale lag jati hai...........Sujal Kashish ke forehead ko kiss karta hai phir uske dono gaal pe aur uske hoth ko chune hi wala hota hai ki Kashish sharmake aaine ke samne khadi ho jati hai.............Kashish apne kan ke zumke nikal ne wali hoti hai jab ek garm saans uske kaan se gujarti hai.................

Sujal: shhhhhhhh...............

Sujal kashish ke dono zumke nikal deta hai........Sujal kashish ke gale se haar nikal raha hota hai jab Kashish ke bal khich jate hai........

Kashish: aahhhhhh..........

Sujal: kya hau.............

Kashish: kuch nahi woh mer baal.........

Sujal: sorry............

Sujal kashish ki gardan pe kiss karta hai........

Sujal: ab kaisa hai.......

Kashish: pehle se behtar............

Sujal Kashish ka mangalsutra nikal ne hi wala hota hai ki......

Kashish: nahi.....Sujal...ise rehne dijiye......main inhe apne aap se ab ek pal ki liye bhi durr nahi karna chahti......yeh mangalsutra har pal muje aapka ehsaas dilati rahenga........aap ko ehsaas nahi lekin mere liye yeh bahot mayne rakhta hai..........

Sujal: itna pyaar karti ho mujse............

Kashish: kya kehne ki zaroorat hai..........Sujal main sab ke bina jee sakti hoon lekin aapke pyaar ke bigar main nahi jee paungi.........I love you Sujal...........

Sujal: I love you Kashish.........tumhare liye mera pyaar kabhi kam nahi hoga............

Sujal kashish ko apni baahoin me uthata hai aur use bed pe bethata hai.........

Sujal: Thank you kashish for coming into my life and making my life so beautiful...........

Kashish (sujal ke haath ko pakad ke): Thank you sujal for giving me so much love .............

Sujal slowly moves toward kashish and kashish close her eyes..........sujal comes near her and put his hands on her cheeks and pull her close to him.........then slowly he brings his lips to hers and they had their first kiss.........and it was so passionate and strong......Sujal kashish se thoda durr hota hai.........Sujal Kashish ki aur muskurata hai............jab achanak se khidki khulti hai aur hawa ke zoke se kashish ke bal uske chehre pe aate hai........Sujal Kashish ke nazgig aata hai........thoda aur .........phir Sujal dheere se kashish ke bal ko hatata hai..............Sujal kissed her forehead and looks at her........whose eyes are so closed............Sujal moves from forehead to her neck and then .........when he looks up and see Kashish's eyes are so closed and tears are running down..............Sujal drinks Kashish's tears and whispers........" I won't hurt u bcoz i love u" .........Kashish opens her eyes and so how much love and care for her in his eyes...........Kashish hugs him so tightly and whispers .......I LOVE YOU...............Kashish kissed Sujal on his lips ......she was so lost in his touch...........he moved his fingers to untie the strings of her blouse........the time passed away.........letting both lovers to tell each other the intensity of their love...........

 



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Posted: 12 July 2008 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
superb Fantastic Mindblowing and Romantic part Clap sab ne kitne ache se suwagat kiya kashish ka Big smile Embarrassed baahoin me utake le jana hoga Shanta tai ne kaise rasam banai hai LOL LOL LOL

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