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Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 (Page 14)

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Part-12

Sujal aur uske parivar ke jane ke bad Kashish apne kamre me bethi huyi thi..........kashish apni soch me Sujal ke saath bitaye huye lamho ko yaad kar rahi hai.....aaj zindagi puri hote hote phir se hawa ke mudne se uski zindagi phir se shuru huyi........kashish apne aap muskura rahi thi jab Heer aur Mehek aate hai..........

Heer: Mera piya ghar aaya....o Ramjee........Mera piya ghar aaya......

Kashish (sharma ke): yeh kya gun guna rahi ho.......

Mehek: dii aap kitni khush naseebhai na........aapne jo maanga woh sab aapko mil gaya.........aapko to kabhi yakeen hi nahi hoga ki aapka pyaar is mod pe bhi aayega........

Heer: aapki prem kahani ko dekh ke muje hindi film ki kisi prem kahani ki yaad aa gayi.......lekin aaj jis tarah aap jiju ko dekh ke daudi utna to film ki koi heroin bhi nahi daudi hogi......

Mehek: duffer........yeh koi film nahi........Dii ki apni zindagi ki kahani hai.........

Heer: dii..bataiye na.....aapne aisa kya kiya ki Jiju aapke piche latu ho gaye.........

Kashish (sharma ke): tum bhi na Heer kuch bhi bolti rehti ho.......maine aisa kuch nahi kiya.........

Heer: main to aise hi puch rahi thi........kal agar muje kisi ko apne piche latu karna pade to.......

Mehek: dii......aapke jane ke baad main iska kya karungi..........

Kashish: are.....tum dono ko main aise kaise chod ke ja sakti hoon.....leke jaungi na tum dono ko ........apni devraniyaan banake.........

Mehek: woh Rudra.......aapne dekha nahi use to baat karna bhi nahi aata...........rude man.......

Heer: aap log pareshan mat ho.......muje to teeno pasan hai..................kya handsome the............kya personality thi............dashing rich guys.........

Kashish: mere Sujal pe nazar dalne ki koshish bhi mat karna......samji tum..........

Mehek: Sujalsir se mere Sujal..........kya baat hai dii........

Kashish: tum log bhi na jao yaha se.........tum logo ko aur koi kaam nahi.........

Heer: dii.......aap shaadi ke bad jiju ko kya kehke bulayegi.............Ojee........Suniye jee.........ya phir hunny......

Kashish: bas bhi karo.............nahi to main Mama se jake tumdono ki sikayat karungi........

Jab Nandini aati hai........

Nandini: kaun meri Kashish ko pareshan kar raha hai..........

Kashish: Mama....dekhiye na yeh Heer muje kab se ched rahi hai...........

Nandini: heer......apni behen ko is tarah nahi chedte.........waise kashish aisa tune kya kiya ki uska parivar teri tarife hi kare ja raha tha........aur sujal to tere pyar me pagal hai.....bata na......

Kashish: mama aap bhi........jaiye muje kisi se baat nahi karni.............

Kashish gusse me neeche hall me chali jati hai........

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Tringgggggg..............Tringggggggggg.............

Kashish (in anger): hello.......kaun bol raha hai............

Sujal: to tum aise phone pe baat karti ho.........

Kashish (sharma ke): nahi.......woh........

Sujal: batao itni gusse me kyun ho......

Kashish: woh Mehek aur Heer muje ched rahe hai aur ab Mama bhi.........

Sujal; kis baat ko leke ched rahe hai.........

Kashish: muje aapse is bare me koi baat nahi karni.........

Sujal; main batata hoon........woh log tumhare Pyaar ko leke ched rahe hai..........ab itna sharmaogi to chedenge na sabhi.......

Kashish: aapko kaise pata ......

Sujal: kyunki main tumhe apni aankhoin ke samne jo dekh raha hoon......

Kashish mud ke Sujal ko dekhti hai jo darwaze pe khada hota hai.........kashish jaldi me phone rakh deti hai aur apna dupatta thik karti hai.........Sujal Kashish ki aur aata hai.........

Kashish: aap yaha........

Sujal: haa.........kyun muje yaha nahi aana chahiye tha...........

Kashish: nahi woh mera yeh matlab nahi tha...........

Jab Nandini aur Mehek aate hai.........

Nandini: are Sujal tum..........yaha kya kar rahe ho.......

Sujal; muje aap ki izazat chahiye.......kashish se kuch zaroori baat karni hai.........

Nandini: lekin beta.........

Mehek (whispers): Mama.....samja karo.........

Nandini: thik hai....lekin jaldi aana..........kal sagai hai bahot si taiyariyaan karni hai.........

Sujal: aap phikar mat kariye......hum bas ek ghante me aate hai...........

Mehek: bye dii.........bye Jiju.......

Sujal: bye.....

Sujal aur Kashish waha se chale jate hai.........

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Sujal Kashish ko ek pahadi pe lejata hai jaha pe un dono ke alawa aur koi nahi hota..............

Kashish: kitni khubsurat jagah hai na..........pata main yaha pehli bar aa rahi hoon.........yaha se seher kitna khubsurat lagta hai..........dekhiye na........

Jab Kashish Sujal ki aur dekhti hai to woh Kashish ko ek nazar dekh hi raha hota hai..........

Kashish: aise kya dekh rahe hai.........

Sujal kuch kahe bina Kashish ke gale lag jata hai..............Kashish sochti reh jati hai lekin phir woh bhi Sujal ko gale se laga leti hai...........thodi dair bad Sujal Kashish se dur hota hai aur Kashish ke mathe ko chumta hai........Phir Sujal waha pe pada paththar pe bethta hai aur Kashish uske pass............Kashish apna sir Sujal ke khandhe pe hota hai aur Sujal ke haath ke saath khel rahi hoti hai..........

Kashish: Sujal..........aapko mujse koi baat karni thi na........

Sujal: Kashish.....tum ab tak yeh to jan hi gayi hogi ki main apne parivar se kitna pyaar karta hoon.........aur main unhe kabhi dukhi nahi dekh sakta..........maine hamesha yahi koshish ki hai ki sab ki khawaishe me puri karoon..........aur Mama ke bare me kya kahoon........mere liye woh mere bhagwan hai........aur main unki pooja karta hoon.......aur main mama ki aankhoin me kabhi aanshu nahi dekh sakta.......kyunki unhone muje sabse jyada pyaar diya hai.........aur main apne bhaiyon aur behen ko bhi haste huye dekhna chahta hoon.............apne parivar ki khushiyaan badhane me mera saath dogi.........

Kashish: main zindagi ke her safar me aapke saath hoon..........ab woh sirf aapka parivar nahi balke hamara parivar hai............aur aapke bhagwan mere bhagwan.......main apni aur se puri koshish karungi kabhi unhe meri aur se koi dukh na pahonche.......main aapse vaada karti hoon ki zindagi ke her faisle me main aapke saath rahungi.............

Sujal: thanks Kashish..........ab tum meri honewali biwi ho.........aur tumhe ek aur baat janne ka pura hakk hai..........Mayabua ko main pasand nahi.........kyunki mujme Garewal ka khoon nahi.......woh tumhe bhi baatein sunayegi jaise Mama ko sunati hai.......lekin tumhe sirf seh lena hoga.........

Kashish: muje koi farak nahi padat .........tum Garewal ho ya koi bhi.........mere liye aap sirf mere Sujal hai..........mera pyaar Sujal.............

Sujal: kitni aasani se tum muje aur mere parivar ko samajti ho..............

Kashish: kyunki main aapse pyaar karti hoon isliye aapko itne kareeb se janti hoon.........

Sujal: kitni ajeeb baat hai na tum mere bare me sab kuch janti ho lekin main kuch nahi janta tumhare parivar ke bare me............

Kashish: Papa ab retired ho gaye hai.......mama maa se jyada dost hai........Mehek meri behen kam hum dard jyada hai...........woh apne final year photography kar rahi hai........aur kuch hi din pehle unhe ek famous photographer ke yaha working partner ki job mili hai...........aur Heer meri jaan hai.........hamare ghar ki muskaan hai woh.............marketing ke dusre year me hai.........aur Shampda chachi Abhaychacha ki patni thi........Abhaychacha ne chachi ko shaadi ke kuch hi dino bad dusri aurat ke liye chod diya......bad me woh drug dealing ke dhandhe me pad gaye.........jab unhe apni galti ka ehsaas hua tab woh Papa ke pass apne gunaho ki mafi mangne aaye the ........lekin papa ne use kabhi maff nahi kiya aur usi pastava ke liye unhone khudkhushi kar li ..........aur chachi aaj tak uski jimedar papa ko samajti hai..........

Sujal: to kya chachi ko chacha ki asliyat nahi pata........

Kashish: nahi yeh baat sirf main aur papa jante hai.........aur ab yeh baat aap jante hai.........lekin galti se bhi yeh baat ka jikar aap mere parivar ke samne bhi mat karna........

Sujal: nahi karunga......yeh raaz raaz rahega........muje khushi huyi ki tum apne dil ki sari baat mujse kehti ho..........mujse vaada karo ki tum hamesha apne dard mere saath batogi...........

Kashish: vaada karti hoon.........lekin aap bhi kabhi mujse koi jooth nahi bolenge..........

Sujal: vaada karta hoon ki hamare is rishtey me sirf sach hoga..........waise main tumhare liye kuch laya hoon............

Kashish: mere liye.....kya hai.........

Sujal Kashish ko ek gift bag deta hai...........

Sujal: main chahta hoon ki kal sagai ke din tum yeh pehen ke aao..............muje bahot achcha lagega......

Kashish: thik hai main pehen ke aaungi lekin aapne yeh kab liya.......

Sujal: jab hum us din shopping pe gaye the.......tab yeh muje bahot pasand aaya tha to maine tumhare liye kharid liya.........

Kashish: aur aaj agar aapki shaadi usse ho jati to aap yeh tohfa use de dete............

Sujal: nahi.......kyunki ispe sirf tumhara hakk banta hai..........

kashish: thank you........

Sujal: chalo..........ghar pe tumhari mama intzaar kar rahi hogi.......

Sujal aage jane hi wala hota hai ki Kashish Sujal ka haath pakad leti hai............Sujal jab mud ke Kashish ko dekhta hai to Kashish Sujal ke gale lag jati hai..........

Kashish: I love u.........

Sujal: I love you too...........

Sujal phir Kashish ko ghar pe chod deta hai............

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Aaj ke din garewal hotel bahot hi saza hua hai.........jaise yaha pe diwali ho..........charo aur roshni hi roshni hai..........Sujal darwaze ki aur dekh raha hota hai jab Rudra aur Prem aate hai................

 (sujal's sherwani)

Rudra: Prem..........aaj se pehle Bhai ko itni beshabri se kisi ka intzaar karte nahi dekha........

Prem: Sujalbhai........usi din aise hi darwaze ko dekh rahe the jab yeh Kashishbhabhi ko pehli bar mile..........

Rudra: dekha.....sabse ehem pal maine miss kar diya...........lekin koi baat nahi..........ab Bhai batao na jab aapne pehli bar Bhabhi ko dekha tab kaisa laga........

Sujal: Kashish ko dekhne ke baad aisa laga ki upperwale ne uske bad khubsurati banana chod diya.........upperwale ne use her khubi se banaya hai............jab uski aankhein sharam se num hoti hai to ek choti si muskaan uske chehre pe aa jati hai........jab pareshan hoti hai to apne dupatte ko apni ungliyon se moda karti hai..............jab pass se gujarti hai to main uski khusboo mehsoos kar sakta hoon...........jab bhi main use dekhta hoon......main uski ada me kahi kho jata hoon..........aur aaj bhi main us ko dekh ke apna dil kho betha hoon..............

Jab sab log darwaze ki aur dekhte hai to Kashish apne pure Parivar ke saath hoti hai............Kashish bahot hi khubsurat lag rahi hoti hai..........sab log bas use dekhe hi ja rahe hote hai..............

 (kashish's ghagra)

Kashish: Mehek......kya main itni kharab lag rahi hoon..........sab log muje ghur kyun rahe hai...........

Mehek: kyunki aap aaj kisi pari se kam nahi lag rahi...........

Prerna: aaiye aap log........hum aaphi ka intzaar kar rahe the........

Kashish jake Prerna aur Anurag ka aashirwad leti hai.........

Prerna: jiti rahe.............bahot pyari lag rahi ho.........

Khushi: Bhabhi aap mere saath chaliye..........main aapko apne dosto se milvati hoon........Mehekdii..........Heerdii.......aap bhi chaliye.......

Sab log kahish ko leke chale jate hai...........abhi bhi Sujal aur Kashish ek dusre ki aankhioin me khoye huye the.......jab kahi se music ki aawaz aati hai.............

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Maahi Ve Maahi Ve That's The Way Maahi Ve (Rudra aur Prem gana shuru karte hai)

Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke (Rudra Mehek ke pass jata haI)

Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re Maahi Ve (Prem Heer ke pass jata hai)

Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke(Rudra Mehek ko bich hall me khich ke aata hai)

Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re Maahi Ve (Prem Heer ko leke aata hai)

Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba (Ek taraf heer aur prem nach rahe hai)

Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba (dusri aur Rudra aur Mehek nach rahe hai)

Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba Tu Soniye (Khushi Kashish ko leke bech me jati hai)

 

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (Rudra aur Prem kashish ko khich ke aate hai)

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (kashish un dono ke beech dance karti hai)

 

O Tere Aankhen Kali Kali (Jab sujal kashish ki aur aage badhta hai)

Tera Gora Gora Mukhdha Hai Re Maahi Ve (Sujal Kashish ki pass khada rehta hai)

Tere Rangat Jaise Sona (kashish sharmake jane lagti hai)

Tu Chaand Ka Tukda Hai Re Maahi Ve (Sujal Kahsish ka haath pakad leta hai)

Tere Gaal Gulabi Rabba Rabba (kashish sharam se lal ho rahi hoti hai)

Chal Sharabi Rabba Rabba (kashish sharmake apna haath chudake chali jati hai)

Dil Ki Kharabi Rabba Rabba Tu Soniye (Sujal kashish ko sirf dekhta hi rehta hai)

 

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (Rudra aur Prem Sujal ke pass aate hai)

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (teeno bhai ek saath nachte hai)

 

Barse Rangini Kaliyan Hai Mehki Bhini Bhini (Kashish waha pe pade pholo ko apne haatoin me leti hai)

Baje Mann Mein Halke Halke Shehnaiya Re (kashish un phulo lo apne sine se lagati hai )

Jitne Hai Tare Aanchal Mein Aa Gaya Sare (kashish who sare phool hawa me uda deti hai)

Dil Ne Jaise Hi Li Angadayee Re (haath phela ke use apne aanchal me leti hai)

Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke (rudra aur prem aake Kashish ko leke Sujal ki aur dhakka dete hai)

Chal Bajke Oh Soniye (Kashish sujal ki bahoin me jake girti hai)

Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye (Kashsih sharam se apna muh sujal ke piche chuo jati hai)

 

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (rudra prem aur khushi nachte hai)

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (Sujal aur Kahsish ek dusre ko dekh rahe hote hai)

 

Chanhda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjhaoon (Mehek aur heer Nandini ke pass jate hai jiski aankhoin me aanshu hote hai)

Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re (Kashish daud ke apne mama ke gale lag jati hai)

Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon (harsh aake kahsish ke aanshu pochta hai)

Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re (Kahsish apne mama papa ke gale lagti hai)

Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke (heer aur mehek Kashish ko lejate hai)

Chal Bajke Oh Soniye (Prem aur Rudra Sujal ko leke aate hai)

Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye (dono beech hall me ek dusre ke samne aate hai)

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (dono ek dusre ko anguthi pehnate hai)

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (sab log bahot hi khush hote hai)

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Prerna: kitne dino bad mera sujal itne khush hai........aur yeh sab tumhari waje se..........

Kashish: mama.......main bhi Sujal ko aise hi khush dekhna chahti hoon.........main kabhi bhi unke chehre se yeh khushi gayab nahi hone dungi.........

Prerna: ab pata chala........sujal tujse itna pyaar kyun karta hai........kyunki tum uski har dhadkan ko janti ho...........

Kashish: sach kaha aapne.........hamare rishtey dhadkane hi pehle ek dusre se jud gayi.........

Pooja: excuse me Mam.........aapke liye ek phone hai.......

Kashish: mere liye......kiska.......

Pooja: pata nahi.......lekin important hai.......aapki cabin se........

Kashish: mama......main abhi dekhke aati hoon...............

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Kashish apni office ki aur jane lagti hai jab achanak sekoi Kashish ka haath khich ke use ek kamre me le jata hai.........aur darwaza bandh kar deta hai........Kashish dekhti hai to Sujal hota hai...........

Kashish: kya hai yeh.........muje jane dijiye.......mera ek zaroori phone hai........

Sujal: koi phone nahi hai........woh maine hi tumhe yaha pe bulaya hai.......

Kashish: kya.....lekin kyun........

Sujal: kyunki main tumhare saath kuch waqt akele me bitana chahta hoon.......

Kashish: lekin........waha pe.........Sujal.........

Sujal apni ungli Kashish ke hoth pe rakhta hai.......

Sujal: shhhhhh............aaj tum kuch jyada hi khubsurat lag rahi ho..........

Jab kisi ke aane ki aahat hoti hai........Sujal Kashish ko khich ke cupboard ke piche chup jata hai...........kashish darr ke mare Sujal ke sine se lipati huyi hoti hai.......

Pooja: are yeh Sujalsir ki office me light kyun on hai.......aur koi hai bhi nahi.......lekin muje kya......

Pooja light off karke darwaza bandh karke chali jati hai..........

Kashish apna sir uper karke Sujal ko dekhti hai.............Kashish Sujal ki woh nashili aankhoin me kahi khoyi huyi hoti hai.........Sujal Kashish ki aur aage badhta hai aur Kashish ke cheek pe kiss karta hai......Sujal Kashish ke bal side pe karta hai.......phir woh uski neck ki aur aage badhta hai........Kashsih ka dupatta neche gir jata hai..........Sujal kashish ke neck pe kiss karta hai aur aage badh raha hai........

Kashish: sujal...........rukiye....koi aa jayega......

Sujal: ab aur nahi ruka jata.......

Kashish: bas shaadi tak ki baat hai.......

Sujal: thik hai.......

Sujal Kashish ke bal thik karta hai aur phir zameen se Kashish ka dupatta leke use thik se kashish ke kandhe pe rakhta hai........aur uske forehead pe kiss karta hai........

Sujal: ab tum pehle jao......main aata hoon.......taki kisi ko shak na ho......

Kashish waha se jane lagti hai jab mud ke wapas aake sujal ke gal pe kiss karke bhag jati hai............

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Sujal aur Kashish dono Party me wapas aate hai.........Anurag dono ko batata hai ki panditjee ne shaadi ka muhurat aaj se thik gyarah din ke bad ka nikala hai.........sab log ek dusre ko party me badhai de rahe hote hai aur aise hi party chalti rehti hai.............



Edited by goodkashish - 20 July 2008 at 5:33pm

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ClapCrywonderfull part yaar      !!!!!!!!!!!...... sujal tou bohot khush hoga aj key din ....kyun ke aj wo apne pure parivaar key saath apne pyaar key ghar jara hay tha usko hamesha key liye apna bananey   !!!!!! ..... love the way you describe the way how anurag n his family begin soo rich are soo down too earth  !!!......kashish nay kabhie bhie apney parents sey khuch nahi chupaya...tou yeah kouy key wo sujal sey pyaar karti hai aur jou bhie usne kiya sujal key liye ????????.....khushi nae bilkul thik …lene ek bhabhi ae han lekin lae key 3 bhabhia jaegey lolz LOL!!!!!!!!.......how can this be possible Shocked....kashish left for banglore Cry Cry Cry!!!!!...i can't believe that she was leaving after wht happen Cry!!!!!!!.......i mean infront of her eyes prena nay rishta toura thay and even sk confess their love ....maybe she was feelling that yeah rishta uski wacha say touta Confused....which is not true Smile!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....................sujal nay zindagi may bhie nahie socho hoga kay wo itni security rules thorey ga sirf apnie  kashish pohocne ke liye LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........the preeto scene was funny LOL....pajie kou pehle batana chahie tha na ke ISHQ ka mamla hay Wink!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......mujhe srk aur kajol ka scene yaad agaya tha Wink....!!!!!!!!!  chalo kashish ko akal tou key jou wo karne jarahie thi wo jitna bura tha not only 4 her but for sujal, her n his family too Cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....hey guys i know that u too lovers are happy too be reunited again...but public place hay yaar .... even kids r present...LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........a huge round of applause for the master mind behind (rudra) and his companions (prem, khushi, n shata tai) Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap!!!!!!!!!   sujal own them a big treat Tongue !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........prena is soo sweet Smile...i mean she treats kashish like her own daughter.....bilkul sahie kaha Smile...sujal tou pura pagal hai apni mom say bhie chupaya key usko pyaar hogaya hai Cry...par uski saza tou ushe milegie hie Wink!!!!!!!!!!!!!........the next is going too be SK sagai Wink Smile Clap Smile Wink....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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awsome part girl Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap!!!!!!!!.......i know that kashish is thinking how destiny play games with us ..... it with u surprise that you never expect in that moment Smile!!!!!!!..............yaar heer is too much par uskie baatey kitnie sachie hay, right Smile??? kashish nae tou soch bhie liya key apnie behno ko devrani banay gie Tongue....pehle hie say devaro kou janne lagie Wink LOL Wink!!!!!!!........heer, mehek and nandani are toghter pulling kashish legs LOL LOL LOL.....sach kaha kashish nay uski maa ....uski dost hai Smile!!!   .....sujal and kashish part on the cliff was really nice Smile,....s told her that maya doesn't like him coz he's not a garewal n that she can make trobule for her too Cry.....kashish is soo understanding Smile!!!!....i wonder how can they know each other inside out ?????????..........sad story of kashish chachu Cry drug dealing is a dangarous thing ..... i know it was really hard for harsh not too forgive his own brother Cry Cry Cry....hope some day kashish chachi gets too know the truth of her hunsband death Cry!!!!!!!!!!................the engagement part was awesome Clap...really entertaining Clap Clap Clap!!!!!!!..........the soong perfect for the occasion Thumbs Up!!!!!..........sujal thora aur intezaar karlo sirf shaadie thak kie baat hay phir kashish tumharie nazro key samne hie rahey gie Wink!!!!!!!!!!........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzz...................awesome going !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........waitting for the next part eagerly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........
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another wonderful part. Clap

Uff how much they love each other. They look so sweet together. Song was just apt for the situation full of masti. Sujal is so romantic. Good to see both shared abt their families with each other and both of them understood each othe so well. Tongue
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very nice part di. Clap ...........i m very happy for sujal and kashish............... Clap and wow wat a cute scene b/w sujal and kashish........ i was blushing at d time wen i was reading that particular scene Embarrassed wow wat a romace......and kashish's dress was superb and sujal's sherwani also.....and prem and rudr they r also trying for heer and mehak.behti ganga me hath dhone ka irada hai dono ka kya LOL LOL and di plz ab jaldi se sk ke marriage karo do widout any problemmmm nad thanx for continuinggggggg Embarrassed

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Posted: 01 July 2008 at 1:31am | IP Logged
mindblowing part Clap

heer & mehak tease kashish and his mama also i just loved it Embarrassed ................... per sujal aur kashish ka eik dusray ko apne pariwaar kay barey mein sab kuch batana..................sk dance in the party with each other they were so happy [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] .................plz con't soon
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Posted: 01 July 2008 at 5:20am | IP Logged
lovely sujal is so cute... LOL Tongue
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Posted: 01 July 2008 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Lovely part Clap I liked Heer n Mehek teasing Kashish n finally Nandini joining them Wink The entire cliff scene was so cute n romantic Embarrassed The chachu's story was funny in a way..getting involved in drug dealing n all..Relly liked Anurag's family..they r very sweet n down to earth people.... Smile The romance between Sujal n Kashish rocks big time.... Tongue
Kashish: are.....tum dono ko main aise kaise chod ke ja sakti hoon.....leke jaungi na tum dono ko ........apni devraniyaan banake.........Kashish: are.....tum dono ko main aise kaise chod ke ja sakti hoon.....leke jaungi na tum dono ko ........apni devraniyaan banake.........was really nice..it'll b gr8 to c these luv stories.... Wink Plzz continue asap Smile Smile Smile

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