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hrhr

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

hey guys this is a update frm me.........

next morning karan shilpa are ready to go to their school/college

in the college

karan and shilpa in their campus

karan-hii  guys

shilpa-hiii

all frnds-hi karanshilpa

all-yaar aj hamari projects partners decide hone wale hain pata nahi miss mehra kiske sath pairs banaengiQuestion

thn just karan's gf maya enters

maya- hi honey

karan-hi sweetie

shilpa feels jealous of her as she knows that maya was not a good girlOuch

shilpa-karan class shuru hone wali hai chalenSmile

thn maya interupts

maya-hey tumhe kya problem hai hum khud aa jaenge tum jaoAngry

just thn shilpa was going and karan call her frm back

karan-shilpa wait i m coming wid uSmile

she feels happyBig smile

thn maya thinks-is shilpa ka kuch karna padegaAngry

in the class

karan is sitting wid shilpa as usual

thn miss mehra enters

miss mehra-good morning class

all-good morning miss

miss mehra-so ready for ur project  so i m now going to announce the pairs

she was announcng the pairs and she announces karan kapoor-shilpaEmbarrassed

karan{to shilpa}-yeeeeeeeee thank god ki meri partner tum ho .......ab to mujhe ye project karne main koi problem nahi haiEmbarrassed

bcoz u r wid meWink

she feels happyTongue

thn the class is over

shilpa-karan chalen

karan-han lets go

but thn maya enters

maya-hey miss shilpa i think tumhe ajj akele jana hoga bcoz main karan ke sath ja rahi hoonAngry

karan wants to say smething but before that shilpa says-koi baat nahi main chali jaongiConfused

u enjoy

karan doesn't say anything but he doesn't feel goodConfused

thn karan and maya leaves

thn shilpa walking through corridoor notices karan's lucky chain lying there in the corridoor

she picks it up and thinks"mujhe ye karan ko de dena chaiye kyonki vo to iske bina kahi bhi nahi jata"

thn she goes to the tennis court and there karan and maya are already present

shilpa widout noticing anything

shilpa-karan ye lo tumhari lucky chain corridoor main mili mujhko

maya didn't lyk this and bursted outAngry

maya-that is a limit

wht do u think of urself? "silly girl"Angry

kya tumhe kisi ne manners nahi sikhaye

shilpa starts cryingCry

maya-bas ro kar sabki sympathy pati ho aur sab ko lagta hai ki shilpa kitni bholi haiEvil Smile

she cries even moreCry

karan can't tolerate this more and he spoke

karan-shut up maya!u know ki tum kya bol rahi hoAngry

maya-han main janti hun.....aur ab ise bhi {to shilpa}sab sikha dungi ki ye hai kya...........apne aap ko bahut smart samajhti ho na tum....but listen i m maya sexena aur mujhse panga lekar tumne acha nahi  kiya ............u idiot.are hai kya tumme....na shakal hai na akal hai..........bas sirf itna janti ho ki logon ka mood kaise spoil karte hain

u stupid...............................Angry

karan can't tolerate this

he burst out wid anger and slaps tightly on maya's faceClap

karan-u deserve this only.......i was mad ki maine tumse pyar kiya.sab ne mujhe roka par maine kisi ki na suni par ab mujhe sab samaj aa gaya hai

maya-but karan plz meri baat to suno

karan-its enough.......now its all over miss maya sexena......tumhari himmat kaise hui shilpa ko ye sab bolne ki.......Angry

maya-i m ur girlfrnd ....main tumhari life main zyada important hun ya ye shilpa

on the other side shilpa is crying badlyCry

karan-first of all u r not my girlfrnd.....and secondly shilpa is more more more important to me than u.....she is important to me than my own life....now u have got ur answer and i think now u should leaveBig smile

maya leaves saying-i will see u mr.karan kapoor and u miss shilpaAngry

nnow karan and shilpa are alone in the tennis court

karan-ab tum rona band karo

she is crying badlyCry

karan consoles her by saying -hey shilpa why are u crying u should feel happy ki mera us chipkali se picha choot gayaLOL

shilpa smiles a little but is very disturbed

karan takes her inside the court and make her sit on the bench and sits next to her

karan{wiping her tears}-acha ab ye rona band karo .mujhe acha nahi lagta.....nahi to main bhi ro dungaEmbarrassed

he kisses her foreheadEmbarrassed

she hugs him saying -i m really very sorry karanWink

karan{hugging her back}-sorry ??but for whatEmbarrassed

shilpa-mere vajah se tumhara break up ho gayaConfused

karan-to han iske liye to mujhe tumse thanx bolna chaiye us pagal se mera picha chudvane ke liyeLOL

she smiles and says -but mujhe really bahut bura lag raha hai  i mean tumhari girlfrnd chali gayi meri vajah seConfusedConfused

karan-to kya hua tumto nahi gayi naWink

she smiles but confused

karan-are nothing is important in my life than u.....he kisses her forehead again.......jab tum mere sath ho mujhe kisi maya ,tina ,rita,etc.etc. ki zarurat nahiWink

bcoz u r my best frnd and my everythingSmile

han aur rahi baat girlfrnd ki to tum ho na tum ban jana meri girl frndWink

kyonki girl to tum ho hi aur meri frnd bhi ho aur vo bhi best frnd  .to tum hui meri best girlfrndLOLv

she laughs and says acha ye lo tumhari lucky chain

karan-tum hi pehna do na......vo kya hai na mere hath us maya ki skin se touch hokar gande ho gaye hainWink

she laughs and put his chain in his neck

she rest her head on his shoulderEmbarrassed

and says -promise ki hum hamesha ese hi rahengeBig smile

karan-oyeeee  dufus ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai......are karanshilpa sath hain ye baat sab ko pata hi........afterall u r my best girlfrndBig smile

they sat there for sme tym thn shilpa says

shilpa-karan tumne apne project ke bare main socha??????/

karan-sochna kya hai tum ho na i m sure u will handleWink

shilpa-han han vo to main hi handle karungi hamesha ki tarah......but tumhe help to karni hogi na meri!!!!!!!Big smile

karan-vo to main karunga hi na hamesha ki tarahWink

and they laughedLOL

karan-acha suno hume 3 din baad project submit karvana hai to ajj se hi shuru kar de

shilpa-ya u r right  par kahan .i mean tumhare ghar ya mere ghar

karan-ajj bhaiya bhi 1 month ke liye USA chale gaye hain business ke liye

shilpa-oh!! mere mom dad bhi ENGLAND main hain....papa ki seminar ke liye  unhe bhi 2 weeks lag jaenge ane main

karan-so don't worry hum tumhare ghar bana lenge project bcoz mere ghar main to already kaka{his servent frm thn whn he was a child} hain

shilpa-ok thn ajj phir sham ko mere ghar...........ok....i will wait for u......Big smile

karan -ok.ab chale

shilpa noded her head and says- yes

they both go hand in hand Heart

i hope u will lyk this

plz do comment

this was my first try



Edited by hrhr - 23 May 2008 at 12:51pm

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Clap nicely done hun..do continue soon.. Tongue

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like i tol u hw i read it... sorry but its nice update soon... Big smile Big smile

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WinkIts 7:00 at evening

Karan enters to shilpa's place

He rings the bell

Shilpa{opens the door}-hi main tumhara hi wait kar rahi thiBig smileBig smileBig smile

Karan  enters and both goes to shilpa's room

 

Karan-hey shilpa tum apna room kitna saf rakhti hoEmbarrassed

Shilpa –aur tumhara bhi Embarrassed

Karan –han vo to hai and thanx for that

Shilpa-thanx??????????but why?????

I mean I m ur best frnd so tumhe thanx kehne ki koi zarurat nahi haiBig smile

Karan-tumhe kisne keh diya ki tum meri best frnd ho?????????Question

Shilpa-{really very tensed}-Confused-karan ye tum kya keh rahe ho……..ConfusedConfusedConfused  I mean ajj subah tak to main hi tumhari best frnd thiConfused

Karan-han maine kab kaha ki tum meri subah tak best frnd nahi thiWink

Par sirf subah tak

Shilpa{all upset}Confused-to matlab ab main tumhari best frnd nahi hoon

Karan-nahiDead

Shilpa thn starts cryingCry

Karan-tum ro kyon rahi ho

Shilpa-kyoki ab  main tumhari best frnd nahi rahi naCry

Karan{very naughtly}-han kyonki ab to tum meri best girlfrnd ho na

She starts hitting him playfully and they both laughedLOL

Shilpa-acha suno tumne socha hai ki humare project ka topic kya hoga???????

Karan-han socha hai……..and its very niceEmbarrassed

Shilpa-to jaldi bolo na

Karan-humare project ka topic hoga ROMEO AND JULIETWink

Shilpa-wht??????????Angry Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya  hum miss mehra ko kya kahenge ki mam we have researched on ROMEO AND JULIETAngry

Karan-are mam ne hi to bola ki jis topic main hume zyada interest ho usi par proect banana chahiye to mera interest to isi main haiWink

Shilpa-han but ye nahi chalega…think smething more

Karan-nahi pehle mujhe 1 cup coffee bana kar do  Wink……………..tumhe pata hai na mujhe tumhare hath ki coffee kitni pasand haiWink

Shilpa-ok waitBig smile

Karan-no wait and no late …jaldiiiiiiiEmbarrassed

Shilpa just ran downstairs and just thn she slipes

Shilpa{in a very loud voice}-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ………CryKARANNNNNNNNNNNNN

Karan{listening her voice becomes scared and runs towards stairs}Confused

And sees her lying over there on the stairs and is in pain

Karan just picked her up in his arms and took her to her bedEmbarrassed

Embarrassed

He takes first aid box and  starts apllying spray on her footEmbarrassed

Karan-kya zaroorat thi itni jaldi karne ki .aram se nahi ja sakti thi kya?????Angry

Shilpa-tumhi ne to kaha tha ki    no wait and no late …Confused

jaldiiiiiii   to main kya karti

Karan-tum poori ki poori pagal hoErmm

Shilpa{making puppy face}-ek to tumhari vajah se main itni jaldi kar ke gayi aur tum mujhe dant rahe hoConfused

Karan- are yaar main to mazak kar raha thaBig smile

Shilpa-karan bahut dard ho raha haiCry

Karan-mujhe pata hai lekin thodi der to sehna padega naSmile

Shilpa-karan Smile

Karan-hmmmmmmmmTongue

Shilpa- I want coffeeWink

Karan-kya??????????Confused

Shilpa-kyon mere liye 1 cup coffee nahi bana sakte

Karan-nahi aisi baat nahi hai.,……….acha ruko main aata hun

Thn he goes to kitchen  …..he does n't know abt how to light up the stove thn also he makes coffee for shilpaSmile

Karan-tan tana !!!!!!!here is ur coffee mamSmile

Shilpa-thank u

Karan-pi ke batao na kaisi hai

Shilpa{takes a sip}-Smile

mmmmmmmm  bahut tasty hai  ..tumne pehli baar banai hai

Karan –han sirf tumhare liyeSmile

She feels herself so specialEmbarrassed

Karan-1 sip mujhe bhi do na

Shilpa-nahi ye meri jhooti hai

Karan-keh to aise rahi ho ki jaise ajj tak maine tumhara jhoota khaya nahi…..mujhe nahi pata mujhe chaiye bas

Shilpa-nahi main nahi dungi

Karan-grabs cup frm her hand and takes a sip

And the coffee came out of his mouth

Karan-chiiiiiiiiiiii   kitni gandi coffee haiPinch

Tum ise kaise pi rahi thi ..r u mad……aur upper se kaha ki ye yummy hai

Shilpa-vo karan tum itne pyar se bana kar laye the ki main kya karti.i don't want to break ur heart

Karan feels so nice to have her in his lifeBig smile

Karan-chalo ajj ye to pata chal gaya ki mujhe kitchen main kabhi nahi ghusna chiye

Varna kitchen store ban jaegaLOL

They both lauged

Shilpa{thinking}-"aur mujhe ye pata chal gay ki tum mere liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho"Embarrassed

Oh god!!!!!!1thanx for giving a frnd lyk karan to meEmbarrassed

Thn she just slept on his lap

Karan on seeing this memorized her beauty  and says

Tum kitni pyari ho!!!!!creases her hair   and says   sote hue ek dum choti si bachi lagti hai

Thn he kissed her forehead and says hamesha mere sath hi rehna zindgi bhar Embarrassed

Thn he thinks{am I in luv wid shilpa}Embarrassed

And thinking this all he also slept there and his head lies on her headEmbarrassed

They both slept

 

NEXT MORNING

 

SHILPA WAKES UP FIRST

Shilpa sees karan sleeping lyk this and says

Sote hue kitna cute lagta hai ek dum bachon ki tara bahut hi bhola saEmbarrassed

Aur vaise shaitan no.1 and laughsLOL

She thinks of all there past moments and one thing come to her mind

M I IN LOVE WID KARANBig smile

 

GUYS THIS WAS MY NEXT UPDATE

PLZ LEAVE UR COMMENTS

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plz yaar read and comment
if u not like it thn also comment so that i can improove myself

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Embarrassed wah bhai wah  kya baat hain kina vadia likha hain ,,,,,,,,,,,keep it up.. Day Dreaming Big smile   Clap

Edited by choco_girl - 18 May 2008 at 12:57am

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