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Poem - Silent plea of a tormented heart (Page 2)

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Thanks Fatima. I'll definitely keep your words in mind, although I'm not sure whether I may really write more.  Maybe I'll have to take longer showers since this one was born during one! Shabbo's shower scene helped! 

Muneeza, you are being too kind, likening me to a great poet like Shelley. I'm flattered, to say the least. Thanks dear.

Edited by optimist - 17 May 2008 at 10:46am

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:50am | IP Logged

Clap Opti, you are tooo good, aptly conveyed Milind's feelings/state of confusion, battle between his feelings and conscious.

So many poets in the forum :)



Edited by $weet Ema - 17 May 2008 at 10:53am
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:50am | IP Logged
these lines esp. brought tears to my eyes, opti:

Although I'm dying to reveal my love
To you whenever we're alone
Thoughts of your lover and of mine
Turn me into a stone

great Clap Clap
do take more long showers.

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Yasmin, thanks for your appreciation. Michi really kindle all our latent skills I guess. I should really thank Michi for this.
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Gawker, that was very sweet of you. I really did'nt realise I could make someone cry with my words! Thanks. Yeah, may be I need to take longer showers, that is if I can tear myself away from IF. I was desperate to get out and type out what was in my mind before I forgot the lines!   
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Opti Hug nice poem SHACHI SHACHI i loved it.
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by optimist

 

Silent plea of a tormented heart 

 

I know not when you entered my heart

I know not why you did

All I know is you invade my senses

Though to you I can't be candid   

 

I try to bridle my feelings in a leash

But alas they always break free

Leaving me confused and unsatisfied

Till your beautiful countenance I see

 

I wonder if there is a bond between us

That dates back to our previous birth

When you and I could have been lovers

Rejoicing in each other's mirth

 

Although I'm dying to reveal my love

To you whenever we're alone

Thoughts of your lover and of mine

Turn me into a stone

 

 I struggle with my conscience every day

Wondering what's wrong and what's right

All I know is that for you my love

Even death I'm prepared to fight

 

I cannot stand to see tears in your eyes

Nor remain quiet when you're abused

I'll fight all forces which give you pain

Although why, I'm still confused

 

I wake up each day with hope in my heart

That you may someday reciprocate

My love for you in the same measure  

And free me from this present state

 

I want to unite with you, body and soul

And bind you in a scorching kiss  

Forgetting the harshness of reality

I want to live with you in eternal bliss

 

So will you come to me, my darling?

Can you hear my silent plea?

For you I thirst every living moment

From my misery please free me.

 

Please leave your comments. 

Opti darling.....just read Kits poem and now yours.....Clap Fantasti dear....really brilliant ...and superb.....Clap

You brought out Milland feelings so beautifully......and if taking long showers and watching Milli showerWinkEmbarrassedTongue does the trick...in getting you to write poems again...then dear....do more of it...LOL

 

 

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:24am | IP Logged
very nice

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