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Posted: 27 May 2008 at 7:26am | IP Logged

Originally posted by ashu20

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Posted: 27 May 2008 at 7:29am | IP Logged

hi friends... so soon i get my 10 replies that i have to update it now... thankuu soo muchh... enjoy the next part....

PART 3

 

Naina: ok bhai….. now go… ritu is standing near her car……

 

Navin: ok my dear lovely sis… others will be here in a moment… take care ….

 

Naina: u too take care bhai… and plz ritu ko jyada tang mat karna and plz don't get late… ok….you have your engagement day after tom… and I also have to prepare for that and I need your help my sweet big bro…

 

Saying this naina gives a peck on his cheek and shows him the way to the parking. Navin felt a little bad for cheating his sis but then thought that he will play this game for just 3-4 days and then will tell naina the truth….

 

…………………………………………………………………………………

 

Naina after bidding goodbye to navin turns and their our hero (real one) was standing…

 

Naina: oh hi… so u r captain amardeep huda….

 

Raj: yeah….( in his mind even I came to know this fact today itself.. thanks to your big stupid brother…)… hi naina…

 

Naina: hi…. Are you ok now???

 

Raj: why are you asking that?? What happen to me??

 

Naina: nahi wo actually andar sab kuch… I was getting confused…

 

Raj (even I am confused naina… I wish I could tell you the truth): Actually I was a bit sleepy.. so didn't realize anything…

 

Naina: its ok…I think I shouldn't have jumped in bhai's compartment like that…

 

Raj (even I wished that)

 

Naina: but I thought of welcoming bhai and raj by surprising them…

 

Raj (u shocked us): that was a stupid surprise…..

 

Naina: what???????

 

Raj: yeah… jumping in someone's compartment like a monkey…

 

Naina: excuse me!!!!

 

Raj: you really behaved like a monkey by jumping like that in our I mean their compartment…

 

Naina: and you…. You were behaving like a dumbo after that….and anyways I was there to surprise raj and bro… who are you to say anything to me???

 

Raj: ohhh…but…. Leave it… raj is here…

 

Naina glaring huda (our raj) comes near raj (our huda) and says

 

Naina: hi raj… are your feeling better???

 

Huda: kyu is jatt ko ki hoya tha kudiye…

 

Naina: rajjjjj/….. what has happened with you???? Ye tum kaise baat kar rahe ho….aur tum jatt?????

 

Huda: oh kuch nahi kudiye…wo to ye raj jab bhi koi khubsurat si janani dekhta hai to wo bahut khush ho jata hai……..aur fir tum to khubsurat hone ke saath saath bahut hot and s*** bhi ho….

 

Naina (with big eyes): RAJJJJ… tum aur flirt … tum to ladkiyon se durr bhagte the…. Aur tum to bilkul badal gaye ho….aur tumhari language… ye kaisi bakwaas baatein kar rahe ho tum…..

 

Raj was suppressing his laughter……and says…

 

Raj: wohh naina… actually raj academy jake thoda sa badal gaya hai…..

 

Naina: tum to chup hi raho mr… aur thoda sa badalna aur bilkul badalna different hota hai…….. raj tum apne is dost ko bolo ki wo chup hi rahe to hi accha hai….

 

Huda: oye huda (pehli baar kisi ko apne naam se bula raha hun…)… meri naina ko tang na karr.. warna ye raj tere chehre ka naksha bigad dega….

 

Alekh: raj tum pehle apne aap ko to sudharo….

 

Naina: alekh bhaiya… accha hua aap aa gaye… itni der kyu laga di… aapke is joker pagal dost aur raj ne mujhe pagal kar diya….

 

Huda: oye tu joker pagal kisse bol rahi hai kudiye…..

 

Naina: tumhe to nahi bola na…..

 

Raj: wo actually hum dosto mei itna pyar hai ki hum ek dusre ki insult ko apni insult samajhte hai….. kyu raj???

 

Huda: haan haan… mere dost ko kuch mat bolna thik hai…. ye tumhare bachpan ke dost ka order hai….

 

Naina: order my foot… pata nahi ek to khud pagal ho gaye ho… aur pagal jaise dost bhi bana liye hai… chalo ab… navin bhaiya to gaye… I will drop you home….

 

Alekh (smiling and thinking): mujhe kuch karne ki jarurat hi nahi… agar ye jatt aise hi apna muh kholta raha to naina iske paas aane ki jagah isse miles duur bhaag jaayegi…..par dekhte hai ye asli raj ke paas kaise jaayegi….

 

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In car well actually huda wanted to sleep so he was sitting at the back with alekh and abhimanyu… alekh obviously wanted to leave raj with naina…. And abhimanyu well alekh drags him and made him sit in the middle!!!!...

In front seat lets see what was going on….

 

Raj: tum kya pehle bailgadi chalti thi….

 

Naina: kya????

 

Raj: gaadi itni slow kyu chala rahi ho…

 

Naina: excuse me mr… ye delhi ki roads hai.. yahan aap 50 ki speed se gaadi  bhi nahi chala paate aur mai to fir bhi 60 se chala rahi hun…( I am saying this from my own exp.)..

 

Raj: accha is that so?? Aur agar mai tumhe isse tez chala ke bata dun to..

 

Naina: bolna asaan hota hai karna mushkil… aur fir waise bhi tumhe raj ke ghar ka address nahi pata hai….

 

Raj: to ye kaho na tum darr rahi ho kahin mai sach mei na tumse tez chala ke dikha dun…mai kahin bhi kitni bhi tez gaadi chala sakta hun…..aur address mujhe pata hai… I mean tum bata dena….

 

Naina: thik hai mr. huda… lets see tum delhi ki roads pe kis speed se gaadi chala paate ho….pehle ye batao ki bet kis chiz ki hai….

 

Raj: array pehle game to khel lo… baad ki baat baad mei dekhenge……..agar mai haara jo kabhi ho nahi sakta to jo tum kahogi wo karunga aur agar tum haari jo hone waala hai to jo mai bolun wo karna padega……..

 

Naina: oh shut up…..dekhna tum hi haaroge……

 

Now the scene at the front seat was reversed…..

 

Raj was sitting at the driver seat and naina beside him…

 

Raj: kahan jaana hai???

(pata hai fir bhi pooch raha hai duffer tere ghar)

 

Naina: raj's place….

 

Raj: where???

 

Naina: 32/12 malviya nagar south delhi..…

 

Alekh (in his mind) : kisi ko uske ghar ka address poochte pehli baar dekh raha hun…

 

Raj: ok and zhooooooooooommmmmmmmm………………..

 

Naina: stop stop….. Her hairs were flying in all directions….

 

Raj: kyu kya hua????(still driving very fast)….

 

Naina: tum pehle helicopter chalte the kya???

 

Raj: maine kaha tha na mai kahin bhi kitni bhi tez gaadi chala sakta hun….tum haarne waali ho miss naina…..

 

Naina: stopppp…. Will you????

 

Raj: no I won't stop and zzzzhhhhhhoooooommmmmm… he increased the speed….

 

There alekh was smiling at the back and was pretending that he is sleeping….

 

Alekh (in his mind): naina to tumhari hi hogi raj….abhi tak usne picche mudkar ek baar bhi nahi dekha… jabki uske liye uska raj picche hai… lekin shayad usse uske is joker pagal dost ke saath jyada maza aa raha hai… mujhe pehle hi laga tha naina to sirf tumse pyar karti hai… uska dimag bhale hi dhoka kha gaya ho par uske dil ne tumhe pehchaan liya…

 

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Well let's see what was going on in ritu's car…

 

Ritu: WHATTT???? …… screeeeeech….. and car stopped becoz of sudden application of breaks/……

 

Ritu: tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho navin……mai tumhara saath nahin dungi..

 

Navin: plz ritu….tum to janti ho hamesha se naina mujhe ulloo banati aayi hai.. mere saath pranks khele hai…plz ye mera ek hi to chance hai…

 

Ritu: no means no… naina ne kabhi bhi tumhare emotions pe koi prank nahi khela aur na hi tumhari feelings ka koi mazak udaya hai…tum naina ke saath aise nahi khel sakte.. tum jante ho uski feelings raj ke liye… fir bhi tum…..

 

Navin: ritu mai bhi uska bada bhai hun… I know what I am doing…its just a game… plz….

 

Ritu: lekin navin.. agar naina ko sach pata chala to wo bahut hurt hogi… ek ladki apne emotions se aisa mazak bardaasht nahi kar sakti….

 

Navin: nahin ritu.. bas 3-4 days….hum iss game ko jyada aage nahin khichenge…parso hamari engagement hai..  hum bas uske 2-3 din baad usse sab sach bata denge…….aur meri baat maano koi gadbad nahi hogi…..

 

Ritu: hmmm…. Thik hai.. mai to tumhari baat maan jaungi… magar mom dad…

 

Navin: nahi unhe kuch nahi batana… wo mai dekh lunga… bas tum naina kea age raj ko huda bolna… thik hai….

 

Ritu: thik hai.. par navin mujhe darr hai jab naina ko sachai pata chalegi tab uske dil pe kya bitegi… hum sabne usse itna bada dhoka diya hai kahin wo isko na jhel paayi to……

 

Navin: array mai jaanta hun wo ye sab jhel legi…. Ab tum ye sab chodo… aur mai jis kaam ka naam leke aaya hun wo karne do…

 

Ritu: kya k……..

 

But she was not able to complete her sentence… coz before she can do that navin pulled her and was on her lips….

Navin (hoarse voice): I missed you so much….. I love you….

Ritu: I love you too…. And this time she pressed her lips on his and navin gladly accepted that and took her lips in his own and kissed them passionately……

 

………………………………………………………………………………………..

 

Screeeeeeechhh………………….. Car came to halt and naina finally found her breath back…..

 

Naina: you idiot… gaadi chalni nahi aati kya….

 

Raj: tumse to acchi hi chalayi maine…….

 

Naina: chalayi ya udayi…. Tumhe gaadi mujhse tez chalani thi na ki plane se…tumhari speed 120 thi u idiot……

 

Raj: wow… tumse double.. gr88…good work huda…

 

Naina: shut up… you almost took my breath… I was not even able to see around… agar kuch ho jata to….

 

Raj: kuch hua to nahi na….aur waise bhi mujhe gaadi chalani aati hai…tumhari tarah belgaadi ki speed se nahi chal sakta mai……hamesha se slow chalti aayi ho….

 

Naina (suspiciously): what??? hamesha se…..

 

Raj (realizing his mistake): haan wo raj told me that ki tum hamesha hi slow chalti ho… fir chahe paidal chalna ho.. ya bicycle pe.. tum kabhi tez nahi chalti….

 

Naina: accha…. He remembered it… good… mujhe laga wo ye bhi bhool gaya (looking back)… (in her mind…..raj kafi change ho gaya hai… pehle wo aisa nahi tha...) ….

 

Raj in his mind: (raj ko sab kuch yaad hai…… aur wo bilkul change nahi hua hai… bas tumhare pehchanne ki der hai…)

 

Naina: waise tumhe kaise pata ki malviya nagar kahan pe hai..

 

Raj: w..wo…….. wo… actually….

 

Alekh from back: kyuki huda last year delhi aaya tha… kissi mission ke liye ek din ke liye…… isliye usse delhi ke saare raaste pata hai……

 

Raj (thanking him in his mind): haan wo last yr. jo major ne mission diya tha uske liye mujhe delhi aana pada tha tab mujhe delhi ke saare raaste yaad ho gaye the….

 

Naina: accha thik hai….. bhaiya raj ko uthao na… dekho ghar aa gaya hai uska… fir bhi so raha hai… raj pehle to itna nahi sota tha……

 

Raj: haan pehle wo sota tha to tum uske dreams mei aati thi aur wo darker uth jata tha…. Ab jabse wo academy aaya hai tabse chain ki neend so pata hai….

 

Naina: u shut up mr. joker…… bhaiya chalo andar chale…….

 

Raj: nahinn… tum andar nahi aa sakti….

 

Naina: tum kaun hote ho mujhe rokne waale… mai andar aaungi aur uncle aunty se milke bhi jaungi… mai bachpan se yahan aati aayi hun.. koi mujhe rokne ki himmat nahi kar sakta… raj bhi nahi……

 

Alekh (smiling): of course naina… wo to ye huda keh raha tha ki tum abhi ghar jao.. do din mei engagement hai aur tumhari jarurat tumhare ghar pe jyada hai…

 

Raj: haan… aur fir yahan bhi tyaari chal rahi hai… kahin tum aake saari kharab na kar do….ya fir kahin workers tumhari darawani shakal dekh ke kaam chod ke na bhaag jaaye…..

 

Naina: you just shut up… chale jao yahan se isse pehle mei tumhara khun kar doon……

 

Huda: array ki hoya… kaun hai jo is jatt ki neend kharab kar raha hai???/

 

Naina: raj tum fir se……

 

Huda: ohhoo.. to tum ho kudiye… koi gal nahin… batao kyu jagaya???

 

Naina: raj tumhara ghar aa gaya hai.. jao andar jao…..

 

Huda: mera ghar… wow.. kitna sundar hai….

 

Naina: whatt??? Tum to aise bol rahe ho jaise pehli baar apne ghar ja rahe ho….

 

Raj: array wo iska ghar aaj decorate hokar itna sundar lag raha hai na.. isliye wo isse sundar bol raha hai……

 

Naina (irritatingly) : maine tumse tumhari raye nahi poochi joker…alekh bahiya in dono ko andar leke jao…………and she drove off……

 

Outside:

 

Raj: thanks alekh tumne bacha liya… aur ye huda to aaj hi saara kabada kar deta…

 

Alekh: navin ne bhi kya soch ke is pagal ko raj banaya… ye sab kuch gadbad ker dega…

 

Huda: oye kaidi pagal kisse bola be tu…

 

Alekh: tujhe……. aur koi bhi pagal hai kya yahan….

 

Huda: dekh kaidi..jyada panga na le mujhse…

 

Raj: relax guys relax… parso meri behen ki shaadi hai aur tum aise lad rahe ho aaj hi… chalo mere saath andar chalo….

……………………………………………………………………..

 

In ahluwalia's house:

 

Naina entered in very foul mood….navin was already there…

 

Navin: kya hua sis… kisi se lad ke aa rahi ho….

 

Naina: bhai I hate you……

 

Navin (getting tensed): kya hua sis….

 

Naina: and I hate him… you dumped me with your stupid friend… that insane, stupid, duffer, idiot, joker, pagal…………

 

Navin (relaxing): kya hua sis… kisse itne saare adjectives diye ja rahe hai….

 

Naina: that stupid joker friend of yours……. captain amardeep huda……

 

Navin: kyu kya kiya usne (understanding that he must be raj)…

 

Naina: bhai next time se mai uske saath kahin nahin jaane waali…pehle to usne mujhe monkey kaha… fir 120 ki speed se delhi ki roads pe gaadi chalayi… mujhe pagal bola… aur mujhse bet…… shit… bet I forgot……

 

Navin: kya hua sis….

 

Naina: bhai usne mujhse bet lagayi thi ki agar wo mujhse tez gaadi chlaake dikhayega delhi ki roads pe to jo wo bolega mujhe karna hoga… ab pata nahi mujhse kya karvayega……

 

Navin (suppressing his laughter): kyu darr lag raha hai sis…

 

Naina: bhai.. mujhe kabhi kisi se darr nahi lagta …. Lekin wo pagal Bandar… uska kya bharosa… pata nahi kya karne ko bole…..

 

Navin: daro mat sis… he is a nice guy… wo tumhe kuch nahi kahega……

 

Naina: nice my foot…. Aur mujhe kisi se darr nahi lagta… usse to mai dekh lungi….

 

Navin: accha ye to batao raj se kya kya baat hui tumhari… tum jab se aayi ho sirf huda ka naam liye ja rahi ho,… kahin kuch……..

 

Naina: oh shut up bhai… raj ko pata nahi kya ho gaya hai… baar baar jatt karta rehta hai…aur wo itna bada flirt kaise ban gaya… pehle to kisi se bhi flirt nahi karta tha….aur ab itna sone bhi lag gaya hai… pata hai aapko pure raaste sote hue aaya…

 

Navin (in his mind): ye huda kuch na kuch gadbad jarur karega……..

 

Navin: array koi nahin sis.. wo 10 saal tak dur tha na isliye aisa ho gaya hai…jaldi hi waapas purane waala raj ban jayega…

 

Naina: thik hai bhai.. waise bhi aapke us pagal joker dost huda ne mera mood kharab kar hi diya hai… mai jaati hun.. mujhe aapki engagement ki preparations bhi karni hai…….

 

And she goes…

 

Navin: I am sorry sis… bas 4 days mei I will tell you the truth… but now I have another important work to do….huda you are so dead…..

 

And he made a call…….

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END OF PART

 

Now this was a very long part…..thanks to all those who commented….

 

Waiting for comments….

 

Take care…

B bye…

Keep smiling…

Sheenu…

 

 

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Posted: 27 May 2008 at 7:47am | IP Logged
awesome too good very nice lovely part waiting for next asap
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Posted: 27 May 2008 at 7:58am | IP Logged
nice ud Clap .cont soon......
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Posted: 27 May 2008 at 8:43am | IP Logged
he he he he!!! this was funny LOL LOL LOL i loved Naina and Raj's oops i mean Naina and Huda's scene it was fun dono kabhi nahin sudhar sakte humesha hee ladte rahenge Embarrassed anyways that was an amazing and hilarious update, the title is so apt for this fic and seriously i am loooooooooooooooving it, i was feeling so low today ut when i logged on and read your fic seriously i was laughing like mad. LOL LOL ...... anyways so Alekh is going to play a match maker, i hope Naina realises that Huda is Raj and Raj is Huda..... if that made any sense

once again that was an brilliant update Clap Clap Clap

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Posted: 27 May 2008 at 10:50am | IP Logged
OH GOD! THIS PART WAS JUST AWESOME.. MUJHE THO BAHUT HASSI AAI LOL BRILLIANT PART SHEENU Clap I MUST SAY: HUDA THO HUDA HAI, KABHI NAHI SUDAREGA LOL AND RAJ IS VERY NAUGHTY, POOR NAINA DONO KE BEECH PHAS KAR REH GAYI LOL LOL JO BHI HO LOVELY PART SHEENU.. KEEP IT UP Thumbs Up WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY..


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Posted: 27 May 2008 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
SHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENU...u r amaaaaaaaazing...hahahahahahahahahaha...ab mera tummy pain kar raha hai...i m rolling on floor...every inch of dialogue from top to bottom was MIIIIIIIIIIIIIINDBLOWING...(aaj ka update padhke lagta mere andar Munna bhai ki Vidya Balan ki aatma enter kar gayi hai...sayad isiliye saare words ko stretch kar rahi hun)hihihihihihehehehehe...now i m tension free that now Naina willnot fall for fake Raj...really dear that was a out of world comedy update...thankuuuuuuu soooooooo much for this OOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUTSTANDING part...brilliant...this is for u Hug
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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina Raj se hi ladh rahi hai LOL !!!!Aur Huda jisse woh Raj samajti hai uski taraf toh dekh hi nahi rahi hai!!!LOL LOL LOL

Well Raj ne kya gaadi chalayi!!!!Naina shart har gayi!!!! LOL LOL LOL

Huda...bas woh aise hi rahe!!! Wink Wink Aise flirt karega toh Naina usse dur bhagegi!!!Aur aise hi gadbad karta rahe!!!Taake jaldi hi Navin ka yeh ghatiya khel khatam ho!!!! Angry

Ritu ne yeh sahi kaha....ek ladki apne emotions ke saath aisa mazak bardast nahi kar sakti!!!Par phir bhi
Ritu ek ladki hoke aur Naina ki friend hoke ish khel mein saath dene ko taiyaar hi gayi !!!!! Angry

Aalekh...his comments at every stage was too good!!!! LOL That was making me laugh!!!!Ab toh ussi ka sahara hai!!!Wohi Naina ko Raj ke kareeb la sakta hai!!!

Haa Aalekh ne sahi kaha Naina ka dimag hi dhoka kha raha hai!!!Uske dil ne uske pyaar ko pehchaan liya hai Tongue !!!!

Aalekh feels much more for Naina than Navin does!!Navin ko sirf apne mazak aur badle ki padi hai!!! Angry He does not care for his sister's feelings at all!!!Yeg jante huye bhi ke woh Raj se pyaar karti hai uske saath aisa kar raha hai!!!!! Angry Aalekh please usse sach bata do!!!!

Naina ko darr lag raha hai ke Raj usse kya karwaye ga LOL !!!I am waitng to see what he will make her do!!!Ek kaam kar Raj....save it for later....ish shart se tu usse maaf karne ko bolna kyunki aise toh woh tujhe maaf nahi karne waali aur karna bhi nahi chahiye!!!

Ab Naina ush Huda se dur rahe aur Raj ke saath hi rahe!!!!Though today's update did show ke woh Huda ko bilkul bhi dhyan nahi de rahi hai!!!!

Naina tum galat ho...Raj flirt kaise ho sakta hai.....woh tumare alawa aur kisi ko nahi dekhta hoga!!!! Embarrassed

Kuch bhi theek nahi ho raha hai!!! Cry Yeh khel kahtam hone se raha!!!Naina ko sach pata chalne se raha!!!Ab toh yeh khel pata nahi kab tak chalega!!!Probably the whole month!!!! Cry




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