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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 10:19am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Ye tune kii kiita kudiye. Angry Angry Angry /........ oye maine kya kiya hai ji.... jo bhi kiya navin ne kiya aur raj aur alekh ne unka saath diya... mai to scene mei bhi nahi hun.....WinkWink
Navin nahi bata paayega Naina ko aur Naina ka confusion chalta hi rahega na. Angry ... oye hoye... kya baat hai aap to guess karne lage... ab aapka guess sahi hai ya nahi............. emmmmmmmmmmmmm............. abhi nahi batate... warna aap nhi padoge fic..........WinkWink......LOLLOL.......... par kam se kam ab navin batana to chahta hai na... ab jo bhi hoga wo intentionally nahi karega ji............
Raj bhi kam nahi hai hamesha Naina k paas aane k bahane dhoondhta rehta hai. Wink ............ ab kya karein... bechara Raj banke to naina ke paas aa nahi sakta... navin ne roka hua hai... islie huda banke bahane dhundta hai.. badmah ladka...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed... aur fir jab naina itni beautiful lagegi to bachara khuda ko kaise rok pata.......EmbarrassedEmbarrassed................
Naughty boy. Wink .....yppp... naughty.. very naughty boy...........WinkWink..............
Raj n samhaal liya varna Naina to Naveen ki game bajane hi wali thi. LOL ..... kya karein behen bhi to navin ki hai...uska game to baja hi degi agar ye raj na ho to.. sahi time pe pahunch gaya warna pata nhi kya hota.. shayad navin apni hi engagement mei juton se maar khata............
Hooda ko bund kar diya na kamre me accha kiya. LOL ........... ypp.. bechara huda aur tumhe mazza aa raha hai/................. waise mujhe bhi aa raha hai.WinkLOL.....warna pata nhi party ki girls ka kya karta..................WinkLOLLOL
Aalekh bhi shuru ho gaye ladkiyon k peeche padna. Wink ...ab vo koi sadhu ya sant to nhi hai na............. islie.... bechara kab tak ladkiyon se durr bhagega...........WinkWink
Mrs. Shekhawat bhi bechari confuse ho gayi Naina ki baaton ko sun kar. LOL ............. haan ab confusion fic ka title hai to saarein confuse hi honge na......Wink.aur fir naina dimag bhi to jyada chalati hai............Wink.............
Naveen bechara bata nahi paayega mainu lagta hai. Wink ........... accha mainu vi lagta hai........ dekhte hai... kab batayeiga..............Wink
Update soon
........will try to dear......... ab mai pakka promise karti hoon.. tha i will be more regular... i won't make any excuse from now onwards....... i am sorry.......Confused.

sorry...Cry.take care..........
b bye...
keep smiling......Big smile
sheenu....

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 10:20am | IP Logged

Originally posted by dolly90

update asap

will try to......... from now onwards o will try to be more regular... sorry for making you wait for long.........

sorry...Cry.take care..........
b bye...
keep smiling......Big smile
sheenu....

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 10:22am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rituka7

are u going to update now or not

yupps... i am going to update now..... just giving replies to all comments.... will update in 10 min... sorry....

sorry...Cry.take care..........
b bye...
keep smiling......Big smile
sheenu....

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 10:29am | IP Logged

Originally posted by vvdn

Hey Hii, hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..........................
      it's nice to see you after long time Tongue Tongue Tongue ................ thankuu... i also feel nice to see you...... i have got so many good frnds and readers from this forum......Embarrassed...... thankuu all...........SmileSmile.......
       about update it was too good. Raj is really very smarterLOL & finally Navin realise that he is not doing right thing with his Sis. der aaye durust aaye.but what is this there sum problem i think he not succesed to tell the truth to Naina . ab kya hoga??? Confused ........... thankuuuuuuu sooooooo muchhhhhhh..... yupp... raj is smartest.............. and yeah navin finally realized this.,.....he should have realized it long ago...ionfact he shouldn't have started it.. but anyways finally he understood.. and about this new prob.. well dear you have to read next part.... yupp there wil be some prob in telling her the truth but i won't disclose it.. read the part... see i am feeling like evil.......Wink........... jo bhi hoga accha hi  hoga.............
     but enjoying the flirting of Raj.Embarrassed par ye Naina to ekdum Buddu hai but swet also.so urgely waiting to know what next? so dont waste time & update asap. ........oh yupp.. m also enjoying writing these parts........ and naina is really very idiot..........kuch samjh nahi pa rahi..............duffer kahin ki...... sorry for the delay dear........ i will try to be more regular from next time..... soo sorry.. i will update in 10 min............
        be always happy dont take tension yaar wishes of all of us are with you. .. thankuuu soo muchh dearrrrrr............... and i will try to be more regular.............

sorry...Cry.take care..........
b bye...
keep smiling......Big smile
sheenu....

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 11:46am | IP Logged

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Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!! thankuuuuuuuuuu sooo muchhh dearrrrrrrrrr.............

Ritu ne sahi kaha!!!! Smile Smile Smile Navin ko ab isse aur drag na karke bata dena chahiye!!!!!! Cry Cry Par Navin hai ki manta hi nahi!!!!!! Angry .............haan.....sabne navin ko samjh diya.. lekin ye navin hai ki manta hi nahi.. ebvkoof kahin ka....he is going to hurt naina a lot.............

Naina aa gayi!!!Great!!!! Smile Smile Smile .......naina ne to aana hi tha. hai na.............

Raj ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya Naina ko dekh kar!!!!!! Embarrassed Muh toh bandh karo Uncle!!!!! LOL  .......... ypp... muh to band kar lo uncle... bechara ab naina ke paas bhi nahi ja sakta raj banke.. warna soch agar vo Raj hota naina ke aage to kya karta..........EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Raj ki sherwani mujhe bahut pasand aayi!!!He is looking very handsome!!!!! Embarrassed ...... thankuu.. ypp he must be loking very handsome and dashing... hiii.. i am going flat imagining him... yaar naina ko hata dun fic se....WinkWink tu to samjh hi gayi hogi mera matlab.........Wink
Naina ko bura lag raha hai!!!Oh no Naina don't feel bad!!!! Smile He deserves it!!!! Approve Tumari wajah se nahi ....yeh sab Navin ki wajah se ho raha hai!!!!! Angry ......... ypp.. hamari naina hai hi itni sweet.usse bura lag raha hai ki jis bhai ne usse kabhi kuch nahi kaha vo uske saath kitna bura karti thi aur raj uska best frnd uski vajah se bimar hai.........but ye nahi janti that both don't deserve her love and care......... yes this all is happening becoz of navin... behanri naina thinking that she was very bad to her brother...........

Navin ne Naina ko bahana bana diya!!! Angry .......... haan.. e navin bhi na...usne naina ko bahan bana diya.. apna plan suessful rakhne ke liye kuch bhi karega ye.......Angry

Raj is very intelligent!!! Tongue Aur Naina kya kar sakti hai woh samaj gaya!!!!! Smile Wink   LOL  ........... ypp... he is... he ie very smart... ka karein aisa hi hai vo.n aur fir naina ko bachpan se janta hai islie samjh hi gaya........EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Aur Raj ne sahi kaha yeh sab Navin ki wagah se hi ho raha hai!!!!!! Angry .......... haan raj hamesha sach hi kehta hai...ye navin bhina.. sab uski vajah se ho raha hai. navin doesn't feel the intensity of his joke.........Angry

Aalekh was right!!! Smile Nautanki!!! Angry Angry Angry Hamesha galti karta hai aur pehli baar kuch accha kiya woh bhi usne galti se hi kiya!!!!!! LOL ....... ypp.. alekh is always right......... aur is baar bhi usne bilkul sach kaha.. pehli baar navin ne galti ki aur vo acchi baat nikli.par ye raj ne sab bich mei bigad diya...........LOL

Aur Naina Navin ki behen hai tez dimag hai lekin uske jaisi cunning nahi hai!!!Sabke feelings ka khayal rakhti hai!!!!!! Approve .......yess... naina is very sweet. agar vo sharat bhi karti hai to sabki feelings ka dhyan rakhti hai aur kiisi ki feelings ko hurt nhi karti... wo mazak ko mazaktak hi rehne deti hai.. real life ko alag rakhti hai.. lekin ye pagal navin.. apni behen ka khyal; nahi rakhta.........Angry

Navin is really very bad!!!!Aise bhai hone se toh naa hona behtar hai!!!!!! Angry  ..........ypp.. true... kya fyada aise bhai ka jo apni hi behen ki feelings se khele.........

Woh mara huya hi better tha!!!!Bhoot banke!!!! Angry Angry  ....... ypp vo serial mei accha tha.. is fic mei to sab kabada kiya hai usne.sabko kitna hurt karega vo ye bhi nahi samjkh raha..... mara hua tha tab vo apni behen ka khyal to rakhta tha........Angry

Waise Naina ki saas is very sweet to her!!!!!!!! Wink Wink Wink ..... hone wali bahu se pange nhi leti hai na.........Wink.. yes she is very sweet to naina............

Raj ne time par bacha liya!!!! Unhappy Woh nahi hota toh Navin ka kya hota!!!!! Tongue Usne badi chalaki se baat ko ghumaya uski mom aur Naina ke samne!!!! Clap Clap Clap ........yppp... navin ka kuch nahi ho sakta raj ke bina..raj ne bade araam se apni mom ke aage naina ko convince kar lya aur dono ko koi shaq bhi nhi hua............Smile

Raj ne chuupe huye labzon mein keh bhi diya!!!Par isse koi kuch nahi samaj sakta!!!!! Angry ....... haan.. raj ne chupe hue lafzon mei sachai bayan kar di... par naina to kya isse koi kuch nhi samjh sakta...... fr bhi he was feeling a burden on him.. atleast now he can convince himself that he told her in hidden words...........

Raj ne usse phir chheda!!!! Embarrassed Raj bhi na!!!! LOL .... kya kare.....raj banke to aa nhi sakta uske samne islie huda bake chedta rehta hai... naughty boy........LOLLOL

Naina ne usse sahi kaha!!! Thumbs Up Chimpu!!!! LOL ............ ypp... chimpu kahin ka.. naina ka sweet sa chimpu... lekin don't u think ki ye chimpu jyada sweet aur smart ho gaya.......WinkWink

Raj again came close to her in a isolated corner!!!! Embarrassed How romantic!!!!!! Embarrassed ........ oye hoye kya baat hai. sharam dekho tumhare chehre pe............Wink. pata hai i also like writing these scenes...........Embarrassed. so hopefuly u will see many such scenes in future.. infact with more intensity..........................

Naina bhag gayi!!!!! LOL LOL LOL Aur maan bhi gayi!!!! Thumbs Up ...... kya karti. nahi manti to raj usse chodta.....Wink.... abhi tak to sirf dhamki de raha tha...........Wink

Waise this also reminded me of the scene between Hrithik and Kareena in K3G!!!! Smile Smile Smile
arrey maine to aise hi likha tha. mujhe aisa koi scene yaad hinhi.chalo accha hai kafi kuch K3g jaisa ho gaya is engagement mei..........WinkWink

Wink
Navin khud karta hai sab kuch then he complains that Naina chup chap kyun nahi rehti!!! Angry Aalekh ne sahi kaha!!! Approve Approve Navin ki behen hai Naina!!!Nautanki!!!! LOL ....ypp. navin khud sab kuch karta hai aur fir chahta hai ki naina bhi chup chap jaal mei fas jaye... sahi kaha alekh ne navin ki hi behen hai itni asani se nhi fasegi................

All the ritauls were over!!!! Smile Smile Aur raj performed the rituals!!!!Great!!!!!! Clap ........aur kya raj ka hi haq tha....... islie to navin ne huda ko party se durr rakha tha. aur fir raj hi ritu ka asli bhai hai...........Smile. aur koi kaise kar sakta tha..........

Navin thanked God!!! Disapprove Haan Navin bhagwaan ko thank karo lekin jab yeh bhanda footega naa toh bhagwaan bhi tumhe nahi baccha payega!!!!! Angry  ...... ypp... bhanda futne ke baad navin aur baki sab ka kya hoga shayad hum soch bhi le,.... lekin naina ka kya hoga hum soh bhi nhi sakte............bechari kitna dukh hoga ki jis bhai aur insaan se wo itna pyar karti hai unhone usse dhoka dioya..................

Raj ne aise sambhala ke Naina usi explaination se satisfied ho gayi!!!!! Smile
......... ypp.. ab raj to har kissi ko convince karne ki takat rakhta hai. hai na........Wink
Naina ka speech was very sweet!!!! Smile Par Naina tumne galat kaha!!!!! Disapprove Navin bilul waisa nahi hai jaise tumne kaha!!! Angry He is just the opposite!!!!! Thumbs Down ...... ypp.. par naina to apne bhai ko accha hi samjhti hai.. usse kya pata ki uska khud ka bhai uske against conspire kar rahe hai.. bechari. kya bitegi us pe jab usse sach pata chalega...................

Navin ko bura laga!!!! Cry Cry Cry Lagna hi chahiye!!!!! Approve Navin ne Naina ka trust toda!!!!! Angry Uski feelings ke saath khela hai!!!! Angry Usse cheat kiya hai!!!!!!! Angry Uske jaise bhai hone se naa hona behtar hai!!!!!! Angry ........... ypp.. finally usse kam sekam bura to laga...... ek to usne apni behen ki feelings ke saath khelene ke baare mei socha wo behen jo usse itna pyar karti hai. aur fit uske saath itna ganda joke khela....... bura to lagega hi. chalo kam se kam usse realize to ho gaya jaldi.warna pata nhi kitna time lagta usse realize hone mei..........

Naina ka and gaana and dance were great!!!!! Clap Great choice of song!!!!! Clap ..... thanuu soo muchh.. ypp naina must be looking very smart and beautiful in that attire and dancing on those songs............

Waise if she had sung Bole Chudiyan shayad zyada accha hota!!!! Smile Would have been exactly like the movie!!!Wahan bhi toh shart hi lagi thi!!!!! Tongue  ..... haan lekin yaar uss song kie lyrics bilkul alag hai situation se.. isliye nahi daala wo sona....... i mean in that song she was singing voz she had to admit her love in front of her didi and jeeju bu here she had to sing for her brother and coz of only a simple bet so i wasn't able to include that song.........

Navin,Aalekh and Raj joins them!!!Great!!! Embarrassed  .... ypp... they also daned with her... akhir masti ka mahol hai. pyar saath mei hai to dance to karenge hi...........

Raj keeps pulling Naina towards him but she keeps pushing him away!!!!! Tongue Haaaiiiii!!!!!! Embarrassed Par Navin ko mauka hi nahi mila sach bolne ka!!!!! Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove  ........ ypp.. raj is very naughty.. kabhi aina ke paas aane ka mauka nahi chodfta ... in fact maukenikal leta hai............ lekin naivin ko sach bolne ka mauka nahi mila....... ab jab vo bolna chahta hai to vo bol nhi pa raha hai.........

Aalekh ko bhi koi mil gayi!!!! Wink Wink Wink Great!!!! Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up And I loved Ritu and that girl's dresses!!!!! Smile Though I am just crazy about Preity's lehenga in Maahi Ve song and would have loved it if Naina had wore it at some other function!!!!! Tongue [:D/] [:D/] .... thabnkuuuuuuuu.. yes ab alekh ko sant thode na hai.. mil gayi usse bhi koi pyari aur bholi bhali ladki.......... ab lehnga to mujhe undono ke liye bhi accha lena hi tha.. don't worry naina aur bhi acchi dresses pehnegi aane waale functions mei.. unmei to waise abhi time hai..........

I loved the Maahi Ve song!!!! Smile It was very apt!!! Tongue Raj's dancing with Naina and teasing her during the song!!! Embarrassed Haaiiii!!!! Embarrassed [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] Blushing ...... thankuuu.. even i love that sobng. that song was also fimized in an engagement... o i included that.and lyrics were also perfect for the situation..... aur raj to hai hi naughty..............

Aalekh and that girl was also very good!!!! Smile Smile Smile Mrs.Shekhawat's lines were very emotional!!!!! Cry .............. thankuuuuu.. those lines i picked directly from song.... jaya had sung these lines for priety in the same song...........

Navin ne phir se usse batane ki koshish ki!!!! Approve Very good!!!! Approve Par ab usse mauka nahi milega aur uska yeh ghatiya khel toh ab khatam hone se raha!!!!! Angry  ......hmm.. shayad...... ab navin kam se kam usse sachai to batana chahta hai. dekhte hai whether he will be able to tell her or not.........

Par huya kya achanak?? Confused Confused Confused ... wo tum next update mei pad lena...........Smile

sorry for being late.Cry.... take care.
b bye...
keep smiling...Big smile
sheenu....Smile

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 11:53am | IP Logged

Originally posted by riyaa_1985

hello!!!
I simply loved the story so far.You have a very nice way of representing your charactersClap Clap Clap.Navin is oh my god simply impossibleAngryAngryAngry.How can anyone treat his sister like thisDeadDead.Even Raj is helping in this matter!!!Poor NainaCry Cry Cry.She is sure to go mad at her brother after she comes to know about thisAngry Angry Angry.Hope she is able to forgive Raj after all thisSmile.
Once again a great updateClap Clap Clap


hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.......................... thankuuuuuuuuuu soooooomuchhhhhh for liking the story........... thankuuuuuuuuuu.......... ypp... navin is simply impossible.......... he is just a hopeless brother........ he is treating her sis like thi.. oh god i can't tell you how much i hate him for doin that... dead navin in the serial is much better from this navin..........
now what can raj do... he is just helping his frnd navin in his so called badla....... but i agree raj shouldn't have helped him... they are nt thinking about naina's feelings......
yppp.. naina will surely go mad at all of themm... she trusts them so much especially raj and navin and alekh......... they should have done that...
but now they have started their stupid game.. hope that they will end it soon.........
and i don't think naina will forgive raj so easily.......let's see....
thankuu soo much for the gr8 reply dear......

sorry for being late.Cry.... take care.
b bye...
keep smiling...Big smile
sheenu....Smile


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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 11:55am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part now only asap.

i am veryyyy sooryyyyyyy dearrrr.. i know i made you wait for long... sorry. this time am nt giving any excuse. i hope that you will forgive me......... i promise i will try to be more regular............

sorry for being late.Cry.... take care.
b bye...
keep smiling...Big smile
sheenu....Smile

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 11:57am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rituka7

where r u
when will u update
plzzzz update soon.


i am soo sorry dear.. i will update in 10 min. sorry...... i shouldn't have delayed it this much... i am sorry...hopefuly u will forgive me........ i will definitely try to be more regular... m sorry............

sorry for being late.Cry.... take care.
b bye...
keep smiling...Big smile
sheenu....Smile


 

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