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Posted: 16 June 2008 at 4:29am | IP Logged
update asap

vvdn Senior Member
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Posted: 16 June 2008 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Hey Hii,
      it's nice to see you after long time Tongue Tongue Tongue
       about update it was too good. Raj is really very smarterLOL & finally Navin realise that he is not doing right thing with his Sis. der aaye durust aaye.but what is this there sum problem i think he not succesed to tell the truth to Naina . ab kya hoga??? Confused
     but enjoying the flirting of Raj.Embarrassed par ye Naina to ekdum Buddu hai but swet also.so urgely waiting to know what next? so dont waste time & update asap.
        be always happy dont take tension yaar wishes of all of us are with you.
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Posted: 17 June 2008 at 8:32am | IP Logged
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Ritu ne sahi kaha!!!! Smile Smile Smile Navin ko ab isse aur drag na karke bata dena chahiye!!!!!! Cry Cry Par Navin hai ki manta hi nahi!!!!!! Angry

Naina aa gayi!!!Great!!!! Smile Smile Smile

Raj ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya Naina ko dekh kar!!!!!! Embarrassed Muh toh bandh karo Uncle!!!!! LOL

Raj ki sherwani mujhe bahut pasand aayi!!!He is looking very handsome!!!!! Embarrassed

Naina ko bura lag raha hai!!!Oh no Naina don't feel bad!!!! Smile He deserves it!!!! Approve Tumari wajah se nahi ....yeh sab Navin ki wajah se ho raha hai!!!!! Angry

Navin ne Naina ko bahana bana diya!!! Angry

Raj is very intelligent!!! Tongue Aur Naina kya kar sakti hai woh samaj gaya!!!!! Smile Wink   LOL

Aur Raj ne sahi kaha yeh sab Navin ki wagah se hi ho raha hai!!!!!! Angry

Aalekh was right!!! Smile Nautanki!!! Angry Angry Angry Hamesha galti karta hai aur pehli baar kuch accha kiya woh bhi usne galti se hi kiya!!!!!! LOL

Aur Naina Navin ki behen hai tez dimag hai lekin uske jaisi cunning nahi hai!!!Sabke feelings ka khayal rakhti hai!!!!!! Approve

Navin is really very bad!!!!Aise bhai hone se toh naa hona behtar hai!!!!!! Angry

Woh mara huya hi better tha!!!!Bhoot banke!!!! Angry Angry

Waise Naina ki saas is very sweet to her!!!!!!!! Wink Wink Wink

Raj ne time par bacha liya!!!! Unhappy Woh nahi hota toh Navin ka kya hota!!!!! Tongue Usne badi chalaki se baat ko ghumaya uski mom aur Naina ke samne!!!! Clap Clap Clap

Raj ne chuupe huye labzon mein keh bhi diya!!!Par isse koi kuch nahi samaj sakta!!!!! Angry

Raj ne usse phir chheda!!!! Embarrassed Raj bhi na!!!! LOL

Naina ne usse sahi kaha!!! Thumbs Up Chimpu!!!! LOL

Raj again came close to her in a isolated corner!!!! Embarrassed How romantic!!!!!! Embarrassed

Naina bhag gayi!!!!! LOL LOL LOL Aur maan bhi gayi!!!! Thumbs Up

Waise this also reminded me of the scene between Hrithik and Kareena in K3G!!!! Smile Smile Smile

Navin khud karta hai sab kuch then he complains that Naina chup chap kyun nahi rehti!!! Angry Aalekh ne sahi kaha!!! Approve Approve Navin ki behen hai Naina!!!Nautanki!!!! LOL

All the ritauls were over!!!! Smile Smile Aur raj performed the rituals!!!!Great!!!!!! Clap

Navin thanked God!!! Disapprove Haan Navin bhagwaan ko thank karo lekin jab yeh bhanda footega naa toh bhagwaan bhi tumhe nahi baccha payega!!!!! Angry

Raj ne aise sambhala ke Naina usi explaination se satisfied ho gayi!!!!! Smile

Naina ka speech was very sweet!!!! Smile Par Naina tumne galat kaha!!!!! Disapprove Navin bilul waisa nahi hai jaise tumne kaha!!! Angry He is just the opposite!!!!! Thumbs Down

Navin ko bura laga!!!! Cry Cry Cry Lagna hi chahiye!!!!! Approve Navin ne Naina ka trust toda!!!!! Angry Uski feelings ke saath khela hai!!!! Angry Usse cheat kiya hai!!!!!!! Angry Uske jaise bhai hone se naa hona behtar hai!!!!!! Angry

Naina ka and gaana and dance were great!!!!! Clap Great choice of song!!!!! Clap

Waise if she had sung Bole Chudiyan shayad zyada accha hota!!!! Smile Would have been exactly like the movie!!!Wahan bhi toh shart hi lagi thi!!!!! Tongue

Navin,Aalekh and Raj joins them!!!Great!!! Embarrassed

Raj keeps pulling Naina towards him but she keeps pushing him away!!!!! Tongue Haaaiiiii!!!!!! Embarrassed Par Navin ko mauka hi nahi mila sach bolne ka!!!!! Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Aalekh ko bhi koi mil gayi!!!! Wink Wink Wink Great!!!! Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up And I loved Ritu and that girl's dresses!!!!! Smile Though I am just crazy about Preity's lehenga in Maahi Ve song and would have loved it if Naina had wore it at some other function!!!!! Tongue [:D/] [:D/]

I loved the Maahi Ve song!!!! Smile It was very apt!!! Tongue Raj's dancing with Naina and teasing her during the song!!! Embarrassed Haaiiii!!!! Embarrassed [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] Blushing

Aalekh and that girl was also very good!!!! Smile Smile Smile Mrs.Shekhawat's lines were very emotional!!!!! Cry

Navin ne phir se usse batane ki koshish ki!!!! Approve Very good!!!! Approve Par ab usse mauka nahi milega aur uska yeh ghatiya khel toh ab khatam hone se raha!!!!! Angry

Par huya kya achanak?? Confused Confused Confused

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 4:52am | IP Logged
hello!!!
I simply loved the story so far.You have a very nice way of representing your charactersClap Clap Clap.Navin is oh my god simply impossibleAngryAngryAngry.How can anyone treat his sister like thisDeadDead.Even Raj is helping in this matter!!!Poor NainaCry Cry Cry.She is sure to go mad at her brother after she comes to know about thisAngry Angry Angry.Hope she is able to forgive Raj after all thisSmile.
Once again a great updateClap Clap Clap

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 4:58am | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 10:56am | IP Logged
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part now only asap.
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 11:18am | IP Logged
where r u
when will u update
plzzzz update soon.

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