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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deeya

Originally posted by quietrajpri1623

update dear...i want my laughing dose...please...waiting eagerly...

yeah me too...LOL

just wait for 2 min guys.... this stupid net na... it is stopping me from updating.... i hate it... arghh...
anyways...
take care.. and keep smiling.....
thanks for commenting.....
sheenu......Smile

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:30am | IP Logged

SmileI am soo sorry friends…. I was going to update yesterday itself… but stupid net……  It went down… so I had to wait for today……. I am soo sorry…..

Read carefully…… enjoy the update……

 

PART 4

 

 

Navin: I am sorry sis… bas 4 days mei I will tell you the truth… but now I have another important work to do….huda you are so dead…..

 

And he made a call…….

 

Voice: hello captain rajveer singh shekhawat speaking…..

 

Navin: idiot…. Kaun sa waala… real one or the fake one…

 

Raj: oh to jijaji ka phone hai……

 

Navin: stop that…. and you idiot… what did you do with naina????

 

Raj: what I did!!! Nothing.. seriously bro… I din't do anything….

 

Navin: stop calling me bro… I told you earlier.. it makes me ritu's…..

 

Raj: first you said that stop calling me jija and now you're saying stop calling me bro…. tell me Capt. What should I call you???

 

Navin: oh goddd… you're sooo….. anyways first answer my ques…. Why was naina furious at you??? What did you do???

 

Raj: was she!!!!!....and anyways you can't say anything to me I was just playing with her…. and my dear jijz she is my best friend so stop questioning me….and tell me why did you call???

 

Navin: oh I forgot…. Get that stupid bhais waala….i need to talk with him…

 

Raj: ohh.. so capt. Navin called here to scold our poor bhains waala capt. Huda… listen capt. Don't scold him much… after all now I am fake huda… so I am not allowing you to shout at the real one…

 

Navin: youuuu… get that huda here… what was he doing with naina??? He has to act like you.. but he is so… naina told me that he called himself jatt… and also he was flirting with her and sleeping during the whole ride which is quite unlike raj…… he is so dead…. Get him on line…

 

Raj: ha ha ha… well its not huda's fault actually…. Its yours.. you were the one asking him to play the role of raj… anyways I am calling him here and I am putting the phone on speaker… I also want to see oops listen the scolding session…..

 

Raj called huda…

 

Huda: ki hoya… ab kyu tum meri neend kharab kar rahe ho… koi sone bhi nahi deta is jatt ko….

 

Navin: oye jatt… ye tere sone ki wajah se mei kissi din musibat mei pad jaunga…..

 

Huda: oye ye kaun bola… kahan se bola…. Ye aawaaj kidhar se aa rahi hai bhai… aur ye awaaj navin ke jaise kyu lag rahi hai…. (scared)… navin tumhe kuch ho to nahin gaya na… aur tum bhoot banke hame darane to nahi aa gaye na….plz navin maine kabhi bhi tumhari girlfriend se flirt nahi kiya… sach mei….aur maine kabhi bhi tumhari complaint BC aur major nair se nahi ki… haan ek do baar.. par plz navin ek dost samajh ke maaf kar de… yaar mai abhi marna nahi chahta…meri to abhi shaadi bhi nahi hui……. mujhe bhooto se bahut darr lagta hai… hey bhagwaan bachao…

 

Navin (from speaker phone):…. To wo tum the jisne meri complaint major nair se ki thi jab mai sonia ke sath date pe gaya tha….

 

Alekh (from back): aur issi jatt ne teri complaint ki thi MC se jab tumne uske wardrobe mei girls clothes rakh diye the… aur jiski wajah se tumhe ek din ka solitary confinement mila tha…

 

Raj was trying to control his laughter…..

 

Raj (in his mind): you are so dead huda….

 

Huda: oye kaidi jyada na bol ab… marwaayega ab kya mujhe..….sorry navin dost plz…. Ab mai kya karta… mai sonia ko kitne din se line maar raha tha… par wo mere saath to gayi nahi.. aur tumne ek baar poocha aur wo chali gayi… sorry navin.. galti ho gayi… par kitni baar to maine tera saath bhi diya na….....    

 

Navin: kya?????? To tumne major ko bataya tha…. Huda….. now I am not going to leave you……………

 

Huda: Nahinnnnnnn… wo mai… nahin.. darasal… actually…... Navin plz… dekh tujhe apni dosti ki kasam… mujhe bhooto se darr lagta hai….. bhagwan teri aatma ko shanty dega…….

 

Navin: I am ALIVE… but you are so dead…

 

Raj (by now laughing really hard): huda… navin is speaking from speaker phone….

 

Huda: KYAAAA???? (scared)……navin is alive…. Ab to mai gaya… isse to vo bhoot hota to hi accha tha… ab to usse sab kuch pata chal gaya…..

 

Navin: haannnnn… capt. Amardeep huda….. bas ab tum ek baar mujhe milo….

 

Huda: nahin navin.. plz dost samajh ke maaf kar de…. Waise bhi ab to mai tera saath de raha hun na….. teri behen ko ulloo banane mei…

 

Navin: kya bevkufo waala saath de rahe ho tum… naina ko tumpe doubt ho gaya hai… she was saying that this raj is totally different from the older one…. Kya bakwaas kar rahe the tum… jatt!!!... aur tumhari himmat kaise hui meri behen ke saath flirt karne ki….

 

Huda: wo teri behen…. Actually huda to sab janani se flirt kata hai… isliye….

 

Navin: mr. huda wo janani I mean ladki meri behen hai… aur raj ke bachpan ki dost… aur waise bhi raj kisi ladki se flirt karna to dur usse baat bhi nahi karta… to jab tak tum raj ho no more flirting… aur ab apne aap ko jatt bolna band karo….

 

Huda: lekin navin……

 

Navin: agar tum chahte ho ki jo kuch bhi tumne ab tak kiya mai tumhe uske liye maaf kardun aur tumhari jaan bach jaye to tumhe ye karna padega…

 

Huda (glaring raj): thik hai…..

 

Navin: ab raj ko phone do…

 

Raj: boliye jizz… u r on speaker….

 

Navin: tumne naina se bet lagayi thi.. jisse tum jeet gaye…

 

Raj: haan… ab bada mazza aayega….

 

Navin: kya karwane waale ho tum naina se…….

 

Raj (smirking): tumhe kyu bataun…. Anyways kal hum sab tumhare gharr aa rahe hai….

 

Navin: kyu???

 

Raj: kyuki my dear jijz…. Aapke mom dad kal mere ghar aa rahe hai engagement ki preparations karne…. To isliye hum sab kal tumhare yahan….

 

Navin: thik hai thik hai… waise bhi agar tum teeno wahan rahe to problem aa jaayegi,…. Tum mere aage hi raho to hi accha hai….

 

And after cutting the phone….. huda was running to catch raj….

 

Huda: saale tune mujhe bataya kyun nahi ki navin speaker pe hai… teri wajah se ab navin mujhe nahin chodega…. aur saale tu kabhi flirt kyu nahi karta… ab mujhe bhi jananiyon se durr rehna padega… haye re meri kismet…,. Banaya bhi to raj….

 

Alekh: is nautanki ko koi nahi sudhar sakta….

 

………………………………………………………………………………………….

 

Next day:

 

Navin: naina….. sis kya kar rahi ho tum??? Kahan pe ho… sab log aane waale hai…. mom dad ab tak raj ke ghar pahunch gaye honge….

 

Naina: aayi bro…… bhai actually wo….

 

Navin: haan bolo naina… itni pareshaan kyu lag rahi ho….

 

Naina: kya aapka wo dost… I mean capt. Huda… kya wo aayega….

 

Navin (smirking): kyu badi betaab lag rahi ho…. Kahin kuch…..

 

Naina: oh no…. pata nahi ab wo mujhse kya karwaayega….

 

Navin: ha ha.. tumhe to kisi se darr nahi lagta tha sis… phir….

 

Naina: oh god bhai….. aapko pata nahi wo kitna bada paagal ……

 

And she was not able to complete her sentence coz of the sound of car……

 

Navin: lo wo aa gaye sis…….. badi lambi umar hai uski…..

 

Naina: oh no… bhai mai abhi aayi….

 

Navin: array bhaag kahan rahi ho sis….. chalo mere saath chalo…..

 

One by one everyone enters except raj……

 

Naina: thank god… wo duffer nahi aaya….

 

Navin: array raj…. I mean raj huda nahi aaya….

 

Huda: array abhi  to apne saath hi tha.. pata nahi kidhar gayab ho gaya….

 

From back…

 

Raj: array mei yahin hun… bas ek imp call answer kar raha tha (looking at navin)……..delhi head quarters se….

 

Alekh: is everything ok????.....

 

Raj: yeah……. Array chalo chalo tum sab log… hum yahan masti karne aaye hai…. poora din ab hamara hai……

 

Navin: chalo sab mere picche aao…

Everyone goes behind him… but as naina was about to leave… someone holds her hand….

 

Raj: aap kahan ja rahi hai miss naina….

 

Naina turning back…. Mera haath chodo…..

 

Raj (still holding her hand): shayad tum bhool gayi ki tum mujhse bet haar gayi thi to ab jo mai bolunga wo tum karogi….

 

Naina (tensed): kya karwaane waale ho tum…

 

Raj:hmm…. Wo to mai abhi sochunga,…. Tab tak tum sab ke liye coffee bana lao….

 

Naina: what??? mai aur coffee…. Abhi tumne socha nahi na.. to jab sochoge tab bata dena… let me go…..

 

Raj pinned her to wall and comes very close to her….

 

Raj (looking in her eyes): maine socha nahi par….. (coming more close)…. Agar tum chahti ho ki mai tumhe baksh dun to jab tak mai sochta nahi jaisa kehta hun waisa karo…… (coming more close such that their foreheads were almost toching)…. Yaad rakho mai tumse kuch bhi karva sakta hun miss naina……..tum bet haar gayi ho mujhse…..

 

Then he leaves her and says… to tum coffee la rahi ho na…..

 

Naina: get lost…… (seeing raj) la rahi hun…….

 

Raj grins and leaves……………..

 

……………………………………………………………………………………

 

Navin: array kahan reh gaye the tum raj????

 

Raj: bas kuch purani baatein sort out kar raha tha…. Navin(in tensed tone)… mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai……akele mei……

 

Navin looks at him and then says …. Chalo…….

 

…………………………………………………………………….

 

When raj and navin came back they saw naina coming towards them with coffee….

 

Navin: array waah sis… tum aur coffee…waise tum coffee bahut acchi banati ho…. Hmm……he picks a mug…. Waah wahi pehle jaisa taste hai… excellent…..kafi saalo baad tumne coffee banayi hai….pehle to sirf raj ke kehne pe hi banati thi…… aaj ye nek khayal tumhare dimag mei kaise aaya….

 

Naina (glaring raj): kuch nahi bhai…. Wo aaj bhi raj hai na aap sab ke saath… to socha ki aaj bana lun… kafi saal ho gaye…

 

Raj (grinning): hmm… bahut acchi coffee hai…(bilkul pehle jaisi)….waise tumhe pata hai navin… abhi thodi der pehle naina mujhse keh rahi thi ki aaj lunch bhi wahi banaegi………….

 

Naina: KYAAA???? Mei aur lunch…… no way….. seeing raj…. Bataiye kya khayenge aap… soch rahi hun.. ki raj ke itne saal baad waapas aane ki khushi mei mai hi lunch bana lun………….

 

Navin: array waah sis……. Tumne kabhi hamare liye to nahi banaya… pehle bhi uske liye hi banati thi.. aur aaj bhi….

 

Huda: array wo kya hai na… ye apne bachpan ke dost ka bahut khayal rakhti hai…. kudiye meri mummyji kehti hai ki ladki ko ghar ke har kaam mei nipun hona chahiye……..

 

Naina: kya??? Maine to aunty ko aisa kehte kabhi nahi suna….

 

Navin: array wo sis… actually aunty ab tum se thode na sab kahengi… wo is raj (glaring huda) ko hi sab bolti hongi….. jao tum lunch banao…….

 

Ritu: ruko naina… mai bhi aati  hun…. Tumhari help ke liye…..

 

Raj: array nahi ritu….naina ne kaha ki raj ke aane ki khushi mei wo khud hi saara khana banayegi…. Ab tum kyu do best friends ke bich mei aa rahi ho… tum yahan pe navin ke saath hi raho…. Kyu naina????(smirking)…..

 

Naina (glaring raj): ji huda ji… aap to kabhi galat hote hi nahi…

 

Ritu: par bha….. I mean huda ji… wo akeli itna sab kaise karegi….

 

Raj: array kar legi… aakhir wo ek soldier ki behen aur ek ki best friend hai….. aap yahin pe rahiye………..

 

Naina: nahin… tum yahi raho ritu… ab to mei sab karke dikhaungi……..

 

…………………………………………………………………………………….

 

Lunch time:

 

At table….. everyone was eating…………..

 

Ritu: hmm…naina I must say… tum bahut accha khana banati ho…..

 

Navin: akhir behen kiski hai…

 

Huda: akhir ye kudi dost to meri hi hai… kyu hai na….

 

Ritu: hu…. I mean bhaiya…….

 

Huda: NAHINNN….. ye nahin ho sakta……

 

Navin: kya hua raj????........

 

Huda: koi janani mujhe bhaiya bulaye ye mai bardaasht nahi kar sakta……

 

Naina (with open eyes): raj tum apni hi behen se flirt………………..

 

Alekh: wo kya hai na naina ye raj ko bhaiya sunne ki adat nahi hai na……

 

Huda:hn..haan… ritu tum plz mujhe raj hi bulao to accha rahega……..

 

Naina: lekin raj ritu to hamesha se tumhe bhaiya hi kehti aayi hai……..

 

Huda: wo ab mujhe adat nahi hai na.. isliye…

 

Naina: lekin……

 

Raj (interrupting her): naina ji kya aapne dessert nahi banaya…hmm waise aap khana accha banati hai……….

 

Naina (glaring him): laati hun………

 

She goes and……..

 

Navin: huda tum apna muh band nahi rakh sakte kya……

 

Huda: ab wo ritu agar mujhe bhaiya…….

 

Navin: oh shut up…. Ritu meri hone wali wife hai……

Raj: aur meri sis…..

 

Both: so you better stay away from her……..

 

Huda: ok ok……..

 

Ritu: raj bhaiya aapko nahi lagta jo ho raha hai galat hai……..

 

Raj: ye tum apne hone waale husband se poocho…………. Mai to isse kayi baar mana kar chukka hun….

 

Navin: oh come on raj,…… ritu bas 3-4 days …. Then I will tell her the truth……

 

Ritu: ok as you say……….

 

………………………………………………………………………..

 

After lunch they saw 'chicken little' movie…… everyone there enjoyed the movie except one person…… *any guesses*…………….. yes naina…………..*why*…. Coz raj didn't allow her to sit even for a minute…….

 

This time also naina was in kitchen………. *why*…. To bring water for our very thirsty raj who had drunk atleast 5 glasses of water in last 1 hr……..

 

Naina: kuch soch naina…. Warna ye aise hi tujhse kaam karvata rahega bet ke naam pe…………. IDEA…………….and she mixed something in water………….

 

……………………………………………………………………………………

 

END OF PART……….

 

Hmmm… so I end it here…. Keep guessing what will naina do and also raj's reaction……….

 

Waise I have given little hint in the update for the upcoming turns in the story……and its upto you to guess it… otherwise I am here to give the updates……

Next update….hmm… I am not sure… may be Thursday or friday………

 

Ok now b bye…

Take care…

Keep smiling always…

Sheenu……Smile

 

 

 



Edited by rogerfan - 03 June 2008 at 7:31am

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 9:13am | IP Logged
ROFL once again your fic has managed to make me laugh, i actually have came from the examination hall after doing my history exam and oi logged on and saw that this fic has been updated so i clicked on it and read it and it was soooooooo funny that it made my day, i was literally pissed of today first i had two exams which were rock solid and on top of that it's raining, raing on summer how bad could this get, but then your fic cheered me up Big smile i just looooooooooooove this fic, it's brilliant Embarrassed

and now for the update yeh gosh navin, huda and raj part was hilarious LOL LOL LOL huda thinking that navin is a ghost and he confesses everything he done to him when actually he's on the answer phone LOL LOL LOL and raj, jaante hue bhi usko nahin bataya, bechara navin, usko punishment mil gaya just because that huda snitched on him argh! Ouch

and naina raj part was my favourite how he pins her up against the wall and goes closer to her each time oooooooh!! Embarrassed i am blushing here, that was sooooooo cute.

and i loved how he made her do all that work and naina keeps saying it's for huda i mean raj but really it's for raj uh i mean huda Confused .... yaar it's to confusing LOL bechari ko betne ka mauka bhi nahi diya raj nai, awwwwwwww bless her LOL LOL LOL itna bhi saatana acchi baat nahin hain raj LOL

and huda yeh kabhi nahin badlega, apni so called behen kai saath bhi flirt LOL LOL yeh na ek din pol kul ke hee rahega LOL LOL

but ab yeh naina kya karne waali hain? Confused

anyways once again brill update hun Clap Clap Clap looooooooooooooved it Embarrassed

take care Big smile
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 9:54am | IP Logged
WOW WOW WOW! SHEENU! LOVELY PART.. MAN KARTA HAI AAPKO HUG KARUN Hug MINDBLOWING PART! I WAS LAUGING TILL TEARS FELL FROM MY EYES ROFL ROFL ROFL RAJ NAINA KO BADA PARESHAAN KAR RAHA HAI LOL LOL AND THAT HUDA IS REALLY MAD, HE THOUGHT NAVIN HAS BECOME A GHOST LOL LOL WAT A FOOL HE IS..IT IS BECAUSE OF RAJ AND NAVIN HOODA DID NOT GET CAUGHT.. IF SUPPOSE THEY LEAVE HOODA AND NAINA ALONE JUS FOR 15 MIN, NAINA CAN EASILY FIND OUT THE TRUTH LOL LOL
HEY I AM REALLY TENSED! WAT IS NAINA GOING TO DO WITH RAJ Confused Confused ??? WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY.. ONCE MORE THANK UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU SOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THE LOVELY UPDATE........

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:01am | IP Logged
He He He!!! i have no word to say it just superb Clap Raj is so noughty he is such a cute & how he teasing Naina poor naina LOL LOL LOL while reading whole update my only reaction is ROFL
        So update soon Thursday - friday are too late plz try to update fast plz
                       keep smilling Big smile keep writting Thumbs Up
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha...it was a greatest great best comedy update...still i mnot able to stop myself for laughing...Raj-Huda-Navin convo my god...from where does ur talented brain come up with those hiiiiiiiiilarious dialogues...Raj is doing great in teasing Naina...poor...but i m enjoying everybit of this session...dinning table scene was composed with amaaaaaaaaaazing comedy...u r just the best actually u have crossed the line of best...u r more than that...thanku soooooo muuuuch for this laughter therapy...
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
tooooooooooooo
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superrrrrrrrrrrrr
huda naveen raj scene is funny LOL

update soon Embarrassed Wink
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
lolz... this is so hillarious.... LOL cant stop laughing

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