FF:~KASHISH~(updt prt 25/pg27) - Page 14

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

thanks 4 the pm gr8 part loved the proposal song cont soon

thnxxx for lykin my FF😊
i thought  dat was the perfect song for the situation...

Originally posted by: jeenal20

tgr88 update

bekhuda 1 of my fav songs

 

and now bani also calls jai a dumbo

 

jai ko pata nahi aur kitne naam apne naam likhne padenge

 

plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

 

thnxxx dear...
its ma fav song tooo😊😊😊
i'll try to update it soon..

Originally posted by: teenzs

dat was a cute part

so bani wants jai to propose to her in front of everyone...

dats so cute

waiting to read more

do continue soon

 

PS:thanxs for the pm

thnxxx dear...😊😊😊
i'll try to cont soon...

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

i really liked jai and banis phone conversation it was really cute.The way jai said the three words infront of everyone was amazing.

thnxxxxxx😊😊😊

Originally posted by: phool527

hey hun.. that was a great part as usual.. wow JB are soo funny.. lmao.. bani wants him to propose that to infront of everyone.. lol.. thats hilarious.. ha ha... contineu sooon yaar..

thnxxx dear..😊😊😊
i'll try to cont soon yaar...

Originally posted by: princess14

very cute update!!! continue soon!!!

thnxx dear..i'll cont soon..😊

Originally posted by: jinzcool

gr8 part

good way of tellin i love u

cont soon

thnxx dear.....
i will cont soon...😊😊😊
😊

😊

Originally posted by: ar_ridziarmi

hey very cooool update yaar

pushkar gave a coool idea

now update next part soon yaar

m waiting eagerly

thnxx dear😊
i'll try to update it soon..

Originally posted by: sweetshab

hey tannu
awesome  update .....
i really loved it..
hope to see more dis kinda update in future..
bakhuda..one of ma favv song...
cont soon...
nd this time no LATE UPDATE..
next time not gonna leave u..surely gonna kill u..😆

thnxx shab😊😊😊
bakhuda ma fav song too...☺️☺️☺️
☺️i'll try ma best to update next part soon...

hey everyone....again sorry for late update...can't help im busy...hope u all understand.....nd lyk the update...now no more bhashan jes check wid the update........

Part 21

Piya clear her throat..

Piya:awesome u guys sung so well'

Bani:thank u piya'

Jai:thank u..

Piya:waise mr.walia bahut acha idea tha'

Jai mouth wide open..

Bani:muhh band karlo macchar chale jayenge..

Piya& bani move away from there..

 

_____

 

neev is sulking'..

neev angrily:bani'yahn aa..

bani:kya hua neev???

Neev:mere saath bahar chal'

Bani:par neev'

Neev:chal kaha na..

Neev drags bani out into lawn'

Piya following them..

Bani:ahhh neev u r hurting me'

Piya:aakhir baat kya hai neev'

Neev:baat kya hai????tum log mujhse baat kya hai pooch rahi hoo??

Bani:par hua kya neev..??tu baat kahega to pata chalega na..

Neev:tu chup hi reh'

Piya:whats going on guys..???can anyone explain me???

Neev:u know It very well piya'

Piya:what???

Neev:bani I didn't expect this from u..

Bani:par baat kya hai neev???

Neev:yeh mujhe bata na padega???

Piya:ek minute bani'.neev can u clear the matter???whats the matter???

Neev:matter piya???what do u think you guys are doing???

bani:humne kiya kya hai???

Neev:what u people think am I a fool???

Piya:yeh paheli math bhuja 'ab seedhe seedhe bata baat kya hai'..

Neev:baat piya???tumlogon laga kya rakha hai'yeh game'yeh bani ki life hai damnit'

Bani:but neev'

Neev:chup kaha na chup'don't you utter a single word'

Bani in tears'

Kani comes there'

She sees bani in tears'nd runs inside'

Neev:yeh kab se chal raha hai piya????

Piya:neev'she loves mr.walia'

Kani goes to jhanvi..

Kani:mamma

Jhanvi:kya hua baccha..???

Kani indicates her to kneel..

Jhanvi kneels'kani says sumthin in her ears'

Jhanvi gets tensed..

Neev:love???kya issey pata hai love kisey kehte hai'

Bani grounds on floor'

Bani:yes I love mr.walia'

Jhanvi comes wid kani..

Jhanvi:kani tum andar jao'aur kisi se kuch math kehna'

Kani leaves..

Jhanvi:yeh kya ho raha hai neev:???

Neev:janu dii'see whats happening'

Piya:neev its enough'

Jhanvi:koi mujhe batayega kya ho raha hai???

Neev:bani keh rahi ki who mr.walia se pyar karti hai'pyaar????pyar ka matlab bhi pata hai ussey???

Piya:kya yeh choti bacchi hai neev jo issey pyar ka matlab nahi pata' pyaar toh tuney bhi kiya hai naa

Neev:who baat alag hai piya'

Piya:arrey waah !! baat alag kaise ho gayii neev???tune kiyahai toh pyaar..aur agar bani ne kiya toh bachpana ban gaya????

Jhanvi:bas karo 'andar mehmaan hai'yeh baat hum baad mein karenge'

Piya wipes bani's tears..

Jhanvi:neev tu chal andar..sab tujhe dhoondh rahey hai'

Neev turns sees bani nd leaves frustratedly'

Jhanvi:piya bani ko uske room main lekar jaa'.

Piya and bani leaves

Jhanvi also leaves

 

In the party

Jai(in his mind):where is this bani???

Prachi:kisey dhoondh rahey ho bhaiyya???

Jai:who'bb..maasi ko dhoondh raha tha'

Prachi:maasi???woh yahin hai kuch kehna tha???

Jai:kuch nahi'..

 

In bani room..

Bani is crying'.piya is consoling her'

Piya:ab bas bani tu itna kyun ro rahi hai

Bani:who neev'.

Piya:who aisa hi hai naa' over possessive who theek ho jayegi

Bani:but really love mr.walia'

Piya:I know bani'its okay..now'..

Piya hugs bani'

 

In party'

Parvathi:arrey jhanvi'.bani aur piya kahan hai???

Jhanvi:maa..woh'bani ki tabiyat kuch thik nahi thi toh piya ussey ske room le gayi hai'

Parvathi:kya hau bani ko???

Jhanvi:kuch nahi maa'bas sar dard kar raha tha'

Parvathi:ab who thik toh hai na???

Jhanvi:haan maa'

Jai overhears the convo'nd calls bani'

Bani cell rings'.she disconnects the call nd switch off mobile..

Jai thinking:yeh bani ko kya hua???

Jai:betuu'

Prachi:jii bhaiyya???

Jai:bani ko kya hua??uski tabiyat thik  toh hai???

Prachi:haan bhaiyya abhi toh yahin thi..main dekhti hoon'

Prachi goes to jhanvi..

Prachi:dii 'bani kahan hai???

Jhanvi:who apne room main hai..

Prachi:kya hua???

Jhanvi:kuch nahi bas tabiyat thik nahi thi'

Prachi:main dekh kar aati hoon.

Jhanvi:nahi'

 

Prachi leaves..

Prachi knocks the door..

Piya opens it

Seeng Prachi bani wipes her tear..

Prachi:kya hua bani???

Bani:kuch nahi bas sar dard kar raha tha..

Prachi:tumne cell switch off kyun rakha hai??

Bani:who'

Piya:battery low'..battery low hogi'switch off hogaya hoga'

Piya: Prachi engagement party tumhare hai..aur tum yahan chalo yahn se sab tumhe dhoondh rahey hogay..

Prachi& piya leaves'

 

''''

party is almost over all the guests  are leaving..

guest 1:parvthi..tumhari beti kahan hai??

Parvathi:mrs.khanna ..woh bani ka kal chota sa accident ho gaya tah toh who rest kar rahi hai..

Guest 1:ab thik toh hai na who??

Parvathi:haan thik hai'

Guest 1:accha ab hum chaltey hai..

Guests leave..

''''''

maasi:parvathi,premlatha ab hum bhi chaltey hai'

parvathi:jii'maasi..ab toh haldi main hi milenge hum

premlatha:ab toh aana jaan hota hi rahega'

Prachi takes blessings from elders'walias leave'

''''''''''''''''''

piya:dii yahan aayae'

jhanvi:kya hua piya???

Piya:di bani apna room ka door nahi khol rahi hai'

Jhanvi:kya????

Piya:main kab se try kar rahi hoon..woh kuch bol hi nahi rahi hai..

Jhanvi:chal main dekhti hoon'

'''''''''''''''

jhanvi& piya knocks the door'

jhanvi:bani darwaza khol'

jhanvi:bani'

piya is crying..

piya:di agar bani ne kiya hoga toh???

Jhanvi:piya'who kuch aisa nahi karegi'

Piya:bani plzz darwaza khol'

Kani from in side'

Kani:piyu maashii..maashi nahi hai..'

Jhanvi:kani??? Kani tum andar ho???

Kani:haan mamma '

Jhanvi:darwaza khol kani..

Kani:one minute mamma'

 Kani opens the door'

Jhanvi:tum kya kar rahi thi baccah???

Kani:mamma main aur avinash hide n seek khel rahey tahay'aur jab main maashii ke room main aakar door lock kiya'..par maashii room main nahi thi..

Piya:bani room main nahi ahi'.kahan gayi hogi..

Jhanvi:shayad mujhe pata hai'

Jhanvi:kani'go to bed..

Kani:good night mamam,good  night piyu maashii..

''''''..

jahnvi &piya goes to terrace'

they see bani at one corner and neev at another'

jhanvi:mujhe pata tah..yeh log yahin hongey'bachpan se jab bhi yeh kisi bhi baat par jhagadtey yeh dono yahin aatey hai..

piya:di'main bani..

jahnvi:nahi piya'yeh dono ko akela chod do''

 

''

next morning'

neev:badi maa mujhe dair ho rahi hai..main office ja raha hoon'

parvathi:neev beta ruk ja..break fast toh karle..

neev:nahi aaj bahut dair ho gayi hai'

neev leaves..

parvathi:pata nahi kay hogaya..kuch ajeeb behave kar raha hai..

prem.l:aur wahan bani'

parvathi:bani bhi???

p.l:haan bhabhi..lagta haiin dono ki beech jhagda hua hai'

parvathi:yehdono bhi'ek doosre se bat nahi karenge par..rotey rahenge..bhagwaan kya hoga in dono ka???

p.l:bhabhi aap hi samjahyi bani ko who break fast nhai kar rahi hai'ussey tablets bhi toh lena hai..

piya:mami main kis liye hoon'???aaj bani mere saath breakfast karegi'

p.l:thik hai beta..

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piya goes to bani's room with breakfast'

piya:mujhe toh bahut bhook lag rahi hai..aaur bani ka fav aloo paratha bana hai..bani chal maujhe toh bahut bhook lagi hai..

bani:piya mujhe bhook nahi hai..

piya:piya mujhe bhook nahi hai'..bhook kaise nahi hai????

Bani:piya plzz piya'

Piya:baniiii'.

Bani:piya plz leave me alone for sometime'

Piya:par bani'

Bani:piya mainne kaha naa'. Leave me alone

Piya leaves

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Jhanvi:kya hua piya bani ne kuch khaya???

Piya:nahi diii'.. who bahut upset hai'.

Jhanvi:main dekhti hoon

 

Jhanvi:bani yeh kya kar rahi hai tu khana nahi khayegi toh kaise chalega??

Bani:diii mujhe bhook nahi hai' bhook lagegi jab khalungi

Jhanvi:nahi abhi kha tu

Jhanvi feeds bani

Bani:di ab bus'

Jhanvi:acha baba yeh last..

Bani:nahi dii

Jhanvi:okay theek hai

 

 

After one week

In this one week jai tried to contact bani but in vaiol as her cell was switch off..as bani was trying to ignore jai......

Its 9:00 pm

At the terrace'.. neev and bani both are crying

(neev&bani were not talking to each other past one week)

Neev:bani'

Bani:neev'

Neev:I m sorry'

Bani:I m sorry'(both at the same time)

They both hug'&cry

Neev:main tujhe rota hua nahi dekh sakta'

Bani:main mr.walia se pyaar karti hoon..

Neev:mujhe pata hai bani'ppar main yeh nahi chahta tah ki jaise pechli baar'.

Bani:nahi neev..he loves me too'

neev:agar unhone tere aankho main ek bhi aansoo diya toh main uhne nahi chodunga'

chal mujhe bahut bhook lagihai..

bani:mujhe bhi'maine last week se theek se nahi khaya' bahut bhook lag rahi hai

neev:tujhe kya Lagta hai maine khaya'.. chal ab hum pet bhar kar khayenge'

jhanvi &piya:aur humara kya??

Piya:tum dono ki ladai main maine bhi theek se khana nahi kahya??

And they four hugg

 

At the dinner table'

Bani:mama bhook lagi hai khana laao

Neev:pet main chuhe football khel rahe hai

p.l:ab aagaye khane ki yaad

parvathi:dekh toh premlatha' ek hafte se dono ne humey bulaya tak nahi'

pl:aur aaj dono ke dono chila rahe hai

kani comes

kani:maashii mujhe bhi bhook lagi hai

bani:arrey mera bacha aaja main tujhe aaj khilati hoon

and they all have their dinner''.

hope u all lyk it..

pl zz do comment

Edited by baanisings - 15 years ago