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FF - Ek Anmol Rishta: Prem aur Heer ka ..

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 2:49am | IP Logged

Hey my dear friends …

 

Prem is driving all of us crazy …. His eyes makes my heart skip a trillion beats in one moment and I am just sooo just by his passion that I have to write this FF to take my imagination out !!! it has to be done to bring my heart at peace hehehheheheh.

Please do leave your comments, for that will give me the courage and strength to carry on.

 

Backdrop:

So let us start here …. Lalit now considers Heer as his daughter and Gayatri comes to give that dress and jewelery to Heer. As usual, DJ takes it and does not give it to Heer. Prem is in his room, sleeping. Heer is in her room with Meher.  

 

Part 1

Someone knocked at the door and Heer turned around to look towards it. The moment she saw Gayatri stepping in, she stood up.

"aap…" Heer gets confused seeing her. This is the first time Gayatri has come to their part of the house.  

"haan beta, poochnay aayee thi kay tumhain kapray kaisay lagay…" Gayatri asked in a motherly tone.

"kapray?" the question confused Heer since DJ has not bothered giving the thaal to Heer which she took for Gayatri on her way.

"haan…" Gayatri is surprised as well.

"kaun say kapray?" Heer asked and Gayatri realized DJ had not given them to her yet.

"OH, so daljeet hasn't given them to you yet. Chalo, main ussay kehti hoon tumhain day dai. Lalit aur main chahtay hain tum party main wohi dress pehno …." Gayatri moved her hand on her hair gently, showering her love and blessings on Heer.

"ji .." Heer responded quietly.

 

Gayatri was about to turn around when she saw the condition of Heer's room. Old room with old furniture and not so appealing outlook … all of the sudden as if she had made her mind, she looked at Heer,

"Heer beta, Meher," she looked at Meher before turning back to Heer, "pack your belongings.. you two are shifting." Her statement surprised both Heer and Meher.

"Shifting, where, why?" Heer is confused.

"hum nay tumhain apni beti mana hai, aur hamari betiaan yahan akeli nahi, sab kay saath rahain gi …" Gayatri said with concern. "you two pack your belongings, till then I will get your new room arranged." As she said that, Gayatri turned towards the door to leave.

"aunty ji …."  Heer calls her.

"haan"

"please rehnay dain. Hum yahan theek hain." Heer tried to reason with her and right then a voice from the door made all three look towards it.

"not at all. Gayatri is right." Lalit stood at the door, his voice full of love and concern for both Heer and Meher."

"magar uncle ji …" Heer tried once again, but in vain. Lalit gives his final verdict that they are moving in the part of the house where all others live.  DJ who had been passing by overhears the conversation and as much as she hated to move Heer and Meher to the main house, she had to give in. For the situation, she decided to impress Lalit and Gayatri by taking their side and enters Heer's room as well. Finally Heer agrees to pack. Just when all were about to leave, Gayatri asked DJ about the dress she gave her for Heer.

"o lord, yeh budiya mera peecha nahi choray gi" DJ's heart shouts … "itna mehnga zewar aur kapray bhala is Heer ko dainay ki kya zaroorat hai?" she wanted to ask but kept silent.

"aaray bhabi, abhi lati hoon, wo koee kaam aa gaya tha tu bhool gaee lana…."

 

Scene Change

Heer and Meher entered their new room. Beautiful, big, and spacious room with cream walls and light blue curtains … the windows looked straight down in the green lawn where hundreds of roses and lilies stood proud showing their unmatchable beauty. Both sisters stood at the door, breathing the beauty of the room when Gayatri brings them back.

"kaisay laga room?"

"bohat acha hai aunty … bohat hi acha.." Meher was extremely excited and Heer smiled to see her sister soo happy.

"bas aik problem hai.." Gayatri said and both Heer and Meher looked at her. "You see this door.." Gayatri pointed at the door inside the room, "this opens in Prem's room…" it was as if he words sent Heer in a state of shock … Opens in Prem's room!!! O lord no … her heart silently pleased, because somewhere in her heart she knew, her heart belonged to Prem, and it was sooo difficult to live in a room right next to him and feel his presence all the time. She was lost in her thoughts, trying to tell Gayatri that she would not live in this room when Meher spoke ..

"tu kya hwa aunty … we will keep the door locked … aur waisay bhi, Prem bhaiyya hi tu hain, koee aur thori hai …" Meher said it all soo sweetly that Gayatri couldn't help but smile at her childlike innocence. However, she also felt Heer's reluctance.

"sorry beta … koee aur room khali nahi tha, warna …" Heer sensed Gayatri's concern and tried to ignore her heart.

"koee baat nahi aunty ji, aap nay hamary liyay itna kiya, yeh bohat hai." Though Heer wanted to say she does not want to stay here, but she respected Gayatri and Lalit's words and kept their maan.

"ab tum bhi araam karo Heer, bohat thak gaee ho gi.." Gayatri said, considering the fact that Heer was in jail and must be very tired, both emotionally and physically.

 

Scene Change

Heer stepped out of her room, when she heard a distant voice, which stopped her right there.

"pani …" it was Prem … how could she not recognize his voice … this was the voice she could recognize with closed eyes … she looked towards the way it was coming and saw the door of Prem's room open. For a moment, Heer wanted to run to Prem and see if he wanted something, but she stopped herself. Her heart was restless, Prem's voice was heartbreaking. She could not see him, but his voice was full of pain and loneliness, and no matter how much she tried, her feet moved towards his room.

"pani…" she could hear him murmuring gently, she stood by the door and peeped in his room. And there she saw him, lying on the bed, turning his head gently yet restlessly … the alcohol he had consumed was really working and he was dead thirsty. She couldn't see his restlessness and before she could think, she was already moving in his room. She looked around and saw a water jug on the table. She poured some water in the glass lying next to it and came back to Prem.

 

But what would she do? How would she give him water? Should she wake him up? Or should she bend forward and help him drink water? How should she wake him up? She had never taken his name. She stood right next to him, confused about what to do.

"ummm, suniyay …" she had to apply all her force to say those words … but Prem didn't open his eyes …

"suniyay…" she tried again, but in vain. …

"P …. Pr…. Premm….." it was as if, she had used all her power in saying that one name …. And O God, his name of her lips was almost sensational. She felt the heat burning her lips and reaching her heart … she could feel her heart rate increasing … Prem was still laying there … eyes closed …

"P … Prem …" she tried once again and this time it worked. He opened his eyes and to his surprise saw the woman of his dreams standing in front of him, with a glass of water, and a look of concern in her eyes … he blinked his eyes twice, as if he did not believe he was awake … As if she was a dream .. and just when he was doing that she confirmed her presence ..

"Pani … pani pee lain .." her voice was shy and reluctant and he could sense it. She put the glass on his bedside when he tried to lift himself up … but he stumbled, and right then Heer moved swiftly to hold him. With one arm behind his back and the other hand entwined in his hand, she supported him … with one touch they felt their hearts burning and longing for more. He looked towards her and their eyes met .. and what seemed like an instantaneous moment turned into a lifetime. Both wished they could stay like this forever, that life would come to a standstill and they stay with each other forever …. And a song played in the background..

 

Mere haathon main tera haath ho,

Teri saansoon main meri saans ho

Hum yunhi chaltay chaltay kho jaain

Teri baton main meri baat ho

Aur tanhaee apnay saath ho

Teray kaandhay pay sar rakh kay so jaain

 

There closeness was deadly when all of a sudden Heer realized the repercussions of this closeness and moved away … Prem let her hand go and set his back against the headboard.

"pani …" she picked the glass and extended towards him. He looked at her, almost wondering how she heard him, and what was she doing here, when she realized the questions in his silent eyes.

"wo main bahar say guzar rahi thi kay aap ki awaaz suni .. aap pani maang rahay thay.." she said with bent eyes and he took the glass from her. Their fingers touched slightly and their eyes lift towards each other again .. this time with even more passion and depth … she pulled her hand back and stepped away from his bed … it was too close for her, and too difficult to resists her feelings when he is soo near. She knew she should leave his room now, but before that she had to say this,

"I wanted to thank you…" Heer said, her eyes focused on the floor.

"kis liyay .." Prem asked in his same serious tone. His eyes never leaving the sight of her angelic face.

"For getting me out of jail." She said.

"main nay nahi tumharay mangetar nay tumhaian churaya hai…"all of a sudden Prem had this sarcasm in his voice. A hint of jealousy, and a feel of pain and torture … she looked at him instantly and saw all the mixed emotions in his eyes. She wanted to tell him that she knew he had done this for her; she wanted to tell him that she knew he was the one who protected her, but she kept silent.

 

Without another word, she turned around to leave. Prem saw her leaving and his heart shouted to stop her. He didn't want this moment to end … he didn't want her to leave .. Not yet!!!

 

To be continued….

 

Love, Kashish

 



Edited by thesaint148 - 17 May 2008 at 11:47pm

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 4:57am | IP Logged
awww kashish, this was reallly good... i go mad over any FF but if this comes true in monday's episode then wooooowww we all will b soooo happy..

loved it.... continue soon

Luv Salma


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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 5:19am | IP Logged
so sweet plz continue
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 5:57am | IP Logged

Wow Kashish u r an absolutely brilliant writerClap...
I lubbed itBig smile..
The way u described his pain.. and the way she took his name.. and everything... AmazingClap
Oh and Gayatri aunty was calling Meher.. Meher .. You are continuing from thursday's epi na..
Cant wait for ur next updateeeeEmbarrassed

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 6:58am | IP Logged
I too hope this comes true on monday's episode..

pm me wen u update this FF
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 7:00am | IP Logged

Are Kasish,

That was such a cute & luvly story...I don't have enough words for the Prem-Heers scene, You wrote it soo pasionately! FANTASTIC....Clap Clap  Clap Clap Clap

 

Awwww Then know they are in LOVE..that's so good....Do continue soon... Wink WinkAur haan...Gayetri Aunty Doesn't know Meher...she knows it's Rano Big smile Big smile

 

Love

Raisa



Edited by Jai & Bani - 17 May 2008 at 7:11pm
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 7:14am | IP Logged
wow awesome part Clap Clap
loved the heer prem scene, they atleast know that they are in love!! Embarrassed
well hope you continue soon,
with even more rocking prem-heer scenes LOL
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Kashish!
wow that was awsome! do write more!

shabo

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