AR's Heart 2 Heart in Lonavila (Prt 5 ad)

Posted: 15 years ago
After  writing in another topic about what should happen before FF-- I said I think it should be a proper Heart to Heart talk with AR. They need to talk and let their feelings come out and understand what happened and why.
Well, thats why I wanted to write this short FF or prediction which I hope or want to happen in Lonavila if any confession is meant to come there or so.
I hope you like, its my first attempt at writing a FF for AR.😉  Plz.. read and comment if you like.  I am not as good as alot of FF writers here.. but have been inspired by their creativity.
Here goes......

AR's HEART TO HEART IN LONAVILA (Part 1)

Riddhima sits outside on the bench alone and recollects the boys act yesterday as they walked in as girls.


She laughs-- 'Kya soch rahe the, ke humko aise hi bewakoof karenge?'

But then all she sees is Armaan with the Salwaar Kameez, teasing her with the scarf.. only she knew why he wore that... all those memories of him playing with her scarf and saying how beautiful she looked in Salwaar Kameez comes rushing back.


Thinks aloud- (sigh) 'Kaash voh beete khal vaapas aajaaye'


Someone comes from behind - 'Kaise beete khal?'

Riddhima jumps from the bench as if someone caught her with a secret, but that secret only one knows.. and there he was standing before her.


Riddhima- 'Armaan?.. Um. Tum Yahaan?'


Armaan looks at her and smiles, he knew he caught her thinking about  something.


Riddimaa- 'Um.. bohat raat hochuki.. tum jaag kyun rahe ho abhi?'


Armaan- 'Yeh, main bhi keh sakta hoon tumse.. Aur vaise bhi, kya main yahaan bhi nahin beth sakta?.. '


Riddhima- 'Nahin.. main yeh nahin keh rahi thi..  (Trys to think of a way out..).. Acha.. tum baitho, main Jaathi hoon'


Riddhima gets ready for her escape, she has always been bad at admitting and Armaan knew whenever she did this, she was certianly hiding her feelings.
But this time, he did not want to let her go, Armaan grabs her hand.

Armaan- 'Riddhima baitho.. Abhi'


Riddhima looks at him and in his eyes, she can see why he really came out tonight, he knew she would be here just like last time when they were in Lonavila. The good times they both never forgot and never will.


Riddhima sits down next to him slowly.. the night was just as beautiful as before but this time there was no dance or pink sari, but just both of them and their silence.

This continued as they both sat there for a while.. the wind blows and Armaan looks at Riddhima who with closed eyes was enjoying the breeze. How he wanted to touch her beautiful hair and let her feel loved, the wind sang 'Asmaani' just the way his heart did at that moment.

Riddhima suddenly jolts and looks confusedly at him, Armaan turns his head away quickly. She knew he was staring at her.. she felt it and finally decides to break the longing silence.


Riddhima- 'Armaan?'


Glad that she was saying his name again.. he turns to respond.


Armaan- 'Hmmm?'


Riddhima- 'Bahot achi raat, hena?'

Armaan- 'Haan .. hai.'


Her voice goes lower slightly with worry.

Riddhima- 'Lekin, phir bhi kuch kami hai.. aur mujhe pata bhi nahin kya hai'


He looks at her..


Armaan- 'Mujhe pata hai... Hum dono.'


Riddhima- 'Hum dono?.. Hum yahaan hai'

But then she realises what he meant and looks down.


Riddhima- 'Armaan.. Mujhe abhi bhi sab kuch yaad hai..'


Armaan- 'Kyun?'


He felt the same way but didn't want to admit.. as he still didn't know how she felt.

She looks at him shocked.


Riddhima- 'Kya tumko bhi nahin yaad jab hum yahaan aaye the?'


Armaan- 'Huh.. Yaad hai.. every second yaad hai.. but kyun.. its not like it meant anything.. Right?'


Riddhima annoyed reacts..


Riddhima- Armaan, Voh sabkuch tha.. VOH!!..

Then she stops...

Armaan looks at her intently.. tears start to form her eyes.


Riddhima- Armaan, tumko pata hai.. Jab.. Jab tum gaye mujhe chodkar to main bahot royi.. tumko kabhi nahin bulaati...Phir main aayi Kasauli aur tumko dekha aisi haalat mein.


Armaan interrupts and moves closer to her, tears now forming his eyes.


Armaan- Par tumne kuch nahin kaha mujhe..


Riddhima-- Main.. Main kaise kuch kehsakti?... Main... kehna chahti thi lekin.. lekin jab maine tumko dekha tha ..bahot badal gaya the tum.. main bas.


Armaan- Riddhima.. Main badal gaya lekin sirf tumhareliye.. aur ab.

Armaan's face turns sad at his failings.. Riddhima sees this..

Riddhima- Armaan.. Jab.. Jab tumne mujhe poocha tha Holi ke din ke baad, ke,,, ke mujhe yaad tha ya nahin ke maine tumhe...

....tumhara dil ke baat kahi tumne'- Armaan finishes it.

Riddhima- Haan.. Mujhe, yaad tha.. lekin maine .. (she looks intently at him) maine.. jhoot bola jab maine kahaan ke tumse pyaar nahin karti.

Tears still rolling down her eyes..

...'Main tumse bahot pyaar karti hoon.. aur hamesha karti rahoongi Armaan' 'Lekin, main hamesha tumko kuch dekhna chahti thi.. Voh Armaan..jo hamesha haste rahe'

Armaan, unable to believe what he just heard.. he looks at her and takes her hand and says.

'Riddhima.. tumko nahin pata, tu hi meri khushi hai.. meri gham.. meri sab kuch... agar tum nahin to kya hai 'Armaan'.. huh?

He chuckles slightly.. but moves her closer to him. Theres heads meet lovingly.

Riddhima- (she says quietly resting her head on him) 'Kya hum aise hi aise hi nahin reh sakte.. , yeh taare ke saath?'
She smiles moving her tears aside.. and holds his hands longingly..

Armaan sees this and tightens the grip.. he knew everything was going to be fine, now that they admitted how they felt.

Armaan- 'Haan.. Hum hamesha aise aise hi rahenge, bas, tum aur main' (He kisses her hand)

Riddhima- (She sighs at the feeling of love again) I love you Armaan, hamesha karti rahoongi..

Armaan- I love you too Riddhima

They both sit there quietly with their eyes closed together....
Suddenly Riddhima starts to shiver as the wind changes and becomes colder.. Armaan feels this and opens his eyes.

Armaan- Riddhima, tum teekh ho..?

Riddhima- Haan.. Haan.. mai.. main teekh hoon. (She holds onto his arm as if she doesn't want to let go.)

Armaan smiles knowing she was lieing.. he knew she was shivering and they should go in now..

Armaan- Chalo Riddhima, hum andar jaate hai..

Riddhima opens her eyes..

Riddhima- Andar?.. Nahin main yahaan rehna chaahti hoon tumhaare saath.

Armaan laughs sweetly.. and comes closer to her ear.

Armaan- Hamaara poori zindagi hai yeh karne keh liye.

Riddhima blushes.. and then laughs..

'Acha, You promise? .. (She smiles mischeiviously).. 'Chalo phir'.

They both get up from the bench, Armaan takes his Jacket off and puts it on Ridz, she continues to hold onto his arm as they walk back in.
Armaan and Riddhima never thought that this one night and Lonavila would ever bring them closer again.. but now they couldn't wait till they could see eachother again. And that would be in the morning... after breakfast that is. Ummm.. unless noone is looking!😆😉


Part 2- Contination--


Armaan- 'Good night Riddhima'

They arrive next to the girls room.. Riddhima feels as if they just went on a date and he left her home. She looks at him longingly...
Armaan smiles at her, a song plays in his head of this reality.. he feels like his world has now returned to him in the name of 'Riddhima'.

Song-

Yeh kahaan Mil Gaye hum..
Yeh kahaan Mil Gaye hum..
Aasmaan bhi lo hasdiyaa..
Har nazaara bhi lo khil gayaa..

They continue to stare at eachother feeling complete..

Riddhima- 'Ummm.. Armaan.. Goodnight to you too'

She turns to reluctantly go, Armaan grabs her hands.

Armaan- 'Tum Jahaarahi ho.. meri..

'Jaanaa hi padega' Riddhima says quickly sadly

Armaan smiles- 'I mean, Tum Jaarahi ho meri Jacket ki saath?' (He give her a cheeky smile)

Riddhima realises she still has the Jacket on..-'Oh.. yeh.. Um.. '( She  takes it off and gives it to him).. Yeh lo..'

Armaan comes closer to her air in response-'Kyun, tum iske saath bhi sona chahti thi?' (He smirks)

Riddhima felt a rush in her body as she heard the word 'bhi',.. she looks up at him and gives an innocent smile.

'In your dreams.. Dr Armaan Malik!!  (She laughs and quickly takes her tongue out and runs to the room)

Armaan laughs and says to himself ' Haan, Haan.. Mujhe pata tum meri kwaabhon mein bhi aanaa chahti ho Basket' (He sighs),

He then leaves to go to his room

........


The Birds chirp... Bua and Dr Kirti are awake.. Dr Kirti slept with Bua while the girls Riddhima , Anji and Muskaan slept together.

Bua rushes in to the girls room- 'Nashta tayaar hai!' Utho.. Utho ladkiyon.. bahot kaam hai bacho ke saath bhi.'

Riddhima gets up quickly with ease, whereas Anji moans next to her- 'kya Bua... Mere neend ko karaab kar diya'- She puts the pillow over her head.
Bua- 'Uff, sleeping beauty, tumhari beauty sleep abhi bhi nahin aayi'?

Riddhima laughs as she knows this was the usual scenario since they were little, and bua was always aware of this.

Riddhima- 'Nahin Bua, Vo abhi tak apni beauty sleep chahti hai' (she giggles)

Anjali- 'Shut up Ridz!' She throws the pillow at her which hits snoring Muskaan on the other side.

Muskaan jerks up suddenly with her mouth still open and eyes half closed-

'Rahul, Main tumko chodungi nahin!!'

Bua gets shocked, and Riddhima starts laughing again, this time Anjali joins in as she gets up slowly.

Muskaan opens her eyes realising that Rahul isn't actually here but the girls and that she just made a fool out of herself. She laughs nervously... HEHEHEHheheheheHEHEH..

Bua then laughs and says-- 'Uff, ek Sleeping beauty aur ek Rahul ka daraane wali.. ' Bas Riddhima beta, tu bas teekh ho  na? Koi chakkar nahin hai tumko?
 Riddhima still laughing says - 'Koi chakkar nahin hai.. lekin bhook hai bada bua..'.. Chale?'

She smiles and they all get up to freshen and have breakfast.

Riddhima helps Bua with the chai in the kitchen.

Riddhima-Ummm, Ladke kahaan hai Bua?

Bua- Oh vo pagle uthe hai.. Dr Shubankar ke saath bahar hai. Mujhe nahin pata mein kya kahongi jab Dr shashank ko pata chal jaayega ke ladke yahaan.

Riddhima smiles and hugs her..

'Koi fikar na kar Bua, Main samaalongi Papa ko, kuch nahin hoga, Dekho.. chai bana hi diya..!'

They both go outside where the boys and now the girls were eating and talking.
Armaan instantly looked at Ridz as she came ignoring the conversation he was having with Atul. Riddhima notices as she brings the tea-- she shakes alittle-- Armaan smiles.


Part 3 contination


...Armaan smiles as Ridz approaches.. She puts  the tray down, her scarf comes down on one of the mugs.. she quickly tries to get it off but ends up putting her hand in the mug.

'Ouch!!'

Armaan quickly jumps up in worry and gets her finger.

'Kya hua, Riddhima, tum  teekh ho na?'

Riddhima looks around nervously, while Armaan oblivious still inspecting her hand doesn't realise that everyone is looking at them

Anjali looks confusedly, Atul gives a cheesy smile then stops when he figures out somethings up, Rahul smirks, he knew this was going to happen sooner or later. Muskaan also looks shocked, Rahul looks at her concerned. Dr Shubankar looks just as confused as everyone else.
Bua looks at them lovingly.. she saves the day.

'Aao beta Riddhima, main kuch lagaati hoon tumhare haath ko'

Armaan still unaware..

'Nahin Bua, main kuch lagata hoon'

Riddhima giggles alittle at that response but then.she tries to communicate with him with her eyes to not say anything more.

Anjali gets up still confused-

'Armaan, tumko kyun itna fikar hai?..Kya tum uska boyfriend hai kya?'

Anjie starts laughing as if its a joke, and then they all laugh with Armaan and Riddhima just looking at eachother.
Suddenly Armaan laughs nerviously 'Ha.. Haa.. Joke.. Ha.. ha'  he quickly pulls Riddhima inside.
Bua goes in after them

Anjali wonders what just happened and stops laughing..

'Yeh kya ho raha hai.. Kya, Armaan aur Riddhima?'

Atul is still laughing.. he gets up... 'Armaan, bahot acha joke tha Anjie.. tum comedian bhi ho..'
Anjie rolls her eyes ' Shut up Atul!'

Dr Shubankar still oblivious looks around-- 'Dr Keerti Kahaan hai?'


Rahul to Dr Shubankar- ' Sir, Dr Keerti abhi hi gayi , remember, vaapis Sanjeevani?..Dr Shashank ne usko bulaaya'

Dr Shubankar embarrassed says- ' To.. To main kyun yahaan phir.. sirf tum ladke ki vaje se.. main abhi Dr Shashank ko pata ta hoon ke mujhe bhi jaanaa vaapis'

Atul quickly pops up- 'Nahin sir, agar tumne yeh kiya to Dr Shashank humko bhi chuti de jaayenge.. yeh poochkar tum kyun vaapis jaana aur ladkiyon kho yaahan akele chodkar!'

Dr Shashank- 'I don't care, Main abhi Dr Shahshank ko fone kar raha hoon'

He takes his mobile out and Atul tries to snatch it off him.. "Nahin sir!!!" he runs after him around the grass -- Dr Shashank runs around with his fone and continues saying "Atul, Mein senior Doctor hoon!!!". Anjali shakes  her head. 'OMG.. come on guys, Atul???'

Muskaan starts laughing excitedly- heheheeEHEH

Rahul then rolls his eyes and mumbles- 'Lagta maine pagal logo ke saath yahaan aaya hoon'

Muskaan hears and says- 'Oye! Kisko pagal keraha hai tu??? ' She hits his arm.
'Rahul looks at her annoyed'-- 'Haan tu pagal hai.. acha khush??? Bas tu hi pagal ho sakti meri maa'

Muskaan-'Nahin tu Bandar , Vaise Armaan aur Riddhima ke saath kuch kyun honewala .. haan?'

Rahul then gives her a serious look, he knows after when she confessed to him she loved Armaan, it wasn't going to be easy for her to get over him.

'Sun Muskaan, tu kuch nahin samajti.. kuch na kaho'

Muskaan looks at Rahul confused and surprisingly doesn't respond.. she wonders why he said that seriously.


...........

Meanwhile--

Armaan drags Riddhima in, Riddhima stops quickly.

'Armaan, main teekh hoon, dekh meri haath itna nahin jala.. Jo bahar sab kuch huwa, lagta hai ab sab shak karenge'

Armaan puts his hand on her lips-

'Shak karne de, I don't care, vaise sabko to pata hi chalne hai wala hai' Hmm?

He comes closer to kiss her cheek, Riddhima blushes and laughs.. 'Armaan, tum na?'

Armaan- (Teasingly) Main na?' He continues while kissing her neck and cheek..Riddhima laughs and closes her eyes, taking in the feeling.

*Cough Cough*

Armaan and Riddhima jump, behind them was Bua watching everything with a grin on a her face.

Bua- 'Haan, to yeh ho raha tha?? Hmmmmmm? '

Riddhima- 'Bua, hum bas..'

Bua- (she laughs) Nahin Riddhima, tu hun kuch nahin kehsakti, mujhe hamesha pata tha ke tum dono bahot kareeb ho.. Main bahot kush hoon tum dono ko dekhkar.'
Armaan and Riddhima look  at eachother and smile.. Bua touches there heads  like a blessing.

Bua-' Hmmm, to khab shaadi hone wali hai'

Riddima blushes and Armaan looks at her, he so wished it was now.

Riddima- 'Nahin Bua, kisiko ko pata nahin, Papa aur mama ko bhi nahin, to kaise shaadi kar sakte hain abhi?'

Bua- Tum sabko yahaan kyun nahin pata te?

Both Armaan and Riddhima respond together..

'YAHAAN?!"

Bua laughs- 'Haan. Main sabko bulaati hoon.. Dr Shashank aur teri maa bhi'


Armaan and Riddhima look at eachother in shock- "Nahin!!''



Part 4- Continuation

Armaan and Riddhima look at eachother in shock- "Nahin!!''

Bua- 'Kyun nahin?'

Armaan takes over and puts his arms around Bua..

'Bua, agar shashank yahaan aaye aur yeh pata chala main yahaan hoon to main uska sasurji kabhi nahin hoga aur doctor bhi nahin.. main bas barbaad hi to rahoonga!'

Armaan gives a dramatic crying look, Riddhima rolls her eyes at his antics. Bua smiles and pulls his cheek.

'Lagta hai tu bacha hi rahega.. na?'

Riddhima laughs..Armaan looks at her and then says.

'Haan KOI ne mujhe kaha tha ke main bilkul sweet bacha jaisa hoon'

He gives a huge grin to Riddhima.

'Hain na Riddhima?'

Riddhima- 'Armaan, tu pagal hai,  (she gives him a fake annoyed look).. acha Bua.. (she also puts her arms around her next to Armaan and holds onto his arm, Armaan smiles).. Papa ko yahaan nahin bulaana.. main ghar jaake usko sabkuch bataaongi, acha?

Bua- Acha beta.. (Gives them both suspicious looks).. Ab.. tum dono mujko chodoge ya nahin?

Armaan and Riddhima look confused, but then they realise their arms are still around her tight .. they were too busy holding onto eachother. They quickly move.
Bua laughs.. 'Acha.. mujhe bachon ko dekhna.. chalti hoon'

As she goes Armaan grabs onto Riddhima's arm again.
'Basket, tu kahaan jaarahi hai?'


..........

Meanwhile Atul and Dr Shubankar were still fighting over the fone. Anjali was looking at them annoyed, especially at Atul.. and Rahul, well he didn't care and just sat there. Muskaan was too busy laughing at them everytime they fell on the grass. She decides to join in when she sees the fone on the floor.

Muskaan grabs the phone..

'HehehehHEHEHEHEH'

'Oye, mobile to yahaan hai , aur tum dono waha wrestling kare hain?'..

Atul and Dr Shubankar stop at there tracks... Atul was grabbing onto Dr S's tie and Dr S  was holding Atuls leg. Realising what awkward position they were in, they quickly part.

Muskaan holds the fone in her hand and puts it to her ear..
*Gasp*.. "Lagta hai, kuch bajraha hai!"

Atul- "Kya?"

Both Dr Shubankar and Atul head towards Muskaan trying to push eachother away.
Muskaan gasps again and gets scared and this time Rahul is laughing.
The fone flys in the air... they all look up to see where it'll go even Anjie...

Dr Shubanankar- 'Mera Mooooobile!!'

The fone comes down as if in slow motion.. Dr Shubankar tries to run to get.. but.. but..

Eventually someone grabs it!!.. But who?
Armaan grabs the flying fone while coming out with Riddhima and looks confused.


Atul- 'ARMAAN!!.. fone ko band kar abhi!!! '

Armaan still confused..

'kyun??'

Dr Shubankar pushes Atul and walks calmly to Armaan doing his tie.

'Armaan, mobile mujhe de, yeh mera hai'

Atul quickly pushes Dr Shubankar on the floor as Armaan was going to give it.

'Nahin, Armaan, Dr Shubankar to Dr Shashank ko fone kar raha tha!!'

Armaan looks at Riddhima slowly and then the fone in his hand. He sees that it says Dr Shashanks name..
Armaan's eyes widen and he stands there frozen with the fone at distance.
Riddhima looks worried at him.

'Armaan, kya hua?.. (she analyses his face then looks at the fone.. she takes it from him and puts it to her ear)

Dr Shashank- "Hello?? Hello??.. Dr Shubankar tum ho, Mujhe Armaan aur Atul ka awaaz kyun aa raha hai?.. Hello ..?? Hello??

Riddhima quickly switches the mobile off in panic.😲


Part 5 Continuation


Riddhima quickly switches the fone off in panic.. and everyone stands there in silence.

Riddimma- 'Ab.. Ab.. kya karenge??'

She looks at Armaan and everyone as if to get an answer, but Armaan is still looking in the distance with his hand out and thinks to himself ('Armaan, tu gaya chuti pe.')
Atul starts to dramatically cry, he turns around to Anjali and tries to put his head on her shoulder. Anjali pushes him away.

Muskaan holds onto his shoulder- 'Arre, Atul, tu fikar na kar, Dr Shashank kuch nahin karenge, usko to kuch garbar hi suna lekhen iska matlab nahin ke vo yahaan aayega na?'

Anjli interferes and looks at riddhima- 'Come on Ridz, tu kyun udaas ho rahi hai, Muskaan teekh keh rahi hai, Dad won't come here''

Riddhima- 'Nahin Di, tujhko pata nahin papa kaisa hai, vo zaroor aayega'

She looks at Armaan again and shakes him.. 'Armaan?..''.. she shakes him again..
Armaan quickly flinches.. "Maine Kuch nahin kiya Sasurji!!".. 

Riddhima laughs...

Atul- Sasurji??.. Yeh to mujhe hi kehna chahiye (He gives a cheesy grin to Anjie), tu kyun keh raha hai?'

Anjie gives Atul a 'In your dreams look'.

Rahul finally gets up from his chair after watching the whole drama..

'Armaan, hum yahaan se jaate hai..phir Dr Shashank shak nahin karenge.. right?'

Atul- Yeh great idea hai Rahul!

Dr Shubankar- 'Tum log ab jaaoge?.. to yahaan kyun aaye, masti karne.. ? Look mein senior doctor hoon, Main samaalonga'

Atul- "Haan, Haan., 'senior doctor', lekin teri vaja se Dr Shashank hum sab ko suna fone par... tu Dr Keerti ko kabhi nahin bulaata?

Dr shashank gives Atul a serious look while doing his tie.. Atul gets nervous as he didn't want him to grab his legs again.

Atul- 'Main.. Main.. (Hides behind Rahul).. Main Junior doctor hoon.'

Rahul rolls his eyes and quietly says to Atul - 'Vaise tu khab Anji ko bulaata, huh?'

Armaan gets thinking, should he go or stay.  He looks at Riddhima, who looks upset at him. She certianly didn't want him to go. They only just confessed their new found love and now he was gonna go? But at the same time she did not want him to get in more trouble with her dad.  As if he could read her thoughts he gives her a 'Don't worry look'.
But now a decision needed to be made.... He thinks hard..
Armaan quickly grabs Riddhima's hand when noones looking and takes her in.


He takes her into the boys room and shuts the door. Riddima sits on the bed.

Riddhima- 'Kya hua Armaan, mujhe yahaan kyun leke aaye?'

Armaan sits next to her and takes her hand.

Armaan- 'Riddhima, main kya karoon, kya main yahaan rahoon ya Jaaon, ise pehle tumhara papa nahin aajaate?'

Armaan looks at her eyes to find the answer, her eyes were sad.. Riddhima knew she didn't want him to really go... but for his own good. She lowers her eyes and says-

'Armaan, tum... tum Jao Rahul aur Atul ke saath.. main teekh hoon.. agar papa ne aap ko dekha to bahot garbar ho jaayegi.. aur main yeh nahin chahti'

Armaan smiles lovingly at her and puts her face up to meet her eye..

Armaan- 'I love you Riddhima, aur main kuch bhi karoonga tumko haasil karne keh liye.. Tumhara papa ko bhi kush rakoonga.. (He laughs)

Riddhima laughs as well.. He kisses her kneck.. she closes her eyes embracing the moment.
Suddenly her fone rings in her purse.  She rummages through and sees her Dad's name. She looks at Armaan.

Armaan- 'Don't worry, answer it'

Riddhima hesitantly answers..

Riddhima- 'Um,.. Hello Papa?'

Dr Shashank- 'Riddhima tum kahaan ho?.. Main yahaan hoon baar'

Riddhima's face freezes... Armaan looks at her concerned..

'Tum Dr Armaan ke saath ho na?..Tum dono abhi aao yahaan.. Immediately!'

Riddhima trys to speak..-- 'Par papa tum kaise jaldi yahaan?.. Hum bas..'
(The fones dies..)

Riddhima then looks at Armaan worried of whats going to happen.. Sensing that fate already wrote this situation Armaan grabs her hand and they both get up to deal with whats to come. Will this be it?



Edited by Mariam1986 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!! 😛 awesome yaar!!!!! 👏
kash aisa bhi hota!!! 😆 😆 i just loved the way they told their feelings to each-other. 😳 😳 every scene was just placed sooo perfectly mein kya kahoon!!! 😳
it took me to another one of my dream-lands!!! just amazing!!
keep it up and contiune soon!!! 😉
Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Job!! Really well written=) 👏
Posted: 15 years ago
👏 continue ya pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Posted: 15 years ago
gud job my frd continue soon 👏
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by mannyz_1


OMG!!!!!!!!!! 😛 awesome yaar!!!!! 👏
kash aisa bhi hota!!! 😆 😆 i just loved the way they told their feelings to each-other. 😳 😳 every scene was just placed sooo perfectly mein kya kahoon!!! 😳
it took me to another one of my dream-lands!!! just amazing!!
keep it up and contiune soon!!! 😉


Thanks sooo much! I feel encouraged as its my first try and I really wanted to write how I saw it. Means alot!.. Will surely continue soon!😉
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by dramaholic


Awesome Job!! Really well written=) 👏


Thanks sooo much! And thanks for reading! 😉😉
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by nirali_shah91


👏 continue ya pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


I deffo will now.. thanks!😉
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by rihanaa


gud job my frd continue soon 👏


Thanks soo much.. appreciate it!😉
Posted: 15 years ago
awww its soooo cuuuteee 😳 😳 😳 love it! great work!! 👏 👏 👏

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