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coolkitty_23 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 11:16am | IP Logged
I wrote this short poem...hope you guys like it...
Its from Prem to Heer..

Dekha jo tumhari ankhon mein
ek nagma zindagi mein pyaar ka
kuch pal ke liye hi sahi
hamari ankhoin mein khili ek assha

Naam benam hi sahi,
pahchaan anjaan bhi nahi
rishta gumnaam hi sahi
par janamoin ka badhan thi kabhi

Aaj ankhon mein, har pal
ek tum hi sirf basti ho,
sansoin mein har pal
lafsoin mein sirf tum bahti ho

Julf udte huye,payal chanakte huye
Heer, tum aogi jab,
Hum to loot jayenge,
Hamein apnaogi jab...

~~ Naina

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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 11:30am | IP Logged
That's beautiful,Naina!!Very-well wirtten;and no doubt,it's just written for PH and their love!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Thanks for sharing,dear!!!Embarrassed
Parth Garewal IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
its too gud yaar keep it up.. Clap Clap
dollyandpinky Senior Member
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
wah wah that is superb yaar keep it up I wish Prem says this to heer.. Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming
Omlet Senior Member
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Clap loved it. Clap Clap
Mages IF-Addictz
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
beautifully written....
coolkitty_23 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
^^ Thank you so much guys! Smile Smile Smile
ziana Senior Member
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
its really nice Tongue

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