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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 99)

er.Sheetal Senior Member

Joined: 15 February 2008
Posts: 683

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 7:48am | IP Logged

Now i read part 11...

I shud say dat it was d BEST PUT song sequence i hv ever read... Wonderful game & u of course used my favorite RJ "ULTA PULTA NITIN"... he is too gud...

D song selection was amazing & of course undoubtfully not only best fit for d situation, but also few of my favorite collections...

I simply hv started adoring Uncle Chris now... LOL he is such a sweet heart... he is d best... Wow... loved d father-son's telephonic conversation... d best was Chris telling Armaan
"well um sorry about spoiling a moment...... but there's a correction...... there will be no more girls in your life after her is my guess...... so your threat doesnt hold good...... but u know what il grant u freedom from calls only if u promise to return with success......"

Armaan of course is too smart wid his MOVES... Star
& d dare Muskaan gave Ridz, well i wud hv been more dan happy for it & easily won it, if i was in Ridz's place... Big smile

Ridz's dare was definitely been TOO-TOO-TOO gud... "KIDDO TRICYCLE wid DHOOM" WOW wat a combination... LOL ... i laughed like maniacs when i imagined it... ROFL ... I m sorry i m still laughing... OMG... dhoom & tricycle... & to tell d truth reading it i almost fell off my chair & my brother was glaring at me as if i just lost it... ROFL

d "fortune teller chocolates" was a wonderful dressing on ur FRESH COOK...

OVERALL. dis Part 11 was by far d BEST & d MOST fun filled episode of ur FF... Clap
i will b desperately waiting to read d next wonder...

- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 01 June 2008 at 7:50am

kdrs Goldie

Joined: 25 October 2007
Posts: 2255

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 8:01am | IP Logged
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! Clap
I can only say this!!! Left me speechless!!! Plz continue soon!!!!!!!
ArmiandRidz4eva Goldie

Joined: 09 December 2007
Posts: 1369

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 10:30am | IP Logged

i only jus commented on the last two parts and came back on and you had the next part up,
Part 11 was by far the most funfilled part, i absolutely loved it, it was a much needed part since i had to get my work done, which i have finished!! Big smile Clap finally. i was in stitches reading the part about Muskaan's dare, it was hilarious, i think my family members have officially declared me insane! Wink LOL LOL (obviously to them i am supposed to be doing my work!, so laughing at the computer screen might not look sane!!) LOL cannot wait for the next update!!

"WHEN TWO HEARTS RACE, THEY BOTH WIN!!!" this was so sweet! Embarrassed

update soon Wink

Love Sania Embarrassed

P.S congrats on the 100th page of your ff!!

Edited by ArmiandRidz4eva - 01 June 2008 at 10:32am
hibos1 Senior Member

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Posts: 912

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Another amazing part,....

I had more than a couple of scenes I fell head over heels in love with,...,when he asked her to narrate the translations I had butterflies in my stomach,...after a long time reading something felt so real.

chris said when he finally finshed "well um sorry about spoiling a moment....but there's a correction....there will be no more girls in your life after her is my guess...

how easily Sr.Benz conveyed what he though abt ritz,..absolute wonder.

and AR reply was out of the world : "taj
was n will remain the benz confession spot!!!!!"

oh....loved it. And ofcourse Aryan is a sweetheart! alright no intention of making this longer than your FF. Waiting eagerly for the next one,..
love -Ria
addicted2ksg IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 April 2008
Posts: 2564

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
congo on 100 pages in this ff NJ!!! plz continue soon! dying to read another part from u!!
rockeraryan Senior Member

Joined: 17 December 2007
Posts: 583

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:14pm | IP Logged

fr pg 100

pls cont asap

Edited by rockeraryan - 01 June 2008 at 2:14pm
spln IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 December 2007
Posts: 10942

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
part 12 people....not extra long...just usual length...but il do another update today itself so....enjoy reading!!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 December 2007
Posts: 10942

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rihanaa

urghhhhhhhhhh i hv 2 sleep but cant since m w8in 4 ur parttttttt Ouch

oh shoot....sorry dear i only just read this...but updated...n will do another today...but plz dont for go ur sleep for the ff there are times i get stuck n then i dont wnaa update something i dont like so....delays hapen...hope u understand

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