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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 99)

zara. Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 5:18am | IP Logged
hey NJ luved da update!!
thanx for da pm n do continue soon..

pal234 Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spln

Originally posted by pal_279

it ws such a wonderfully cute part........ Embarrassed

jus luvd last armaan's confession, or realization...or whatever it was.......

nd ridzi letting her thoughts free....nt able 2 control dem nemore....LOL.....

nd u kno i'm fellin in luv with dis guy aryaan....i at first thot mayb he has sum feelings for her bt m glad he doesnt......dey jus have a pure true n amazin friendship.....

bt i wonder y dint Chris commented on armi's taj mahal in he might b knowin y armi wants 2 go der n besides he might also be knowin ridzi is wud hav been gr8 2 see him tease him LOL

n last bt nt d least d way u write.....i think i hav already told u dat many tyms.... LOL bt repeatin it if ever in lyf u wnt an alternative try writin novels....u write a bit lyk daniel steel...he's a wonderful writer hu writes stories lyk in romantic wid sum strong background.....

sorry to make d reply a lil too jus cldnt help praise u....

thnx a ton for d pm.... Big smile n pls do cont soon....waitin for ur fast weekend doses Clap

thanx dear!!!thank u so much....n daniel steel is big into this stuff now that really is a huge huge compliment n um not sure if i deserve it...but thanx anywaz!!!will try to update asap...earlier than usual!!!

well u surely deserve it..let me see...can i call u little dany....LOLit suits u....
pal234 Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 5:50am | IP Logged
jus completed readin the 11th part....n it ws awesome as usualClap

jus luvd readin abt ridzi n muski's frndship n der game.....wat a game LOL n armi n rahul frownin over singers LOL ....n wat perfect songs...... dnt worry ammy she sure wil sing dose lines 2 u Wink jus wait....n d dare LOL LOL LOL ridzi n muski r total cracks LOL bt lovely cracks......riding tricycle in pizza hut n singin dhoom track ROFL .....i jus cldnt stop laughin.....n ridzi clumsily eatin dose pani puris...armi finds her cute even dat way....dis is cald tru love Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed nd lastly d fortune tellin chocolates.....dey got d same fortune LOL no mr. newton is nt gonna mind it n nor ridzi....jus luvd it...

nd hw cn i forget d dad-son does dat mean ammy has told chris abt his feelings?? wow...amazing yaar....

waiting eagerly for d benz confession spot....nd thanx a lot for d pm...Big smile

BTW r u frm delhi???u seem 2 kno quite a lot abt it...

Edited by pal_279 - 01 June 2008 at 6:49am
lightening Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 6:29am | IP Logged
heya...m back
n i luved all the parts dat i had missed....yhe last fortune was
like......WOW!!!!!!!!! simply rocking!! way to go...
er.Sheetal Senior Member

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Posts: 683

Posted: 01 June 2008 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Well once again i m commenting late for Part 10...

D episode was nicely written as always... d best was Armaan's realization about his feelings towards Riddhima...

But i was euqally pleased to find dat Aryan is such a sweetheart... he is definitely a BEST Friend... Hope he share d same relationship wid Armaan too ASAP, coz he is d only person who can actually help Armaan get HIS girl...

Well i m gonna read part 11 right away & once i read it i will comment...

- Sheetal
***Krinz_dmg*** Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 7:30am | IP Logged
i jst started reading yr FF
n all the parts which i red i hav 2 say wer jst AMAZING!!!!!! Clap Clap Clap
I jst luv yr riting style
its very professional!!!
Clap Clap Clap
From now on U R MY FAV RITER!!!
i luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!
will coment on all the other parts when i finish reading them!
oh and y iz yr ff moved here it took me ages 2 find it u no!
er.Sheetal Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 7:48am | IP Logged

Now i read part 11...

I shud say dat it was d BEST PUT song sequence i hv ever read... Wonderful game & u of course used my favorite RJ "ULTA PULTA NITIN"... he is too gud...

D song selection was amazing & of course undoubtfully not only best fit for d situation, but also few of my favorite collections...

I simply hv started adoring Uncle Chris now... LOL he is such a sweet heart... he is d best... Wow... loved d father-son's telephonic conversation... d best was Chris telling Armaan
"well um sorry about spoiling a moment...... but there's a correction...... there will be no more girls in your life after her is my guess...... so your threat doesnt hold good...... but u know what il grant u freedom from calls only if u promise to return with success......"

Armaan of course is too smart wid his MOVES... Star
& d dare Muskaan gave Ridz, well i wud hv been more dan happy for it & easily won it, if i was in Ridz's place... Big smile

Ridz's dare was definitely been TOO-TOO-TOO gud... "KIDDO TRICYCLE wid DHOOM" WOW wat a combination... LOL ... i laughed like maniacs when i imagined it... ROFL ... I m sorry i m still laughing... OMG... dhoom & tricycle... & to tell d truth reading it i almost fell off my chair & my brother was glaring at me as if i just lost it... ROFL

d "fortune teller chocolates" was a wonderful dressing on ur FRESH COOK...

OVERALL. dis Part 11 was by far d BEST & d MOST fun filled episode of ur FF... Clap
i will b desperately waiting to read d next wonder...

- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 01 June 2008 at 7:50am
kdrs Goldie

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 8:01am | IP Logged
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! Clap
I can only say this!!! Left me speechless!!! Plz continue soon!!!!!!!

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