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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 74)

er.Sheetal Senior Member

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 4:53am | IP Logged

Hey im a bit confused wid Part ...
In part 7, we saw dat "ARYAN" is Ridz's childhood friend & Muskaan's brother... Also Armaan was kind of jealous of him (of course unknowingly)... & now how come all of a sudden, both of dem r gelling so well Confused Confused Confused

& then Minnie was supposed to be accompanying Armaan to Ridz's house, then where did Muskaan come... i mean u mentioned her name climbing d stairs of Anji's house when dey were going to meet her... den again u used Minnie's name... i think dis cud b a typing error...

BUT ARYAN ???????????? really confused i m Confused

Anyways, d whole episode was quite interesting, specially d way Armaan is mingling wid everyone... Aryan (i m still confused who exactly he is Confused - please expalin d relations between all d character in detail if u can Confused Confused ), yes d conversation between Aryan & Armaan was quite touching...

D best was d last scene, when AR finally saw each other... an absolutely wonderfully explained encounter... LOVED IT A LOADDDDDSSSSSSSS... Clap

I will be impatiently waiting for d next part when AR finally had another yet interesting encounter... Smile

- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 29 May 2008 at 4:55am

nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 5:14am | IP Logged
nice one
chaiti! Senior Member

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 5:17am | IP Logged
hey love d update ... plz cont soon!!!! Clap
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia..

Ahh NJ, u dunno how i look forward to ur pm the first thing once i get up in the morning. Well u update wen its usually way past midnite for me so..... LOL LOL LOL

Nyways before i start with my bak-bak, i hav to say that someone has changed her avatar??? LOL LOL LOL Well nice one i must say, noticed it the first thing as it had ahem-ahem Mr Mallik. LOL

Nyways coming to the part finally. again an excellent one?? Seriously hunny dont u get tired giving such outstanding part one after another????? It was so beautifully written yet again. Actually i had expected it to be nothing short of outstanding and u hav managed to exceeded my expectations yet again.
My fav scene obviously has to be wen Armaan was lost in his thoughts and not to mention getting embarressed with a bunch of girls around him. But talking abt Armaan well his scenes with minnee were simply adorable. i specially loved these lines......

<span>"till they come to know we're cousins, i dont mind everyone thinking i hooked up with the hottest hunk in town!!!"
</span><br><span>"see what i meant" to which armaan said "yeh i know, isnt the first time girls are fluttering in my presence gorgeous...they always do!!!" minnie looked at him with a look of hurt pride and said "well dont be so sure, they would not have noticed u so had i not been accompanying u....minnie has that effect on people too!!!" to which he merely chuckled and said "no offense intended sure u do!!!!!!
I dunno know y but i just sort of loved these lines so much . The humour is so natural and just adds an overall brilliant charm to ur already spellbound ff.
Coming to ridz as i shudnt be so very biased.....
well well well i really want to know the name of the cologne, am sure once u reveal it even i will feel its fragrance everywer.LOLOk jokes apart i simply loved her chain of thoughts......they were so marvelously described....
Clap<span>yes she decided with a strengthening resolve, i have to get out of this fantasy infatuation for something which will never be.... there was nothing plausible in a single sided attraction...a small voice quipped up in her head...there can never be a single sided attraction its a mutual force...he must feel it too....nah... he doesnt or he would be attracted to 90% of the stanford girls...<span>.all that balancing out of forces is limited to the physics in the labs she thought sighing, and closing her eyes,</span> tired from the day, its events n her endless puzzling non acceptable thoughts n emotions....
Ahh i dunno y yet again but simply these lines were my fav. Specially the comparison with physics and <span>"all that balancing out of forces is limited to the physics in the labs"</span> Just loving ur way with words.
Now before this comment gets longer than ur part which i fear as usual i'll stop.
Ever looking forward to more magicEmbarrassed and on a lighter note ur next change of avatar too.

we do think alike atleast somewhere down the line.....those were my fav parts wile writing as well which part of the world are u in????hang on india i guess....if it was past midnight for u when i updated...

o n the avtar...lolzzzz yeh i finaly found the armi avtaar i liked to put up n my profile....n u r likely to witness changes all the time i cant stay put to one thing too long!!!!!thanx for the awsome comments....i too get to read ur comments when i wake up in the morning coz i sleep before u wake up!!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by svijaya77

Hi :)

Just barely caught up with your ff and it is awesome!! Pls update soon and could you pm me when you do?

Thanks a ton

thnx viji...i will do that sure!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10942

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prernawaghray

hey NJ Smile
thanks for the pm sweety Wink
lovely part infact lovely long part Wink LOL
yo finally they met Embarrassed but again a cliff hanger Angry Angry Angry
y do u do this yaar Angry Angry
n this part was awesome yaar
so our sweet minnie is there wow
but minnie hooked up with armi LOL LOL LOL
n now im so happy that armi's father n aryan can relax peacefully coz both r falling for each other LOL
previous ff u used to update fast but now why arent u doing its pretty late yaar
update fast

thanx hun....n cliffhangers are the ways with ff's sorry cant help it lolzzzz but they make the reading fun i hope....will update soon
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by d101

ur amazing...i know iv mentioned dat b4 but it bears repeating.
i love d way u write...their chemistry so evident
i keep waiting for ur updates...first thing i check.
cant wait for them 2 meet again n again at d wedn.. Wink
loved d update..

lolzzzz thanx hun...when r u updating????
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bollywood_chic

heyyy yaar
amazing part...
i copied n pasted into word so i could read it at school and while reading it in english i was lost in my own world then came to the end was sad coz it was the end... i kno sad huh?? hehe
it was very long but short in a way too...
hehe i loved it dunno wat to say......
thhanks sooo much for the pm
plzzzz connntt soooon


thanx hun...will update soon!!!

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