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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 73)

er.Sheetal Senior Member

Joined: 15 February 2008
Posts: 683

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Well i just finished reading Part 7...

first of all i m really happy r back again & i hope u did enjoyed ur holiday...

Now, d best thing about Part 7 was d BOND between FATHER & SON... d part was very dearly... I liked d fact dat Armaan's father is a very warming person...

Also d relationship between Ridz & Aryan is also very impressive... I m sure Ridz & Armaan will will b able to realize their feelings & finally HIS father & HER best friend will get peace of their mind... LOL

Will comment on Part 8 once read it...

- Sheetal

jia.. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 26 December 2007
Posts: 6324

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Ahh NJ, u dunno how i look forward to ur pm the first thing once i get up in the morning. Well u update wen its usually way past midnite for me so..... LOL LOL LOL

Nyways before i start with my bak-bak, i hav to say that someone has changed her avatar??? LOL LOL LOL Well nice one i must say, noticed it the first thing as it had ahem-ahem Mr Mallik. LOL

Nyways coming to the part finally. again an excellent one?? Seriously hunny dont u get tired giving such outstanding part one after another????? It was so beautifully written yet again. Actually i had expected it to be nothing short of outstanding and u hav managed to exceeded my expectations yet again. Clap

My fav scene obviously has to be wen Armaan was lost in his thoughts and not to mention getting embarressed with a bunch of girls around him. But talking abt Armaan well his scenes with minnee were simply adorable. i specially loved these lines......

"till they come to know we're cousins, i dont mind everyone thinking i hooked up with the hottest hunk in town!!!"
"see what i meant" to which armaan said "yeh i know, isnt the first time girls are fluttering in my presence gorgeous...they always do!!!" minnie looked at him with a look of hurt pride and said "well dont be so sure, they would not have noticed u so had i not been accompanying u....minnie has that effect on people too!!!" to which he merely chuckled and said "no offense intended sure u do!!!!!!

I dunno know y but i just sort of loved these lines so much . The humour is so natural and just adds an overall brilliant charm to ur already spellbound ff. Clap

Coming to ridz as i shudnt be so very biased..... LOLLOLLOL

well well well i really want to know the name of the cologne, am sure once u reveal it even i will feel its fragrance everywer.LOL

Ok jokes apart i simply loved her chain of thoughts......they were so marvelously described.... Clap

yes she decided with a strengthening resolve, i have to get out of this fantasy infatuation for something which will never be.... there was nothing plausible in a single sided attraction...a small voice quipped up in her head...there can never be a single sided attraction its a mutual force...he must feel it too....nah... he doesnt or he would be attracted to 90% of the stanford girls....all that balancing out of forces is limited to the physics in the labs she thought sighing, and closing her eyes, tired from the day, its events n her endless puzzling non acceptable thoughts n emotions....

Ahh i dunno y yet again but simply these lines were my fav. Specially the comparison with physics and "all that balancing out of forces is limited to the physics in the labs" Just loving ur way with words. Clap

Now before this comment gets longer than ur part which i fear as usual i'll stop. LOL

Ever looking forward to more magicEmbarrassed
 and on a lighter note ur next change of avatar too. Wink


Edited by jia.. - 29 May 2008 at 1:39am
svijaya77 Goldie

Joined: 12 July 2007
Posts: 1453

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Hi :)

Just barely caught up with your ff and it is awesome!! Pls update soon and could you pm me when you do?

Thanks a ton
prernawaghray IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 March 2007
Posts: 3942

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 2:02am | IP Logged
hey NJ Smile
thanks for the pm sweety Wink
lovely part infact lovely long part Wink LOL
yo finally they met Embarrassed but again a cliff hanger Angry Angry Angry
y do u do this yaar Angry Angry
n this part was awesome yaar
so our sweet minnie is there wow
but minnie hooked up with armi LOL LOL LOL
n now im so happy that armi's father n aryan can relax peacefully coz both r falling for each other LOL
previous ff u used to update fast but now why arent u doing its pretty late yaar
update fast
d101 Goldie

Joined: 10 January 2008
Posts: 1321

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 2:04am | IP Logged
ur amazing...i know iv mentioned dat b4 but it bears repeating.
i love d way u write...their chemistry so evident
i keep waiting for ur updates...first thing i check.
cant wait for them 2 meet again n again at d wedn.. Wink
loved d update..
Bollywood_chic IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 July 2007
Posts: 7782

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 2:22am | IP Logged
heyyy yaar
amazing part...
i copied n pasted into word so i could read it at school and while reading it in english i was lost in my own world then came to the end was sad coz it was the end... i kno sad huh?? hehe
it was very long but short in a way too...
hehe i loved it dunno wat to say......
thhanks sooo much for the pm
plzzzz connntt soooon

pal234 Senior Member

Joined: 27 February 2008
Posts: 768

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Clap amazing part...

jus luvd der confusion n der chemistry........atlast dey met....yipeeeee......gosh ridzi ws hopin 2 nt meet him 4 next 3 weeks atleast nd here he is..... LOL

it ws amazin 2 see d bond b/w armi n his developed so quickly n naturally........atul is so sweet n cute......n mini...she is surely beauty with brains.......d wedding will b a gr8 fun with 2 teams LOL

do cont. soon.....n pls pm me wen u update...
Big smile
komalsirwani IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 October 2005
Posts: 11334

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 4:07am | IP Logged
ure great yaar...omg...what do i do with u...i dont understand...hw do this..can u plz explain...??...i mean every emotion so peerfcelt explained...i could imagine every second of the part i reda....hw can u do this NJ...ure a superstar...thansk a to for this wonderful part...omggg they fnnally met hehehehehe loved it...i vene loved the Atul armaan convo was too cool Clap great going Clap

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