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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 64)

-Cherry- IF-Addictz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 4:15am | IP Logged
hey sweety amazin part

jia.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Ahh NJ Really glad to see ur back, i mean i jumped on see ur pm so u can imagine my excitement......LOL

Well cuming to the part...Wat can i say??? i loved the entire convo between the father and son. Trust me i hav no words to describe how fab it was. The whole flow, just so charming, so beautiful and so very marvelous. loved each and every line.i am stressing more on it bcoz i feel it was the most wonderful piece of writeup i ever came across.

promise you wont be jealous???" chris looked at his son, and within that quick look he knew armaan had found an answer to escape the real issue, chris knew neither what this escape route was, nor the issue he wanted to escape....but he decided to play along bidding his time for the appropriate moment anyways and said "oh yeh whatever....there is no woman in the world who would chose you over your father....such are the charms of Sir Christopher Lawerence Benz" armaan chuckled....he knew he had his mother's heart, but instead of being the serene beautiful image like his mom....he had been the gallant enchanter, all of his charming persona was from his dad....aloud he said "well there was one....i mean, there was, is and will be...." pausing he said in a slow voice, which was delibearte yet wistful "mum....", chris looked over at him bowled over for a few seconds that followed, until armaan broke the silence continuing..."was just missing her dad", and he could say that looking straight into his father's eyes, because it wasnt untrue in the least, only not....well he thought thats enough for dad for now for he himself wasnt sure of what more there was to it exactly...while chris was figuring out, um sure that is the truth son....just not the complete truth....aloud he said "well she chose me first too...." to which armaan retorted "that was only until she had not laid her eyes on me....c'mon dad, admit it, the most beautiful, charming lady of the world would have chosen me over you at any given time!!!" as he grinned giving his father a cheesy challenging look, chris said "maybe" he paused, then looking armaan into the eye to not miss even a flicker of reaction he continued...."but i can assure you this apparently reaonably beautiful, charming lady....the lady in question here....not ur mum as we both know....will definitely take to my charms before yours....not every worthy woman makes the same blunder son......"

OMG i actually felt like standing up and giving an award for yaar. Just sheer brilliance.Letme not quote anymore as then this comment wont end forever but the next lines, the whole guy joke was also very well put there. Outstanding. Loved Armaan's confusion, dilema or watever u may call it. And histhoughts more focused on Aryan then Ridz. LMAO i can imagine!!!LOL

Coming to ridz well again a sixer there. Loved her equation with Aryan.Just excellent. Clap

I am short of words now NJ. ur pushing me deeper into ur spell. hope u cast another one very soon as am gettin too eager now to see more magic. Embarrassed
take care

Edited by jia.. - 28 May 2008 at 4:22am
pal234 Senior Member

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 5:27am | IP Logged
wat an update.....awesome.....i jus cldnt stop laughin....both of dem r so confused..... LOL

nd d whole convo b/w armi and his dad ws jus fabulous.....they share such a wonderful relation.....wowwwww........jus luvd it.......... hw swiftly armi hid d whole truth bt his father caught dat 2LOL........nd armi saying "its actually a man"ROFLi jus fell of my chair laughin......

nd aryaan ridzi's best frnd.......hmmm.....he surely seems 2 be of gr8 help in future...... Wink lets c hw ridzi escapes convo wit aryaan nxt tym.....

jus luvd it.....n btw ws it short??? or only i felt it??? i ws jus readin n it go over.....mayb i ws 2 engrossed readin....n also engrossed in laughing LOL fabulous part

thnx for d pm Big smile n do update soon

Edited by pal_279 - 28 May 2008 at 5:30am
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bollywood_chic

gr8 part...
i loved it... they both rhinking bout each other. can we have a cute AR scene sooon??
thanks for the pm
plz cont soooon


thanx un i will continue asap!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by perfectpiscean

Welcome bak 4m ur holiday! Hug

Hope u had a nyc time! Embarrassed

Thought the part was was gr8 dat u wrote us a part! Embarrassed

I luved Armaan's relationship with his dad! Something dat is very unique 2 dis ff! Clap

n Aryan sounds liek a sweetheart! Embarrassed Hope he doesnt come in the way of AR! Embarrassed

The ending was so cute! Embarrassed Luv the way u write!

Please continue soon...expecting a longer part next tyme! LOL

Luv u!

Marisha Embarrassed

hey thanx a bunch....n u know interms of word pages it was abt the same length as all parts before....wonder y so many ppl thought it was short!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by missing Vmars

kuch toh hua hai ... kuch ho gaya hai ... dese were da first thoughts dat came to my mind after reading da last part !!! i think da next few parts r going 2 be reallly cute coz both wud be trying 2 figure out dere feeling for each other ... can hardly wait 2 read dem !!!! update reaallllll soooon

thanx hun, i will update soon!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cheen2005

awwwwwww thats a cute father-son relationship they share, hehe the family star Big smile omg lets make them meet quickly at the wedding, it'll be sooooooo much fun, n im sure after knowing ridzi soooooo well aryan is not in love with her Wink hehe he better have someone else already picked Smileawesome job hun, def missed it over break but am glad youre back Big smile

thanx a bunch hun...will continue asap!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prernawaghray

hey NJ Smile
thanks for the pm sweety Wink
this part was amazing after a long time naa but by the way how was ur trip enjoyed????
but u know this part was soooo small that i just started reading n it got over.... tooo bad Angry Angry Angry
well im so glad that both r falling for each other Embarrassed
n i also loved the father-son relationship n their cute talks on whose more charming LOL
well update fast n a longer one this time plz

hey thanx hun....n it was abt the same length in terms of pages in word...but i guess coz it had just 2 main scenes alot of ppl thought it was short....newz....will update asap!!!

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