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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 37)

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lightening

wwooaaa!!!!!!!! finally he remeberd ...n gOD THE whole change in rids coz of
hm ...well now dats wat u call unexpected twist!!!! u go gurl!!! Clap Clap
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thanx hun....the comments make it worth the effort!!!

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dmg_sonia

jus read all three pts in 1 go...it was awesom...the concept n the way u hav written is jus 222 good...i loved it...u rock dear...loved their dance, how ridz n armi recognized...everything was jus mind-blowing...hats off 2 u...



lolzzzz thanx sonia....u blow up my already unmanagable ego more!!!hope u like the new update!!
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Yay!! This time am pretty fast......part 4....not late as usual.....OMg part 4 was like just too good!! Great going NJ, her dilema awesome, she will be with him during the entire flight, haha just excellent.

U know the way u hav described each scene with thedialogues is just too good for words.......


"so u knew all along who i was he thought to himself, and u prefered letting me stay in the dark, preferred no confrontations with ur most worthless student did u lady physics???so what were u avoiding....witnessing a new me....or showing off the transformed u???...slowly a smile crept on his lips, and his eyebrows arched slightly as he thought....hmmmm so someone gained expertise at stuff other than physics....but u did not realize what u were up against i guess.....playing smart here, are we????...alright missy enough of ur hide and seek....i know this game and all its rules....n uv broken enough of them by hiding urself keeping me ignorant about who it was that i had to find....lets play it fair now....u wana run away, lets see how far u go."


Woah these first few initials made gap.....i was like...this is the start wat next!!!!!

"i am sorry..." as she looked up into his eyes all puzzled, he continued with a meaningful glance " armaan....i am sorry armaan....isnt it time u said those words honey???" she frowned at him addressing her that way "huh???"..."yeh...u owe me that id say....wat do u think, about time is it???"

I loved these lines......gosh made me just fall under ur complete spell.....fantabulous.... Clap


"ok peace....seriously....game is up" as she looked up at him he extended his hand and said "friends???"

nah it must be ammy.....strawberry is the only flavor he eats....can u beat that???the big shot superbasketballer with a choice that girly"
 

Gosh i can just go on NJ.....i mean seriously each of these lines left in complete awe.....and there r loads more but i dont want my comment to get longer than ur part.....so let me stop here... LOL

Outstanding is all i can say......cant wait to see them meeting at the wedding and ofcourse their flight journey......hope this long bashan didnt put u off to sleep.....if it did just temme to shutup and promise i will keep it shot next time..... LOL LOL LOL

I had warned u from the onset....i tend t get too long with my comments..... LOLLOLWink

completely under ur spell hunny
Jia


Edited by jia.. - 21 May 2008 at 12:44pm
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komalsirwani

omg NJ...dat was mind blowin...the red punjabi sut...i could actually imagine her....wowo n muski reggie hehehehehehe dat scene was sooo funny....loved the part totally..totally....u are reali reali reali good at it.... Clap .......hehehehheheheeh cant wait to seee wat they spk up now...in the same airport n then the same flight n probably the seats are 2gether too heheheheheheh cont real soonn...lovin it totally Clap



cheers hun!!!thanx for the comments n enjoy the new update!!!
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Clap Amaazingggg as always Big smile
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by perfectpiscean


Wow...awesum part!

He finally recognized her...i luv da way u wrote it!

Cont. weneva u hv time...2tally understand ur lack of free time!


Marisha



thanx for bearing with me Confused Confused Confused but i hope u like the new part!!!
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Catwoman

Wow Nj loving it to bits
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Love Kat



Smile so glad about that kat!!!enjoy the update now that i finally did it...phew!!!
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia..

Just brilliant NJ.....man am loving this way too much....u know tat inclusion of Newton's laws in this whole thing has just made it so amazing. lol enjoying it all the more.

so he finally recognized her!!!!!! its becom all the more interesting......waiting to read more.....take ur time .....

Jia



i did take quite a bit of time i guess....but now that the update is done hope u like reading it...thanx for the comments jia!!!

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