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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 146)

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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pal_279


Originally posted by spln

Originally posted by pal_279


Clap awesome update Clap

nd as u said it ws worth the wait....too good....jus luvd it.....

armi-ridz completely in luv Embarrassed ....luvd der nok-jhok in dhaba.....n der telling each oder about thmselves.... it lukd so spontaneous....n d romance....Embarrassed Embarrassed

u kno the characters in ur ffs are jus awesome....the way they reply back is superb......i absolutely luv dis thing abt ur characters....in both of ur ffs......

the convo b/w chris n amy was gr8888.....nd amy's reaction at dinin table jus LOL

thnx for d pm...n cont. soon...hope ur frnd's prob is solved....



thnx hun...um so glad u like it....n my fav scene was the last one...n my frend ummmmm well she will take a bit of time....but we all trying to cheer her up....hopefully will succeed soon....
oh ya....even my fav scene ws d last one....forgt 2 mention it earlier....d relation prtrayed b/w chris n armi is fantastic....n dey do seem 2 b bestest of frnds as stated by armi.....nd i kno u will suceed soon in chearin ur frnd up....have faithBig smileBig smile



lolzzzz yeh last scene was fun to write....n thnx for my frend thing....she will be good soon i know....

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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 10:19am | IP Logged

Originally posted by spln

Originally posted by missing Vmars

OMG dis is da most amazing part ever !!!! dont have words 2 describe it .... its left me totally speechless ... i wonder how u do it .... take a simple (after confession ) conversation n turn it into sumthing soooo magical .... its Commendable ya !!! also i really like dat fact dat armaan is able 2 express him soo well esp 2 his father !!!

PS: dis part was totally worth da wait !!!


thnx hun....glad u like it....yeh post confession is a bit hard since the height of excitement just got one so.....lolzzzzz newaz as u all like it, um a happy one here!!!!!!!!

i can understand wat u mean .... coz its like da confession part always gets so hyped dat u dont knw wat u write or how 2 write da next part ..... da tempo needs 2 b maintained .... but believe me dis was like one of da best after confession conversation's i have read ( including sum of my all time fav novels) ... it was like i cud actually visualize armaan n riddhima having dis conversation !!!!

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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 10:27am | IP Logged
haha LOL LOL LOL very funny poor armaan he is day dreaming abt ridhima.the confession was soo.........gud and the their walk from that dhaba every thing was soo gud Clap
i just cant wait to read the part when armaan and riddhima will meet again after their return from agra
continue soon..........
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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by missing Vmars

Originally posted by spln

Originally posted by missing Vmars

OMG dis is da most amazing part ever !!!! dont have words 2 describe it .... its left me totally speechless ... i wonder how u do it .... take a simple (after confession ) conversation n turn it into sumthing soooo magical .... its Commendable ya !!! also i really like dat fact dat armaan is able 2 express him soo well esp 2 his father !!! PS: dis part was totally worth da wait !!!
thnx hun....glad u like it....yeh post confession is a bit hard since the height of excitement just got one so.....lolzzzzz newaz as u all like it, um a happy one here!!!!!!!!


i can understand wat u mean .... coz its like da confession part always gets so hyped dat u dont knw wat u write or how 2 write da next part ..... da tempo needs 2 b maintained .... but believe me dis was like one of da best after confession conversation's i have read ( including sum of my all time fav novels) ... it was like i cud actually visualize armaan n riddhima having dis conversation !!!!




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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sasya

haha LOL LOL LOL very funny poor armaan he is day dreaming abt ridhima.the confession was soo.........gud and the their walk from that dhaba every thing was soo gud Clap
i just cant wait to read the part when armaan and riddhima will meet again after their return from agra
continue soon..........



sure i will hun....thnx for the comments!!!!!!!
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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 10:41am | IP Logged
dis was d bessssssssttttttttttttttttt prt...................
d confeesion was sooo sweet........dhaba wala scene jus added spice 2 d entire thing.......dream sqeuence in d dinning hall was gr888888888888........ n finally d rappo btwn father n son............. datz amzng..... gr888 update. waitng 4 d nxt prt. update soon Smile
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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 10:53am | IP Logged
seriously....... dat one was likke the best soooooo far...... n the whole i have
eaten too much frm the invisible plate was so super duper LOL LOL LOL
LOL n posters of newton and einstein on the
walls...hehehehehehe ...i just love ur creativity....
ArmiandRidz4eva Goldie
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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 11:00am | IP Logged
OMG NJ, that was absolutely beautiful, i loved every bit about it, from the dhaba scene to him not able to do anything but think about her, im absolutely in total awe of your ff, u write so beautifully, i seriously dont know how you get the emotions of the scenes so well, Clap

Loved the way Ridz asked Armaan straight why he had chosen her, i also loved the part when Armaan said he had eaten too much, that too from a plate that was empty. LOL

i also love the father-son relationship can not wait for the next part - and you dont have to be worried!!! Big smile Tongue Wink

hope everything worked out about your friend Confused

Love Sania Embarrassed

Edited by ArmiandRidz4eva - 05 June 2008 at 11:04am

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