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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 134)

pal234 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Clap
m speechless....the part ws jus fantastic.....

th nyt........the song....the couple......the surroundings....n the taj"symbol of love"......n ur description........all jus perfect....

luvd it.....

thnx for d pm...pls cont soon....

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pal_279

Clap
m speechless....the part ws jus fantastic.....

th nyt........the song....the couple......the surroundings....n the taj"symbol of love"......n ur description........all jus perfect....

luvd it.....

thnx for d pm...pls cont soon....



thnx a bunch dear!!!!!!!!glad u liked it....
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
very well written...the way you intertwined the song...I could just imagine Armaan singing it! Clap Clap
awww Reg proposed to Muskaan...how cute!!!!! Embarrassed

Shweta
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
so sorry for the late comment just caught up with part 14 & 15...yet again at a loss of words ..trully amazing...loved the part where ridz finally lets her heart out to armaan and of course the final confession was just FAB Clap
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that was soo romantic and soo cute Clap .the song was great and everything was just out of words.i just love ur ff.great confession,he did not give her the ring Big smile Big smile
i am excited now to read the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Helloooooooooooooo Naseem dear..........
wowwwwwwww mind blowing confession at taj......i couldn't expect anymoreWink ........Looks like Taj is lucky for benz family...as it has again become a witness of two beautiful souls...... the song was just so apt........
hey naseem when he started singing....i was like... wat is he doing infront of rahul and muskaan wat if she says no....oh noo and i was thinking it would have been better if it was in private or something like dat.... while i was going on with my reading n my thoughts........then finally at the end of song....oh god dat was just perfect .....infront of taj and their best buddies.......could dat get any better.........omg its simply fantastic.........not to forget finally red did wonders to someone... Wink Embarrassed .......i liked the way how u changed rather lighten the mood at the end by bringing the ring and the dinner conversation between them........
its so nice LOL .....ok got it baby.....its going too long....ok for now hoping to see more of the two new official love couples in the city of love Wink....ofcourse how can i miss marraige....guess it would be more fun now .....so whn is the next part dear.......
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:29pm | IP Logged

iv run short of words yet again, dat proposal.... Clap

there is absolutely nothing i repeat nothing predictable about u, im so glad she explained her reservations abt them, n our hero of course...nothn he cant do.if she'd just walkd away xplainn nothn i'd hav killd u LOL LOL

the way u wrote..their reactions, her shivern, his face softenn,his placing the jacket....it felt like i was rght there..i cud see the taj n 2 people tryn to cm 2 terms wid their love..*sigh sigh*

n d cheeky line in da end...god me thinx i luv u...

it was absolutely

PERFECT.

thanx 4 a beautiful part...(yes ma fav has changed again)

lv deepika

ps--ya lovd d song..
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Posted: 04 June 2008 at 12:44am | IP Logged
*SPEECHLESS!!!*

Believe me Naseem, today I honestly have no words to describe this part. I feel my words will spoil the charm.

One honest thing, I liked how you put up the honest confession of Ridz about her insecurities and all...

P.S. I liked the song... Embarrassed

thanx for the pm...

cont sooooooooooooooooooon.....

luv,
shivani

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