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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 125)

spln IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 December 2007
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by er.Sheetal

Originally posted by spln

Originally posted by er.Sheetal

Now i read part 11...

I shud say dat it was d BEST PUT song sequence i hv ever read... Wonderful game & u of course used my favorite RJ "ULTA PULTA NITIN"... he is too gud... D song selection was amazing & of course undoubtfully not only best fit for d situation, but also few of my favorite collections... I simply hv started adoring Uncle Chris now... LOL he is such a sweet heart... he is d best... Wow... loved d father-son's telephonic conversation... d best was Chris telling Armaan "well um sorry about spoiling a moment...... but there's a correction...... there will be no more girls in your life after her is my guess...... so your threat doesnt hold good...... but u know what il grant u freedom from calls only if u promise to return with success......" Armaan of course is too smart wid his MOVES... Star & d dare Muskaan gave Ridz, well i wud hv been more dan happy for it & easily won it, if i was in Ridz's place... Big smile Ridz's dare was definitely been TOO-TOO-TOO gud... "KIDDO TRICYCLE wid DHOOM" WOW wat a combination... LOL ... i laughed like maniacs when i imagined it... ROFL ... I m sorry i m still laughing... OMG... dhoom & tricycle... & to tell d truth reading it i almost fell off my chair & my brother was glaring at me as if i just lost it... ROFL ABSOLUTELY FANTABULOUS... Clap

d "fortune teller chocolates" was a wonderful dressing on ur FRESH COOK... OVERALL. dis Part 11 was by far d BEST & d MOST fun filled episode of ur FF... Clap i will b desperately waiting to read d next wonder... Love - Sheetal

wow those are lovely comments sheetal...n i am replying in one go for ur comments for part 10 n 11....really appreciate u taking out the time to reply in such detail!!!

Hi NJ...

I m being quite busy for last few days, so i m not getting time to read anything... Will reply once i read part 12, 13, & 14...


- Sheetal

np sheetal hope u wil like them!!!!!!!

spln IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 December 2007
Posts: 10942

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saridena

hey spln Smile
awesome parts
atlast armi confessed his love to ridz Dancing
but were is my pm plzzz donot forget to pm me

hey sorry actually i dont hv a list i just pm ppl who commented on the previous part cause it takes ages to do the pm's mite have missed u thats why....will pm for the new one!!!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10942

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ***Krinz_dmg***

It waz soooo beautiful!
felt lyk
finally he confessed!!
cont soon
TC krinz

thnx hun!!!!!
ArmiandRidz4eva Goldie

Joined: 09 December 2007
Posts: 1369

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 9:46am | IP Logged
hey NJ, just read part 14, u didnt disappoint, i absoultely loved it, and your ending with Armaan saying "I LOVE YOU Ridhima" was really sweet, looking forward to your next update hope its soon.

Love Sania
addicted2ksg IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 April 2008
Posts: 2564

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 10:11am | IP Logged

oh my goodness NJ!!! that was a beautiful beautiful beautiful update!! i had tears in my eyes when armaan was trying to explain what happened to his mother.. it was written sooo well!!! all the emotions were so beautiful!! the whole part was so touching.. i really loved all of it! and i'm so glad he finally told her that he loves her!! hope she realizes that he means it for real.. and she admits her feelings to him too! ur a brilliant writer NJ.. and one of the fastest updaters too!!

continue soon! can't wait to read the next part!!
meow23 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 16 April 2008
Posts: 7825

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 10:27am | IP Logged
dat was a beautifully ritten update.................
can't hav enuf of it... waitng 4 d nxt prt................ thnxx 4 d pm.plzz update soon Smile Smile
er.Sheetal Senior Member

Joined: 15 February 2008
Posts: 683

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Part 12...

Wat i loved d most about dis part was d way expalined their reactions... spicially Riddhima's hesitation & Armaan's moves to make her meaningfully concious... i cud feel & see her expressions floating in front of my eyes... Clap Clap Clap
Ridzy's plan was perfect to help Rahul fly his plane was simple but Bulls Eye, actually it never fails... Big smile ...

Ridzy's emotions were very well portrayed when Armaan kind of shrugged her off... But i m sure as i read d next part... i wud get something positive out of it... It was like a kick to her emotions & i m sure it will make sure dat she actually realizes her feelings...

I m gonna b reading d next part right now... PART 13... LOL

I guess i m most late commenter... but i like to read each part separately & den post message for each of dem individually... Big smile

- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 03 June 2008 at 11:10am
chaiti! Senior Member

Joined: 12 May 2008
Posts: 323

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:20am | IP Logged
oh my god!!!!!! i completely loved d update!!! it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute n evrythin!!!! cant wait to read on!!!!!!!! Clap

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