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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 123)

kdrs Goldie

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Hey, really sorry for not commenting!!!!!
I loved this part but again this type of cliffhanger! Angry Angry It's Ok now!!! Just continue soon!!!!

er.Sheetal Senior Member

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spln

Originally posted by er.Sheetal

Now i read part 11...

I shud say dat it was d BEST PUT song sequence i hv ever read... Wonderful game & u of course used my favorite RJ "ULTA PULTA NITIN"... he is too gud... D song selection was amazing & of course undoubtfully not only best fit for d situation, but also few of my favorite collections... I simply hv started adoring Uncle Chris now... LOL he is such a sweet heart... he is d best... Wow... loved d father-son's telephonic conversation... d best was Chris telling Armaan "well um sorry about spoiling a moment...... but there's a correction...... there will be no more girls in your life after her is my guess...... so your threat doesnt hold good...... but u know what il grant u freedom from calls only if u promise to return with success......" Armaan of course is too smart wid his MOVES... Star & d dare Muskaan gave Ridz, well i wud hv been more dan happy for it & easily won it, if i was in Ridz's place... Big smile Ridz's dare was definitely been TOO-TOO-TOO gud... "KIDDO TRICYCLE wid DHOOM" WOW wat a combination... LOL ... i laughed like maniacs when i imagined it... ROFL ... I m sorry i m still laughing... OMG... dhoom & tricycle... & to tell d truth reading it i almost fell off my chair & my brother was glaring at me as if i just lost it... ROFL ABSOLUTELY FANTABULOUS... Clap

d "fortune teller chocolates" was a wonderful dressing on ur FRESH COOK... OVERALL. dis Part 11 was by far d BEST & d MOST fun filled episode of ur FF... Clap i will b desperately waiting to read d next wonder... Love - Sheetal

wow those are lovely comments sheetal...n i am replying in one go for ur comments for part 10 n 11....really appreciate u taking out the time to reply in such detail!!!


Hi NJ...


I m being quite busy for last few days, so i m not getting time to read anything... Will reply once i read part 12, 13, & 14...



- Sheetal

saridena Goldie

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 6:58am | IP Logged
hey spln Smile
awesome parts
atlast armi confessed his love to ridz Dancing  Dancing
but were is my pm plzzz donot forget to pm me

Edited by saridena - 03 June 2008 at 7:05am
***Krinz_dmg*** Senior Member

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:39am | IP Logged
It waz soooo beautiful!
felt lyk
finally he confessed!!
cont soon
TC krinz
spln IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 December 2007
Posts: 10942

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by missing Vmars

Finally armaan said dose 3 words ... wow was waiting for dis confession 2 happen for sooo long !!!! i jus luved da way ridz went luking for him all da way to Taj ... n den armaan sitting dere strumming his guitar ... was totally spellbound by it all !!! but u left us at such a cliffhangar .... hurry up wit da next part coz am dying 2 find out ridz's reaction !!

lolzzzzz....i wl try to asap....thnx for the comments!!!!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10942

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lookwhoshere

yippee..he confessed!! wat wud her reaction be?? don't keep me waiting for long.. his farewell to his mum was really touching..especially wen he let her pic was beautiful! luv, anu.

thnx anu glad u liked it!!wil try to update asap
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10942

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aravi

OMG OMG OMG u r such a wonderful writer Tongue   u know d best part is i read all 14 parts together n just cant stop reading after dat m frnd says i have lost it Wink but seriously i think u should try ur hand at a novel no doubt it ll b a bestseller Clap n i luved d CONFESSION scene Embarrassed   but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.... cont ASAP actually also wanna say IMPERFECTION WAS SO PERFCT N WONDERFUL ACTUALLY M QUITE LATE AT COMENTING NEWAYS JUST THOT OF COMPLETING 4 UR SPLENDID WORK Clap Clap

welcome to the thread aravi....glad u like the fic....n the previous one too...will be looking forward to comments from u from now on!!!!!!
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10942

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia..

Hawwwwwwwwwwwwww u brought tears to my eyes!!!! Seriously as i told am a bit too on the senti side so reading the entire scene about his feelings for his mom and all OMG my eyes were really moist. U just left me gaping at your excellence.
starting out with ridz for a change....the way she was worried, confused.....OMG i dunno how to praise u now!! I have yet cum across someone with ur caliber (Say Kats league). The way u are going about emotions.goshhhhhhh i dunno how to tell you now?????
Armaannnnnnnnnnnn........sighhhhhhhhhh. I feltlike going and hugging him supwer tight. He seemed so broken so fragile and yet so gently. Best scene i have t admit wen he lets go of the pic and it finally rests on the water and yes also wen he says among the stars and ridz corrects him saying brightest star. Naseem u brought tears really. It was so touching. I just have nothing more to say.
Before i forget am thrilled that he confessed. Just hope ridz responds well enough as he needs comfort. Ok if ridz is still confused you can put me in her place.I will definitely hug him tight.
Dont keep me waiting. I am all ready to jump into her place

me too jia....thats the funny part i get jealous of a character i create when she with him lolzzzzzzzzz!!!!!

n kats like ridzi think abt armaan i too think kat a league above!!!!!!but thnx for saying it newaz elevates my ego soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much....glad u like the part,....i got carried away writing it n then i was fearing if it had not become too melodramatic....but perhaps um in the safe zone!!!!!!!!

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