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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 121)

jia.. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 26 December 2007
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Hawwwwwwwwwwwwww u brought tears to my eyes!!!! Seriously as i told am a bit too on the senti side so reading the entire scene about his feelings for his mom and all OMG my eyes were really moist. U just left me gaping at your excellence. Clap

starting out with ridz for a change....the way she was worried, confused.....OMG i dunno how to praise u now!! I have yet cum across someone with ur caliber (Say Kats league). The way u are going about emotions.goshhhhhhh i dunno how to tell you now????? Clap

Armaannnnnnnnnnnn........sighhhhhhhhhh. I feltlike going and hugging him supwer tight. He seemed so broken so fragile and yet so gently. Best scene i have t admit wen he lets go of the pic and it finally rests on the water and yes also wen he says among the stars and ridz corrects him saying brightest star. Naseem u brought tears really. It was so touching. I just have nothing more to say. Embarrassed

Before i forget am thrilled that he confessed. Just hope ridz responds well enough as he needs comfort. Ok if ridz is still confused you can put me in her place.I will definitely hug him tight. LOL

Dont keep me waiting. I am all ready to jump into her place LOL
Love Embarrassed

Edited by jia.. - 03 June 2008 at 3:26am

nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 03 January 2008
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 3:29am | IP Logged
reallya nice one please update it soon
komalsirwani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11334

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 3:39am | IP Logged
there u go...left us with another cliffhanger hehehehehe....i guess...readin ure parts...must be used to it by now...hehehhe ok totally loved it...m sure ridz wasnt expectin dat i love u frm him hehehehe n as shocked as we were....she too was....n yea as us ed this confession wasnt expected....sumthin so diff frm our expressions...loved it totally....but i wish armaan wouldve given blows to that guys....too much filmi it wouldve gone hehehe but no prob....loved it wen ridz went n saw all that...i wish she wouldve given him a tight hug wen he was cryin that way...but our ridz she had decided not to get close to him n so she wont 4 sure...heheheh but anyways the ending made up for it...loved it totally...cont soon Clap Clap Clap
sasya Senior Member

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 4:16am | IP Logged
it was soo touching u made me cry Cry.the way to expressed each and everything was super.i felt soo gud reading this part.
wow!!!!!atlast he said it i am really excited to read what her response will be.once again great part Clap
continue soon.....
ranv_rules Senior Member

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Posts: 876

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Omg dat was like ….. totally awesome… I don't have words to describe how I was feeling when I was reading this part…I am really glad that armaan confessed his feelings. Big smile

I literally had tears in my eyes when I was reading the part where Ridz reaches the Taj and loved the conversation between them….. its so beautifully written...hats off to you Clap

I hope Ridz also confesses her feelings, and then the Taj will remain the benz confession place…. Hope the lovers come together at the greatest symbol of love Big smile Big smile

fantastic are a rock Star Do cont soon


-Facetious- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 12449

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Just as you mentioned in the story that Ridz is also going to Taj behind Armaan, I knew it from that instant that those magical words are coming up... Embarrassed

but u'll make us all die in anticipation with such cliffhangers... LOL LOL LOL

cont soooooooooooooon...

thanx for the pm..

123abc123 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 November 2007
Posts: 5946

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 5:20am | IP Logged
luvin it awwwww he confessed
i was sort of hopin dat dey wud get to gthr
wer armi dad proposed awww sooo romantic
luvin it as usual
updte sooooon
-Cherry- IF-Addictz

Joined: 17 December 2007
Posts: 66287

Posted: 03 June 2008 at 5:51am | IP Logged
amaizn part sweeeety
loved it toooo much
such a good cliff hanger
plz continue soon

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