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FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 (Page 102)

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pal_279


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Originally posted by pal_279



it ws such a wonderfully cute part........ Embarrassed

jus luvd it.....at last armaan's confession, or realization...or whatever it was.......

nd ridzi letting her thoughts free....nt able 2 control dem nemore....LOL.....

nd u kno i'm fellin in luv with dis guy aryaan....i at first thot mayb he has sum feelings for her bt m glad he doesnt......dey jus have a pure true n amazin friendship.....

bt i wonder y dint Chris commented on armi's taj mahal trip.....as in he might b knowin y armi wants 2 go der n besides he might also be knowin ridzi is goin....it wud hav been gr8 2 see him tease him LOL

n last bt nt d least d way u write.....i think i hav already told u dat many tyms.... LOL bt repeatin it if ever in lyf u wnt an alternative job.....do try writin novels....u write a bit lyk daniel steel...he's a wonderful writer hu writes stories lyk dis...as in romantic wid sum strong background.....

sorry to make d reply a lil too long....bt jus cldnt help praise u....

thnx a ton for d pm.... Big smile n pls do cont soon....waitin for ur fast weekend doses Clap



thanx dear!!!thank u so much....n daniel steel is big into this stuff now that really is a huge huge compliment n um not sure if i deserve it...but thanx anywaz!!!will try to update asap...earlier than usual!!!
well u surely deserve it..let me see...can i call u little dany....LOLit suits u....



lil dany.....lolzzzzz as long as daniel steel doesnt sue either of us !!!!thanx a bunch i really feel honored!!!

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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pal_279


jus completed readin the 11th part....n it ws awesome as usualClap

jus luvd readin abt ridzi n muski's frndship n der game.....wat a game LOL n armi n rahul frownin over singers LOL ....n wat perfect songs...... dnt worry ammy she sure wil sing dose lines 2 u Wink jus wait....n d dare LOL LOL LOL ridzi n muski r total cracks LOL bt lovely cracks......riding tricycle in pizza hut n singin dhoom track ROFL .....i jus cldnt stop laughin.....n ridzi clumsily eatin dose pani puris...armi finds her cute even dat way....dis is cald tru love Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed nd lastly d fortune tellin chocolates.....dey got d same fortune LOL ....no no mr. newton is nt gonna mind it n nor ridzi....jus luvd it...

nd hw cn i forget d dad-son scene.....so does dat mean ammy has told chris abt his feelings?? wow...amazing yaar....
waiting eagerly for d benz confession spot....nd thanx a lot for d pm...Big smileBTW r u frm delhi???u seem 2 kno quite a lot abt it...



thanx dear so glad u liek it....lovely long comments...i appreciate!!!


n no um not from delhi....did my schooling in chandigarh, so delhi wasnt far been there alot of times in fact all thge time so....but now iv been in the states for qa while....newaz...delhi is still quite afamiliar zone....are u from there????

Edited by spln - 01 June 2008 at 2:54pm
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lightening

heya...m back
n i luved all the parts dat i had missed....yhe last fortune was
like......WOW!!!!!!!!! simply rocking!! way to go...



welcome back....n wonderful update u did...thanx for the comments!!!
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ***Krinz_dmg***

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!
i jst started reading yr FF
n all the parts which i red i hav 2 say wer jst AMAZING!!!!!! Clap Clap Clap
Clap
I jst luv yr riting style
its very professional!!!
Clap Clap Clap
From now on U R MY FAV RITER!!!
i luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!
will coment on all the other parts when i finish reading them!
oh and y iz yr ff moved here it took me ages 2 find it u no!
TC...



hey dear i did not move it here all the ff's have been moved here by the DT....so we are here now for good our new home...hope u like the new part....thanx for the lovely comments!!!
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by er.Sheetal

Now i read part 11...


I shud say dat it was d BEST PUT song sequence i hv ever read... Wonderful game & u of course used my favorite RJ "ULTA PULTA NITIN"... he is too gud... D song selection was amazing & of course undoubtfully not only best fit for d situation, but also few of my favorite collections... I simply hv started adoring Uncle Chris now... LOL he is such a sweet heart... he is d best... Wow... loved d father-son's telephonic conversation... d best was Chris telling Armaan "well um sorry about spoiling a moment...... but there's a correction...... there will be no more girls in your life after her is my guess...... so your threat doesnt hold good...... but u know what il grant u freedom from calls only if u promise to return with success......" Armaan of course is too smart wid his MOVES... Star & d dare Muskaan gave Ridz, well i wud hv been more dan happy for it & easily won it, if i was in Ridz's place... Big smile Ridz's dare was definitely been TOO-TOO-TOO gud... "KIDDO TRICYCLE wid DHOOM" WOW wat a combination... LOL ... i laughed like maniacs when i imagined it... ROFL ... I m sorry i m still laughing... OMG... dhoom & tricycle... & to tell d truth reading it i almost fell off my chair & my brother was glaring at me as if i just lost it... ROFL ABSOLUTELY FANTABULOUS... Clap


d "fortune teller chocolates" was a wonderful dressing on ur FRESH COOK... OVERALL. dis Part 11 was by far d BEST & d MOST fun filled episode of ur FF... Clap i will b desperately waiting to read d next wonder... Love - Sheetal




wow those are lovely comments sheetal...n i am replying in one go for ur comments for part 10 n 11....really appreciate u taking out the time to reply in such detail!!!
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kdrs

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! Clap
I can only say this!!! Left me speechless!!! Plz continue soon!!!!!!!




thanx hun
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ArmiandRidz4eva

i only jus commented on the last two parts and came back on and you had the next part up, Part 11 was by far the most funfilled part, i absolutely loved it, it was a much needed part since i had to get my work done, which i have finished!! Big smile Clap finally. i was in stitches reading the part about Muskaan's dare, it was hilarious, i think my family members have officially declared me insane! Wink LOL LOL (obviously to them i am supposed to be doing my work!, so laughing at the computer screen might not look sane!!) LOL cannot wait for the next update!! "WHEN TWO HEARTS RACE, THEY BOTH WIN!!!" this was so sweet! Embarrassed update soon Clap Love Sania Embarrassed


P.S congrats on the 100th page of your ff!!




lolzzzz glad u like it that much enjoy part 12!!!
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
AMMAAAAAAZIN
poooor ridz oooo luved da endin soo
excited 4 da nxt part wudnr wots gona happeen
oooooooooo cant wait luvin it as usual n wil
wait 4 ur next updte
luv niz

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