Originally posted by: angelneveliehey NJ!!luved da update!!
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thanx for da pm!! π
thnx dear!!!!!!
Originally posted by: angelneveliehey NJ!!luved da update!!
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thanx for da pm!! π
Originally posted by: rashi_23it was an awsm part.
esp. they things n the way u described
the way of their feelings xpression.
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do updatye very very sooooooooooooooon.
Originally posted by: kumpal12Helloooooooo NJ dear.........am bak with my dose of comments π ...........
ok from where do i start now.........ok got it.....
The best was the chris and armi conversation...... invisible food.......did i do it???..........minnie at the scene....prayers π ....woww dat part was tooooooooooooooooo gudddddddddddddddd
and then the armi ridzy conversation is fantastic.......the way he tells abt him and he never misses any chance to make her frown and at the very next moment he makes her blush....wow dat was superb......and how can i miss ridzy.....the way she beats him with her words.... by telling she will get coffee cake on his bday π ...newton and einsten pictures.... dat was amazing....OMG even i love cricket ridzy π ....and the conversation in dhaba is so nice...the way he eats up with her hand.....oh god they are just perfect....and u r a perfectionist in writingππ³ ........ wish ur frnd prob is solved.....π π π smiley for her to cheer up .........when is the next update dear......hope i get to see it soon........ π
Originally posted by: hibos1ok dear!!!! read it again and again and again,..I think now I kind of know the dialogues byheart.
wow!!! well whatever I wud say wud be an undestatement,...I cud see the whole convo happening between 2 common people...well what they spoke was so natural,..ridz was so right, she knows nothing abt him except that she loves his cologne and she is head over heels for this lord,...and he has such simple needs,...and the best part is they are like such unlike poles. she like winter & he is for summer. she like coffee and he strawberry,...this is what happens in real life...
like they say unlike poles attract!!!!!@#$%^&*
loved it,...and cant belive we wud be treated for another one today:):) must be my lucky day ha!
Originally posted by: kumpal12Hey NJ one more page to go to next thread.......... Advance congrats dear on finishing first thread with fabulous parts and for the coming up new thread...... gr8 going dear ππΌ .....hope to see more amazing updates from u like these...... π
Originally posted by: kumpal12Helloooooooo NJ dear.........am bak with my dose of comments π ...........
ok from where do i start now.........ok got it.....
The best was the chris and armi conversation...... invisible food.......did i do it???..........minnie at the scene....prayers π ....woww dat part was tooooooooooooooooo gudddddddddddddddd
and then the armi ridzy conversation is fantastic.......the way he tells abt him and he never misses any chance to make her frown and at the very next moment he makes her blush....wow dat was superb......and how can i miss ridzy.....the way she beats him with her words.... by telling she will get coffee cake on his bday π ...newton and einsten pictures.... dat was amazing....OMG even i love cricket ridzy π ....and the conversation in dhaba is so nice...the way he eats up with her hand.....oh god they are just perfect....and u r a perfectionist in writingππ³ ........ wish ur frnd prob is solved.....π π π smiley for her to cheer up .........when is the next update dear......hope i get to see it soon........ π
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