FF:Back to Newton's Laws...part16 - Page 80

Originally posted by: pal_279

well u surely deserve it..let me see...can i call u little dany....😆it suits u....

lil dany.....lolzzzzz as long as daniel steel doesnt sue either of us !!!!thanx a bunch i really feel honored!!!

Originally posted by: pal_279

jus completed readin the 11th part....n it ws awesome as usual👏

jus luvd readin abt ridzi n muski's frndship n der game.....wat a game 😆 n armi n rahul frownin over singers 😆 ....n wat perfect songs...... dnt worry ammy she sure wil sing dose lines 2 u 😉 jus wait....n d dare 😆 😆 😆 ridzi n muski r total cracks 😆 bt lovely cracks......riding tricycle in pizza hut n singin dhoom track 🤣 .....i jus cldnt stop laughin.....n ridzi clumsily eatin dose pani puris...armi finds her cute even dat way....dis is cald tru love 😳 😳 😳 nd lastly d fortune tellin chocolates.....dey got d same fortune 😆 ....no no mr. newton is nt gonna mind it n nor ridzi....jus luvd it...

nd hw cn i forget d dad-son scene.....so does dat mean ammy has told chris abt his feelings?? wow...amazing yaar....
waiting eagerly for d benz confession spot....nd thanx a lot for d pm...😃BTW r u frm delhi???u seem 2 kno quite a lot abt it...

thanx dear so glad u liek it....lovely long comments...i appreciate!!!


n no um not from delhi....did my schooling in chandigarh, so delhi wasnt far been there alot of times in fact all thge time so....but now iv been in the states for qa while....newaz...delhi is still quite afamiliar zone....are u from there????Edited by spln - 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lightening

heya...m back
n i luved all the parts dat i had missed....yhe last fortune was
like......WOW!!!!!!!!! simply rocking!! way to go...

welcome back....n wonderful update u did...thanx for the comments!!!

Originally posted by: ***Krinz_dmg***

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!
i jst started reading yr FF
n all the parts which i red i hav 2 say wer jst AMAZING!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
👏
I jst luv yr riting style
its very professional!!!
👏 👏 👏
From now on U R MY FAV RITER!!!
i luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!
will coment on all the other parts when i finish reading them!
oh and y iz yr ff moved here it took me ages 2 find it u no!
TC...

hey dear i did not move it here all the ff's have been moved here by the DT....so we are here now for good our new home...hope u like the new part....thanx for the lovely comments!!!

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

Now i read part 11...

I shud say dat it was d BEST PUT song sequence i hv ever read... Wonderful game & u of course used my favorite RJ "ULTA PULTA NITIN"... he is too gud... D song selection was amazing & of course undoubtfully not only best fit for d situation, but also few of my favorite collections... I simply hv started adoring Uncle Chris now... 😆 he is such a sweet heart... he is d best... Wow... loved d father-son's telephonic conversation... d best was Chris telling Armaan "well um sorry about spoiling a moment...... but there's a correction...... there will be no more girls in your life after her is my guess...... so your threat doesnt hold good...... but u know what il grant u freedom from calls only if u promise to return with success......" Armaan of course is too smart wid his MOVES... ⭐️ & d dare Muskaan gave Ridz, well i wud hv been more dan happy for it & easily won it, if i was in Ridz's place... 😃 Ridz's dare was definitely been TOO-TOO-TOO gud... "KIDDO TRICYCLE wid DHOOM" WOW wat a combination... 😆 ... i laughed like maniacs when i imagined it... 🤣 ... I m sorry i m still laughing... OMG... dhoom & tricycle... & to tell d truth reading it i almost fell off my chair & my brother was glaring at me as if i just lost it... 🤣 ABSOLUTELY FANTABULOUS... 👏

d "fortune teller chocolates" was a wonderful dressing on ur FRESH COOK... OVERALL. dis Part 11 was by far d BEST & d MOST fun filled episode of ur FF... 👏 i will b desperately waiting to read d next wonder... Love - Sheetal

wow those are lovely comments sheetal...n i am replying in one go for ur comments for part 10 n 11....really appreciate u taking out the time to reply in such detail!!!

Originally posted by: kdrs

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
I can only say this!!! Left me speechless!!! Plz continue soon!!!!!!!

thanx hun

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

i only jus commented on the last two parts and came back on and you had the next part up, Part 11 was by far the most funfilled part, i absolutely loved it, it was a much needed part since i had to get my work done, which i have finished!! 😃 👏 finally. i was in stitches reading the part about Muskaan's dare, it was hilarious, i think my family members have officially declared me insane! 😉 😆 😆 (obviously to them i am supposed to be doing my work!, so laughing at the computer screen might not look sane!!) 😆 cannot wait for the next update!! "WHEN TWO HEARTS RACE, THEY BOTH WIN!!!" this was so sweet! 😳 update soon 👏 Love Sania 😳

P.S congrats on the 100th page of your ff!!

lolzzzz glad u like it that much enjoy part 12!!!

AMMAAAAAAZIN
poooor ridz oooo luved da endin soo
excited 4 da nxt part wudnr wots gona happeen
oooooooooo cant wait luvin it as usual n wil
wait 4 ur next updte
luv niz

Originally posted by: hibos1

Another amazing part,....

I had more than a couple of scenes I fell head over heels in love with,...,when he asked her to narrate the translations I had butterflies in my stomach,...after a long time reading something felt so real.

chris said when he finally finshed "well um sorry about spoiling a moment....but there's a correction....there will be no more girls in your life after her is my guess...

how easily Sr.Benz conveyed what he though abt ritz,..absolute wonder.

and AR reply was out of the world : "taj
was n will remain the benz confession spot!!!!!"

oh....loved it. And ofcourse Aryan is a sweetheart! alright no intention of making this longer than your FF. Waiting eagerly for the next one,..
love -Ria

thanx ria....glad u liked all that...some of those were my fav's in that part too!!!

Originally posted by: armaanaddict

congo on 100 pages in this ff NJ!!! plz continue soon! dying to read another part from u!!

thanx dear...enjoy the new part!!!!