Ahh NJ, u dunno how i look forward to ur pm the first thing once i get up in the morning. Well u update wen its usually way past midnite for me so..... 😆 😆 😆
Nyways before i start with my bak-bak, i hav to say that someone has changed her avatar??? 😆 😆 😆 Well nice one i must say, noticed it the first thing as it had ahem-ahem Mr Mallik. 😆
Nyways coming to the part finally. again an excellent one?? Seriously hunny dont u get tired giving such outstanding part one after another????? It was so beautifully written yet again. Actually i had expected it to be nothing short of outstanding and u hav managed to exceeded my expectations yet again.
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My fav scene obviously has to be wen Armaan was lost in his thoughts and not to mention getting embarressed with a bunch of girls around him. But talking abt Armaan well his scenes with minnee were simply adorable. i specially loved these lines......
"till they come to know we're cousins, i dont mind everyone thinking i hooked up with the hottest hunk in town!!!"
"see what i meant" to which armaan said "yeh i know, isnt the first time girls are fluttering in my presence gorgeous...they always do!!!" minnie looked at him with a look of hurt pride and said "well dont be so sure, they would not have noticed u so had i not been accompanying u....minnie has that effect on people too!!!" to which he merely chuckled and said "no offense intended gorgeous...um sure u do!!!!!!
I dunno know y but i just sort of loved these lines so much . The humour is so natural and just adds an overall brilliant charm to ur already spellbound ff.
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Coming to ridz as i shudnt be so very biased.....
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well well well i really want to know the name of the cologne, am sure once u reveal it even i will feel its fragrance everywer.😆
Ok jokes apart i simply loved her chain of thoughts......they were so marvelously described....
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yes she decided with a strengthening resolve, i have to get out of this fantasy infatuation for something which will never be.... there was nothing plausible in a single sided attraction...a small voice quipped up in her head...there can never be a single sided attraction its a mutual force...he must feel it too....nah... he doesnt or he would be attracted to 90% of the stanford girls....all that balancing out of forces is limited to the physics in the labs she thought sighing, and closing her eyes, tired from the day, its events n her endless puzzling non acceptable thoughts n emotions....
Ahh i dunno y yet again but simply these lines were my fav. Specially the comparison with physics and "all that balancing out of forces is limited to the physics in the labs" Just loving ur way with words.
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Now before this comment gets longer than ur part which i fear as usual i'll stop.
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Ever looking forward to more magic😳
and on a lighter note ur next change of avatar too.
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Jia Edited by jia.. - 15 years ago
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