This content was originally posted by: hibos1hey Naseem,
what can I say,..brillliant!!! cant believe Armaan is so sensitive at heart,..reminds me of a coconut,..tough from the top and soft from within,...cant belive he also likes strawberry cake :):):)
wow!!! could not belive this whole part went by and they haven't reached frankfurt yet!!! and the feelings both went through with the first brush of proximity shows your talent as a writer,...Fabulous!
as usual waiting for more:)
This content was originally posted by: pal_279
nw wat 2 say..........m speechless...............ne word wud be 2 short 2 tell hw wonderful d part ws...............awesome....fabulous.........fantastic...... ...jus jus luvd it........... π
d way u portray der inner thinkin n outer reactions in 1 flow.......wowwwwwwwwwwwwww.........jus 2 gud......
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n i mst say u hav developd der charactrs so wel.........luvd each n every bit of it......armaan's naughtiness, ridhimaa's stiffness........n d parts wer armaan told ridzi abt RM.....luvd it.....luvd d way he xplaind, luvd d way she reactd......
also luvd armi's reaction 2wards d mother n child n luvd ridhimaa's concern 2.......
jus fantabulous.....
thnx a lot for d pm.....n waitin very eagerly for d next part btw dis ws quite a fast1....hope nxt also is π
This content was originally posted by: niyaContinue soon please π Cant wait to read what happens next
This content was originally posted by: spln
hehe....yeh il hurry up on frankfurt now....gota get them to india ....about time....
Hey! thats not what I meant,...how does it matter where they are US,frankfurt or India as long as they are together and having their cute little moments,...
you make me so hungry for more,...I feel the more u update I would want to read more,...
love -Ria
This content was originally posted by: hibos1
Hey! thats not what I meant,...how does it matter where they are US,frankfurt or India as long as they are together and having their cute little moments,...
you make me so hungry for more,...I feel the more u update I would want to read more,...
love -Ria
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