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Thanks Deeya! AK meet coming up in next chapter.
Thank you Sameira! Will continue in a few days.
Shaukh se chale jaaiye, Mukti said in her mind.
And he still doesn't give up, love the parting line. Today you got a few words, next time you'll get the smile. The package doesn't come all at once.
Aha! So he was checking her out! He couldn't have seen her eyes until she turned around cuz he was next to her, so lame excuse Premmyy boy
Prem will save her life?! O.o! Okay, I don't like suspense (when reading, while writing, it's so much fun!) so you better continue soon!
I absolutely loved the chapter! After a tiring day, it's really refreshing to come home and read something so well-written with some sarcasm in the dialogues and some amazingly amusing scenes!
Your utilization of exuberant language really was the cherry on the top for this delicious strawberry ice cream :P (I sound like such a fat kid!)
Keep it up!
Damn girl! You really took my threats seriously didn't you? Well, I don't mean to take you away from your school work, but I do love your comments!
Sakshi did deliver the Namrata's baby in the forest....the reasons as to why they were there and Shekhar wasn't with them basically form the crux of the mystery. So don't expect to know the truth anytime soon. Awww...I'm glad you though it was a detailed and imaginable chapter. I did my best to make sure I was painting a picture with my words.
You know, I've never watched KZK either! lol. I've just watched a few short scenes of Prem and Mukti together and I think they make an adorable couple. Of course, the characterization in my story is probably completely different from the show. I think you've grasped the essence of who Prem and Mukti are pretty well. Mukti is indeed somewhat nerdy, but she's also very confident and slightly arrogant. Prem is flirtatious, fun and carefree. About the Angad foreshadowing...I was afraid to disappoint AK fans for a second chapter in a row, so I decided to give Angad a brief mention. The way I thought it out, Mukti may have heard of Angad, but she doesn't really care about what's going on in his over-advertised life. She's only interested in serious issues that matter.
Thanks for the long review! Love ya!!!
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No problem hun! Glad you found time to read now. Yup, that's Prem for you...A compete flirt. I made Angad's situation a little complicated didn't I? Well, don't worry...abhi sirf sagaai huwi hai, shaadi nahin. There will be many opportunities for him to look out for clumsy Kripa. The mysteries surrounding Namrata, Shekhar and Sakshi will have to remain a secret for a bit longer....It'll all come out eventually. Thanks for reading!
Thank you sooooo much di for coming here and posting a review! I really appreciate it. I'm glad my character development so far is successful. Everyone seems to be imagining Prem and Mukti the same way that I see them in my mind. There will indeed be more about AK in the next chapter. Thanks again for reading. Will post the next chapter within a couple days.
Thanks hun! And no probs...feel free to comment whenever you have time (if you remain interested)...I just wanted to make sure everyone knew that the FF had been started. Your characterizations of Prem and Mukti are perfect! But I'm going to make sure my characters are not too one-dimensional...They'll have some complexities which will ultimately become clear. Thanks again for the review!
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